Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQP42BR4H0YCGKF3G17KDB

Run Details

Duration:
1m 48s
Cost:
$0.014956
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt slid home with a heavy, metallic clunk that echoed in the narrow hallway. Aurora Carter paused, her hand lingering on the cold brass knob, listening to the silence on the other side of the door. Above her, the floorboards of the flat creaked, settling under the weight of the stacks of books and scrolls that cluttered every available surface. Below, the faint, perpetual hum of the curry house on Brick Lane seeped through the floor, carrying the scent of cumin and fried oil that had long since permeated the curtains. She opened the door. Lucien Moreau stood on the landing, water dripping from the brim of his umbrella onto the worn runner. He looked exactly as he had the last time she saw him, six months ago, though the rain seemed to sharpen the angles of his face. His platinum blond hair was slicked back, devoid of a single stray strand despite the London downpour. The charcoal suit was tailored to within an inch of its life, hugging shoulders that held a tension she recognized all too well. Rory, he said. His voice was low, smoothed by a French accent that usually made her feel safe. Tonight, it made her stomach tighten. Lucien. She didn't step back to invite him in. She kept her body framed in the doorway, one hand resting on the wood, the other hidden behind her back. You know I have three locks for a reason. And yet you opened it. His gaze shifted, the heterochromatic eyes catching the dim hallway light. The amber one glowed warm; the black one seemed to swallow the light entirely. He tapped the ivory handle of his cane against the floorboards. A rhythmic, impatient sound. May I? She hesitated. The history between them sat in the air, thick and suffocating. It wasn't just the jobs they had worked together in the supernatural underworld of London. It was the night in Marseille, the heat, the way he had looked at her before she pulled away. She had left without saying goodbye, fleeing back to England because the intimacy terrified her almost as much as Evan had. She couldn't risk letting someone else close enough to see the cracks. It's Eva's flat, Rory said finally, stepping aside. Don't touch anything. Lucien stepped over the threshold, closing his umbrella with a sharp snap. He leaned the cane against the wall near the coat rack, which was already overflowing with Eva's jackets. He didn't remove his coat. A tabby cat emerged from the shadows of the living room, weaving figure-eights around Lucien's polished shoes. Ptolemy remembers me, Lucien observed, bending slightly to scratch the cat behind the ears. Unlike his owner. Ptolemy doesn't hold grudges. Rory closed the door and engaged the top bolt, then the middle, leaving only the bottom one loose. She turned to face him. The living room was cramped, illuminated only by the streetlights filtering through the rain-streaked window. Scrolls were unrolled across the coffee table, weighed down by mugs and lighter fluid. What do you want, Lucien? He straightened, smoothing the front of his suit jacket. I heard you were back in the city. Properly. Not just running deliveries for the Golden Empress. I work for Yu-Fei. It pays the rent. It puts you in contact with people who ask questions about things they shouldn't know. He took a step toward her. The space between them shrank. Rory fought the urge to retreat. She was five-six, solid on her feet, but Lucien carried a presence that made the room feel smaller. You disappeared, Aurora. You cut the line. I had to. Because of him? Evan? The name hung in the air, sharp and ugly. Rory's left wrist throbbed, a phantom pain echoing the small crescent-shaped scar hidden beneath her sleeve. She crossed her arms, hiding the mark. Because of everything. Because I'm not built for... this. She gestured vaguely between them. Whatever this is. Lucien's expression didn't change, but the black pupil dilated. You think I don't know what it is to carry damage? He reached out, his hand hovering near her arm. He didn't touch her. He never pushed. That was the problem. He was too perfect, too waiting. I am half-demon, Rory. My father was from Avaros. Damage is my inheritance. And yet I stood there. I waited. You're a fixer, Lucien. You fix things. I'm not a broken object you can salvage. No. His voice dropped an octave. You are the only thing I have ever wanted that I could not buy, cannot broker, and cannot force. The silence stretched, filled only by the sound of rain lashing against the glass and the distant sirens of East London. Rory looked at him, really looked at him. She saw the exhaustion around his eyes, the way his grip tightened on his own thigh where his hand rested. He wasn't here for information. He wasn't here for a job. Why now? she asked softly. Because there is a threat. A real one. And I cannot protect you from the shadows if you refuse to let me stand in the light with you. He took another step. Now they were close enough that she could smell him. Expensive cologne, rain, and something underlyingly metallic, like ozone. I am not Evan, Aurora. I will never be him. I know. Then stop treating me like him. Rory's breath hitched. She looked down at her left wrist, then back up to his mismatched eyes. The fear was still there, a cold knot in her chest, but beneath it was something else. A pull. The attraction she had tried to drown in work and distance. She reached out, her fingers brushing the lapel of his charcoal suit. The fabric was cool and smooth. Lucien went still, as if any movement might shatter the moment. You show up unannounced, at midnight, at my friend's flat, Rory said, her voice trembling slightly. You expect me to just let you back in? I expect you to be intelligent enough to know you shouldn't face what is coming alone. He covered her hand with his. His skin was warm. And I expect you to know that I did not come here solely for the threat. Ptolemy meowed, rubbing against Lucien's leg again, breaking the tension. Rory let out a short, breathy laugh, shaking her head. She didn't pull her hand away. You're impossible. I am persistent. There's a difference. Not when it comes to you. Lucien turned his hand, interlacing his fingers with hers. His thumb brushed over the pulse point on her wrist, careful not to press too hard on the scar tissue. Stay here. Lock the door. But answer when I call. Rory looked at their joined hands, then up at his face. The amber eye seemed to hold a question; the black one held a promise. She thought of the empty flat, the scrolls, the safety of the three deadbolts. Then she thought of the shadows waiting outside. Okay, she whispered. But if you break another vase, I'm charging you for it. Lucien's lips curved, the first genuine smile she had seen from him in months. It transformed him, softening the sharp edges of the fixer into the man she had almost loved. I will buy you a dozen. He lifted her hand to his lips, pressing a kiss to her knuckles. It was a formal gesture, old-world and deliberate, but the heat of it burned through her skin. He released her hand, picked up his cane, and turned toward the door. Lock it behind me, he said, not looking back. Rory watched him leave, waiting until she heard his footsteps descend the stairs before she engaged the second bolt, then the third. She stood there for a long moment in the quiet flat, the scent of his cologne lingering in the air, mixing with the curry and the rain. She touched her wrist, where his thumb had been, and for the first time in six months, the silence didn't feel quite so heavy.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
85.11% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1343
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"really"
2"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.88% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1343
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"silence"
count3
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"tension"
count2
4
word"stomach"
count1
5
word"rhythmic"
count1
6
word"throbbed"
count1
7
word"echoing"
count1
8
word"perfect"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count1
10
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"silence"
2"weight"
3"tension"
4"stomach"
5"rhythmic"
6"throbbed"
7"echoing"
8"perfect"
9"pulse"
10"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences143
matches(empty)
52.95% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount5
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences143
filterMatches
0"feel"
1"know"
2"think"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences143
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1343
ratio0
matches(empty)
0.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions3
matches
0"Rory, he said."
1"Okay, she whispered."
2"Lock it behind me, he said, not looking back."
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions61
wordCount1343
uniqueNames20
maxNameDensity0.97
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Brick1
Lane1
Moreau1
London3
French1
Marseille1
England1
Evan3
Eva2
Rory12
Lucien13
Golden1
Empress1
Yu-Fei1
Aurora3
Avaros1
East1
You10
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Carter"
1"Moreau"
2"Evan"
3"Eva"
4"Rory"
5"Lucien"
6"Aurora"
7"You"
8"Ptolemy"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"London"
3"Marseille"
4"England"
5"Avaros"
6"East"
globalScore1
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences85
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1343
matches(empty)
96.74% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences143
matches
0"scrolls that cluttered"
1"wanted that I"
2"know that I"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean33.58
std25.64
cv0.764
sampleLengths
093
14
284
324
438
547
680
711
852
917
1061
1126
128
1357
143
154
1649
1766
1815
1925
2060
215
2261
232
246
2547
2629
2725
2842
2926
302
313
323
3345
3447
3514
3637
3743
389
3973
97.90% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences143
matches
0"was slicked"
1"was tailored"
2"were unrolled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs254
matches
0"was already overflowing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences143
ratio0.014
matches
0"The amber one glowed warm; the black one seemed to swallow the light entirely."
1"The amber eye seemed to hold a question; the black one held a promise."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1350
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount46
adverbRatio0.034074074074074076
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.012592592592592593
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences143
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences143
mean9.39
std6.65
cv0.709
sampleLengths
016
122
224
331
44
518
626
717
823
93
1015
116
121
138
1420
159
165
1711
1814
1911
204
212
222
2311
2415
2519
2621
2712
288
293
3012
3118
325
3317
3414
353
364
3718
385
3915
4014
415
429
438
441
458
464
474
4815
496
39.51% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.27972027972027974
totalSentences143
uniqueOpeners40
51.28% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences130
matches
0"Then stop treating me like"
1"Then she thought of the"
ratio0.015
16.92% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount66
totalSentences130
matches
0"She opened the door."
1"He looked exactly as he"
2"His platinum blond hair was"
3"His voice was low, smoothed"
4"She didn't step back to"
5"She kept her body framed"
6"You know I have three"
7"His gaze shifted, the heterochromatic"
8"He tapped the ivory handle"
9"It wasn't just the jobs"
10"It was the night in"
11"She had left without saying"
12"She couldn't risk letting someone"
13"It's Eva's flat, Rory said"
14"He leaned the cane against"
15"He didn't remove his coat."
16"She turned to face him."
17"He straightened, smoothing the front"
18"I heard you were back"
19"I work for Yu-Fei."
ratio0.508
56.15% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount105
totalSentences130
matches
0"The third deadbolt slid home"
1"Aurora Carter paused, her hand"
2"She opened the door."
3"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
4"He looked exactly as he"
5"His platinum blond hair was"
6"The charcoal suit was tailored"
7"Rory, he said."
8"His voice was low, smoothed"
9"Tonight, it made her stomach"
10"She didn't step back to"
11"She kept her body framed"
12"You know I have three"
13"His gaze shifted, the heterochromatic"
14"The amber one glowed warm;"
15"He tapped the ivory handle"
16"A rhythmic, impatient sound."
17"The history between them sat"
18"It wasn't just the jobs"
19"It was the night in"
ratio0.808
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount5
totalSentences130
matches
0"Because of him?"
1"Because of everything."
2"Because I'm not built for..."
3"Because there is a threat."
4"Now they were close enough"
ratio0.038
67.67% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences57
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Aurora Carter paused, her hand lingering on the cold brass knob, listening to the silence on the other side of the door."
1"Below, the faint, perpetual hum of the curry house on Brick Lane seeped through the floor, carrying the scent of cumin and fried oil that had long since permeat…"
2"The charcoal suit was tailored to within an inch of its life, hugging shoulders that held a tension she recognized all too well."
3"He leaned the cane against the wall near the coat rack, which was already overflowing with Eva's jackets."
4"She was five-six, solid on her feet, but Lucien carried a presence that made the room feel smaller."
5"She stood there for a long moment in the quiet flat, the scent of his cologne lingering in the air, mixing with the curry and the rain."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
82.4259%