"he said softly, a prick of that French accent slipping into her name in a way that made her insides flutter like thrown pebbles in a still pond [softly]"
1
"he said lightly, but there was an undertone of vulnerability she caught—an apology, maybe, or a regret he was struggling to hide [lightly, maybe]"
2
"she finally said, voice low and deliberate [finally]"
3
"He interrupted softly, a flicker of a smile returning, [softly]"
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
867
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
41
adverbRatio
0.04728950403690888
lyAdverbCount
22
lyAdverbRatio
0.025374855824682813
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
65
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
65
mean
15.89
std
8.84
cv
0.556
sampleLengths
0
22
1
14
2
7
3
22
4
12
5
9
6
14
7
19
8
22
9
20
10
42
11
29
12
13
13
29
14
5
15
7
16
26
17
17
18
5
19
12
20
21
21
6
22
9
23
5
24
25
25
13
26
30
27
3
28
15
29
17
30
7
31
5
32
15
33
13
34
17
35
27
36
17
37
14
38
25
39
10
40
5
41
7
42
15
43
4
44
10
45
20
46
24
47
6
48
17
49
9
70.7692%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
4
diversityRatio
0.46153846153846156
totalSentences
65
uniqueOpeners
30
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
8
fancyCount
6
fancyTags
0
"he said softly, a prick of that French accent slipping into her name in a way that made her insides flutter like thrown pebbles in a still pond (say softly, slip make like thrown)"
1
"she managed, voice steady but cool, as if she could freeze the warmth threatening to rise (manage, freeze threaten rise)"
2
"he said, voice smooth as silk but edged with an undercurrent of something darker (say, voice edge)"
3
"he said lightly, but there was an undertone of vulnerability she caught—an apology, maybe, or a regret he was struggling to hide (say lightly, be catch—struggle hide)"
4
"she finally said, voice low and deliberate (finally say, voice)"
5
"He interrupted softly, a flicker of a smile returning, (interrupt softly, return)"