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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQP8T33SG71FE5ZTC041X6
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Model:
Z.AI GLM 4.7
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Fantasy: entering an ancient ruin
Duration:
1m 1s
Cost:
$0.008872
Provider:
Together
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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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Meta
AI
The mist clung to the low-hanging branches of the Richmond oaks, a damp, gray curtain that smelled of wet earth and exhaust fumes. Aurora Carter pulled her jacket tighter around her shoulders, the chill of the London evening seeping through the denim. She paused, her boots crunching
softly
on the gravel path, and looked ahead. To anyone else, the circle of ancient trees would have looked like nothing more than a particularly dense cluster of woodland. To Rory, the air
shimmered
with a faint, static distortion—a ripple in reality that made her eyes water if she stared at it too long. "This is it," she muttered, touching the silver chain at her throat. The deep crimson gemstone nestled there, the Heartstone, remained stubbornly cool against her skin. It was a small mercy; if the stone were burning, she’d know a rift to Hel was opening up. Right now, she only needed to worry about the Fae. Beside her, the air
seemed to
darken and condense. Nyx materialized from the shadow of a gnarled elm, their form a towering, shifting silhouette of midnight. Their faintly glowing violet eyes regarded the boundary with a skepticism that radiated even without a face. "The Veil is thin here," Nyx said, their voice a dry rustle, like leaves skittering over pavement. "I can taste the magic. It tastes... old. Like ozone and bruised fruit." "Isolde said she’d be waiting," Rory replied, forcing her voice to remain steady. She was used to delivering takeout through the rain-soaked streets of London, not breaching the boundaries of Otherworlds. "Let’s not keep her." Before them, standing between the massive trunks of the oaks, stood a figure of silver and pale light. Isolde Varga didn’t turn, didn’t acknowledge their approach, but her presence was a
magnetic
pull. The Half-Fae exiled from the Courts moved with an impossible grace, her silver hair
cascading
down her back like a waterfall of mercury. She stepped between two of the standing stones, and the world shifted. Rory took a breath and followed. Crossing the threshold felt like walking through a wall of warm water. The pressure popped in her ears, and the damp chill of the park vanished instantly, replaced by a stillness so
profound
it was heavy. The gray mist dissolved, blown away by a breeze that carried the scent of blooming nightshade and honey. Rory blinked, her bright blue eyes struggling to adjust to the light. It wasn’t the harsh glare of the sun or the soft glow of the moon, but a pervasive, ambient luminescence that
seemed to
emanate from the
very
air itself. The sky above was a canvas of twilight violet, unblemished by clouds or city smog. "God," Rory whispered, the word barely escaping her lips. They stood in a clearing, but 'clearing' was a woefully inadequate word for the sheer, alien geometry of the place. The ground wasn't dirt or grass, but a thick, spongy moss that ranged in color from deep indigo to vivid teal. It gave
slightly
under her boots, silent and yielding. Around them, the flora defied earthly logic. Massive ferns uncurled
slowly
, their leaves translucent and veined with gold, catching the ambient light and refracting it into rainbows. Flowers the size of dinner plates bobbed on stalks that looked too thin to support them, their petals shimmering with an iridescent oil-slick sheen. There were no insects here, no birds, only the soft, melodic sound of wind chimes that had no physical source. Nyx drifted forward, their shadow-form stretching and compressing as they
navigated
the strange vegetation. "The architecture of this space... it bends," they observed, extending a hand of darkness toward a floating blossom. The flower shied away from their touch. "It is not fixed like the mortal plane. It breathes." "It is alive, shadow-walker," Isolde’s voice drifted back to them. She stood several yards ahead, near a stream that flowed uphill, defying gravity with lazy, bubbling confidence. "And it remembers those who tread with respect." Rory hurried to catch up, her eyes darting around, taking in e
very
impossible detail. She noticed then that Isolde left no trace of her passing. The moss sprang back the instant the hem of her gown lifted, untouched, uncrushed. Rory looked down at her own footprints; the deep indentions in the teal moss seemed intrusive, clumsy in this
pristine
, ageless place. "The time," Rory said, checking her wrist reflexively, though she knew better than to trust the watch. The hands
were spinning
lazily
, the second hand ticking backward before jerking forward. "Isolde, how long have we been here?" "Time is a river that flows in circles here," Isolde replied, turning to face them. Her pale lavender eyes held a depth that made Rory
feel
as though she
were falling
. "An hour can be a heartbeat. A day, a lifetime. Do not count the moments, Aurora Carter. Simply be." Rory felt a prickle of unease. The beauty was undeniable, intoxicating even, but it was the beauty of a predator. The colors were too saturated, the scents too sweet. It was the sensory equivalent of sugar overload—gluttony of the senses. She reached into her jacket and gripped the hilt of the Fae-forged blade Isolde had gifted her. The moonsilver metal was always cold, a shock against her palm, but here it felt freezing. She drew it an inch from its sheath. The metal hummed, a low, resonant vibration that she felt in her teeth. A faint, lunar light glowed along the leaf-shaped edge, casting long, sharp shadows against the alien flora. "It’s active," Rory noted, her grip tightening. The blade reacted to magic, and this place
was soaked
in it. "A wise precaution," Isolde said, a ghost of a smile touching her lips. "Not all that blooms here is friendly. The Grove is a
sanctuary
, yes, but it is also a cage for things that wish to venture out." They walked deeper into the grove. The path wound between towering
crystalline
formations that jutted from the ground like jagged teeth, humming with a low frequency that vibrated in Rory’s chest. The air grew warmer, thick with the scent of spices that Rory couldn't name—cinnamon, saffron, something metallic and sharp. Nyx stopped abruptly, their form flickering. "Do you
feel
that?" Rory stopped. "Feel what?" "A pull," Nyx murmured, their voice dropping to a whisper that
seemed to
come from e
very
where at once. "Like a hook in the shadow. There is a tear here. Small, but present." Rory looked around. The wonder of the place curdled
slightly
in her gut. A tear. A rift. If Hel
was bleeding
into the Fae realm, or vice versa, the implications were catastrophic. "The Veil is worn thin in many places," Isolde said, her tone light yet edged with steel. She turned left, leading them toward a canopy of weeping willows with leaves of spun silver. "We are not alone in noticing the fractures." As they stepped beneath the silver canopy, the light dimmed to a soft twilight blue. Here, the moss gave way to still, reflective water that served as a floor. Rory hesitated, but her reflection didn't; it looked back at her with eyes that were entirely black. She flinched, looking up to find the water was
perfectly
clear, only inches deep, yet it reflected a different sky than the one above them—a sky choked with storm clouds. "Don't look down too long, child," Isolde warned
softly
. "The water shows what is, what was, and what may come to pass. It is easy to drown in a possibility that is not your own." Rory ripped her gaze away from the water, her heart hammering against her ribs. She focused on the back of Isolde’s head, the silver swaying with e
very
step. The Half-Fae moved through the water without creating a single ripple. "I thought this was a
sanctuary
," Rory said, her voice sharp with the tension she had been holding back. "It is," Isolde answered. "Sanctuary is not safety. Sanctuary is merely a place where the rules are clear, if you know how to listen." They emerged from the willow tunnel into a vast, circular amphitheater of stone. In the center grew a single tree, colossal and ancient, its bark black as obsidian and its leaves glowing with a soft, pulsing white light. This was the heart of the Grove. Rory felt the breath leave her lungs. It was majestic, terrifying in its scale. The sheer age of the thing pressed down on her, a physical
weight
of centuries. The Fae-forged blade in her jacket was practically vibrating now, singing a high-pitched note of warning or greeting—she couldn't tell which. Nyx drifted closer to the tree, their incorporeal form seeming to solidify, the violet glow of their eyes intensifying. "There is power here," they whispered. "Older than the Courts. Older than the Prince of Gluttony." Isolde turned to them, spreading her arms as if to embrace the alien landscape. The wind picked up, carrying the silver leaves in a
dancing
swirl around them. For a moment, Rory felt a
profound
sense of isolation, separated from the mundane world of Cardiff and London, standing on the precipice of something infinite. "You have stepped through the door, Aurora," Isolde said, her voice
echoing
in the stillness. "Do not expect to leave unchanged." Rory looked at the impossible tree, the water that reflected other worlds, and the shadow-walker standing bathed in alien light. She thought of her flat above the bar, her deli
very
scooter, the scar on her wrist. They felt like memories from a different life. She took a deep breath of the honey-sweet, ozone-tinted air and let her hand fall away from the knife, standing her ground. "I'm getting used to that," Rory said, her voice steady, cutting through the ancient silence.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
22.2222%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
18
adverbTagCount
6
adverbTags
0
"Nyx said, their voice a dry rustle, like leaves skittering over pavement [like]"
1
"Rory whispered, the word barely escaping her lips [barely]"
2
"Isolde’s voice drifted back to them [back]"
3
"Rory said, checking her wrist reflexively, though she knew better than to trust the watch [reflexively]"
4
"Nyx murmured, their voice dropping to a whisper that seemed to come from everywhere at once [everywhere once]"
5
"Isolde warned softly [softly]"
51.3973%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1646
totalAiIsmAdverbs
8
found
0
adverb
"lazily"
count
1
1
adverb
"perfectly"
count
1
2
adverb
"slightly"
count
2
3
adverb
"slowly"
count
1
4
adverb
"softly"
count
2
5
adverb
"very"
count
1
highlights
0
"lazily"
1
"perfectly"
2
"slightly"
3
"slowly"
4
"softly"
5
"very"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
8.8700%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1646
totalAiIsms
15
found
0
word
"crystalline"
count
1
1
word
"sanctuary"
count
4
2
word
"shimmered"
count
1
3
word
"cascading"
count
1
4
word
"pristine"
count
1
5
word
"profound"
count
2
6
word
"magnetic"
count
1
7
word
"weight"
count
1
8
word
"dancing"
count
1
9
word
"echoing"
count
1
10
word
"navigated"
count
1
highlights
0
"crystalline"
1
"sanctuary"
2
"shimmered"
3
"cascading"
4
"pristine"
5
"profound"
6
"magnetic"
7
"weight"
8
"dancing"
9
"echoing"
10
"navigated"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
100
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
3
narrationSentences
100
filterMatches
0
"feel"
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
115
matches
(empty)
86.3158%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
40
mean
40.67
std
18.39
cv
0.452
sampleLengths
0
55
1
46
2
55
3
43
4
30
5
35
6
68
7
6
8
54
9
56
10
9
11
50
12
71
13
49
14
35
15
61
16
37
17
50
18
40
19
71
20
19
21
39
22
50
23
10
24
4
25
32
26
32
27
41
28
76
29
35
30
39
31
19
32
24
33
45
34
50
35
35
36
54
37
21
38
66
39
15
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
100
matches
0
"was soaked"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
5
totalVerbs
230
matches
0
"were burning, was opening"
1
"were spinning"
2
"were falling"
3
"was bleeding"
94.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1387
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"honey-sweet, ozone-tinted air"
adverbCount
48
adverbRatio
0.03460706560922855
lyAdverbCount
21
lyAdverbRatio
0.01514059120403749
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
115
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
115
mean
14.15
std
6.29
cv
0.445
sampleLengths
0
23
1
19
2
13
3
21
4
25
5
12
6
14
7
19
8
10
9
9
10
17
11
17
12
17
13
13
14
13
15
18
16
4
17
18
18
15
19
23
20
12
21
6
22
12
23
24
24
18
25
12
26
29
27
15
28
9
29
20
30
21
31
9
32
7
33
20
34
24
35
20
36
14
37
18
38
7
39
10
40
10
41
17
42
8
43
14
44
11
45
14
46
22
47
17
48
13
49
7
51.5942%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
9
diversityRatio
0.3565217391304348
totalSentences
115
uniqueOpeners
41
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
18
fancyCount
16
fancyTags
0
"she muttered, touching the silver chain at her throat (mutter, touch)"
1
"Nyx said, their voice a dry rustle, like leaves skittering over pavement (say, skitter)"
2
"Rory replied, forcing her voice to remain steady (reply, force remain)"
3
"Rory whispered, the word barely escaping her lips (whisper, barely escape)"
4
"they observed, extending a hand of darkness toward a floating blossom (observe, extend)"
5
"Isolde’s voice drifted back to them (drift)"
6
"Rory said, checking her wrist reflexively, though she knew better than to trust the watch (say, check know trust)"
7
"Isolde replied, turning to face them (reply, turn face)"
8
"Rory noted, her grip tightening (note, tighten)"
9
"Isolde said, a ghost of a smile touching her lips (say, touch)"
10
"Nyx murmured, their voice dropping to a whisper that seemed to come from everywhere at once (murmur, drop seem come)"
11
"Isolde said, her tone light yet edged with steel (say, edge)"
12
"Isolde warned softly (warn softly)"
13
"Rory said, her voice sharp with the tension she had been holding back (say, hold back)"
14
"they whispered (whisper)"
15
"Isolde said, her voice echoing in the stillness (say, echo)"
77.3176%