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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQKE7370X1N9107Y1X9B9Q
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Model:
Z.AI GLM 4.6
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Fantasy: entering an ancient ruin
Duration:
1m 17s
Cost:
$0.006475
Provider:
DeepInfra
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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Meta
AI
The air in Richmond Park was crisp, carrying the familiar scent of damp earth and distant traffic. It was a normal Tuesday afternoon, but the three figures moving between the ancient oaks were anything but. Rory kept her hands shoved deep in the pockets of her leather jacket, her fingers brushing against the cool, smooth gemstone of the Heartstone pendant. It was inert. For once, the deep crimson stone
wasn’t pulsing
with a faint, warning warmth. A small mercy. Ahead of them, standing stones taller than any man marked a rough circle in a clearing. They were grey, lichen-spotted, and hummed with a low, sub-audible vibration that Rory felt more in her bones than her ears. Isolde drifted towards them, her silver hair a
stark
ribbon against the muted greens and browns of the park. She left no prints in the soft mud. Beside Rory, Nyx flowed, their shadow-form coalescing and dissipating with each step, a silent presence of deepest violet. “The threshold is thin here,” Isolde said, her voice like the chime of tiny bells. She didn’t look back. “The Veil is gossamer.” “What does that mean?” Rory asked, her voice a little too loud in the quiet. “It means we step through,” Nyx whispered, the words seeming to curl from the shadows around their feet. “And the world is no longer what it was.” Isolde paused before the largest of the standing stones, laying a hand on its weathered surface. The air around the stone
began to
shimmer, like heat haze rising from asphalt. It distorted the view of the trees on the other side, bending them into strange, elongated shapes. “Come, Aurora Carter,” Isolde said, her lavender eyes holding an unnerving, ageless calm. “Do not be afraid.” Rory wasn’t afraid. She was a Cardiff girl, daughter of a barrister; she dealt in facts and logic. But this… this was something else entirely. She took a breath, the cold air sharp in her lungs, and followed Isolde through the shimmering veil. The transition was not a step but a gasp. The world tilted. The smell of car exhaust and wet grass vanished, replaced by the impossible perfume of night-blooming jasmine and rich, loamy soil, as if the forest floor
were made
of pure decay and rebirth. The sound of the city, the distant wail of a siren, the caw of a crow—all of it
was gone
. In its place was a
profound
and resonant silence, a quiet so deep it felt like a pressure against her eardrums. The light had changed. The overcast grey of the London sky was replaced by a soft, perpetual twilight, as if the grove were trapped in the moment just after sunset or just before dawn. A gentle, sourceless luminescence emanated from the air itself, casting long, soft shadows from the silver-barked trees that now surrounded them. Rory’s boots sank into a carpet of springy moss, so green it
seemed to
vibrate with life. And e
very
where, there were flowers. Wildflowers of e
very
conceivable shape and hue carpeted the ground between the trees. Some glowed with a faint, phosphorescent light. Others had petals like spun glass or shimmering metal. She saw blossoms the colour of a bruise, and others that were a pure, blinding white. She knelt, her fingers reaching out to touch a flower with petals like deep blue
velvet
. It was real. Soft, cool, and impossibly delicate. A small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist stood out pale against her skin as she cupped the bloom. “A memory of what the world was,” Isolde said, her voice
echoing
slightly
in the strange stillness. “And a promise of what it could be.” Rory stood up, brushing the moss from her jeans. Her eyes scanned their surroundings. The grove was larger than it had any right to be, stretching away into a twilight that refused to resolve into darkness. The trees were ancient, their bark swirling with patterns that looked almost like writing. Nyx drifted closer to one, their shadowy hand passing through the solid-looking trunk without resistance. “The air tastes of old magic,” they whispered, their voice a rustle of leaves. “It is… thick.” “It is pure,” Isolde corrected
gently
. Rory instinctively went to check her phone for the time, a habit born of a life lived by schedules and deli
very
notifications. She pulled it from her pocket. The screen was black. Dead. She frowned, pressing the power button. Nothing. That was odd; it had been fully charged an hour ago. She tried her
watch
, a simple analogue piece her father had given her. The second hand was frozen, twitching
slightly
, as if caught in a
magnetic
field. A knot of unease tightened in her stomach. “My
watch
stopped,” she said, her voice tight. Isolde offered a faint, knowing smile. “Time is a river, not a road, child of the mortal world. Here, it sometimes pools.” “Pools?” Rory repeated, the word feeling foreign on her tongue. “How long have we been here?” “Long enough,” was all the Seer would say. The unease was a cold trickle down her spine, a feeling more unsettling than any demonic chill. This place wasn't evil; the Heartstone pendant resting against her sternum was still cool. But it was fundamentally *wrong*, a place where the basic laws of her reality were merely suggestions. She rested her hand on the hilt of the Fae-forged blade at her hip. The moonsilver was always cold, a familiar, grounding sensation in the warm, alien air. It was her anchor, a gift from the
very
woman who
was leading
her deeper into this temporal anomaly. They
began to
walk again, deeper into the heart of the grove. Rory felt clumsy, her heavy boots crunching on fallen leaves that
seemed to
make no sound. Isolde moved with a liquid grace, her feet barely seeming to touch the ground. Nyx simply flowed, their form a shifting patch of darkness that drank the light around them. The further they went, the more wondrous and strange the environment became. They passed a stream where the water ran so clear it was invisible, the smooth stones at the bottom looking as if they floated in mid-air. Overhead, constellations Rory didn’t recognize
began to
glitter in the twilight sky,
slowly
wheeling in a silent, majestic
dance
. She saw a creature like a deer, but its antlers
were made
of twisting, living wood, and its eyes shone with the same gentle light as the flowers. It
watch
ed them for a moment with an ancient intelligence before dissolving into mist. Finally, they stepped into a vast, circular clearing at the grove’s centre. In its middle stood a tree of impossible scale. It was larger than any redwood Rory had ever seen, its trunk so wide it would have taken twenty people holding hands to encircle it. Its bark was not bark at all, but a polished, sil
very
metal that swirled with iridescent patterns. Its leaves were the shape of willow fronds, but they glowed with a soft, golden light, casting a warm, gentle pool around the massive base. At the foot of the tree, a pool of water lay
perfectly
still, its surface a flawless mirror reflecting the alien constellations above. Rory stopped, her breath catching in her throat. The unease, the fear, the logical part of her brain that
screamed that this
was all impossible—it all washed away, replaced by a
profound
, humbling awe. She
was standing
at the foot of something older than London, older than Britain, older perhaps than humanity itself. The silence was no longer
oppressive
; it was sacred. The strange light was no longer unsettling; it was beautiful. She stood there, a small, dark-haired woman from Cardiff, a deli
very
girl who talked to shadows, and felt
utterly
,
completely
insignificant. And for the first time since this madness had started, she also felt a
flicker
of peace. This was why she was here. This was what she
was fighting
for. The cold
weight
of the pendant against her skin and the sharp, icy touch of the Fae blade at her side were no longer just tools. They were promises.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
59.2593%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
9
adverbTagCount
2
adverbTags
0
"Isolde said, her voice echoing slightly in the strange stillness [slightly]"
1
"Isolde corrected gently [gently]"
41.3059%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1363
totalAiIsmAdverbs
8
found
0
adverb
"completely"
count
1
1
adverb
"gently"
count
1
2
adverb
"perfectly"
count
1
3
adverb
"slightly"
count
2
4
adverb
"slowly"
count
1
5
adverb
"utterly"
count
1
6
adverb
"very"
count
1
highlights
0
"completely"
1
"gently"
2
"perfectly"
3
"slightly"
4
"slowly"
5
"utterly"
6
"very"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
26.6324%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1363
totalAiIsms
10
found
0
word
"flicker"
count
1
1
word
"oppressive"
count
1
2
word
"velvet"
count
1
3
word
"profound"
count
2
4
word
"magnetic"
count
1
5
word
"stark"
count
1
6
word
"weight"
count
1
7
word
"dance"
count
1
8
word
"echoing"
count
1
highlights
0
"flicker"
1
"oppressive"
2
"velvet"
3
"profound"
4
"magnetic"
5
"stark"
6
"weight"
7
"dance"
8
"echoing"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
96
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
5
narrationSentences
96
filterMatches
0
"watch"
hedgeMatches
0
"began to"
1
"seemed to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
96
matches
0
"screamed that this"
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
1
mean
0
std
0
cv
0
sampleLengths
0
1352
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
4
totalSentences
96
matches
0
"were made"
1
"was gone"
2
"was replaced were trapped"
3
"were made"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
4
totalVerbs
183
matches
0
"wasn’t pulsing"
1
"was leading"
2
"was standing"
3
"was fighting"
85.9121%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1274
adjectiveStacks
2
stackExamples
0
"small crescent-shaped scar"
1
"small, dark-haired woman"
adverbCount
54
adverbRatio
0.0423861852433281
lyAdverbCount
17
lyAdverbRatio
0.013343799058084773
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
96
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
96
mean
14.08
std
7.26
cv
0.515
sampleLengths
0
17
1
18
2
25
3
3
4
13
5
3
6
16
7
21
8
19
9
8
10
18
11
15
12
4
13
19
14
18
15
25
16
14
17
17
18
13
19
7
20
15
21
2
22
5
23
18
24
9
25
3
26
33
27
20
28
21
29
4
30
30
31
21
32
17
33
5
34
13
35
7
36
9
37
16
38
16
39
3
40
5
41
19
42
17
43
17
44
5
45
22
46
14
47
15
48
14
49
9
45.1389%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
10
diversityRatio
0.3333333333333333
totalSentences
96
uniqueOpeners
32
8.3333%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
9
fancyCount
6
fancyTags
0
"Isolde said, her voice like the chime of tiny bells (say, like)"
1
"Nyx whispered, the words seeming to curl from the shadows around their feet (whisper, seem curl)"
2
"Isolde said, her voice echoing slightly in the strange stillness (say, echo slightly)"
3
"they whispered, their voice a rustle of leaves (whisper)"
4
"Isolde corrected gently (correct gently)"
5
"was all the Seer would say (be say)"
80.3872%