Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQKPP26V0CYDSKQVQC7977

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Duration:
54.5s
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$0.009056
Provider:
SiliconFlow

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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The transition wasn’t a violent tear, nor a sudden plunge into darkness. It was a blink, a hitch in the rhythm of the world, where the gray drizzle of Richmond Park simply ceased to exist. One moment, Rory was crunching over gravel, the damp London air clinging to her hair and coat. The next, the gravel had softened into a carpet of moss that felt like velvet beneath her boots, springy and alive. She stopped, her breath hitching in her throat, and blinked rapidly to clear the sudden shift in light. The sky above wasn’t the heavy, slate-laden ceiling of England. It was a dome of vibrant, impossible twilight, painted in strokes of indigo and violet that bled into a horizon that seemed too close, yet infinitely far away. There was no sun, no moon, only a pervasive, ambient luminescence that seemed to emanate from the very air she breathed. "Easy," a voice whispered, the sound like dry leaves skittering over stone. Nyx materialized beside her, their tall form coalescing out of a patch of darkness that clung to the base of a towering silver birch. Their violet eyes flared with a faint, cautious light as they scanned the perimeter. "The Veil is gossamer here. You can feel it, can't you? Like static on the skin." Rory nodded, rubbing her arms. The hair on her forearms was standing on end. It felt as though she had swallowed a buzzing bee, a low-voltage hum vibrating in her chest. "It’s quiet," she whispered. "Too quiet." "Not quiet," Isolde corrected, her voice melodic and distant. The Half-Fae stood a few paces ahead, framed by the ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary. In this light, her silver hair seemed to flow like liquid mercury, pooling around her feet on the moss. She turned, her pale lavender eyes regarding Rory with an expression that hovered between pity and amusement. "It is merely that the city has stopped screaming. Listen." Rory closed her eyes for a moment, forcing her breathing to steady. She listened. Past the thumping of her own heart, she heard it. A low, harmonic resonance, like a bow being drawn across the strings of a cello, but deeper, more resonant. It vibrated in the marrow of her bones. "It's the trees," Rory realized, opening her eyes. "Everything sings here," Isolde said softly. She turned and began to walk deeper into the grove, her silver hem trailing through the ferns. Rory stepped forward to follow, then froze. She looked down at the moss where Isolde had just walked. There were no footprints. Not even a depression in the thick vegetation. The moss sprang back the instant Isolde’s foot left it, leaving the ground pristine and undisturbed. "Don't stare too long at the path," Nyx murmured, gliding at her shoulder. They were currently maintaining a solid form, their dark silhouette stark against the ethereal flora. "Fae paths have a habit of wandering if you give them too much attention." Rory forced her gaze up, taking in the rest of the grove. It defied the biology she knew. Trees with bark like polished obsidian twisted in spirals that shouldn't be structurally sound, their branches weaving together to form archways overhead. Hanging from these boughs were fruits that looked like crystal goblets, filled with a swirling, nectarous liquid. Wildflowers bloomed in riotous clusters—orchids with petals that shimmered like oil on water, roses with centers that glowed with a soft, pulse-like rhythm. She reached out, her fingers hovering near a bluebell that seemed to be made of glass. "I wouldn't," Nyx warned, their voice a dry rasp. "I wasn't going to touch it," Rory said, though she snatched her hand back. She instinctively touched the hilt of the dagger at her hip. The Fae-forged blade, Isolde’s gift, was always freezing, a distinct chill that seeped through her jeans. But here, the metal felt different. It wasn't cold; it was vibrating, faintly thrumming against her palm as if it were waking up after a long sleep. "It recognizes its birthplace," Isolde said without turning around. She moved with an ethereal grace, her feet barely seeming to make contact with the ground. "Come. The center breathes easier." They walked for what felt like minutes, but the light didn't shift. Time was a slippery concept here. Rory checked her watch, the digital face blank. She pressed the button, but the LCD just flickered and died. "Don't bother," Nyx said. "We step out of the river when we come here. Minutes or days could be passing on the other side." Rory felt a twist of anxiety in her gut. She thought of her flat above Silas’s bar, the pile of undelivered takeaway menus for the Golden Empress sitting on her counter. The normalcy of it felt galaxies away. The path widened into a circular clearing dominated by a pool of water so still it looked like a mirror made of glass. The water was black, yet it reflected the violet sky with perfect clarity. There were no ripples, no movement, until a single petal from a floating blossom drifted down and touched the surface. Instead of a ripple, the water turned to light. Rory flinched back, her hand going to her chest. Beneath her jacket, the Heartstone pendant was suddenly blazing hot against her skin. She grabbed it through the fabric, wincing. Usually, the crimson gem only pulsed when she was near a rift to Hel, a warning system for demonic intrusion. But there was no sulfur here, no stench of rot. Just the overpowering scent of ozone and night-blooming jasmine. "Why is it reacting?" Rory asked, her voice tight. "Is this a portal?" Nyx drifted closer to the pool, their shadowy form elongating as they peered into the depths. "No sulfur," they noted. "But the magic… it is dense. The pendant reacts to the thinness of reality. Here, the Veil is not a wall, Aurora. It is a suggestion." Isolde stopped at the edge of the pool. She looked into the water, her reflection staring back with eyes that were not lavender, but pure, void-black. "The Heartstone was forged in Dymas," she said, her riddle-like tone sharping. "It knows the taste of the Other. This place is not Earth, nor is it Hel. It is the space between. The pendant is confused." "Great," Rory muttered, releasing the pendant. "I'm carrying a compass that spins at the crossroads of the universe." She stepped closer to the water, drawn by an inexplicable pull. The air here tasted metallic, sharp on her tongue. She looked at the trees lining the clearing; they weren't just growing, they were breathing. The bark expanded and contracted with a slow, rhythmic sigh that raised gooseflesh on her arms. Around the edges of the pool, stones jutted from the ground—not random rocks, but arranged in a deliberate, geometric pattern that hurt Rory’s eyes if she stared at it for too long. The angles were wrong, sharp and aggressive, yet beautiful. "What is this place?" Rory asked, her voice dropping to a whisper as if speaking too loudly might shatter the glass-like water. "A sanctuary," Isolde replied. She turned to Rory, and for a moment, the human saw the weight of three centuries in the Seer’s youthful face. "A place where those who do not belong may rest for a moment. The Fae Courts have no reach here. The Princes of Hel have no desire for it. It is a pause in the great war." Nyx drifted toward the edge of the light, their form becoming hazy, less distinct. "It feels… old," the Shade murmured. "Older than the stones in the park. Older than the summoning that took my humanity." "It is the memory of the world before it was divided," Isolde said. Rory knelt by the water’s edge, ignoring the damp soaking into her jeans. She leaned over, staring into the black depths. She expected to see her own reflection—the messy black hair, the blue eyes, the tired lines of a delivery girl who fought demons on her days off. Instead, the water shifted. The image rippled, not outward, but inward. She saw a city burning, its towers twisted into spires of glass. She saw a faceless figure in a crown of thorns. Then, just as quickly, the vision shattered, replaced by the reflection of the violet sky. She recoiled, sitting back hard on the moss. "Did you see that?" Isolde crouched beside her, her silver hair brushing Rory’s shoulder. "The water shows what is, what was, and what might yet be. It is a fickle thing." "I saw a fire," Rory said, her heart hammering against her ribs. "There is always a fire," Isolde said cryptically. She reached out, her hand hovering over the water. "Do not fear the vision, Laila. Fear the moment the water goes clear." Rory looked back at the pool. It was already calm again, the surface like polished obsidian, hiding its secrets deep within. The heat in the Heartstone pendant had faded to a dull, rhythmic throb, like a second heartbeat against her sternum. She stood up, brushing the moss from her jeans. Her hand brushed against the hilt of the Fae blade again. The vibration had settled into a steady hum, reassuringly solid. "We should stay moving," Nyx said from the periphery of the clearing. "Standing still in a place like this… it invites things to notice you." "The shadows are always so skittish," Isolde teased gently, though there was no malice in it. She straightened her robes. "Come. There is a bench where the starlight touches the ground. We will talk there." Rory took one last look at the impossible clearing—the breathing trees, the light-water, the twilight sky that defied the laws of meteorology. It was terrifying and beautiful in equal measure, a place that felt like a fever dream made real. She tightened her grip on the dagger’s hilt and followed the Seer, stepping carefully over the moss that held no footprints, walking into a world where time had forgotten to tick.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
72.7273% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"Isolde said softly [softly]"
1"Isolde said without turning around [around]"
2"Isolde said cryptically [cryptically]"
3"Isolde teased gently, though there was no malice in it [gently]"
64.3917% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1685
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
4
adverb"suddenly"
count1
5
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"gently"
2"quickly"
3"softly"
4"suddenly"
5"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
28.7834% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1685
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"ethereal"
count2
1
word"sanctuary"
count1
2
word"throb"
count1
3
word"resonance"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"shimmered"
count1
6
word"velvet"
count1
7
word"pristine"
count1
8
word"stark"
count1
9
word"normalcy"
count1
10
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"ethereal"
1"sanctuary"
2"throb"
3"resonance"
4"flickered"
5"shimmered"
6"velvet"
7"pristine"
8"stark"
9"normalcy"
10"weight"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences110
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences110
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences127
matches(empty)
95.6044% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean36.39
std17.64
cv0.485
sampleLengths
035
156
259
312
454
537
69
764
851
98
1023
1146
1242
1357
1439
159
1668
1730
1837
1924
2038
2156
229
2368
2413
2546
2663
2718
2851
2941
3022
3162
3235
3313
3448
3548
3612
3727
3812
3930
4041
4130
4225
4335
4440
4531
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences110
matches
0"being drawn"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs232
matches
0"was crunching"
1"was standing"
2"was vibrating, were waking"
3"were breathing"
93.4309% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1353
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"heavy, slate-laden ceiling"
adverbCount55
adverbRatio0.04065040650406504
lyAdverbCount19
lyAdverbRatio0.014042867701404288
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences127
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences127
mean13.18
std6.67
cv0.506
sampleLengths
012
123
217
321
418
510
628
721
812
924
1014
1116
125
139
1417
154
162
179
1818
1919
2017
2110
2212
232
2410
2519
268
278
286
2917
307
3111
324
338
3416
3513
3615
3714
3812
396
4022
4117
4223
4316
449
4514
4611
4716
486
4921
50.1312% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.33858267716535434
totalSentences127
uniqueOpeners43
4.5455% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags22
fancyCount15
fancyTags
0"a voice whispered, the sound like dry leaves skittering over stone (whisper, skitter)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"Isolde corrected, her voice melodic and distant (correct)"
3"Rory realized, opening her eyes (realize, open)"
4"Isolde said softly (say softly)"
5"Nyx murmured, gliding at her shoulder (murmur, glide)"
6"Nyx warned, their voice a dry rasp (warn)"
7"Rory said, though she snatched her hand back (say, snatch)"
8"they noted (note)"
9"she said, her riddle-like tone sharping (say, sharp)"
10"Rory muttered, releasing the pendant (mutter, release)"
11"the Shade murmured (murmur)"
12"Rory said, her heart hammering against her ribs (say, hammer)"
13"Isolde said cryptically (say cryptically)"
14"Isolde teased gently, though there was no malice in it (tease gently, does not be no)"
82.9185%