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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQNJ88DMJYR9M42TG6M1YW
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Model:
Claude Haiku 4.5
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Thriller: chase through city streets
Duration:
21.3s
Cost:
$0.009742
Provider:
Anthropic
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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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AI
The rain hammered against the pavement in thick, aggressive sheets, turning Soho's narrow streets into rivers of black water that reflected the neon signs overhead. Detective Harlow Quinn moved through it without breaking stride, her worn leather
watch
catching the strobing light of a closed shop window as she checked the time. 11:47 PM. The suspect had a four-minute lead, maybe less. She'd spotted him leaving The Raven's Nest twenty minutes ago—Tommy Herrera, the off-the-books medic she'd been tracking for six months. He'd been inside for forty-five minutes, long enough to conduct business, and Quinn had
watch
ed him slip out the back entrance with something clutched against his chest, wrapped in brown paper the size of a shoebox. No paramedic carried supplies like that unless those supplies were contraband. Quinn's shoes splashed through a puddle the size of a small pond, her navy coat soaked through despite the military precision with which she moved. Eighteen years on the force had taught her how to move through a city. How to read the rhythm of a neighborhood. How to become invisible until the moment she needed to be seen. Herrera was fast. Younger, certainly, with the muscle memory of someone who'd spent years running toward emergencies. But Quinn had something better than youth—she had patience and the kind of relentless focus that had made her one of Metropolitan Police's most decorated detectives. The kind of focus that had kept her hunting for answers about DS Morris for three years, even after the case had been officially closed. Even after everyone else had stopped looking. She rounded the corner onto Greek Street, her eyes scanning the wet pavement for droplets of water or disturbance in the rain that would indicate which direction he'd taken. There—scuff marks on the street, pointing toward the pedestrian underpass that led down to the old Tube station. Technically closed to the public for twenty years, ever since the council had decided it was too costly to maintain. Quinn descended the stairs without hesitation, her hand instinctively moving to the torch clipped to her belt. The darkness below was absolute, the kind of darkness that swallowed light whole. Water dripped from the concrete ceiling, each drop
echoing
in the cavernous space below. The fluorescent strips that had once lit this place hung like skeletal fingers from the upper reaches, broken and useless. Her torch beam cut through the black, catching glimpses of the old platform—corroded rails, abandoned benches, the faded ghost of painted advertisements that no one had cared to remove in two decades.
The air was thick with
decay and moisture, the smell of rust and something else. Something that made the back of Quinn's neck prickle with instinctive warning. "Herrera," she called out, her voice carrying the edge of authority that years of police work had honed to a weapon. "Come out. I just want to talk." Silence answered her, thick and complete. Then movement—the scuff of a shoe against concrete somewhere deeper in the station. Quinn moved toward it, her torch leading the way. The beam caught a figure at the far end of the platform, still clutching the brown paper package. "Don't move," Quinn commanded, and started forward. That's when she saw it—a door in the station wall where no door should exist. It was newer than everything else down here, carved into the brick with precision and fitted with a frame of what looked like black iron. And it
was opening
. Herrera didn't run. Instead, he turned and looked back at Quinn, and in that moment, she saw something in his face that made her hesitation. It wasn't fear. It was pity. As if he
were watching
someone walk toward a cliff in the dark without knowing the edge was there. He stepped through the door and it
began to
close. Quinn accelerated, her leather-soled shoes skidding
slightly
on the wet concrete. The door
was narrowing
—a crack of deeper darkness beyond it, and something else. Lights. Not the harsh fluorescents of the station, but something warmer, older. Candlelight, perhaps, or something that mimicked it. She could hear sounds now, too. Voices. Music, thin and strange. The smell of things burning—herbs, maybe, or something else entirely. She reached the door and thrust her arm through the narrowing gap, palm flat against the frame. Her fingers brushed cold metal, and the door stopped moving, held by her strength and sheer stubbornness. Beyond the threshold lay something that shouldn't exist. The space opened up into an impossible cavern, far too large to fit beneath the city streets. The walls glowed with bioluminescent light that came from nowhere and everywhere at once, casting everything in shades of blue and green. The old Tube station platform had transformed into something else entirely—a marketplace that sprawled across the cavern floor in organized chaos. Stalls and counters constructed from materials she couldn't identify. Vendors in clothes that ranged from contemporary to centuries out of fashion. And the goods. God, the goods. Displayed on tables were things that made Quinn's detective's mind struggle to categorize. Bottles filled with substances that moved against gravity. Books bound in materials that weren't leather or cloth. Items that
seemed to
exist in the space between visibility and shadow, as if they were only half-present in this world. The Veil Market. She'd heard rumors about it—whispers from informants who spoke in metaphors and half-truths, reports she'd filed and had dismissed by superiors who had no framework for understanding them. She'd thought it was mythology. The kind of urban legend that grew from nothing but human imagination and the human need to believe in hidden worlds. But here it was. Real. Solid. And just beyond that threshold. Herrera had disappeared into the crowd of impossible people, the brown package no longer visible. Quinn's breath came faster, her mind racing through calculations and consequences. Following him in meant stepping into territory she didn't understand. It meant leaving the world she knew, the world governed by laws and procedure and the certainty of physical reality. Staying out meant losing the suspect, losing the case, losing another thread in the tangled web she'd been
unraveling
for three years. Losing another chance to understand what had
really
happened to
DS Morris in that abandoned factory outside Hackney. Losing the answer to the question that had consumed her professional life. Quinn pulled her arm out of the door. It slammed shut with a finality that
echoed
through the abandoned Tube station, the sound of it like the closing of a trap. For a moment, there was nothing—no seam in the brick wall, no evidence that the door had ever existed. But Quinn could still feel the cold against her palm where the metal frame had been. She stood in the darkness of the station, dripping rainwater onto concrete that hadn't seen active use in two decades, and made a decision that would change everything. She turned and walked back toward the stairs. She would need to prepare. The Veil Market moved locations every full moon—three days from now. And if she was going to follow Tommy Herrera back into that impossible place, she would need more than a detective's badge and a torch. She would need answers about what that place
really
was. About what it sold. About why a paramedic from Seville would smuggle something wrapped in brown paper down into the darkness beneath Camden. She would need to understand the rules of a world that had never appeared in any case file she'd ever read. Quinn climbed the stairs back to the rain-soaked streets of Soho, already composing her next move in her mind. Somewhere out there was someone who could explain what she'd just seen. Someone who understood the world beneath the world. And she would find them, just as she found everything else. Because that was what Detective Harlow Quinn did. She investigated. She pursued. She never stopped. Even when the pursuit took her into darkness where ordinary laws no longer applied.
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2/17/2026, 2:43:22 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
2
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
77.8434%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1354
totalAiIsmAdverbs
3
found
0
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
1
adverb
"really"
count
2
highlights
0
"slightly"
1
"really"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
77.8434%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1354
totalAiIsms
3
found
0
word
"echoed"
count
1
1
word
"echoing"
count
1
2
word
"unraveling"
count
1
highlights
0
"echoed"
1
"echoing"
2
"unraveling"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"air was thick with"
count
1
highlights
0
"The air was thick with"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
101
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
3
narrationSentences
101
filterMatches
0
"watch"
hedgeMatches
0
"began to"
1
"seemed to"
2
"happened to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
102
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
32
mean
41.69
std
23.93
cv
0.574
sampleLengths
0
62
1
67
2
59
3
75
4
67
5
64
6
59
7
28
8
46
9
7
10
44
11
50
12
10
13
64
14
34
15
8
16
87
17
51
18
57
19
11
20
56
21
52
22
8
23
58
24
28
25
8
26
74
27
21
28
39
29
11
30
15
31
14
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
101
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
3
totalVerbs
215
matches
0
"was opening"
1
"were watching"
2
"was narrowing"
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1344
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
44
adverbRatio
0.03273809523809524
lyAdverbCount
11
lyAdverbRatio
0.00818452380952381
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
102
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
102
mean
13.08
std
8.08
cv
0.618
sampleLengths
0
25
1
27
2
2
3
8
4
20
5
36
6
11
7
25
8
14
9
8
10
12
11
3
12
14
13
26
14
25
15
7
16
29
17
18
18
20
19
17
20
13
21
14
22
20
23
32
24
15
25
12
26
21
27
7
28
6
29
13
30
9
31
18
32
7
33
15
34
25
35
4
36
3
37
22
38
3
39
3
40
19
41
10
42
11
43
13
44
1
45
11
46
7
47
6
48
1
49
4
70.9150%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
11
diversityRatio
0.49019607843137253
totalSentences
102
uniqueOpeners
50
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
2
fancyCount
2
fancyTags
0
"she called out, her voice carrying the edge of authority that years of police work had honed to a weapon (call out, carry year work hone)"
1
"Quinn commanded, and started forward (command, start)"
89.8001%