| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Nyx said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.696 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.063 | | effectiveRatio | 0.063 | |
| 96.74% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1533 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 2.15% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1533 | | totalAiIsms | 30 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "throb" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "echoed" | | 4 | "crystalline" | | 5 | "marble" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "could feel" | | 8 | "gloom" | | 9 | "desire" | | 10 | "flicked" | | 11 | "weight" | | 12 | "footfall" | | 13 | "whisper" | | 14 | "quivered" | | 15 | "dancing" | | 16 | "vibrated" | | 17 | "flickered" | | 18 | "trembled" | | 19 | "shattered" | | 20 | "pounding" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 138 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 138 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 145 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1525 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 86.89% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 47 | | wordCount | 1426 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.26 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Nyx" | | discoveredNames | | Nyx | 14 | | Aurora | 18 | | Heartstone | 8 | | Pendant | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Invisible | 1 | | Fae | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Pendant" | | 4 | "Blade" | | 5 | "Invisible" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.869 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 54.76% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 105 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "as if reminding herself it was real" | | 1 | "as though wanting to slip free of its sheath" | | 2 | "as if welcoming the hunt" | | 3 | "something like moonlight, seeped through cra" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.656 | | wordCount | 1525 | | matches | | 0 | "not impetuous but cautious" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 145 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 70.76% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 36 | | mean | 42.36 | | std | 16.85 | | cv | 0.398 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 64 | | 1 | 42 | | 2 | 47 | | 3 | 71 | | 4 | 49 | | 5 | 69 | | 6 | 61 | | 7 | 34 | | 8 | 27 | | 9 | 41 | | 10 | 33 | | 11 | 46 | | 12 | 63 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 41 | | 17 | 37 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 43 | | 21 | 50 | | 22 | 46 | | 23 | 62 | | 24 | 62 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 37 | | 27 | 35 | | 28 | 44 | | 29 | 60 | | 30 | 53 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 56 | | 33 | 52 | | 34 | 53 | | 35 | 40 |
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| 97.64% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 138 | | matches | | 0 | "been drained" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 249 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 24.63% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 145 | | ratio | 0.041 | | matches | | 0 | "Even from that distance she could smell rot—an undertone sour as sweat." | | 1 | "A man in a chef’s garb stepped from behind one statue—though no warmth glowed in his skin, as if flesh itself had been drained." | | 2 | "“That’s—” she began, but Nyx’s hand—if one could call a shadow a hand—settled on her shoulder." | | 3 | "Through that wreath of leaves, the amber dusk gave way to something darker—blackness undercut by faint pulses of blood-red light." | | 4 | "Bas-relief on its sides showed a figure feasting at an empty table—blood pouring from every corner of the feast, drenching the bones beneath." | | 5 | "“Time moves on.” And she followed, each step marking a promise they would return—if they dared." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 534 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 7 | | adverbRatio | 0.013108614232209739 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00749063670411985 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 145 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 145 | | mean | 10.52 | | std | 5.7 | | cv | 0.542 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 27 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 24 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 53.33% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.36551724137931035 | | totalSentences | 145 | | uniqueOpeners | 53 | |
| 53.33% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 125 | | matches | | 0 | "Only a single grape lay" | | 1 | "Then, as the two stepped" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 88.80% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 41 | | totalSentences | 125 | | matches | | 0 | "She blinked, pressing a palm" | | 1 | "their voice murmured, a breeze" | | 2 | "They walked between rows of" | | 3 | "It glimmered with an oily" | | 4 | "She dropped it with a" | | 5 | "they urged, though their tone" | | 6 | "Their stone eyes seemed to" | | 7 | "He lifted a spoon to" | | 8 | "She could feel the thrum" | | 9 | "She glanced at Nyx." | | 10 | "they said, voice like wind" | | 11 | "She flicked a glance at" | | 12 | "It gleamed faintly, faint moonlight" | | 13 | "She threaded a finger through" | | 14 | "It warmed where her skin" | | 15 | "She stepped around the table," | | 16 | "Her skin prickled." | | 17 | "They followed a path of" | | 18 | "She crouched to brush a" | | 19 | "she began, but Nyx’s hand—if" |
| | ratio | 0.328 | |
| 28.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 108 | | totalSentences | 125 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora’s boots touched soil that" | | 1 | "She blinked, pressing a palm" | | 2 | "their voice murmured, a breeze" | | 3 | "Aurora tightened her grip on" | | 4 | "The Heartstone Pendant against her" | | 5 | "Each heartbeat echoed in her" | | 6 | "They walked between rows of" | | 7 | "Aurora knelt, lifting one to" | | 8 | "It glimmered with an oily" | | 9 | "She dropped it with a" | | 10 | "A low hum thrummed through" | | 11 | "The Fae-forged Blade at her" | | 12 | "Aurora caught Nyx’s form beside" | | 13 | "they urged, though their tone" | | 14 | "The vineyard ended in a" | | 15 | "Platters brimming with roasted fowl," | | 16 | "Marble statues lined the edges," | | 17 | "Their stone eyes seemed to" | | 18 | "A man in a chef’s" | | 19 | "He lifted a spoon to" |
| | ratio | 0.864 | |
| 40.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 125 | | matches | | 0 | "Even from that distance she" |
| | ratio | 0.008 | |
| 69.33% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Above her, the sky bled warm amber, dust motes drifting through a honeyed light that set her straight black hair aflame at the edges." | | 1 | "She blinked, pressing a palm to the small crescent scar on her left wrist, as if reminding herself it was real." | | 2 | "Behind her, Nyx drifted like a living shadow, their form ebbing and solidifying at the ankles." | | 3 | "The Heartstone Pendant against her chest pulsed, a deep crimson throb that matched the quick beat of her own pulse." | | 4 | "The Fae-forged Blade at her hip grew ice-cold, as though wanting to slip free of its sheath." | | 5 | "They followed a path of crushed grapes that glistened like spilled rubies in the amber half-light." | | 6 | "The metal felt alive against her palm, as if welcoming the hunt." |
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| 62.50% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "they urged, though their tone was not impetuous but cautious" | | 1 | "she told, though her voice shook" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "their voice murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "they urged (urge)" | | 2 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "Nyx breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.478 | | leniency | 0.957 | | rawRatio | 0.364 | | effectiveRatio | 0.348 | |