| 75.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "it—curled around [around]" | | 1 | "she said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.344 | | leniency | 0.688 | | rawRatio | 0.182 | | effectiveRatio | 0.125 | |
| 88.66% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1323 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "carefully" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 39.53% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1323 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "measured" | | 1 | "fluttered" | | 2 | "tension" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "restrained" | | 5 | "predator" | | 6 | "traced" | | 7 | "flicker" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "perfect" | | 10 | "footsteps" | | 11 | "could feel" | | 12 | "whisper" | | 13 | "unraveling" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 89 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 109 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1306 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 25 | | wordCount | 1036 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.68 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Eva | 4 | | Moreau | 1 | | Soho | 1 | | Marseille | 1 | | Rory | 7 | | Lucien | 6 | | Ptolemy | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Lucien" | | 4 | "Ptolemy" |
| | places | | 0 | "Brick" | | 1 | "Lane" | | 2 | "Soho" | | 3 | "Marseille" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 46.86% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.531 | | wordCount | 1306 | | matches | | 0 | "not limping, but sparing the leg, cane always an extension of himself" | | 1 | "not entangle you, but I haven’t another choice" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 39 | | mean | 33.49 | | std | 18.35 | | cv | 0.548 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 54 | | 1 | 69 | | 2 | 46 | | 3 | 84 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 50 | | 6 | 67 | | 7 | 38 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 27 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 40 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 35 | | 14 | 24 | | 15 | 31 | | 16 | 41 | | 17 | 46 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 41 | | 20 | 30 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 31 | | 23 | 35 | | 24 | 45 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 60 | | 27 | 24 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 49 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 43 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 22 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 41 | | 36 | 28 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 45 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 197 | | matches | | 0 | "was already stuttering" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 17 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 17 | | totalSentences | 109 | | ratio | 0.156 | | matches | | 0 | "The knock at the door wasn’t loud—a measured, insistent rhythm that threaded through the muffled hum of Brick Lane after midnight." | | 1 | "People don’t knock at this hour unless they’re desperate—or dangerous." | | 2 | "The air smelled faintly of rain—maybe it had just started." | | 3 | "“I could have, but we both know you wouldn’t have answered. Besides” —he glanced past her, taking in the sea of books and the cat, who now leapt delicately onto the windowsill— “it’s a matter best handled in person.”" | | 4 | "Underneath the polish, she read exhaustion—a paleness at his temples, a tremor in the hand resting on his ivory-handled cane." | | 5 | "“I’m not here for Eva.” His voice—carefully modulated, with that soft drag of Marseille in it—curled around her like smoke." | | 6 | "Lucien’s gaze dropped to her hands—her left wrist, exposed, crescent scar pale as moonlight." | | 7 | "He reached up, as if to press fingertips to his own forehead, then—changed course, fixed the knot of his tie instead." | | 8 | "“There are certain talents I can’t buy, and certain trust I can’t outsource.” He appraised her, gaze lingering on the scar, and she realized he hadn’t moved—didn’t even seem to breathe." | | 9 | "Lucien entered, moving with the restrained grace of a predator in a cage—not limping, but sparing the leg, cane always an extension of himself." | | 10 | "She wanted to rage against it, shove him back outside with his diplomacy and his impossible gentleness—she wanted to let it in, too." | | 11 | "She felt it then, the old ache—prickling through her sternum, where grief lived beside something mercifully unnamed." | | 12 | "He laughed, once—soundless, humorless." | | 13 | "Behind her, his footsteps creaked closer—then stopped just shy of intimacy." | | 14 | "The clock ticked; outside, rain bled down the glass, scattering neon reflections." | | 15 | "Their fingers brushed—deliberate, not accidental." | | 16 | "The books, the cat, the wet city night—all faded to the thrum that was only them, suspended in the half-light of Eva’s overcrowded flat, longing unraveling slowly between their hands." |
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| 94.55% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1060 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 49 | | adverbRatio | 0.04622641509433962 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014150943396226415 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 109 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 109 | | mean | 11.98 | | std | 7.99 | | cv | 0.667 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 38 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 39 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 24 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 22 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 20 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 20 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 21 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 61.47% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.3853211009174312 | | totalSentences | 109 | | uniqueOpeners | 42 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she pulled it open." | | 1 | "Then it had been shouting," | | 2 | "Maybe she should slam the" | | 3 | "Maybe she should tell him" | | 4 | "Then, quietly: Lucien’s voice didn’t" | | 5 | "Then Lucien closed both hands" |
| | ratio | 0.07 | |
| 20.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 43 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "Her mind cartwheeled through possibilities:" | | 1 | "Her heart was already stuttering." | | 2 | "She padded to the door," | | 3 | "She couldn’t look directly at" | | 4 | "They’d always unmoored her: one" | | 5 | "—he glanced past her, taking" | | 6 | "She kept her tone flat," | | 7 | "He’d left first." | | 8 | "She’d thrown his umbrella after" | | 9 | "She didn’t move." | | 10 | "He inclined his head, a" | | 11 | "His voice—carefully modulated, with that" | | 12 | "Her voice was sharp enough" | | 13 | "She steadied herself, fingers drumming" | | 14 | "He waited a beat longer," | | 15 | "He reached up, as if" | | 16 | "He’d slipped into using her" | | 17 | "It triggered something old and" | | 18 | "His smile came raw this" | | 19 | "He appraised her, gaze lingering" |
| | ratio | 0.5 | |
| 64.65% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 68 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "The knock at the door" | | 1 | "Aurora froze where she stood" | | 2 | "Ptolemy, all green eyes and" | | 3 | "Her mind cartwheeled through possibilities:" | | 4 | "The upstairs neighbor, finally fed" | | 5 | "Rory set the mug down," | | 6 | "Her heart was already stuttering." | | 7 | "People don’t knock at this" | | 8 | "She padded to the door," | | 9 | "Lucien Moreau stood on the" | | 10 | "The air smelled faintly of" | | 11 | "She couldn’t look directly at" | | 12 | "They’d always unmoored her: one" | | 13 | "Rory leaned one stiff shoulder" | | 14 | "A ghost of a smile" | | 15 | "—he glanced past her, taking" | | 16 | "She kept her tone flat," | | 17 | "The last time she’d seen" | | 18 | "He’d left first." | | 19 | "She’d thrown his umbrella after" |
| | ratio | 0.791 | |
| 58.14% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "Now he was here, looking" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 80.75% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The knock at the door wasn’t loud—a measured, insistent rhythm that threaded through the muffled hum of Brick Lane after midnight." | | 1 | "Or something sharper, darker, that fluttered in the air like live current." | | 2 | "Lucien Moreau stood on the narrow landing, backlit by the jaundiced glow of the stairwell, umbrella tucked, hatless, shoulders squared in a tailored charcoal su…" | | 3 | "The books, the cat, the wet city night—all faded to the thrum that was only them, suspended in the half-light of Eva’s overcrowded flat, longing unraveling slow…" |
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| 79.55% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "She kept, eyes unblinking" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.125 | | leniency | 0.25 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |