Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQJXGYY4EHBRKEQBFWBGHC

Run Details

Duration:
22.6s
Cost:
$0.010090
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rain fell in relentless sheets, slicking the cobblestones of Soho in oily darkness, each drop exploding like a splintered star against the cracked pavement. Harlow Quinn moved through it like a blade through silk—focused, relentless, her salt-and-pepper hair barely damp despite the downpour, held tight in its military-short crop. The worn leather of her watch creaked faintly with each stride as she pushed harder, boots slapping the wet ground, the echo bouncing off the close-knit terraced buildings. She was closing the gap. Ahead, a shadow darted between two narrow alleyways—the glint of a silver chain caught the dim glow of a neon sign just long enough for her to see it. Then it vanished. Quinn didn’t hesitate. She veered left, her sharp jaw clenched, breath steaming in the cold. She knew the streets, every alley, every bolt-hole. But this one was different. The alley narrowed, the walls closing in like jaws, trash bags split open and spilling dark pulp that clung to her soles. The scent of stale beer and wet concrete mingled with something else—something sharp, almost bitter, like scorched copper. She slowed. Ahead, the alley dead-ended into a rusted iron door, half-hidden behind a boarded-up shopfront for a shuttered record store. But the door wasn’t just there. It pulsed—subtly, like a heartbeat. The air above it shimmered, distorted, as if heat rose from the pavement beneath. And the shadow was gone. Quinn pressed her back against the damp brick, drawing her service weapon. Standard issue. Useless, probably. Three years ago, she’d learned the hard way that some doors weren’t just doors. That some people didn’t just vanish—they stepped through. Her partner, Morris, had screamed once. One scream. Then silence. No body. No evidence. Just a bloodstain on the pavement—and the smell of burnt feathers. She exhaled. Kept the gun low. Something scraped behind the iron door. She edged forward, heart drumming in her ribcage. The door had no handle, no keyhole—just a series of engraved symbols worn nearly smooth by time. And on the ground, embedded in a crack between flagstones, a small object caught her eye. A bone token. She crouched, glove-covered fingers plucking it up. Human? Animal? Impossible to tell. But it was warm—unnaturally so. And the carvings on it matched the ones on the door. *This wasn’t on any police map.* She knew the underground. Knew every disused tunnel, every abandoned Tube line. But this—this was something else. Something beneath the beneath. A flicker of movement in the periphery. Not from the door. From the alley’s mouth. She spun, gun raised. A man stood there. Tall, olive-skinned, rain glinting in his tight curls. He wore a long, oilskin coat, hands tucked into the pockets, a thin scar running the length of his left forearm visible where his sleeve rode up. She didn’t recognize him, but he looked at her like he knew her. “You’re not supposed to be here, Detective,” he said. His voice was soft, accented—Spanish, maybe. Calm. Too calm. “Step back,” she ordered, finger tightening on the trigger. He didn’t move. “That door leads somewhere you don’t want to go. Not tonight. Not without someone who knows the way.” “I’m not asking for a tour guide,” Quinn snapped. “I’m arresting whoever went through that door.” He tilted his head. “Then you’ll be arresting a ghost. Or worse.” She narrowed her eyes. “Who the hell are you?” “Tomás Herrera,” he said. “And if you go through that door, you’ll die before sunrise.” She didn’t lower the gun. “Funny. I’ve heard that before. Right before my partner disappeared.” Something flickered in his eyes—recognition, maybe pity. He glanced at the token in her hand. “That’s a Veil Market pass. The last one to use it was a girl with a hex-brand on her neck. You followed the right trail. Just not the right man.” “There was only one.” “No,” he said. “There were three. The one you chased was a decoy. A mimic. They use them to lead cops like you into the dark.” Quinn’s pulse quickened. “You’re saying I was set up.” “I’m saying you’re in over your head,” Tomás replied. He stepped forward slowly, hands still in his pockets. “And I’m offering to help before you do something irreversible.” She didn’t believe him. Not yet. But the bone token thrummed in her palm, and the door groaned—just slightly—like something on the other side had turned. A sound like wind, but not wind. A susurration of voices. Too many. Too close. Tomás reached into his coat—not for a weapon, but a small silver medallion on a chain. Saint Christopher. He held it up. “I used to save lives. Real ones. But not here. Here, I save people from things they can’t even name.” Quinn’s mind raced. Rules. Procedures. Orders. None of it applied. Not here. Not anymore. “You expect me to trust you?” she said. “No,” Tomás admitted. “But you want the truth about what happened to your partner. Don’t you?” Her breath caught. “How do you know about that?” “We keep records,” he said simply. “People like Morris… they leave marks on the Veil. Echoes.” She took a step back, pressing against the door. It shuddered beneath her, the symbols glowing faintly now—blue, then red, then black. “You go in alone,” Tomás said, “and you won’t come out. I’ve seen it. I’ve seen what they do to intruders.” “Who are *they*?” “The brokers. The collectors. The ones who trade in things that shouldn’t exist.” He stepped closer. “But if you come with me, I can get you in. Get you answers. And get you out before the veil closes at dawn.” Her mind flashed—Morris’s last call. Static. Then a whisper: *“It’s not underground, Harlow. It’s underneath.”* She looked at the door. Then at Tomás. She holstered her weapon. “I don’t trust you,” she said. “But I’m walking in. And you’re coming with me.” He nodded once. Then extended his hand. “Give me the token.” She hesitated. “This isn’t a game,” he said quietly. “There are rules down there. You break them, you don’t just die. You become part of the market.” She handed it over. Tomás pressed the token into a recess in the door that hadn’t been there a second ago. It sank in like it was being swallowed. The door groaned open. Beyond, a staircase spiraled down into the earth, lit not by bulbs, but by floating orbs of cold blue flame. The air that rushed up was thick with the scent of myrrh and rotting parchment, and beneath it—blood. Tomás stepped to the threshold, then glanced back at her. “Last chance,” he said. Quinn adjusted her jacket, felt the weight of her partner’s badge in her inner pocket. The one she never took off. “No,” she said. “It’s the first one.” And she followed him into the dark.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
85.7143% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"he said simply [simply]"
1"he said quietly [quietly]"
82.8179% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1164
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
14.0893% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1164
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"flicker"
count1
2
word"shimmered"
count1
3
word"glint"
count1
4
word"glinting"
count1
5
word"silk"
count1
6
word"jaw clenched"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
8
word"echo"
count1
9
word"echoes"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"flicker"
2"shimmered"
3"glint"
4"glinting"
5"silk"
6"jaw clenched"
7"weight"
8"echo"
9"echoes"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences120
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences120
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences141
matches
0"through that door"
1"through that door"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs61
mean18.64
std15.98
cv0.857
sampleLengths
082
132
268
32
444
55
638
725
86
96
1041
113
1228
136
1421
1515
164
1739
1813
1918
209
2121
2216
2312
249
2515
2615
2745
284
2926
309
3128
3226
3315
3442
3514
368
3716
383
396
4016
4122
4221
433
4440
4515
468
474
4815
4911
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences120
matches
0"was gone"
1"being swallowed"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs153
matches
0"was closing"
94.1806% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount836
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount39
adverbRatio0.04665071770334928
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.013157894736842105
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences141
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences141
mean8.06
std6.75
cv0.837
sampleLengths
024
125
228
35
429
53
63
712
88
95
1022
1118
122
1319
146
155
1614
175
1812
192
202
2114
228
236
242
252
262
272
2811
292
304
316
328
3317
3416
353
367
371
381
393
405
4111
426
434
448
455
464
477
484
494
56.5012% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.36879432624113473
totalSentences141
uniqueOpeners52
85.7143% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"she ordered, finger tightening on the trigger (order, tighten)"
1"Quinn snapped (snap)"
2"Tomás admitted (admit)"
3"he said simply (say simply)"
4"he said quietly (say quietly)"
89.3540%