| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.615 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 88.82% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1342 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 44.11% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1342 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "rhythmic" | | 1 | "comfortable" | | 2 | "calculated" | | 3 | "familiar" | | 4 | "shimmered" | | 5 | "resonance" | | 6 | "gloom" | | 7 | "flickered" | | 8 | "tension" | | 9 | "dance" | | 10 | "could feel" | | 11 | "weight" | | 12 | "unreadable" | | 13 | "whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 87 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 87 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 97 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1339 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 54 | | wordCount | 1165 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 1.63 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 3 | | Park | 2 | | Rory | 19 | | Shade | 1 | | Isolde | 9 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Seer | 1 | | Nyx | 9 | | Veil | 2 | | London | 1 | | Dymas | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Courts | 1 | | Chinese | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Shade" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Seer" | | 4 | "Nyx" | | 5 | "Veil" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.685 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 45.83% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like a tear" | | 1 | "felt like the safest place she’d been i" | | 2 | "looked like they were made of obsidian, s" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.747 | | wordCount | 1339 | | matches | | 0 | "not to harm, but with a curious, arboreal intent" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.99% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 34 | | mean | 39.38 | | std | 19 | | cv | 0.482 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 97 | | 1 | 32 | | 2 | 40 | | 3 | 52 | | 4 | 27 | | 5 | 54 | | 6 | 37 | | 7 | 47 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 31 | | 10 | 50 | | 11 | 35 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 54 | | 14 | 67 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 56 | | 17 | 50 | | 18 | 43 | | 19 | 36 | | 20 | 62 | | 21 | 27 | | 22 | 34 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 32 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 35 | | 27 | 53 | | 28 | 33 | | 29 | 53 | | 30 | 34 | | 31 | 66 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 25 |
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| 89.13% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "was replaced" | | 1 | "being played" | | 2 | "being blown" | | 3 | "were made" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 6 | | totalVerbs | 196 | | matches | | 0 | "was still, mirroring" | | 1 | "was starting" | | 2 | "were happening" | | 3 | "was leaking" | | 4 | "was turning" | | 5 | "was shifting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 97 | | ratio | 0.062 | | matches | | 0 | "Her messenger bag bumped against her hip with every step, heavy with her phone, a credit card reader, and a tangle of wires she’d forgotten to charge—mundane burdens in a world suddenly feeling too heavy with possibility." | | 1 | "The scent of damp earth and pine was replaced by something sweeter—perfume, copper, and the acrid tang of ozone." | | 2 | "It wasn’t just the visual shift; it was the acoustics." | | 3 | "The wind changed, carrying a scent of hawthorn and something else—like burning sugar." | | 4 | "“We do not ask how the earth turns; we simply walk.”" | | 5 | "She saw a grey, swirling mass—the Veil, thinning and fragile." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1172 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | | adverbCount | 24 | | adverbRatio | 0.020477815699658702 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00938566552901024 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 97 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 97 | | mean | 13.8 | | std | 7.41 | | cv | 0.537 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 26 | | 1 | 4 | | 2 | 30 | | 3 | 37 | | 4 | 32 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 32 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 27 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 22 | | 30 | 19 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 19 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 30 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 62.54% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.41237113402061853 | | totalSentences | 97 | | uniqueOpeners | 40 | |
| 41.67% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere beyond that shimmer, in" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 55.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 33 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "She kept her eyes locked" | | 1 | "Her messenger bag bumped against" | | 2 | "They were three deep in" | | 3 | "She touched the Heartstone pendant" | | 4 | "It was warm, a gentle" | | 5 | "She moved effortlessly, the ferns" | | 6 | "She raised a hand, palm" | | 7 | "Her voice was melodic, laced" | | 8 | "They reached out a hand," | | 9 | "She blinked, and the familiar" | | 10 | "It wasn’t night, yet the" | | 11 | "It wasn’t just the visual" | | 12 | "She stepped onto a patch" | | 13 | "It was cool, soft." | | 14 | "They walked to the edge" | | 15 | "Their reflection flickered, a piece" | | 16 | "She saw a grey, swirling" | | 17 | "She gripped the hem of" | | 18 | "She pointed to a spot" | | 19 | "She looked at Rory, her" |
| | ratio | 0.413 | |
| 22.50% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 70 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "The footfalls of the three" | | 1 | "Rory didn't look back." | | 2 | "She kept her eyes locked" | | 3 | "Her messenger bag bumped against" | | 4 | "They were three deep in" | | 5 | "The Shade had been trailing" | | 6 | "Rory replied, her voice low," | | 7 | "She touched the Heartstone pendant" | | 8 | "It was warm, a gentle" | | 9 | "Nyx interjected, their voice sounding" | | 10 | "Rory glanced at Isolde." | | 11 | "The Half-Fae Seer walked with" | | 12 | "She moved effortlessly, the ferns" | | 13 | "Isolde left no footprints, not" | | 14 | "Isolde stopped abruptly near a" | | 15 | "She raised a hand, palm" | | 16 | "Her voice was melodic, laced" | | 17 | "Rory asked, checking her footing" | | 18 | "The ground beneath her boots" | | 19 | "Nyx drifted forward, silent as" |
| | ratio | 0.875 | |
| 62.50% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, she adjusted her glasses," |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 19.23% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "She kept her eyes locked on the ethereal luminescence that bled through the canopy ahead of them, a soft violet-pink glow that had nothing to do with the settin…" | | 1 | "The Shade had been trailing them, solidifying enough to walk beside Isolde but keeping a comfortable distance, their form shifting between a dark silhouette and…" | | 2 | "It was warm, a gentle heat radiating against her collarbone, pulsing in time with her own heartbeat." | | 3 | "They reached out a hand, fingers elongating into shadow-tentacles that brushed the air near the trees before withdrawing." | | 4 | "Above her, a blossom on a tree that looked unnervingly like a twisted apple branch unfurled, glowing with a pale, bioluminescent blue that made the surrounding …" | | 5 | "She was twenty-five, with a scar on her wrist from a childhood slip and a life that was starting over in London." | | 6 | "They had stepped away from the pond, toward a thicket of roses that grew thick and thorny, their petals a deep, bruised crimson." | | 7 | "She looked at Nyx, who was leaning back into the shadow of a tree, looking indifferent, unreadable." | | 8 | "She looked at Isolde, who was turning in slow, hypnotic circles, watching something only she could see." |
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| 62.50% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory replied, her voice low, calculated" | | 1 | "Rory replied, her voice firm" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 15 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx interjected (interject)" | | 1 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Isolde whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "Rory breathed (breathe)" | | 4 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 5 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.577 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.4 | | effectiveRatio | 0.4 | |