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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQP2S79F17A8Y2XF573NJ7
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Model:
Z.AI GLM 4.5
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Mystery: examining a crime scene
Duration:
42.9s
Cost:
$0.004968
Provider:
WandB
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The bone token felt cold and wrong in Detective Harlow Quinn's hand as she descended the crumbling steps into darkness. The abandoned Tube station beneath Camden smelled of damp concrete and something else—something metallic and ancient that set her teeth on edge. Her flashlight cut a precise beam through the gloom, illuminating flickering lanterns that cast long shadows across the curved walls. Eighteen years on the force, and she'd never encountered a crime scene quite like The Veil Market. "Detective Quinn?" A voice called from deeper in the tunnel. Harlow clicked off her flashlight as she reached the platform, its military precision evident in her measured steps. The worn leather
watch
on her left wrist caught the lantern light—3:17 AM. Ahead, the market sprawled in chaotic disarray, stalls overturned, merchandise scattered. And in the center of it all, a body. "Over here, Detective." Eva Kowalski pushed her round glasses up her nose, green eyes wide behind the lenses. Her curly red hair
seemed to
absorb the dim light as she
nervously
tucked a strand behind her left ear. The worn leather satchel at her hip bulged with what Harlow assumed were reference books. "The scene is... complicated." Harlow's sharp jaw tightened as she approached. The victim lay contorted on the ground, middle-aged male, dressed in expensive but now-bloodied clothing. His eyes were wide open, staring at nothing. Around him, symbols had
been painted
in what looked like blood—though the lack of iron smell suggested otherwise. "What have we got?" Harlow asked, her eyes scanning the scene methodically. "Victim is Jonathan Abernathy, curator at the British Museum's restricted archives," Eva replied, consulting her notepad. "No visible weapons. Preliminary assessment suggests ritualistic killing. These symbols"—she gestured to the markings on the ground—"appear to be Enochian. Roughly translated, they relate to binding or containment." Harlow knelt beside the body, careful not to disturb anything. Her brown eyes missed nothing—the victim's fingers curled unnaturally, small burns around the neck, the way the blood had pooled in precise patterns rather than spreading naturally. She pulled on a pair of latex gloves with practiced efficiency. "Ritualistic," she repeated, the word tasting like ash. "But something's wrong." She gestured to the victim's left hand. "No wedding ring, but there's a tan line. Recently removed?" Eva leaned closer, her freckled face scrunching in concentration. "Yes. And look here"—she pointed to a small brass compass lying near the victim's right hand—"the Veil Compass. It's from my research notes. It was stolen from the museum three days ago." Harlow picked up the compass with tweezers. Small brass casing with a patina of verdigris, face
etched
with protective sigils. The needle spun wildly. "Points toward supernatural rifts or portals, correct?" she asked, remembering the file Eva had prepared. "Yes. But it shouldn't be reacting like that—unless there's an extremely powerful source nearby." Eva tucked her hair behind her ear again, a nervous gesture Harlow
was beginning
to recognize. "Or the rift is closing," Harlow murmured, more to herself than to Eva. She stood, her gaze sweeping the market again. "Where's the entrance token? Abernathy would have needed one to get in." "We haven't found it yet," admitted Eva. "The team is still searching." Harlow's
eyes narrowed
. "The symbols—they're not Enochian, not entirely. Look at this one." She pointed to a complex glyph near the victim's head. "It's a hybrid. Enochian base, but these additions..." She trailed off, her military precision giving way to something almost like recognition. "What is it?" Eva asked. "Something I've seen before." Harlow's voice was quiet. "Three years ago. When Morris died." Eva's
eyes widened
. "The official report said cardiac arrest during an undercover operation." Harlow's fingers unconsciously touched her
watch
. "The official report was wrong. There were symbols like this at that scene too. They were dismissed as graffiti." "That's impossible," Eva said firmly. "These symbols are specific to Veil magic. They require knowledge most people don't have—" "Most people," Harlow finished. "But not everyone." She turned back to the body. "You said this was ritualistic, but look at the victim's expression. No fear. No pain. Just... surprise." "And the burns around his neck," Eva added, leaning closer. "They're not from a rope or wire. Too precise, almost geometric." "Like he was wearing something that burned him," Harlow said. "Something that was removed. Something that might have been protecting him." "A warding amulet?" Eva suggested. "If someone removed it during a ritual..." Harlow nodded
slowly
. "The blood patterns—they're not random. They're containment symbols. But they're broken here." She pointed to a smudge near the victim's feet. "Deliberately broken. And look—no footprints in the blood except the victim's and whoever found him." "Which suggests whoever did this either cleaned up after themselves or..." Eva trailed off. "Or never stood in the blood," Harlow finished. "Because they weren't standing at all." She gestured upward. "The symbols on the ceiling—they're activation sigils. This wasn't a ritual killing. This was an extraction." "Extraction?" Eva frowned. "Of what?" "Something Abernathy had. Something valuable enough to kill for." Harlow's eyes fell on the Veil Compass again, its needle still spinning. "The compass wasn't stolen. It was a tool. Abernathy used it to find something. Something that got him killed." Eva shook her head. "But the museum's inventory shows nothing missing except the compass. I've checked twice." "Then whatever he found wasn't from the museum." Harlow's eyes met Eva's. "He found a rift. And someone followed him through it. Or came out of it." "That's impossible," Eva said, though her voice lacked conviction. "The Veil Market moves every full moon. It would take significant power to open a rift here without disrupting the entire market." "Significant power," Harlow agreed. "Or inside help." She straightened up, her bearing
unwavering
despite the supernatural implications. "We need to find Abernathy's research notes. And his wife. The ring—that's not just a marriage symbol. In certain traditions, it's also a focus object. If he gave it to someone before coming here..." "He was protecting it," Eva realized. "Or them." Harlow nodded, her mind already working through the possibilities. "And the broken containment symbols? They weren't broken during the struggle. They were broken after Abernathy was already dead. To release whatever he'd contained." Eva paled. "Then whatever he found is still out there." "And whoever killed him knew exactly what they were doing." Harlow's eyes swept the market once more, taking in every detail, every inconsistency. "This wasn't a robbery gone wrong or some random cult killing. This was precise. Calculated. Professional." "Like a military operation?" Eva suggested quietly. Harlow's jaw tightened. "Exactly like one." She looked down at the Veil Compass in her hand. "We need to find out what this is pointing to. And we need to find it before whoever did this comes back for it." As if responding to her words, the compass needle
suddenly
stopped spinning, pointing decisively toward the northern tunnel. Harlow followed its direction, her expression grim. "Eva," she said, her voice low and precise, "I think we just found our next lead."
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
94.1176%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
17
adverbTagCount
2
adverbTags
0
"Harlow murmured, more to herself than to Eva [more]"
1
"Eva said firmly [firmly]"
66.2447%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1185
totalAiIsmAdverbs
4
found
0
adverb
"deliberately"
count
1
1
adverb
"nervously"
count
1
2
adverb
"slowly"
count
1
3
adverb
"suddenly"
count
1
highlights
0
"deliberately"
1
"nervously"
2
"slowly"
3
"suddenly"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
74.6835%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1185
totalAiIsms
3
found
0
word
"calculated"
count
1
1
word
"unwavering"
count
1
2
word
"etched"
count
1
highlights
0
"calculated"
1
"unwavering"
2
"etched"
66.6667%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
2
maxInWindow
2
found
0
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
2
highlights
0
"eyes narrowed"
1
"eyes widened"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
69
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
2
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
69
filterMatches
0
"watch"
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
94
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
41
mean
28.56
std
16.46
cv
0.576
sampleLengths
0
79
1
10
2
51
3
57
4
48
5
12
6
44
7
48
8
28
9
41
10
39
11
30
12
33
13
12
14
44
15
5
16
14
17
13
18
25
19
19
20
30
21
21
22
21
23
12
24
39
25
14
26
33
27
5
28
40
29
17
30
27
31
31
32
51
33
8
34
33
35
10
36
39
37
7
38
40
39
25
40
16
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
69
matches
0
"been painted"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
1
totalVerbs
116
matches
0
"was beginning"
99.0214%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
608
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
25
adverbRatio
0.04111842105263158
lyAdverbCount
12
lyAdverbRatio
0.019736842105263157
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
94
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
94
mean
12.46
std
7.19
cv
0.577
sampleLengths
0
20
1
22
2
20
3
17
4
10
5
18
6
13
7
11
8
9
9
18
10
20
11
15
12
4
13
7
14
15
15
8
16
18
17
12
18
16
19
28
20
10
21
27
22
11
23
8
24
10
25
10
26
9
27
32
28
7
29
13
30
4
31
15
32
30
33
13
34
8
35
12
36
7
37
5
38
3
39
20
40
21
41
5
42
8
43
6
44
3
45
10
46
6
47
19
48
5
49
14
77.6596%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
2
diversityRatio
0.4787234042553192
totalSentences
94
uniqueOpeners
45
13.2353%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
17
fancyCount
11
fancyTags
0
"Eva replied, consulting her notepad (reply, consult)"
1
"she repeated, the word tasting like ash (repeat)"
2
"Harlow murmured, more to herself than to Eva (murmur)"
3
"admitted Eva (admit)"
4
"Eva said firmly (say firmly)"
5
"Harlow finished (finish)"
6
"Eva added, leaning closer (add, lean)"
7
"Harlow finished (finish)"
8
"Eva said, though her voice lacked conviction (say, lack)"
9
"Harlow agreed (agree)"
10
"Eva realized (realize)"
87.7429%