Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQN4G3NBJS352643RBNYDQ

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Duration:
57.3s
Cost:
$0.070370
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The door swung open before Rory could decide whether she'd knocked too hard or not hard enough, and suddenly there he was, filling the narrow doorframe like he'd been waiting on the other side. Lucien Moreau, in a charcoal waistcoat with his shirtsleeves rolled to the elbow, his platinum hair slightly less immaculate than she remembered, one strand falling across his forehead. His mismatched eyes—amber and black, always unsettling, always beautiful—widened for just a fraction of a second before his expression smoothed into something carefully neutral. "Aurora." Her full name, the way he always said it. Like it meant something. "Eva's not here." The words came out flatter than she'd intended. "I've been staying at her place while she's in Prague. Research trip." "I know." He didn't move from the doorway. "I wasn't looking for Eva." The curry house below them filled the silence with the muffled clatter of dishes and the low thrum of dinner service. Rory became acutely aware of what she must look like—her black hair scraped back in a messy ponytail, still wearing the Golden Empress polo from her shift, probably smelling faintly of garlic sauce. Meanwhile, Lucien looked like he'd stepped out of a magazine spread about men who definitely had opinions about wine. "It's been four months," she said. "Four months, two weeks, and three days." He paused. "But who's counting." Something twisted in her chest, sharp and unwelcome. She stepped back from the door, a wordless invitation she immediately regretted. But Lucien was already crossing the threshold, his ivory-handled cane tapping once against the worn floorboards before he seemed to remember himself and lifted it slightly, carrying it instead. Eva's flat swallowed them both in its chaos—towers of occult texts threatening to topple from every surface, Ptolemy's orange tabby fur coating the threadbare couch, three deadbolts now hanging uselessly open behind them. Rory watched Lucien take in the space, his gaze cataloging every detail the way it always did. The way it had cataloged her, once, when she'd let him close enough to see the things she kept hidden. "You could have called," she said, moving toward the tiny kitchenette. Distance. She needed distance. "Or texted. Or sent one of your cryptic little notes through whatever supernatural postal service you use." "Would you have answered?" She didn't reply. They both knew she wouldn't have. "Tea?" The offer came out reflexively—her mother's voice in her head, the Welsh compulsion to offer hospitality even to people who'd carved holes in your chest. She filled the electric kettle without waiting for his response, keeping her back to him. "Rory." The nickname stopped her. He'd only called her that once before, the night everything had fallen apart, when he'd pressed his forehead to hers and whispered it like a prayer before walking away. "Don't." She turned, leaning against the counter. "Whatever you came here to say, just say it. I've got an early shift tomorrow, and I'm too tired for your particular brand of dramatic buildup." Lucien's jaw tightened. In the flat's dim lighting, the black of his left eye seemed to swallow the shadows around it. "I made a mistake." "Which one? You've made several." "Leaving." He set the cane against Eva's cluttered desk, as if he needed both hands free for this. "Walking away from you. From us. Whatever we were." "We weren't anything." The lie tasted bitter. "We were two people who got tangled up in the same mess and made some questionable decisions while under duress." "Is that what you tell yourself?" "It's what you told me." She could still hear it, four months and two weeks and three days ago, standing in the alley behind Silas's bar while Lucien explained, in that infuriatingly measured voice, why this—whatever this was—couldn't continue. Why someone like him was too dangerous for someone like her. Why she deserved better than a half-demon information broker with blood on his hands and enemies in every shadow. She'd wanted to scream at him. Instead, she'd watched him walk away, and then she'd gone upstairs to her empty flat and not cried. Not once. "I was trying to protect you," Lucien said. "From what? From you?" Rory laughed, and it came out jagged. "I grew up with a father who cross-examined me at the dinner table and a mother who could spot a lie from three counties away. I survived a man who made me feel like I was going crazy for two years before I finally ran. I have fought literal demons since moving to London, Lucien. I don't need you to protect me from yourself." The kettle clicked off. Neither of them moved toward it. "Evan." Lucien's voice dropped, and something dangerous flickered in his amber eye. "The man in Cardiff. I looked into him." "Of course you did." "I wanted to kill him." The words hung in the air between them, simple and terrifying in their honesty. Rory's fingers found the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, tracing it without thinking—an old habit, a grounding mechanism from childhood that had taken on new meaning in recent years. "But you didn't," she said quietly. "No. Because you wouldn't have wanted me to." She closed her eyes. This was the problem with Lucien Moreau. He saw too much, understood too much, slipped past her defenses before she even realized she'd lowered them. The night they'd first kissed, pressed against the brick wall of a Shoreditch club while something with too many teeth howled in the distance, she'd felt simultaneously terrified and safe in a way she hadn't since childhood. "Why are you here?" she asked again, opening her eyes. "The real reason." Lucien crossed the cramped space between them in three strides. He stopped just short of touching her, close enough that she could smell his cologne—sandalwood and something darker underneath, something that reminded her of incense and old churches and the particular sulfuric tang of the demonic realm he'd never fully escaped. "Because I've spent four months trying to convince myself that leaving was the right choice." His voice was low, almost rough. "Four months telling myself that you're better off without me, that I was being noble, that this ache in my chest would eventually fade. And tonight I walked past a woman on the Tube with black hair, and for one moment I thought—" He stopped, swallowed. "I'm tired, Rory. I'm tired of being noble. I'm tired of being alone. And I'm tired of pretending I don't think about you every single day." Her heart was doing something complicated and painful behind her ribs. She should tell him to leave. She should remind him of all the reasons he'd listed four months ago, all the dangers he posed, all the ways this could only end badly. She should protect herself the way she'd learned to after Evan, building walls so high that no one could scale them. Instead, she reached up and brushed that errant strand of platinum hair back from his forehead. Lucien's eyes fluttered closed at the touch. When they opened again, they were bright with something that looked dangerously like hope. "I can't promise you safety," he said. "I can't promise you normal. My father's people will always be hunting for ways to use me, and my work puts me in contact with beings that would destroy you without a second thought. But I can promise you honesty. I can promise to never walk away again without a fight. And I can promise—" His hand came up to cup her jaw, thumb brushing her cheekbone with devastating gentleness. "I can promise that I will spend every day trying to deserve you." "You're an idiot," Rory whispered. "You know that, right?" "I've been told." "You should have called first. Given me time to prepare. I look terrible." "You look perfect." He smiled, and it transformed his face, softened the sharp edges that made him look so dangerous. "You always look perfect." "Flatterer." "Truth-teller. There's a difference." She laughed despite herself, and something loosened in her chest. The tight knot of anger and hurt that she'd been carrying for months began to unravel, thread by thread. "We need to talk," she said. "Actually talk. About what this is, what it means. About boundaries and expectations and the fact that I'm human and you're—" "Half-demon," he finished. "Yes. We do need to talk. We need to have many conversations, some of them difficult. But right now—" He leaned his forehead against hers, and the gesture was so familiar, so achingly familiar, that her breath caught. "Right now, can I just be here? Can we just exist in this moment, before the complications come rushing back in?" Ptolemy chose that moment to leap onto the counter behind Rory, knocking over a stack of Eva's research notes with cheerful disregard. The cat wound between them, purring, completely unimpressed by the emotional tension in the room. "Eva's going to kill me if I don't organize those," Rory said. "I'll help you sort them later." "You're staying?" Lucien pulled back just enough to meet her eyes. "If you'll have me." She should say no. She should remember all the nights she'd spent staring at her ceiling, replaying their last conversation, cataloging all the ways she'd let herself be vulnerable only to be left behind. She should remember Evan, remember the lesson she'd learned about trusting too quickly, loving too deeply. But Lucien wasn't Evan. Lucien, for all his shadows and secrets, had never made her feel small. Had never made her doubt her own perception of reality. When he looked at her, she felt seen—truly seen—in a way that was terrifying and exhilarating in equal measure. "The couch is terrible," she finally said. "Eva's cat has claimed it as his kingdom, and the springs are shot." Lucien's expression didn't flicker. "I've slept in worse places." "And there's only one bedroom." Now he smiled, slow and knowing. "I'm aware." "I'm not— We're not— This doesn't mean—" "Rory." He caught her hands in his, and his skin was warm, almost hot, the demon blood running through his veins making itself known. "Whatever you want. Whatever pace you need. I'm not here to rush you. I'm not here to push." "Then why are you here?" He brought her hands to his lips and pressed a kiss to her knuckles. "Because being without you is worse than any danger I could possibly bring to your door." The curry house below them had gone quiet, the dinner rush finally dying down. Through Eva's cramped window, London glittered with a thousand lights, indifferent to the small drama playing out in a flat on Brick Lane. "Okay," Rory said softly. "Stay." And when Lucien kissed her—finally, finally kissed her, gentle and desperate and full of all the words they hadn't yet said—she let herself believe, for the first time in four months, that maybe some broken things could be put back together.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
56.4103% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"she said quietly [quietly]"
1"she finally said [finally]"
2"Rory said softly [softly]"
56.6396% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1845
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count1
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count2
4
adverb"softly"
count1
5
adverb"suddenly"
count1
6
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"completely"
2"quickly"
3"slightly"
4"softly"
5"suddenly"
6"truly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
72.8997% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1845
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"flicker"
count1
2
word"fluttered"
count1
3
word"cataloged"
count1
4
word"unravel"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"flicker"
2"fluttered"
3"cataloged"
4"unravel"
66.6667% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"without second thought"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"without a second thought"
1"hung in the air"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences91
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences91
filterMatches
0"look"
1"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount4
totalSentences131
matches
0"brushed that errant"
1"promise that I"
2"hurt that she'd"
3"chose that moment"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs67
mean27.25
std24.41
cv0.895
sampleLengths
086
114
223
313
473
56
612
749
870
932
104
119
1241
131
1433
1533
1625
175
1827
1927
206
2169
2226
238
2475
2510
2620
274
285
2945
306
318
3266
3313
3451
3593
3664
3716
3821
3990
409
413
4213
4324
441
454
4629
4727
4862
4937
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs226
matches
0"was, filling"
1"was doing"
72.7331% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1230
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount73
adverbRatio0.05934959349593496
lyAdverbCount31
lyAdverbRatio0.025203252032520326
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences131
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences131
mean13.94
std12.06
cv0.865
sampleLengths
034
128
224
310
44
511
612
78
85
921
1033
1119
126
139
143
158
1612
1729
1833
1917
2020
2111
221
233
2417
254
263
276
2826
2915
301
314
3229
337
3426
353
3618
374
385
3918
409
417
4220
436
4439
4511
4619
476
4818
492
60.5598% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.42748091603053434
totalSentences131
uniqueOpeners56
40.3846% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"she said, moving toward the tiny kitchenette (say, move)"
1"laughed (laugh)"
2"she said quietly (say quietly)"
3"Rory whispered (whisper)"
4"he finished (finish)"
5"she finally said (finally say)"
6"Rory said softly (say softly)"
83.8996%