| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde corrected gently [gently]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.923 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.083 | | effectiveRatio | 0.083 | |
| 70.46% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1354 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "gently" | | 2 | "very" | | 3 | "slowly" | | 4 | "perfectly" | | 5 | "utterly" | | 6 | "completely" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 18.76% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1354 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "stark" | | 3 | "profound" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "velvet" | | 6 | "echoing" | | 7 | "scanned" | | 8 | "resolve" | | 9 | "charged" | | 10 | "magnetic" | | 11 | "stomach" | | 12 | "down her spine" | | 13 | "chill" | | 14 | "dance" | | 15 | "flawless" | | 16 | "oppressive" | | 17 | "flicker" | | 18 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 53.57% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 0.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 96 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 1 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 1352 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 40 | | wordCount | 1263 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.03 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Tuesday | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Rory | 13 | | Nyx | 4 | | Isolde | 9 | | Cardiff | 2 | | London | 2 | | Seer | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Britain | 1 | | Fae | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Seer" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Cardiff" | | 3 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.985 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 85.90% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 78 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a pressure against her eardru" | | 1 | "leaves that seemed to make no sound" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.74 | | wordCount | 1352 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 1 | | mean | 0 | | std | 0 | | cv | 0 | | sampleLengths | | |
| 90.64% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "were made" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "was replaced" | | 3 | "were trapped" | | 4 | "were made" |
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| 54.28% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 183 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn’t pulsing" | | 1 | "was leading" | | 2 | "was standing" | | 3 | "was fighting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 5 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 96 | | ratio | 0.073 | | matches | | 0 | "She was a Cardiff girl, daughter of a barrister; she dealt in facts and logic." | | 1 | "The sound of the city, the distant wail of a siren, the caw of a crow—all of it was gone." | | 2 | "That was odd; it had been fully charged an hour ago." | | 3 | "This place wasn't evil; the Heartstone pendant resting against her sternum was still cool." | | 4 | "The unease, the fear, the logical part of her brain that screamed that this was all impossible—it all washed away, replaced by a profound, humbling awe." | | 5 | "The silence was no longer oppressive; it was sacred." | | 6 | "The strange light was no longer unsettling; it was beautiful." |
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| 85.91% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1274 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" | | 1 | "small, dark-haired woman" |
| | adverbCount | 54 | | adverbRatio | 0.0423861852433281 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013343799058084773 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 96 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 96 | | mean | 14.08 | | std | 7.26 | | cv | 0.515 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 25 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 33 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 30 | | 31 | 21 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 22 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 45.14% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.3333333333333333 | | totalSentences | 96 | | uniqueOpeners | 32 | |
| 71.68% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "Soft, cool, and impossibly delicate." | | 1 | "Finally, they stepped into a" |
| | ratio | 0.022 | |
| 95.27% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 29 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "It was a normal Tuesday" | | 1 | "It was inert." | | 2 | "They were grey, lichen-spotted, and" | | 3 | "She left no prints in" | | 4 | "She didn’t look back." | | 5 | "It distorted the view of" | | 6 | "She was a Cardiff girl," | | 7 | "She took a breath, the" | | 8 | "She saw blossoms the colour" | | 9 | "She knelt, her fingers reaching" | | 10 | "It was real." | | 11 | "Her eyes scanned their surroundings." | | 12 | "they whispered, their voice a" | | 13 | "She pulled it from her" | | 14 | "She frowned, pressing the power" | | 15 | "She tried her watch, a" | | 16 | "she said, her voice tight" | | 17 | "She rested her hand on" | | 18 | "It was her anchor, a" | | 19 | "They began to walk again," |
| | ratio | 0.312 | |
| 29.89% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 80 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park" | | 1 | "It was a normal Tuesday" | | 2 | "Rory kept her hands shoved" | | 3 | "It was inert." | | 4 | "A small mercy." | | 5 | "They were grey, lichen-spotted, and" | | 6 | "Isolde drifted towards them, her" | | 7 | "She left no prints in" | | 8 | "Isolde said, her voice like" | | 9 | "She didn’t look back." | | 10 | "Rory asked, her voice a" | | 11 | "Nyx whispered, the words seeming" | | 12 | "Isolde paused before the largest" | | 13 | "The air around the stone" | | 14 | "It distorted the view of" | | 15 | "Isolde said, her lavender eyes" | | 16 | "Rory wasn’t afraid" | | 17 | "She was a Cardiff girl," | | 18 | "this was something else entirely." | | 19 | "She took a breath, the" |
| | ratio | 0.86 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 51.95% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The smell of car exhaust and wet grass vanished, replaced by the impossible perfume of night-blooming jasmine and rich, loamy soil, as if the forest floor were …" | | 1 | "The trees were ancient, their bark swirling with patterns that looked almost like writing." | | 2 | "Rory felt clumsy, her heavy boots crunching on fallen leaves that seemed to make no sound." | | 3 | "Nyx simply flowed, their form a shifting patch of darkness that drank the light around them." | | 4 | "They passed a stream where the water ran so clear it was invisible, the smooth stones at the bottom looking as if they floated in mid-air." | | 5 | "The unease, the fear, the logical part of her brain that screamed that this was all impossible—it all washed away, replaced by a profound, humbling awe." | | 6 | "She stood there, a small, dark-haired woman from Cardiff, a delivery girl who talked to shadows, and felt utterly, completely insignificant." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory asked, her voice a little too loud in the quiet" | | 1 | "Isolde said, her voice echoing slightly in the strange stillness" | | 2 | "they whispered, their voice a rustle of leaves" | | 3 | "she said, her voice tight" | | 4 | "Rory repeated, the word feeling foreign on her tongue" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Isolde corrected gently (correct)" | | 3 | "Rory repeated (repeat)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.692 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.444 | | effectiveRatio | 0.444 | |