Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQNVNGF17X19D6Z22247QZ

Run Details

Duration:
9.3s
Cost:
$0.004608
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rory jumped at the knock on the door, spilling lukewarm tea on her worn jeans. Ptolemy, curled up on a stack of grimoires, twitched an ear but didn't stir. No one ever knocked on Eva’s flat door. People usually just yelled up from the street, or, in Eva's case, materialized with a blast of wind and the scent of ozone. She padded across the cluttered living room, a faint sense of unease prickling her skin. The three deadbolts made a satisfying series of thunks as she unfastened them. Pulling the door open, she braced herself for… what, exactly? A wrong delivery? Eva's latest arcane disaster? It wasn't either. “Evening, *mon chou*.” Lucien Moreau stood on the landing, framed by the pale glow of the stairwell light. His platinum blond hair was slicked back, gleaming, and he wore a charcoal suit that looked like it had been poured onto him. The ivory-handled cane rested in his grasp, a familiar, unsettling presence. One amber eye met her bright blue, the other a fathomless black. No hint of surprise crossed his aristocratic features, only that maddeningly knowing smirk. Rory’s breath hitched. Four months. Four months since she’d seen him, since she’d felt the burn of his touch, since she’d walked away from the complicated, dangerous game they were playing. Her heart, a traitorous thing, pounded against her ribs. “Lucien.” Her voice was flat, betraying none of the chaos swirling inside her. “What are you doing here?” He leaned against the doorframe, radiating an arrogant ease that made her want to slam the door in his face. “Is that any way to greet an old friend?” His gaze lingered on her, slow and deliberate, and she felt a blush creep up her neck. Had he always looked at her like that? Like he saw straight through her carefully constructed defenses? “We’re not friends,” she said, her voice sharper than she intended. She remembered the nights they’d spent tangled together, the whispered secrets, the undeniable heat. Friends didn’t share that kind of intimacy. Friends didn’t leave each other feeling gutted and confused. His smile widened, a flash of white in the dim light. “Perhaps ‘acquaintances with a shared history’ is more accurate, then.” He pushed off the frame, taking a step closer, and the faint scent of expensive cologne and something subtly… demonic… reached her. It was a familiar scent, one that had haunted her dreams for weeks. She held her ground, arms crossed over her chest. “Whatever you want to call it, it doesn’t explain why you’re on Eva’s doorstep.” “Ah, Eva.” He glanced pointedly at the stacks of books and scrolls visible behind her. “Always the curator of the occult, our dear Eva. Tell me, is Ptolemy still shedding on the *Cochranes*?” The casual mention of Eva’s cat and specific texts was a deliberate jab, a reminder of how intimately he knew her life, her friends, her safe spaces. It rankled. “She’s not here,” Rory said, ignoring the question. “And neither, I imagine, is whatever you’re looking for.” Lucien raised an eyebrow. “Such hostility, *chérie*. Did I offend you with my absence?” The directness of the question, the casual way he suggested her hurt, struck a nerve. Rory clenched her jaw. “You left, Lucien. You didn’t disappear. You made a choice.” “And you, Aurora, made yours. We both have our reasons.” He paused, his gaze softening almost imperceptibly. “Though I admit, I found myself… longing for your quick wit.” It was flattery, pure and simple, and it shouldn’t have affected her. But it did. The memory of their sharp, exhilarating banter, their arguments that always ended in laughter or something far more intense, flooded her. “Don’t,” she warned, her voice low. “Don’t try to charm your way in, Lucien. It won’t work.” “It has before,” he murmured, his eyes twinkling. He took another step, closing the distance between them. He was so close she could feel the faint warmth radiating from him, see the flecks of gold in his amber eye. “And I assure you, charm is not my primary objective tonight.” “Then what is?” She didn't back away. A part of her, the reckless part, craved this proximity, this dangerous dance. The small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a childhood souvenir, felt a phantom throb, a quiet echo of past pains, past mistakes. She wasn't going to make another. He leaned in, his voice dropping to a low, conspiratorial tone. “I require your unique set of skills, Aurora Carter. It would seem certain… individuals… are under the impression that you are, in fact, still working for me.” Rory stared at him, bewildered. “What? No. I haven’t heard from you in months. I haven’t done anything for you.” “Precisely.” He straightened up, a hint of exasperation in his elegant features. “Which has caused a rather… unfortunate misunderstanding. A group of particularly dim-witted warlocks believes you absconded with a rather valuable artifact they commissioned me to retrieve. An artifact, I might add, that I *did* retrieve, and which is currently in their possession.” “And they think I stole it from them?” Rory scoffed. “That’s ridiculous. Even for warlocks.” “Indeed.” Lucien sighed, a theatrical gesture. “They suspect I used you as a distraction, a scapegoat, to keep it for myself. And they are, shall we say, rather *unpleasant* when they feel cheated.” “So what does this have to do with me? Tell them you didn’t.” “I have. Repeatedly. They remain unconvinced. They want proof. They want to see you, alive and well, ideally with the phantom artifact in your hands, explaining that you never had it in the first place.” Rory pinched the bridge of her nose. This was just like him, dragging her into his messy supernatural world without a second thought. “You want me to lie for you?” “A white lie, for the sake of international magical relations. And your continued well-being. These gentlemen are not known for their patience. Or their mercy.” “And if I say no?” He smiled, a chilling edge to it this time. “Then I will, of course, inform them of your unfortunate demise. A tragic accident, perhaps. And I will mourn you appropriately.” His eyes, amber and black, gleamed with genuine conviction, or a very good imitation of it. Rory knew he wasn't entirely bluffing. He wouldn’t *kill* her, she didn't think, but he wouldn’t hesitate to toss her into a complicated and dangerous situation if it suited his purposes. And she’d hate to be on the wrong side of his “mourning.” Besides, the idea of being falsely accused, even by idiotic warlocks, chafed at her innate sense of fairness. “Fine,” she bit out. “But this is a one-time thing, Lucien. And you owe me.” “Always a pleasure doing business with you, Aurora.” He pushed past her, stepping into the flat, and her senses were immediately overwhelmed by his presence. The subtle scent, the confident stride, the sheer *force* of him. Ptolemy, startled by the intrusion, finally uncurled himself from the books, stretching languidly before fixing Lucien with a baleful glare. Lucien paused, offering the tabby a small bow. “Ptolemy, my old adversary. Still guarding the secrets of the ancients, I see.” Rory watched him, a knot tightening in her stomach. He was here. In Eva’s flat. In her space. And the familiar ache of unresolved feelings, of attraction and resentment, pulsed beneath her skin. This was going to be a long night.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He glanced pointedly [pointedly]"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.41
leniency0.821
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.051
83.82% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1236
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"precisely"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
3
adverb"languidly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"precisely"
2"very"
3"languidly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
23.14% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1236
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"sense of"
count2
1
word"gleaming"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count3
3
word"constructed"
count1
4
word"reminder"
count1
5
word"eyebrow"
count1
6
word"charm"
count2
7
word"could feel"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count1
9
word"dance"
count1
10
word"throb"
count1
11
word"echo"
count1
12
word"chilling"
count1
13
word"stomach"
count1
14
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"sense of"
1"gleaming"
2"familiar"
3"constructed"
4"reminder"
5"eyebrow"
6"charm"
7"could feel"
8"warmth"
9"dance"
10"throb"
11"echo"
12"chilling"
13"stomach"
14"pulsed"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
1
label"without second thought"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her jaw"
1"without a second thought"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences77
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences99
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans7
markdownWords8
totalWords1236
ratio0.006
matches
0"mon chou"
1"Cochranes"
2"chérie"
3"did"
4"unpleasant"
5"kill"
6"force"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount823
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.09
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva5
Moreau1
Had1
Lucien5
Rory9
Besides1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Had"
3"Lucien"
4"Rory"
places(empty)
globalScore0.953
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like it had been poured onto him"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1236
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences99
matches
0"share that kind"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean32.53
std17.46
cv0.537
sampleLengths
060
145
23
33
474
540
618
763
841
956
1023
1133
1229
1317
1414
1529
1628
1736
1817
1950
2049
2138
2220
2354
2415
2533
2613
2735
2830
2925
305
3146
3261
3315
3436
3520
3621
3741
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences77
matches
0"was slicked"
1"been poured"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs135
matches
0"were playing"
1"wasn't entirely bluffing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences99
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount825
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.03151515151515152
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.01696969696969697
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences99
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences99
mean12.48
std8.48
cv0.679
sampleLengths
015
114
28
323
415
513
68
72
83
94
103
113
1215
1323
1411
1512
1613
173
182
1926
209
2113
225
2320
2426
258
269
2711
2814
297
309
3111
3229
331
342
3513
369
3714
3815
3918
4027
412
428
439
444
4510
4615
474
4810
4917
72.39% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.46464646464646464
totalSentences99
uniqueOpeners46
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
50.99% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences71
matches
0"She padded across the cluttered"
1"It wasn't either."
2"His platinum blond hair was"
3"Her heart, a traitorous thing,"
4"Her voice was flat, betraying"
5"He leaned against the doorframe,"
6"His gaze lingered on her,"
7"she said, her voice sharper"
8"She remembered the nights they’d"
9"His smile widened, a flash"
10"He pushed off the frame,"
11"It was a familiar scent,"
12"She held her ground, arms"
13"He glanced pointedly at the"
14"He paused, his gaze softening"
15"It was flattery, pure and"
16"she warned, her voice low"
17"he murmured, his eyes twinkling"
18"He took another step, closing"
19"He was so close she"
ratio0.423
44.51% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences71
matches
0"Rory jumped at the knock"
1"Ptolemy, curled up on a"
2"People usually just yelled up"
3"She padded across the cluttered"
4"The three deadbolts made a"
5"A wrong delivery?"
6"Eva's latest arcane disaster?"
7"It wasn't either."
8"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
9"His platinum blond hair was"
10"The ivory-handled cane rested in"
11"Rory’s breath hitched."
12"Her heart, a traitorous thing,"
13"Her voice was flat, betraying"
14"He leaned against the doorframe,"
15"His gaze lingered on her,"
16"she said, her voice sharper"
17"She remembered the nights they’d"
18"Friends didn’t share that kind"
19"Friends didn’t leave each other"
ratio0.831
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"He leaned against the doorframe, radiating an arrogant ease that made her want to slam the door in his face."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"she said, her voice sharper than she intended"
1"He paused, his gaze softening almost imperceptibly"
2"she warned, her voice low"
3"he murmured, his eyes twinkling"
4"He straightened up, a hint of exasperation in his elegant features"
73.08% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she warned (warn)"
1"he murmured (murmur)"
2"Lucien sighed (sigh)"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.128
leniency0.256
rawRatio0.6
effectiveRatio0.154
79.7306%