| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 86.46% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1108 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 5.23% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1108 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "beacon" | | 2 | "cascading" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "gloom" | | 5 | "oppressive" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "stark" | | 8 | "scanning" | | 9 | "perfect" | | 10 | "could feel" | | 11 | "weight" | | 12 | "silence" | | 13 | "rhythmic" | | 14 | "unreadable" | | 15 | "stomach" | | 16 | "structure" | | 17 | "constructed" | | 18 | "searing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 95 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 97.74% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 95 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 95 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1108 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "It is a place of consumption, Isolde said, her voice carrying over the low hum of the wind." | | 1 | "The Veil is thin here, Nyx whispered, the sound like dry leaves skittering over pavement." | | 2 | "To the heart of the feast, Isolde replied without turning." | | 3 | "It is prepared for those who never arrive, Nyx whispered, their form shifting, elongating toward the tables before snapp…" | | 4 | "We are being watched, Rory said." | | 5 | "Prince Belphegor expects guests, Isolde said, stepping past the shadow-man as if he were smoke." |
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| 73.29% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 54 | | wordCount | 1108 | | uniqueNames | 19 | | maxNameDensity | 1.53 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 2 | | London | 2 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Isolde | 7 | | Seer | 3 | | Rory | 17 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Shade | 2 | | Veil | 1 | | Nyx | 6 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | Dymas | 2 | | Hel | 1 | | Gluttony | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Belphegor | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Seer" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Half-Fae" | | 5 | "Shade" | | 6 | "Nyx" | | 7 | "Blade" | | 8 | "Eva" | | 9 | "Carter" | | 10 | "Belphegor" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Dymas" | | 2 | "Earth" |
| | globalScore | 0.733 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 48.65% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 74 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "glow that seemed to emanate from the clouds themselves" | | 1 | "something close to it" | | 2 | "thumping that seemed to come from the ground itself" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1108 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 81.81% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 25 | | mean | 44.32 | | std | 19.34 | | cv | 0.436 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 68 | | 1 | 60 | | 2 | 68 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 53 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 63 | | 7 | 56 | | 8 | 54 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 46 | | 11 | 50 | | 12 | 64 | | 13 | 25 | | 14 | 56 | | 15 | 48 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 30 | | 18 | 49 | | 19 | 44 | | 20 | 28 | | 21 | 37 | | 22 | 23 | | 23 | 45 | | 24 | 84 |
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| 90.49% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "was given" | | 1 | "is prepared" | | 2 | "were smoothed" | | 3 | "are bound" |
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| 64.64% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 197 | | matches | | 0 | "was already walking" | | 1 | "was itching" | | 2 | "was nearly searing" | | 3 | "was already walking" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 95 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1117 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "spongy, alive beneath her" |
| | adverbCount | 31 | | adverbRatio | 0.02775290957923008 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009847806624888093 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 95 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 95 | | mean | 11.66 | | std | 6.84 | | cv | 0.587 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 4 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 34 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 64.56% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.4 | | totalSentences | 95 | | uniqueOpeners | 38 | |
| 36.23% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, there was only the" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "It was thick and heavy," | | 1 | "Her hand drifted to her" | | 2 | "It was a warning, or" | | 3 | "It is a place of" | | 4 | "She reached for the hilt" | | 5 | "She drew it slightly, just" | | 6 | "They walked through rows of" | | 7 | "They smelled intoxicating, sweet enough" | | 8 | "She kept her bright blue" | | 9 | "Her black hair stuck to" | | 10 | "She could feel the magic" | | 11 | "It is prepared for those" | | 12 | "She looked down at her" | | 13 | "It was itching." | | 14 | "We are being watched, Rory" | | 15 | "It cuts both ways." | | 16 | "It was not Nyx." | | 17 | "It pooled on the ground" | | 18 | "It did not speak, but" | | 19 | "They are bound to this" |
| | ratio | 0.261 | |
| 85.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 69 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "The air tasted wrong." | | 1 | "It was thick and heavy," | | 2 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 3 | "Her hand drifted to her" | | 4 | "The Heartstone pendant was hot," | | 5 | "It was a warning, or" | | 6 | "Isolde moved with an eerie" | | 7 | "It is a place of" | | 8 | "Rory glanced to her left." | | 9 | "Nyx drifted beside her, a" | | 10 | "The Shade's form was less" | | 11 | "The Veil is thin here," | | 12 | "Rory shivered, despite the oppressive" | | 13 | "She reached for the hilt" | | 14 | "The moonsilver was always cold," | | 15 | "She drew it slightly, just" | | 16 | "The leaf-shaped dagger hummed, a" | | 17 | "They walked through rows of" | | 18 | "The grapes hanging from them" | | 19 | "They smelled intoxicating, sweet enough" |
| | ratio | 0.75 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "To stay is to be" | | 1 | "To the heart of the" | | 2 | "Now it burned." | | 3 | "To see is to be" |
| | ratio | 0.043 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone pendant was hot, pulsing with a rhythm that matched the sudden hammering of her own heart." | | 1 | "Isolde moved with an eerie grace, her feet sinking into the soft, loamy earth without leaving a single impression." | | 2 | "Where Rory's boots dug into the mud, leaving deep treads, the ground beneath the Half-Fae remained undisturbed, as if she weighed nothing at all." | | 3 | "Nyx drifted beside her, a humanoid silhouette of living shadow that flickered at the edges." | | 4 | "The leaf-shaped dagger hummed, a low vibration that traveled up her arm." | | 5 | "At five-six, she felt small beneath the towering orchards, the trees heavy with fruits that looked too perfect, too symmetrical." | | 6 | "Massive tables were set out in the open, laden with roasted meats that steamed in the cool air, breads the size of boulders, and goblets overflowing with the sa…" | | 7 | "It is prepared for those who never arrive, Nyx whispered, their form shifting, elongating toward the tables before snapping back." | | 8 | "It did not speak, but a sensation of overwhelming hunger washed over them, a psychic wave that made Rory's stomach cramp with emptiness." | | 9 | "Prince Belphegor expects guests, Isolde said, stepping past the shadow-man as if he were smoke." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |