| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 22 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Rory said flatly [flatly]" | | 1 | "Isolde said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 42 | | tagDensity | 0.524 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.091 | | effectiveRatio | 0.091 | |
| 92.69% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2053 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "really" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 61.03% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2053 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flicker" | | 1 | "velvet" | | 2 | "perfect" | | 3 | "structure" | | 4 | "traced" | | 5 | "intensity" | | 6 | "comforting" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "tracing" | | 9 | "shimmered" | | 10 | "could feel" | | 11 | "resonance" | | 12 | "silence" | | 13 | "flickered" | | 14 | "pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 130 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 130 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 149 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 42 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 2077 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 26 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 74 | | wordCount | 1750 | | uniqueNames | 18 | | maxNameDensity | 1.71 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 30 | | Nyx | 11 | | Aldric | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | English | 1 | | Welsh | 1 | | Pre-Law | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Isolde | 12 | | Fae | 5 | | Courts | 1 | | December | 1 | | Silence | 1 | | Shade | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Shade" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Golden" | | 4 | "Hel" | | 5 | "December" |
| | globalScore | 0.643 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 87 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like an invitation" | | 1 | "quite a table and wasn't quite an altar: a flat slab of pale stone raised on legs that looked like they'd grown from the earth itself, root and mineral fused together" | | 2 | "quite an altar: a flat slab of pale stone raised on legs that looked like they'd grown from the earth itself, root and mineral fused together" | | 3 | "felt like being tuned, like something i" | | 4 | "not quite a smile, more like the memory of one" | | 5 | "something between the two" | | 6 | "felt like holding a thought" |
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| 7.41% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 1.926 | | wordCount | 2077 | | matches | | 0 | "not looking at the grove but through it, past the surface layer of impossible beauty to t" | | 1 | "not bending in a breeze, because there was no breeze, but leaning the way sunflowers track the sun" | | 2 | "Not threatened, not yet, but seen in a way" | | 3 | "not yet, but seen in a way" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 149 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 55 | | mean | 37.76 | | std | 34.06 | | cv | 0.902 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 102 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 76 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 93 | | 6 | 28 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 65 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 80 | | 13 | 41 | | 14 | 136 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 66 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 83 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 79 | | 23 | 90 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 26 | | 26 | 47 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 121 | | 29 | 37 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 43 | | 32 | 59 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 43 | | 35 | 32 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 44 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 95 | | 40 | 20 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 49 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 65 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 33 | | 47 | 36 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 94.47% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 130 | | matches | | 0 | "being tuned" | | 1 | "being brought" | | 2 | "being drawn" | | 3 | "been warned" | | 4 | "were fixed" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 305 | | matches | | 0 | "were turning" | | 1 | "was watching" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 24 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 20 | | totalSentences | 149 | | ratio | 0.134 | | matches | | 0 | "The oaks that marked the boundary of the grove weren't really oaks at all — not up close." | | 1 | "Where the light struck them, their silhouette thinned to near-transparency, and Rory caught a flicker of something underneath — the ghost of a jaw, a cheekbone, features that might once have belonged to a man called Aldric." | | 2 | "Bluebells and foxglove and things Rory had no names for — blooms with petals like crushed velvet that shifted color when she turned her head, white to violet to a blue so deep it was almost black." | | 3 | "No portals here — or at least not that kind." | | 4 | "Let her focus soften the way she'd been learning to do — not looking at the grove but through it, past the surface layer of impossible beauty to the architecture underneath." | | 5 | "Rory's phone had died the moment she'd crossed the boundary — the screen flashing once, then going black — and she'd stopped trying to track the passage of minutes by counting heartbeats because her heart seemed to be keeping its own counsel about rhythm." | | 6 | "The grass was short and impossibly green, the kind of green that existed in paintings and nowhere else — or shouldn't have existed anywhere else." | | 7 | "Their violet eyes — if eyes was the right word for those twin points of cold light — swept the perimeter with an intensity that might have been reverence or fear." | | 8 | "The wildflowers at the clearing's edge leaned toward her — not bending in a breeze, because there was no breeze, but leaning the way sunflowers track the sun." | | 9 | "Not warm — that was its response to Hel portals, to the spaces between the mortal world and the infernal." | | 10 | "The crimson gemstone blazed in her palm, thumbnail-sized and furious, throwing light that was somehow dark — a deep red that seemed to eat the gold around it." | | 11 | "It was female, or something adjacent to female — a voice like water over smooth stone, like the hum of a harp string after the note has ended." | | 12 | "Not like heat haze — like a curtain being drawn aside, a layer of reality peeling back to reveal what had been standing there all along." | | 13 | "Her eyes were the color of the wildflowers that couldn't decide what they were — pale lavender that shifted toward grey, toward violet, toward something that might have been white." | | 14 | "Her lips curved — not quite a smile, more like the memory of one." | | 15 | "She'd been warned about this — about the way Fae and half-Fae communicated, the compulsion toward truth that made them artists of misdirection." | | 16 | "Not surprise — Rory doubted anything surprised a three-hundred-year-old seer — but something sharper." | | 17 | "She reached beneath her hair — the movement fluid, practiced — and drew something from the folds of her garment." | | 18 | "\"A gift freely given carries no debt,\" Isolde said, and Rory caught the careful precision of it — the Fae construction, airtight and deliberate." | | 19 | "But beneath the cold was something else — a hum, a resonance, the blade recognizing the hand that held it or perhaps simply waking up after a long sleep." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1742 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 50 | | adverbRatio | 0.02870264064293915 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005166475315729047 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 149 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 149 | | mean | 13.94 | | std | 10.38 | | cv | 0.744 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 38 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 27 | | 9 | 37 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 37 | | 14 | 26 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 31 | | 25 | 23 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 24 | | 30 | 44 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 36 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 25 | | 35 | 39 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 22 | | 40 | 23 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 31 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 51.23% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.35570469798657717 | | totalSentences | 149 | | uniqueOpeners | 53 | |
| 92.59% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | | 0 | "Then they were past it," | | 1 | "Then brighter, the lines and" | | 2 | "Somewhere in the canopy above," |
| | ratio | 0.028 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | | 0 | "Their bark had the grey-green" | | 1 | "They grew in impossible profusion," | | 2 | "She pressed her hand against" | | 3 | "It was cool against her" | | 4 | "She took it." | | 5 | "They walked for what might" | | 6 | "It was a perfect circle," | | 7 | "They stood at the tree" | | 8 | "Their violet eyes — if" | | 9 | "She felt observed." | | 10 | "She resisted the urge to" | | 11 | "It wasn't unpleasant." | | 12 | "It felt like being tuned," | | 13 | "She gasped and pulled the" | | 14 | "It was female, or something" | | 15 | "Her voice was steadier than" | | 16 | "She was small, smaller than" | | 17 | "Her eyes were the color" | | 18 | "Her feet were bare on" | | 19 | "She stood on the world" |
| | ratio | 0.296 | |
| 71.11% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 84 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | | 0 | "The air changed the moment" | | 1 | "Rory felt it first as" | | 2 | "The oaks that marked the" | | 3 | "Their bark had the grey-green" | | 4 | "Dozens of carved eyes, lidded" | | 5 | "Nyx said from behind her," | | 6 | "Rory asked, but Nyx had" | | 7 | "The wildflowers started a few" | | 8 | "Bluebells and foxglove and things" | | 9 | "They grew in impossible profusion," | | 10 | "The scent hit her like" | | 11 | "She pressed her hand against" | | 12 | "It was cool against her" | | 13 | "A way forward that felt" | | 14 | "She took it." | | 15 | "They walked for what might" | | 16 | "Rory's phone had died the" | | 17 | "The clearing opened without warning." | | 18 | "It was a perfect circle," | | 19 | "The grass was short and" |
| | ratio | 0.778 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | technicalSentenceCount | 13 | | matches | | 0 | "Dozens of carved eyes, lidded and watchful, spiraling up trunks that rose impossibly high before disappearing into a canopy that filtered light the color of lat…" | | 1 | "Where the light struck them, their silhouette thinned to near-transparency, and Rory caught a flicker of something underneath — the ghost of a jaw, a cheekbone,…" | | 2 | "Bluebells and foxglove and things Rory had no names for — blooms with petals like crushed velvet that shifted color when she turned her head, white to violet to…" | | 3 | "One moment the trees pressed close, branches lacing overhead like the ribcage of something enormous, and the next they simply weren't there, and Rory stood at t…" | | 4 | "At its center stood a structure that wasn't quite a table and wasn't quite an altar: a flat slab of pale stone raised on legs that looked like they'd grown from…" | | 5 | "Their violet eyes — if eyes was the right word for those twin points of cold light — swept the perimeter with an intensity that might have been reverence or fea…" | | 6 | "The ambient golden light brightened, concentrating, as though the grove were turning its attention on her specifically." | | 7 | "The crimson gemstone blazed in her palm, thumbnail-sized and furious, throwing light that was somehow dark — a deep red that seemed to eat the gold around it." | | 8 | "Her eyes were the color of the wildflowers that couldn't decide what they were — pale lavender that shifted toward grey, toward violet, toward something that mi…" | | 9 | "She'd been warned about this — about the way Fae and half-Fae communicated, the compulsion toward truth that made them artists of misdirection." | | 10 | "Somewhere in the canopy above, a sound that might have been birdsong cut off mid-note." | | 11 | "It caught the grove-light and threw it back cold and clean: a blade, leaf-shaped, slender as a finger, made of a metal that wasn't steel or silver but something…" | | 12 | "But beneath the cold was something else — a hum, a resonance, the blade recognizing the hand that held it or perhaps simply waking up after a long sleep." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 22 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx said, their voice that low rustle of wind through dead leaves" |
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| 81.82% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 22 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "the voice continued (continue)" | | 2 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 42 | | tagDensity | 0.524 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.136 | | effectiveRatio | 0.136 | |