Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQKRJ4T7FQRHPR91MTPAH9

Run Details

Duration:
30.0s
Cost:
$0.001388
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The footfalls of the three hikers faded into a rhythmic crunch of dry autumn leaves long ago, dissolving into the rustle of the broadleaved trees overhead. Rory didn't look back. She kept her eyes locked on the ethereal luminescence that bled through the canopy ahead of them, a soft violet-pink glow that had nothing to do with the setting sun. Her messenger bag bumped against her hip with every step, heavy with her phone, a credit card reader, and a tangle of wires she’d forgotten to charge—mundane burdens in a world suddenly feeling too heavy with possibility. They were three deep in Richmond Park, and yet, the GPS on Rory’s phone had been insisting for the last five minutes that their destination was several miles south, near the river. “Are you sure we’re not hallucinating?” Nyx asked. The Shade had been trailing them, solidifying enough to walk beside Isolde but keeping a comfortable distance, their form shifting between a dark silhouette and a vague suggestion of a human shape. “Lore dictates a Veil,” Rory replied, her voice low, calculated. She touched the Heartstone pendant at her throat. It was warm, a gentle heat radiating against her collarbone, pulsing in time with her own heartbeat. “A metaphysical barrier. It causes spatial disorientation, visual distortion. Usually, in places where dimensional instability is high.” “Or,” Nyx interjected, their voice sounding like a wind chime struck by a gale, “where the Fae like to play hide-and-seek with the rest of the world.” Rory glanced at Isolde. The Half-Fae Seer walked with a quiet confidence, her silver hair catching the unnatural light like spun mercury. She moved effortlessly, the ferns parting before her as if the forest bowed. There was no crumble of twigs underfoot, no dislodged moss. Isolde left no footprints, not even in the dust. Isolde stopped abruptly near a cluster of ancient oaks with bark the color of wet slate. She raised a hand, palm open, and drifted closer to the trees until her face was inches from the rough bark. “Time has a memory here,” Isolde said. Her voice was melodic, laced with a singsong cadence that made the hair on Rory’s arms stand up. “A visitor may stay an hour and find a world turned to winter, or walk a week and find the moment unchanged.” “Step across?” Rory asked, checking her footing. The ground beneath her boots felt spongy, less like soil and more like compressed moss. Nyx drifted forward, silent as smoke. They reached out a hand, fingers elongating into shadow-tentacles that brushed the air near the trees before withdrawing. “It smells wrong,” Nyx whispered. “Old. Hungry.” Rory took a breath, steeling herself for the transition. As she crossed the invisible threshold defined by the ancient oak standing stones on either side of the path, the air thickened. The scent of damp earth and pine was replaced by something sweeter—perfume, copper, and the acrid tang of ozone. She blinked, and the familiar Richmond skyline vanished, replaced by a canopy so dense it blotted out the sky. It wasn’t night, yet the light was dim, diffused through leaves that shimmered with iridescent veins. “Welcome,” Isolde whispered. Rory moved forward, her senses overload. It wasn’t just the visual shift; it was the acoustics. The birdsong she expected was absent. In its place was a low, thrumming resonance, like the vibration of a cello string being played infinitely low. The wind changed, carrying a scent of hawthorn and something else—like burning sugar. She stepped onto a patch of grass that looked vibrant, emerald green, and instantly reached down to touch it. It was cool, soft. Above her, a blossom on a tree that looked unnervingly like a twisted apple branch unfurled, glowing with a pale, bioluminescent blue that made the surrounding gloom look like twilight. The flowers bloomed and withered in a heartbeat, a perpetual, endless cycle of growth. “How?” Rory breathed. “Creatures of instinct, Aurora,” Nyx said, re-solidifying into their full, towering height of six foot two. They walked to the edge of a small, circular clearing and peered into the pond reflected there. Their reflection flickered, a piece of paper being blown across a windshield. “We do not ask how the earth turns; we simply walk.” Rory walked to the edge of the pond herself. The water was still, mirroring the unnatural sky above. But in the reflection, she didn’t see the trees and the strange foliage. She saw a grey, swirling mass—the Veil, thinning and fragile. The distortion shimmered, sending ripples through the pond’s surface. She gripped the hem of her jacket. “Do you see that?” She pointed to a spot in the sky where the distortion looked like a tear. “That’s what I do. I deliver things. I fix things. But I can’t fix... whatever this is.” “Destiny is not a package for delivery,” Isolde said, stepping out of the shadows of the trees. She looked at Rory, her pale lavender eyes expressionless. “To find what you seek, you must lose yourself first.” Rory sighed, a short, sharp exhale that let some of the tension in her shoulders bleed away. She was twenty-five, with a scar on her wrist from a childhood slip and a life that was starting over in London. She was good at surviving. And right now, the mossy ground beneath her feet felt like the safest place she’d been in months. “Aurora,” Nyx murmured. They had stepped away from the pond, toward a thicket of roses that grew thick and thorny, their petals a deep, bruised crimson. “Look.” Rory approached. The thorns looked like they were made of obsidian, sharp and black. Nyx reached out, and their hand passed through a thorn as if it were smoke, dissipating the wood into dust. “The Fae-Forged Blade,” Rory whispered, remembering the description. “Is it here?” “Not in a sheath,” Nyx said, looking back at Rory with glowing violet eyes. “But hunting for the blade means hunting for the hunter. Are you ready to dance with wolves, Carter?” “I’m not making a choice,” Rory replied, her voice firm. “I’m following the map Isolde gave me.” The map had been a map of Richmond Park, drawn in charcoal and ash. It had ended at these stones. Now, she adjusted her glasses, the lenses fogging slightly from the humidity in the air. The ground shifted again, a subtle vibration that rattled the vertebrae in Rory’s neck. The trees around them groaned, the sound like wooden bones stretching after a long sleep. One of the ancient oaks seemed to lean down, its branches swaying closer to them, not to harm, but with a curious, arboreal intent. Isolde turned in a slow circle, her silver hair swirling around her like a nova. She spoke no more, simply floating a few inches off the ground, a creature of moonlight and mystery. Rory took a step forward, her boots sinking slightly into the loam. She could feel the weight of the Veil humming against her skin, thin and fragile. Somewhere beyond that shimmer, in the realm of Dymas or the Fae Courts, things were happening. Magic was leaking through, pulling at the edges of reality. She looked at Nyx, who was leaning back into the shadow of a tree, looking indifferent, unreadable. She looked at Isolde, who was turning in slow, hypnotic circles, watching something only she could see. Rory tightened her grip on the strap of her bag. She was a delivery driver for a Chinese restaurant by day, a barmaid’s roommate by night. She was not a hero. But as she stepped deeper into the grove, past the point of no return, she realized she didn't have a choice. The world was shifting, and she was going to have to carry it through. “Keep up,” she said, though she didn't say it to either of them. It was a habit, a command for herself. She walked into the center of the clearing, and the wind picked up, carrying a whisper of a voice that sounded exactly like her own.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
77.7613% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1349
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"suddenly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
33.2839% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1349
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"ethereal"
count1
1
word"resonance"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"shimmered"
count2
4
word"calculated"
count1
5
word"unreadable"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"dance"
count1
highlights
0"ethereal"
1"resonance"
2"flickered"
3"shimmered"
4"calculated"
5"unreadable"
6"weight"
7"dance"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences87
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences87
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences97
matches
0"see that?” She"
94.9858% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean39.38
std19
cv0.482
sampleLengths
097
132
240
352
427
554
637
747
822
931
1050
1135
123
1354
1467
153
1656
1750
1843
1936
2062
2127
2234
2311
2432
2517
2635
2753
2833
2953
3034
3166
3221
3325
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences87
matches
0"was replaced"
1"being played"
2"being blown"
3"were made"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs196
matches
0"was starting"
1"were happening"
2"was leaking"
3"was turning"
4"was shifting"
94.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1172
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"soft violet-pink glow"
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.020477815699658702
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.00938566552901024
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences97
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences97
mean13.8
std7.41
cv0.537
sampleLengths
026
14
230
337
432
58
632
710
88
917
1017
1127
124
1318
1413
1510
169
1716
1821
197
2018
2122
227
2315
246
2518
265
272
289
2922
3019
3119
3216
333
346
3510
366
3719
3813
3919
404
4130
4214
433
4416
4517
4612
4711
489
499
62.5430% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.41237113402061853
totalSentences97
uniqueOpeners40
14.2857% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount9
fancyTags
0"Nyx interjected, their voice sounding like a wind chime struck by a gale (interject, sound like strike)"
1"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
2"Isolde whispered (whisper)"
3"Nyx said, re-solidifying into their full, towering height of six foot two (say, re-solidify)"
4"Isolde said, stepping out of the shadows of the trees (say, step out)"
5"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
6"Rory whispered, remembering the description (whisper, remember)"
7"Nyx said, looking back at Rory with glowing violet eyes (say, look back glow)"
8"she said, though she didn't say it to either of them (say, does not say)"
86.8741%