| 85.71% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 35 | | adverbTagCount | 4 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Eva said firmly [firmly]" | | 1 | "She turned back [back]" | | 2 | "She gestured upward [upward]" | | 3 | "Eva suggested quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 62 | | tagDensity | 0.565 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.114 | | effectiveRatio | 0.114 | |
| 83.09% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1183 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "nervously" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "deliberately" | | 3 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 57.73% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1183 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "gloom" | | 1 | "measured" | | 2 | "chaotic" | | 3 | "scanning" | | 4 | "etched" | | 5 | "complex" | | 6 | "firmly" | | 7 | "disrupting" | | 8 | "unwavering" | | 9 | "calculated" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes narrowed" | | 1 | "eyes widened" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 60.04% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 69 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 94 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1171 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 17 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 57 | | wordCount | 627 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 3.67 | | worstName | "Harlow" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 8.5 | | worstWindowName | "Eva" | | discoveredNames | | Detective | 1 | | Harlow | 23 | | Quinn | 1 | | Tube | 1 | | Camden | 1 | | Veil | 4 | | Market | 1 | | Kowalski | 1 | | Eva | 20 | | Enochian | 1 | | Compass | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Camden" | | 3 | "Market" | | 4 | "Kowalski" | | 5 | "Eva" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0 | | windowScore | 0 | |
| 38.89% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like blood—though the lack of iron" | | 1 | "As if responding to her words, the compass needle suddenly stopped spinning, pointing decisively toward the northern tunnel" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1171 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 41 | | mean | 28.56 | | std | 16.46 | | cv | 0.576 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 79 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 51 | | 3 | 57 | | 4 | 48 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 44 | | 7 | 48 | | 8 | 28 | | 9 | 41 | | 10 | 39 | | 11 | 30 | | 12 | 33 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 44 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 25 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 30 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 39 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 33 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 40 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 27 | | 31 | 31 | | 32 | 51 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 33 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 39 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 40 | | 39 | 25 | | 40 | 16 |
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| 95.09% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "been painted" | | 1 | "was stolen" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 121 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 94 | | ratio | 0.064 | | matches | | 0 | "The abandoned Tube station beneath Camden smelled of damp concrete and something else—something metallic and ancient that set her teeth on edge." | | 1 | "The worn leather watch on her left wrist caught the lantern light—3:17 AM." | | 2 | "Around him, symbols had been painted in what looked like blood—though the lack of iron smell suggested otherwise." | | 3 | "\"No visible weapons. Preliminary assessment suggests ritualistic killing. These symbols\"—she gestured to the markings on the ground—\"appear to be Enochian. Roughly translated, they relate to binding or containment.\"" | | 4 | "Her brown eyes missed nothing—the victim's fingers curled unnaturally, small burns around the neck, the way the blood had pooled in precise patterns rather than spreading naturally." | | 5 | "\"Yes. And look here\"—she pointed to a small brass compass lying near the victim's right hand—\"the Veil Compass. It's from my research notes. It was stolen from the museum three days ago.\"" |
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| 93.07% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 544 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.04595588235294118 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.022058823529411766 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 94 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 94 | | mean | 12.46 | | std | 7.19 | | cv | 0.577 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 28 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 27 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 32 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 30 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 20 | | 40 | 21 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 19 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 77.66% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.4787234042553192 | | totalSentences | 94 | | uniqueOpeners | 45 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 91.19% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "Her flashlight cut a precise" | | 1 | "Her curly red hair seemed" | | 2 | "His eyes were wide open," | | 3 | "she gestured to the markings" | | 4 | "Her brown eyes missed nothing—the" | | 5 | "She pulled on a pair" | | 6 | "she repeated, the word tasting" | | 7 | "She gestured to the victim's" | | 8 | "she pointed to a small" | | 9 | "she asked, remembering the file" | | 10 | "She stood, her gaze sweeping" | | 11 | "She pointed to a complex" | | 12 | "She trailed off, her military" | | 13 | "She turned back to the" | | 14 | "She pointed to a smudge" | | 15 | "She gestured upward" | | 16 | "She straightened up, her bearing" | | 17 | "She looked down at the" | | 18 | "she said, her voice low" |
| | ratio | 0.322 | |
| 10.85% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 53 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "The bone token felt cold" | | 1 | "The abandoned Tube station beneath" | | 2 | "Her flashlight cut a precise" | | 3 | "A voice called from deeper" | | 4 | "Harlow clicked off her flashlight" | | 5 | "The worn leather watch on" | | 6 | "Eva Kowalski pushed her round" | | 7 | "Her curly red hair seemed" | | 8 | "The worn leather satchel at" | | 9 | "Harlow's sharp jaw tightened as" | | 10 | "The victim lay contorted on" | | 11 | "His eyes were wide open," | | 12 | "Harlow asked, her eyes scanning" | | 13 | "Eva replied, consulting her notepad" | | 14 | "she gestured to the markings" | | 15 | "Harlow knelt beside the body," | | 16 | "Her brown eyes missed nothing—the" | | 17 | "She pulled on a pair" | | 18 | "she repeated, the word tasting" | | 19 | "She gestured to the victim's" |
| | ratio | 0.898 | |
| 84.75% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "As if responding to her" |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 53.57% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 16 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Her flashlight cut a precise beam through the gloom, illuminating flickering lanterns that cast long shadows across the curved walls." | | 1 | "As if responding to her words, the compass needle suddenly stopped spinning, pointing decisively toward the northern tunnel." |
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| 25.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 35 | | uselessAdditionCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Harlow asked, her eyes scanning the scene methodically" | | 1 | "Harlow murmured, more to herself than to Eva" | | 2 | "She trailed, her military precision giving way to something almost like recognition" | | 3 | "Harlow's eyes fell, its needle still spinning" | | 4 | "Eva said, though her voice lacked conviction" | | 5 | "She straightened up, her bearing unwavering despite the supernatural implications" | | 6 | "she said, her voice low and precise," |
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| 53.23% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 15 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she repeated (repeat)" | | 1 | "Harlow murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Eva added (add)" | | 3 | "Eva suggested (suggest)" | | 4 | "Harlow agreed (agree)" | | 5 | "Eva suggested quietly (suggest)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 62 | | tagDensity | 0.242 | | leniency | 0.484 | | rawRatio | 0.4 | | effectiveRatio | 0.194 | |