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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQP42BR4H0YCGKF3G17KDB
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Model:
Qwen 3.5 397B A17B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
1m 48s
Cost:
$0.014956
Provider:
Alibaba
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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The third deadbolt slid home with a heavy, metallic clunk that
echoed
in the narrow hallway. Aurora Carter paused, her hand lingering on the cold brass knob, listening to the silence on the other side of the door. Above her, the floorboards of the flat creaked, settling under the
weight
of the stacks of books and
scrolls that cluttered
every available surface. Below, the faint, perpetual hum of the curry house on Brick Lane seeped through the floor, carrying the scent of cumin and fried oil that had long since permeated the curtains. She opened the door. Lucien Moreau stood on the landing, water dripping from the brim of his umbrella onto the worn runner. He looked exactly as he had the last time she saw him, six months ago, though the rain
seemed to
sharpen the angles of his face. His platinum blond hair
was slicked
back, devoid of a single stray strand despite the London downpour. The charcoal suit
was tailored
to within an inch of its life, hugging shoulders that held a tension she recognized all too well. Rory, he said. His voice was low, smoothed by a French accent that usually made her
feel
safe. Tonight, it made her stomach tighten. Lucien. She didn't step back to invite him in. She kept her body framed in the doorway, one hand resting on the wood, the other hidden behind her back. You
know
I have three locks for a reason. And yet you opened it. His gaze shifted, the heterochromatic eyes catching the dim hallway light. The amber one glowed warm; the black one
seemed to
swallow the light entirely. He tapped the ivory handle of his cane against the floorboards. A rhythmic, impatient sound. May I? She hesitated. The history between them sat in the air, thick and suffocating. It wasn't just the jobs they had worked together in the supernatural underworld of London. It was the night in Marseille, the heat, the way he had looked at her before she pulled away. She had left without saying goodbye, fleeing back to England because the intimacy terrified her almost as much as Evan had. She couldn't risk letting someone else close enough to see the cracks. It's Eva's flat, Rory said finally, stepping aside. Don't touch anything. Lucien stepped over the threshold, closing his umbrella with a sharp snap. He leaned the cane against the wall near the coat rack, which was already overflowing with Eva's jackets. He didn't remove his coat. A tabby cat emerged from the shadows of the living room, weaving figure-eights around Lucien's polished shoes. Ptolemy remembers me, Lucien observed, bending
slightly
to scratch the cat behind the ears. Unlike his owner. Ptolemy doesn't hold grudges. Rory closed the door and engaged the top bolt, then the middle, leaving only the bottom one loose. She turned to face him. The living room was cramped, illuminated only by the streetlights filtering through the rain-streaked window. Scrolls
were unrolled
across the coffee table, weighed down by mugs and lighter fluid. What do you want, Lucien? He straightened, smoothing the front of his suit jacket. I heard you were back in the city. Properly. Not just running deliveries for the Golden Empress. I work for Yu-Fei. It pays the rent. It puts you in contact with people who ask questions about things they shouldn't
know
. He took a step toward her. The space between them shrank. Rory fought the urge to retreat. She was five-six, solid on her feet, but Lucien carried a presence that made the room
feel
smaller. You disappeared, Aurora. You cut the line. I had to. Because of him? Evan? The name
hung in the air
, sharp and ugly. Rory's left wrist
throbbed
, a phantom pain
echoing
the small crescent-shaped scar hidden beneath her sleeve. She crossed her arms, hiding the mark. Because of everything. Because I'm not built for... this. She gestured vaguely between them. Whatever this is. Lucien's expression didn't change, but the black pupil dilated. You
think
I don't
know
what it is to carry damage? He reached out, his hand hovering near her arm. He didn't touch her. He never pushed. That was the problem. He was too perfect, too waiting. I am half-demon, Rory. My father was from Avaros. Damage is my inheritance. And yet I stood there. I waited. You're a fixer, Lucien. You fix things. I'm not a broken object you can salvage. No. His voice dropped an octave. You are the only thing I have ever
wanted that I
could not buy, cannot broker, and cannot force. The silence stretched, filled only by the sound of rain lashing against the glass and the distant sirens of East London. Rory looked at him,
really
looked at him. She saw the exhaustion around his eyes, the way his grip tightened on his own thigh where his hand rested. He wasn't here for information. He wasn't here for a job. Why now? she asked
softly
. Because there is a threat. A real one. And I cannot protect you from the shadows if you refuse to let me stand in the light with you. He took another step. Now they were close enough that she could smell him. Expensive cologne, rain, and something underlyingly metallic, like ozone. I am not Evan, Aurora. I will never be him. I
know
. Then stop treating me like him. Rory's breath hitched. She looked down at her left wrist, then back up to his mismatched eyes. The fear was still there, a cold knot in her chest, but beneath it was something else. A pull. The attraction she had
tried to
drown in work and distance. She reached out, her fingers brushing the lapel of his charcoal suit. The fabric was cool and smooth. Lucien went still, as if any movement might shatter the moment. You show up unannounced, at midnight, at my friend's flat, Rory said, her voice trembling
slightly
. You expect me to just let you back in? I expect you to be intelligent enough to
know
you shouldn't face what is coming alone. He covered her hand with his. His skin was warm. And I expect you to
know
that I did not come here solely for the threat. Ptolemy meowed, rubbing against Lucien's leg again, breaking the tension. Rory let out a short, breathy laugh, shaking her head. She didn't pull her hand away. You're impossible. I am persistent. There's a difference. Not when it comes to you. Lucien turned his hand, interlacing his fingers with hers. His thumb brushed over the pulse point on her wrist, careful not to press too hard on the scar tissue. Stay here. Lock the door. But answer when I call. Rory looked at their joined hands, then up at his face. The amber eye
seemed to
hold a question; the black one held a promise. She thought of the empty flat, the scrolls, the safety of the three deadbolts. Then she thought of the shadows waiting outside. Okay, she whispered. But if you break another vase, I'm charging you for it. Lucien's lips curved, the first genuine smile she had seen from him in months. It transformed him, softening the sharp edges of the fixer into the man she had almost loved. I will buy you a dozen. He lifted her hand to his lips, pressing a kiss to her knuckles. It was a formal gesture, old-world and deliberate, but the heat of it burned through her skin. He released her hand, picked up his cane, and turned toward the door. Lock it behind me, he said, not looking back. Rory watched him leave, waiting until she heard his
footsteps
descend the stairs before she engaged the second bolt, then the third. She stood there for a long moment in the quiet flat, the scent of his cologne lingering in the air, mixing with the curry and the rain. She touched her wrist, where his thumb had been, and for the first time in six months, the silence didn't
feel
quite so heavy.
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2/17/2026, 2:45:06 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
0
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
70.3704%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1350
totalAiIsmAdverbs
4
found
0
adverb
"slightly"
count
2
1
adverb
"softly"
count
1
2
adverb
"really"
count
1
highlights
0
"slightly"
1
"softly"
2
"really"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
62.9630%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1350
totalAiIsms
5
found
0
word
"throbbed"
count
1
1
word
"weight"
count
1
2
word
"footsteps"
count
1
3
word
"echoed"
count
1
4
word
"echoing"
count
1
highlights
0
"throbbed"
1
"weight"
2
"footsteps"
3
"echoed"
4
"echoing"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"hung in the air"
count
1
highlights
0
"hung in the air"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
143
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
5
hedgeCount
4
narrationSentences
143
filterMatches
0
"feel"
1
"know"
2
"think"
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
1
"tried to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
3
totalSentences
143
matches
0
"scrolls that cluttered"
1
"wanted that I"
2
"know that I"
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
40
mean
33.58
std
25.64
cv
0.764
sampleLengths
0
93
1
4
2
84
3
24
4
38
5
47
6
80
7
11
8
52
9
17
10
61
11
26
12
8
13
57
14
3
15
4
16
49
17
66
18
15
19
25
20
60
21
5
22
61
23
2
24
6
25
47
26
29
27
25
28
42
29
26
30
2
31
3
32
3
33
45
34
47
35
14
36
37
37
43
38
9
39
73
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
3
totalSentences
143
matches
0
"was slicked"
1
"was tailored"
2
"were unrolled"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
254
matches
(empty)
94.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1350
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount
46
adverbRatio
0.034074074074074076
lyAdverbCount
17
lyAdverbRatio
0.012592592592592593
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
143
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
143
mean
9.39
std
6.65
cv
0.709
sampleLengths
0
16
1
22
2
24
3
31
4
4
5
18
6
26
7
17
8
23
9
3
10
15
11
6
12
1
13
8
14
20
15
9
16
5
17
11
18
14
19
11
20
4
21
2
22
2
23
11
24
15
25
19
26
21
27
12
28
8
29
3
30
12
31
18
32
5
33
17
34
14
35
3
36
4
37
18
38
5
39
15
40
14
41
5
42
9
43
8
44
1
45
8
46
4
47
4
48
15
49
6
39.5105%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
15
diversityRatio
0.27972027972027974
totalSentences
143
uniqueOpeners
40
100.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
0
fancyCount
0
fancyTags
(empty)
92.1673%