Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQKMD7TRV9H0VA98MEXW72

Run Details

Duration:
40.8s
Cost:
$0.008348
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain fell in relentless, greasy sheets, turning the London night into a smear of neon and asphalt. Detective Harlow Quinn’s lungs burned, a familiar fire that did nothing to slow the piston-pound of her feet against the slick pavement. Fifty yards ahead, the suspect—a man in a dark jacket with short, curly hair—ducked around the corner of a brick office block. He moved with an unnerving fluidity, not like a panicked criminal but like a man who knew the city’s secret veins. Quinn followed, her worn leather watch a cold, familiar weight on her left wrist. Her service weapon was a reassuring pressure at her hip, but she knew this chase wouldn’t end with a clean shot. This one was different. The case file, thin on facts and thick on weirdness, had the same stink as the one that took DS Morris three years ago. A feeling of wrongness that clung to the edges of reality. She rounded the corner into a narrower alley, the air thick with the smell of damp rubbish and stagnant water. The suspect was already halfway down, his silhouette framed by the distant orange glow of a streetlamp. He glanced back, and for a split second, their eyes met across the rain-lashed distance. Quinn saw no fear, only a calculated assessment. Then he vaulted over a locked metal gate with an ease that defied his build. Cursing under her breath, Quinn put on a burst of speed. She was forty-one, not twenty, but her body, honed by years of military-precise discipline, responded. She hit the gate at a run, scrambled up, and swung her leg over, the cold metal biting into her palms. She landed hard, jarring her knees, but didn’t break stride. The alley opened out into the chaotic thrum of Camden. The streets were a river of people, umbrellas bobbing like dark flowers. The suspect was a ghost, melting into the crowd. Quinn’s sharp jaw tightened. She couldn’t lose him. He was the first solid lead in weeks, a paramedic-turned-back-alley-sawbones who’d shown up on CCTV near two impossible crime scenes. Tomás Herrera. That was the name on the file. She pushed through the throng, her gaze fixed on the dark blue of his jacket. He wasn’t running anymore, just walking with purpose, weaving through the late-night shoppers and pub-goers. He was leading her somewhere. The thought sent a prickle of unease up her spine. This wasn’t a flight; it was an escort. He turned down a side street, away from the noise and light, heading toward a quieter, more industrial part of the borough. The streetlights here were fewer, casting long, distorted shadows. The only sound was the drumming of the rain and the echo of their footsteps—his steady, hers a ragged counterpoint. He stopped before a set of grimy concrete stairs leading down to what looked like a disused Tube station entrance. A faded sign, its letters peeled away by time, was barely legible. Above it, crude graffiti covered the tiled walls. This was it. A dead end. Or a beginning. Quinn slowed, pressing herself into the shadows of a loading bay across the street, her hand resting on the grip of her weapon. She watched, her breath misting in the cold air. Herrera didn’t hesitate. He descended the stairs, his movements sure. He stopped before a heavy steel door, one that looked like it hadn’t been opened in decades. He reached into his jacket and pulled out something small and pale. He held it up to the door. From this distance, Quinn couldn’t see what it was, but it caught the faint light—a sliver of bone. There was a low click, a grating sound of old locks disengaging, and the door swung inward, spilling not darkness, but a strange, warm, amber light onto the wet concrete. A murmur of voices, a scent of incense and ozone, drifted up to her. Her training screamed at her. *Call for backup. Secure the perimeter. Do not enter alone.* Every instinct honed over eighteen years on the force told her this was a breach of protocol, a one-way trip into a world she didn’t understand. This was how Morris had died. Chasing whispers into the dark. But the memory of Morris’s face, pale and still in a morgue that couldn’t explain his wounds, was the very thing that propelled her forward. This was her second chance to stare into the abyss and find out what was looking back. She couldn’t let it go. Not again. The door clicked shut behind Herrera, plunging the entrance back into shadow. Quinn waited a count of ten, then crossed the street, her footsteps silent on the wet pavement. She stood before the steel door, the faint, humming energy of it vibrating through the soles of her boots. There was no handle, no visible lock. The bone token. It was a key. And she didn’t have one. Frustration warred with a grim, desperate curiosity. She ran her hands over the cold steel, looking for a weakness, a seam. Nothing. It was solid. She was about to step back, to reconsider, when she heard another sound from below. The grating click of the lock again. The door began to swing open. Quinn flattened herself against the wall, her heart hammering against her ribs. Two figures emerged, cloaked and hooded, their conversation a low, guttural language she didn’t recognize. They moved past her without a glance, disappearing into the London night. The door remained ajar, a sliver of that impossible light beckoning to her. This was her chance. She didn’t let herself think. She slipped through the opening, pulling the heavy door quietly shut behind her. The air hit her like a physical blow. It was thick, heavy with the smells of spiced smoke, damp earth, and something metallic, like old coins. The narrow tunnel opened up into a cavernous space. An abandoned Tube station, just as the file had suggested. The curved platform was still there, but the tracks were gone, replaced by a sprawling, chaotic market. The Veil Market. It was a kaleidoscope of impossible sights. Stalls were crammed together under flickering bare bulbs and the soft glow of what looked like trapped lightning in jars. A woman with silver hair sold bottled whispers that shimmered like heat haze. A hulking man with a tattooed face displayed gleaming, serrated blades that seemed to drink the light. At another stall, a cloaked figure exchanged a small pouch of coins for a folded piece of paper, which promptly burst into blue flame and vanished. The low murmur of a dozen different languages filled the air, punctuated by the chime of strange bells and the occasional hiss of a released alchemical vapor. Quinn felt like a predator in a world of mythical beasts. Her police-issue raincoat and practical boots were a uniform from another reality. She kept to the shadows of the tiled walls, her cop’s eyes scanning the crowd, her movements economical and silent. She was looking for one face in this sea of strangers. And then she saw him. Herrera. He was deeper in the market, standing at a stall piled high with herbs and dried fungi. He’d taken off his jacket, and the simple white t-shirt he wore did little to hide the lean, capable lines of his body. The Saint Christopher medallion around his neck glinted softly. He wasn't just buying something. He was talking to the stall keeper, an old woman with eyes like shards of obsidian, his hands moving as he described something with intense focus. He looked completely at home. This was his world. Quinn’s hand tightened on her weapon. She could make the arrest now. Plow through the crowd, identify herself, and cuff him. It would be a mess. A violent, chaotic mess in a place where the rules didn’t apply. They would tear her apart. Or she could wait. Watch. Learn. Her gaze fell on the scar that ran along his left forearm, a pale, jagged line against his olive skin. A knife attack, the file said. He knew violence. He wasn’t just some back-alley doctor. He was a survivor. He finished his transaction, tucking a small, wrapped parcel into his jacket pocket. He turned, his warm brown eyes scanning the crowd, and for a heart-stopping second, Quinn thought he saw her. But his gaze slid past, and he started moving, heading toward a darker, less-traveled tunnel at the far end of the platform. The decision crystallized in her mind, sharp and cold as broken glass. Backup would never get here in time. A report would get her laughed out of the precinct and buried under paperwork. This was her case. Her ghost. She let out a slow, silent breath, the air tasting of magic and danger. She pushed off the wall and began to follow, a shadow in a world of shadows, descending deeper into the London that didn't exist on any map.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
80.1325% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1510
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
1"softly"
2"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
40.3974% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1510
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"shimmered"
count1
1
word"gleaming"
count1
2
word"crystallized"
count1
3
word"calculated"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"footsteps"
count2
6
word"echo"
count1
7
word"kaleidoscope"
count1
highlights
0"shimmered"
1"gleaming"
2"crystallized"
3"calculated"
4"weight"
5"footsteps"
6"echo"
7"kaleidoscope"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences130
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences130
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"think"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences130
matches(empty)
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs25
mean59.64
std35.94
cv0.603
sampleLengths
083
174
2132
383
438
591
69
7140
852
949
1067
1153
1252
1322
1462
153
16110
1754
186
1989
2043
216
2239
2354
2480
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences130
matches
0"been opened"
1"were gone"
2"were crammed"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs239
matches
0"wasn’t running"
1"was leading"
2"was looking"
3"was looking"
4"was talking"
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1510
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount40
adverbRatio0.026490066225165563
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.005960264900662252
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences130
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences130
mean11.47
std7.25
cv0.632
sampleLengths
018
122
222
321
414
521
64
724
811
920
1017
1115
128
1315
1411
1515
1621
1710
1810
1912
209
214
224
2320
242
257
2615
2715
285
2910
308
3122
329
3320
3420
3512
368
373
383
393
4023
419
423
437
4417
4512
467
4718
4830
4914
33.0769% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats22
diversityRatio0.2846153846153846
totalSentences130
uniqueOpeners37
100.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
91.3886%