Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQPGSP6SMQFV41MM9E5453

Run Details

Duration:
10.3s
Cost:
$0.000627
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter was halfway through stacking a pile of research papers when a faint rapping at the front door disrupted her concentration. She hesitated, brow tightening, her fingers lingering on a crumpled page of handwritten notes. The knocking came again—firm, insistent, almost impatient. She set down the papers slowly, listening to the resounding echo of the knocks as if they echoed her own mixed feelings. She knew who it could be—an unwelcome surprise after weeks of quiet. Her stomach tightened with a familiar thread of tension. Slowly, she moved towards the door, her boots muffled against the uneven wooden floor. The lock turned with deliberate slowness, each click echoing louder than usual in the cramped flat above Silas’s bar. When she finally pulled the door open, her bright blue eyes widened just a fraction, and her breath caught in her throat. There he was—Lucien Moreau, the Frenchman, standing on her threshold like a ghost from a past she’d tried to forget. Clad in his signature tailored charcoal suit, that impeccable air of calm, like he belonged in some noir film, he leaned on his ivory-handled cane, one brow arched slightly under slicked-back platinum blond hair that gleamed even in the dull London daylight. He had that effortless yet calculated gaze, one eye dark as ink, the other a steady amber—an unsettling, mesmerizing contrast that seemed to flicker with unspoken worlds behind it. His presence, familiar yet distant, made her pulse kick hard against her ribs. “Aurora,” he said softly, a prick of that French accent slipping into her name in a way that made her insides flutter like thrown pebbles in a still pond. “It’s been a long time.” The words hung there, heavy with meaning. Her jaw tightened, and she blinked, fighting the sudden rush of memories—good, bad, and blurred into a confusing mess—each one fighting for space in her mind. “Lucien,” she managed, voice steady but cool, as if she could freeze the warmth threatening to rise. “What are you doing here?” He took a slow step forward, cane clicking softly against the threshold. “I could ask the same of you,” he said, voice smooth as silk but edged with an undercurrent of something darker. “I’m told you’ve been avoiding me.” She crossed her arms, feeling a flicker of defensiveness. “Avoiding? Hardly. I’ve been busy.” He gave her a slight, knowing smile, one that tugged at a corner of his mouth as if he knew a secret she was missing. “Busy is a good excuse. I imagined you’d be angry still. Perhaps hurt?” Her eyes flickered to the scar on her left wrist—the remnant of a childhood accident, or a symbol of all the fights she’d survived—though she kept her expression carefully neutral. “You imagined wrong.” Lucien’s gaze lingered on her face, then flicked past her into the flat behind her. As if reading her hesitation, he nodded slightly and shifted, one hand resting lightly on his cane. “May I come in?” he asked quietly. She hesitated, weighing her options. Every instinct told her to shut the door, to slam it shut on the past. But instead, she stepped back, gesture precise but distant, and let him inside. The air inside was warm, tinged with the scents of curry, old paper, and something faintly metallic—dangerous. The flat was cluttered—rows of books, scattered notes, a few magical trinkets she’d kept from her own learning, all forming a chaotic cocoon of chaos and comfort. Ptolemy the tabby cat, unbothered by the sudden guest, lounged atop a pile of scrolls, eyes half-lidded. Lucien moved further inside, eyes tracing the mess with something akin to a smile. “This is… charming,” he said lightly, but there was an undertone of vulnerability she caught—an apology, maybe, or a regret he was struggling to hide. She shut the door carefully behind him, her stomach twisting. “What do you want, Lucien?” He paused, fingertips brushing his cane thoughtfully. “I need your help. Or—” The words faltered just a second before he pressed on. “I need your understanding.” And suddenly, the weight of it settled heavy between them. The words she'd never heard from him—not like this, not with that raw honesty—made her stomach tighten with something dangerous. That part of her that remembered the nights of dangerous conversations, shared secrets, and promises she’d never meant to forget prickled beneath her skin. “Understanding?” she echoed, voice cautiously measured. “That’s a tall order from someone who just… shows up unannounced and expects everything to be forgiven.” Lucien’s gaze softened, and he took a step closer. “I didn’t come here to rehash old arguments, Rory. I come because I’m in trouble. And I remembered you—how clever you are, how you always see through the chaos. I need that now.” She looked away briefly, eyes darting to the cluttered space, trying to hold onto her guarded distance, but her mind spun with the possibilities—what kind of trouble could drag him back to her? And why now, after all this time? “Trouble with what?” she asked quietly. Her voice was a whisper beneath the hum of the city beyond the thin walls. Lucien’s face was uncharacteristically serious. “Supernatural trouble. The kind that doesn’t stay contained. I can’t handle it alone—nor do I want to.” His gaze held hers—a long, searching look that seemed to pierce through the layers of her defenses. “You’ve always had a way of finding the right solution, Aurora. I remembered that about you. I need your help.” The words tumbled out softly but carried a weight she couldn’t ignore. For a moment, she hesitated, caught between the instinct to shut him out and the unspoken pull they shared—something complicated, fragile, dangerous. Her lips pressed together, the scar on her wrist prickling as if responding to the tension. She looked back at him, eyes bright blue and cautious, knowing that whatever this was—whatever this could become—it was already too late to walk away without risking everything. “Fine,” she finally said, voice low and deliberate. “But don’t think for a second I’m doing this for you. I’ve got my own reasons. And if this gets messy—” He interrupted softly, a flicker of a smile returning, “I wouldn’t have it any other way.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"he said softly, a prick of that French accent slipping into her name in a way that made her insides flutter like thrown pebbles in a still pond [softly]"
1"he said lightly, but there was an undertone of vulnerability she caught—an apology, maybe, or a regret he was struggling to hide [lightly, maybe]"
2"she finally said, voice low and deliberate [finally]"
3"He interrupted softly, a flicker of a smile returning, [softly]"
0.0000% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1056
totalAiIsmAdverbs14
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count2
1
adverb"cautiously"
count1
2
adverb"lightly"
count2
3
adverb"slightly"
count2
4
adverb"slowly"
count2
5
adverb"softly"
count4
6
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"cautiously"
2"lightly"
3"slightly"
4"slowly"
5"softly"
6"suddenly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1056
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"tinged"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"flicker"
count3
3
word"flicked"
count1
4
word"silk"
count1
5
word"calculated"
count1
6
word"unspoken"
count2
7
word"weight"
count2
8
word"echo"
count1
9
word"echoed"
count2
10
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"tinged"
1"flickered"
2"flicker"
3"flicked"
4"silk"
5"calculated"
6"unspoken"
7"weight"
8"echo"
9"echoed"
10"echoing"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences53
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences53
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
74.9325% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean38.26
std15.77
cv0.412
sampleLengths
065
154
284
342
434
533
622
739
814
938
1033
1139
1250
1344
1439
1515
1626
1754
1823
1942
2040
2121
2259
2334
2444
2529
2616
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs145
matches
0"was struggling"
89.1426% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount867
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.04728950403690888
lyAdverbCount22
lyAdverbRatio0.025374855824682813
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences65
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences65
mean15.89
std8.84
cv0.556
sampleLengths
022
114
27
322
412
59
614
719
822
920
1042
1129
1213
1329
145
157
1626
1717
185
1912
2021
216
229
235
2425
2513
2630
273
2815
2917
307
315
3215
3313
3417
3527
3617
3714
3825
3910
405
417
4215
434
4410
4520
4624
476
4817
499
70.7692% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.46153846153846156
totalSentences65
uniqueOpeners30
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"he said softly, a prick of that French accent slipping into her name in a way that made her insides flutter like thrown pebbles in a still pond (say softly, slip make like thrown)"
1"she managed, voice steady but cool, as if she could freeze the warmth threatening to rise (manage, freeze threaten rise)"
2"he said, voice smooth as silk but edged with an undercurrent of something darker (say, voice edge)"
3"he said lightly, but there was an undertone of vulnerability she caught—an apology, maybe, or a regret he was struggling to hide (say lightly, be catch—struggle hide)"
4"she finally said, voice low and deliberate (finally say, voice)"
5"He interrupted softly, a flicker of a smile returning, (interrupt softly, return)"
72.6379%