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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQPNJ1KM1TAM435CHYNZWT
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Model:
Z.AI GLM 4.5
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Thriller: chase through city streets
Duration:
47.7s
Cost:
$0.005763
Provider:
Nebius
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
Rain slicked the London streets, turning pavement into a
fractured
mirror of neon signs and headlights. Detective Harlow Quinn pressed her back against the damp brick wall, water seeping into the collar of her coat. Thirty feet ahead, her suspect paused at a crosswalk, glancing over his shoulder. Tomás Herrera. The paramedic-turned-unlicensed-practitioner who'd been patching up members of that clique she'd been tracking for months. Quinn's fingers flexed around the grip of her holstered weapon. Not yet. Not unless absolutely necessary. She had 18 years of decorated service that taught her restraint, even when every instinct screamed to close the distance between them. Her worn leather
watch
on her left wrist read 11:47 p.m. The streets were nearly deserted. Herrera took off again, turning down a narrow alley. Quinn pushed off the wall, her movements efficient, precise. Military precision, her former instructor had called it. At 41, she could still outperform recruits half her age. Rain plastered her salt-and-pepper hair to her forehead, droplets catching in her sharp jawline as she
navigated
the puddles. The alley opened onto another street, this one lined with establishments just beginning to empty. Herrera had a good lead, but Quinn was
methodical
, her brown eyes tracking his movements,
calculating
his path. He
was heading
toward Soho. Soho. Of course. That's where their paths had first intersected in her investigation, outside that bar with the distinctive green neon sign—The Raven's Nest. A place she'd noted as a regular meeting spot for the clique members. Quinn's boots splashed through growing puddles as she maintained her pursuit. Her breathing remained steady despite the run, her focus absolute. She'd lost DS Morris three years ago during a case that still made no sense, still haunted her sleep. She wouldn't lose another suspect, not when she was this close to understanding what this group was
really
doing. Herrera ducked through a doorway, the green glow of the Raven's Nest sign reflecting in the rain-slicked street. Quinn slowed, approaching with caution. Through the window, she could see the dimly lit interior, walls covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs. Herrera
was talking
to the bartender urgently, gesturing toward the back. Quinn pushed through the door, the bell above jingling
softly
. The few patrons barely glanced up. Herrera's head snapped in her direction, his warm brown eyes widening. The scar along his left forearm was visible as he reached into his jacket, pulling out something small and metallic. A Saint Christopher medallion swung against his olive skin as he moved. "Police!" Quinn called out, her voice cutting through the low murmur of conversation. "Tomás Herrera, stop right there." Herrera didn't hesitate. He bolted past the bartender and toward a bookshelf at the back of the bar. Quinn cursed under her breath, weaving through tables. By the time she reached the bookshelf, it
was swinging
shut, revealing nothing but leather-bound volumes. "Damn it." Quinn ran her fingers along the edges, finding the catch. A hidden door. Of course. She pressed, and the bookshelf swung open again, revealing a dark hallway. She drew her weapon now, holding it steady as she moved down the corridor. The air grew cooler, damper. This wasn't just a back room—it was a passage to somewhere else. Somewhere underground. At the end of the hallway, a metal door stood ajar. Quinn could hear Herrera's
footsteps
echoing
down what sounded like stairs. She took a deep breath, steadying herself. This was where she'd lost Morris—chasing a suspect into unknown territory, never to return properly. But she was better prepared. Smarter. More cautious. Quinn descended the stairs, weapon first. The air grew colder with each step, smelling of damp earth and something else—something metallic and ancient. The stairs ended at a tunnel, clearly part of the old Tube system. Herrera was a shadow ahead, moving
quickly
. "Stop! Metropolitan Police!" Quinn shouted, her voice
echoing
in the confined space. Herrera glanced back but didn't slow. He reached into his pocket and pulled out what looked like a small, carved bone. He pressed it against a section of the wall that seemed no different from the rest. The bricks
shimmered
, then dissolved into an archway revealing a hidden space beyond. The Veil Market. Quinn had heard whispers of it in her investigation—a supernatural black market that moved locations every full moon. But she'd never believed it was real, not until this moment. Light and sound spilled through the archway—
otherworldly
music, the murmur of hundreds of voices, the glow of enchanted goods. Through the opening, Quinn caught glimpses of impossible things: floating lanterns, creatures that couldn't exist in nature, items that defied explanation. Herrera disappeared through the archway, and the entrance
began to
solidify behind him. Quinn stopped at the threshold, her heart pounding. This was it—the moment of decision. She could radio for backup, but by the time they arrived, Herrera would be gone, the market possibly moved again. Or she could follow him into this unknown world, a place that operated by rules she didn't understand, a place that might explain what had
happened to
Morris. The entrance continued to solidify, the bricks re-forming. In seconds, it would be gone entirely. "Morris," she whispered, thinking of her partner. "What would you do?" The answer came immediately. He would have followed. recklessly, without hesitation. It's what had gotten him killed. Quinn wasn't Morris. She was better. Smarter. But she was just as determined. With a decisive breath, she holstered her weapon and stepped through the archway just before it sealed
completely
. The Veil Market was more overwhelming than she'd imagined. It sprawled through the abandoned Tube station, stalls and alcoves carved into the curved walls. Beings of various shapes and sizes bartered for goods that made her head spin—potions that glowed with inner light, crystals that hummed with energy, books bound in what looked disturbingly like human skin. Herrera was already disappearing into the crowd. Quinn moved to follow, but a hand clamped down on her arm. "You don't belong here, detective," a voice hissed. Quinn turned to find a creature with too many eyes and skin like cracked
porcelain
. "The Market doesn't take kindly to your kind." Quinn pulled her arm free, her military training keeping her calm despite the adrenaline surging through her veins. "I'm here on official police business. That man is a suspect in an ongoing investigation." The creature made a sound that might have been laughter. "Your laws mean nothing here. But the Market has its own rules." It gestured to a small booth where a hooded figure sat. "See the Gatekeeper. Pay the toll. Or leave. Now." Quinn hesitated, scanning the crowd for any sign of Herrera. She saw his dark curly hair disappearing around a corner. If she stopped to pay some toll, she'd lose him. But if she didn't, these people—or whatever they were—might stop her themselves. "Fine," she said, moving toward the Gatekeeper. "What's the toll?" The hooded figure raised its head, revealing a face that shifted and changed like smoke. "A secret," it said, its voice like rustling leaves. "Give me a secret that no one else knows, and you may pass." Quinn's jaw tightened. She had secrets, plenty of them. But none she
was willing
to share with this entity. Especially not the ones related to Morris's death—the things she'd
seen that night
that still defied explanation, the evidence that had disappeared, the nightmares that plagued her. "I don't have time for this," she said, reaching for her badge again. "I'm a police officer. That man is wanted for questioning in connection with multiple deaths." The Gatekeeper's shifting face
seemed to
coalesce into something resembling pity. "You still don't understand, do you? This place exists outside your jurisdiction. Your badge means nothing here. Only secrets have value in the Veil Market." Ahead, Quinn saw Herrera again. He
was purchasing
something from a stall—small vials filled with a glowing blue liquid. Medical supplies, she realized. For his off-the-books practice. But what kind of patients needed medicine that glowed? "You're running out of time, detective," the Gatekeeper said. "Share a secret, or leave. Those are your only options." Quinn looked from the Gatekeeper to Herrera, who was now moving toward what
appeared to
be another exit. This was her chance to finally understand what this clique
was doing
, to find answers about Morris—answers she'd been seeking for three years. But the cost was too high. Her secrets were all she had left. With a frustrated sigh, Quinn turned away from the Gatekeeper and headed back toward the sealed entrance. She'd find another way to get Herrera. Another way to understand what
was happening
in this hidden world beneath London. But as she approached the wall where she'd entered, she found only solid brick. No archway. No shimmering air. Just a dead end. Panic
began to
set in as Quinn realized the terrible truth: she
was trapped
in the Veil Market, with no way out until she paid the toll—a secret she
wasn't willing
to share.
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native_tokens_completion
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
91.6667%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
8
adverbTagCount
1
adverbTags
0
"she said, reaching for her badge again [again]"
73.8048%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1527
totalAiIsmAdverbs
4
found
0
adverb
"completely"
count
1
1
adverb
"quickly"
count
1
2
adverb
"softly"
count
1
3
adverb
"really"
count
1
highlights
0
"completely"
1
"quickly"
2
"softly"
3
"really"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
34.5121%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1527
totalAiIsms
10
found
0
word
"shimmered"
count
1
1
word
"otherworldly"
count
1
2
word
"porcelain"
count
1
3
word
"calculating"
count
1
4
word
"methodical"
count
1
5
word
"fractured"
count
1
6
word
"footsteps"
count
1
7
word
"echoing"
count
2
8
word
"navigated"
count
1
highlights
0
"shimmered"
1
"otherworldly"
2
"porcelain"
3
"calculating"
4
"methodical"
5
"fractured"
6
"footsteps"
7
"echoing"
8
"navigated"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
128
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
5
narrationSentences
128
filterMatches
0
"watch"
hedgeMatches
0
"began to"
1
"happened to"
2
"seemed to"
3
"appeared to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
138
matches
0
"seen that night"
89.4519%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
44
mean
34.14
std
15.81
cv
0.463
sampleLengths
0
65
1
54
2
55
3
38
4
37
5
59
6
52
7
59
8
18
9
42
10
29
11
33
12
44
13
8
14
43
15
12
16
50
17
32
18
40
19
13
20
62
21
15
22
11
23
17
24
13
25
18
26
57
27
19
28
31
29
33
30
42
31
42
32
10
33
37
34
46
35
28
36
36
37
36
38
19
39
41
40
13
41
37
42
23
43
33
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
128
matches
0
"was trapped"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
8
totalVerbs
257
matches
0
"was heading"
1
"was talking"
2
"was swinging"
3
"was willing"
4
"was purchasing"
5
"was doing"
6
"was happening"
7
"wasn't willing"
94.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1381
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"paramedic-turned-unlicensed-practitioner"
adverbCount
51
adverbRatio
0.036929761042722664
lyAdverbCount
21
lyAdverbRatio
0.015206372194062274
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
138
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
138
mean
10.88
std
6.58
cv
0.605
sampleLengths
0
16
1
19
2
13
3
2
4
15
5
10
6
2
7
4
8
22
9
11
10
5
11
9
12
9
13
8
14
10
15
19
16
15
17
18
18
5
19
1
20
2
21
21
22
13
23
11
24
10
25
19
26
19
27
18
28
5
29
18
30
11
31
10
32
6
33
11
34
20
35
12
36
13
37
5
38
3
39
15
40
8
41
16
42
12
43
3
44
2
45
12
46
14
47
5
48
12
49
2
57.0048%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
8
diversityRatio
0.37681159420289856
totalSentences
138
uniqueOpeners
52
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
8
fancyCount
6
fancyTags
0
"shouted (shout)"
1
"she whispered, thinking of her partner (whisper)"
2
"a voice hissed (hiss)"
3
"she said, moving toward the Gatekeeper (say, move)"
4
"it said, its voice like rustling leaves (say, like rustling)"
5
"she said, reaching for her badge again (say, reach)"
84.7318%