NC Bench
Overview
About
Tests
Models
Vendors
Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQPXZVBDBNDA7R0V6X4C8W
Run Details
Model:
Z.AI GLM 5
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Thriller: chase through city streets
Duration:
1m 25s
Cost:
$0.007532
Provider:
Together
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The rain came down in sheets, turning the London streets into rivers of reflected neon and
fractured
light. Detective Harlow Quinn pressed her shoulder against the brick corner of a shuttered newsagent's, her breath coming in controlled pulls that misted in the cold air. Three years of chasing shadows through this city, and she'd learned to read the rhythm of pursuit—the way
footsteps
echoed
differently on wet cobblestones, the particular quality of silence that meant someone
was holding
their breath around the next corner. She checked her
watch
. The worn leather band was dark with rain, the face fogged at the edges. 11:47 PM. The suspect had a two-minute head start, which meant he could be anywhere in the maze of Soho's back alleys by now. But Quinn had been tracking Tomás Herrera for three weeks, and she knew his patterns. Knew he favored the routes with multiple exits, the paths that skirted the main roads but never quite crossed into open territory. She'd first spotted him outside The Raven's Nest, that dim little bar with the distinctive green neon sign that had popped up on her radar half a dozen times in the past month. Herrera had emerged from a side door, his olive skin pale under the streetlights, his hand moving to the Saint Christopher medallion at his throat. A nervous gesture. The kind of thing a man did when he
was carrying
something he shouldn't be. Quinn rounded the corner, her shoes splashing through a puddle that soaked through to her socks. The cold was a distant thing, something she could file away for later. Right now, there was only the hunt. She caught sight of him fifty meters ahead—a darker shadow against the dark, moving with purpose but not panic. He
wasn't running
. That was interesting. A man with something to hide usually ran. But Herrera
was walking
quickly
, with intention, his head turning every few seconds to check the angles behind him. She let him get a little ahead. Let him
think
he'd lost her. The mistake most people made was closing too fast, spooking the quarry into unpredictable movement. Quinn had learned patience from Morris, back when they'd worked cases together. Back when she'd had a partner who
watch
ed her six and laughed at her coffee addiction and— She shut
down that line
of thought with military precision, the same way she'd done a thousand times before. Herrera turned left onto Frith Street, then cut right down a narrow passage between two restaurants. Quinn followed, keeping her
footsteps
light, timing her movements to his. The rain
was working
in her favor now, the constant drumming masking any sound she might have made. She could see the scar on his left forearm as his jacket sleeve rode up—thin and pale, the kind of mark a knife left when someone
was trying
not to cut deep. The passage opened onto a wider street, and for a moment she thought she'd lost him. But then she caught the movement—a
flicker
of motion near the mouth of an old Underground entrance, one of those abandoned stations that had
been closed
since before she was born. The chain-link fence had been cut away at some point, the edges of the gap rusted and dark. She
watch
ed Herrera approach the entrance, and that's when she saw it. He pulled something from his pocket—a pale disc that caught the streetlight for just an instant before he pressed it against something at the base of the stairs. Bone. It looked like carved bone, a token of some kind. The door that she'd taken for solid metal swung inward on silent hinges, and Herrera slipped through into the darkness beyond. Quinn counted to thirty, then moved. The entrance gaped like a mouth, the stairs descending into absolute blackness. She pulled out her phone, thumbed on the flashlight, and started down. The air changed as she went—warmer, thick with scents she couldn't quite place. Charcoal. Copper. Something floral and cloying that made her
think
of funerals. The beam of her light caught the edge of a platform, and she realized she
was standing
in what had once been a Tube station. The old tilework was still visible in places, cream and navy blue, though most of it had
been covered
over with tapestries and cloths that moved
slightly
in an unfelt breeze. Candles burned in alcoves cut into the walls, their flames
perfectly
still despite the open tunnel behind her. She could hear voices now, distant and layered, the particular quality of sound that meant a large enclosed space. A market. Some kind of underground market operating out of an abandoned station beneath Camden, invisible to the rest of the city. Quinn moved forward, her hand resting on the Glock at her hip. She'd checked the weapon twice before starting the pursuit, the same way she always did—magazine, safety, round in the chamber. Eighteen years on the force had taught her that preparation was the difference between going home at the end of a shift and becoming a statistic. The passage opened
suddenly
into a vast space, and she had to clamp down on her reaction. The station platform had
been transformed
into rows of stalls and tables, awnings strung between columns, vendors hawking goods that made her eyes refuse to focus. She caught fragments as she moved deeper into the crowd—vials of liquid that glowed faintly in the darkness, bundles of dried plants she didn't recognize, books with titles in languages that looked like they
were crawling
across the leather covers. The people here were wrong too. Not all of them—some looked like regular denizens of London's underground economy, the kind of faces she'd seen in a hundred raids and busts. But others moved strangely, their limbs too long, their shadows falling in directions that didn't match the light sources. A woman at a stall selling jewelry had eyes that reflected the candlelight like a cat's. A man pushing past her had a tattoo that moved, a snake coiling and uncoiling across his neck. Quinn kept her expression neutral through sheer force of will. Three years ago, she would have questioned her eyes, would have assumed she
was seeing
things. But that was before Morris. Before the case that had taken him, the one that had ended with her partner vanished and every official explanation ringing hollow. She'd
learned that the
world was stranger than the Metropolitan Police training manual had prepared her for. She spotted Herrera through a gap in the crowd, his curly dark hair unmistakable even in the dim light. He was moving toward the far end of the platform, where a series of doors led into what had once been staff areas and storage rooms. She tracked him with her eyes, not wanting to close the distance too
quickly
. This market was a puzzle she didn't understand yet, and walking in blind was a good way to end up like Morris. She thought again of her partner. Three years trying to find out what had
happened to
him, three years hitting walls and dead ends and cryptic warnings from people who knew better than to talk. The case that had killed him—or taken him, or done whatever it had done—had involved something like this. Something hidden. Something that operated in the spaces between the world she knew and something else entirely. A vendor stepped into her path, a young man with too-wide eyes and a smile that showed teeth that had
been filed
to points. "Looking for something specific, love? Got a lovely selection of memories tonight, if you've got the coin. Someone else's, of course, but they feel real enough when you use them." Quinn stared at him until he stepped back, his smile faltering. She didn't have time for whatever that was. She didn't have time to process any of this. Herrera
was reaching
a door at the far end, glancing behind him one more time, and she had to decide. Follow him deeper, into a space she didn't know and couldn't predict, in a market that operated by rules she didn't understand. Or pull back,
try to
gather backup,
try to
explain to her superiors that she'd tracked an unlicensed medic into a supernatural black market beneath Camden and needed a tactical team. But she knew what would happen if she reported this. The same thing that had happened with Morris's case—files sealed, questions deflected, career trajectory subtly altered until she found herself moved sideways into positions where she couldn't cause trouble. The force didn't want to see this. The force wanted to pretend it didn't exist. Herrera opened the door and slipped through. Quinn thought of Morris's laugh, the way he'd always said she was too stubborn for her own good. She thought of his wife at the funeral, hollow-eyed and gripping her husband's empty medal box like a lifeline. She thought of eighteen years of service and the way her sharp jaw
was starting
to show lines that hadn't been there a decade ago. Then she started moving toward the door, her hand still on her weapon, her senses straining against the unfamiliar darkness.
created_at
"2026-02-17T02:45:10.655817+00:00"
2/17/2026, 2:45:10 AM
model
"z-ai/glm-5-20260211"
app_id
182717
external_user
(null)
streamed
true
cancelled
false
latency
689
moderation_latency
(null)
generation_time
84463
tokens_prompt
914
tokens_completion
2577
native_tokens_prompt
812
native_tokens_completion
2100
native_tokens_completion_images
(null)
native_tokens_reasoning
305
native_tokens_cached
0
num_media_prompt
(null)
num_input_audio_prompt
(null)
num_media_completion
0
num_search_results
(null)
origin
"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byok
false
finish_reason
"stop"
native_finish_reason
"stop"
usage
0.007532
router
(null)
provider_responses
0
id
"oXgP9q7-2dTqGa-9cf1f060274f67ca"
status
200
is_byok
false
latency
689
endpoint_id
"4d258291-b320-4785-a67d-74b27fa7a569"
provider_name
"Together"
model_permaslug
"z-ai/glm-5-20260211"
api_type
"completions"
id
"gen-1771296225-BF7yJvD7OB52ND17BUH6"
upstream_id
"oXgP9q7-2dTqGa-9cf1f060274f67ca"
total_cost
0.007532
cache_discount
(null)
upstream_inference_cost
0
provider_name
"Together"
Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
0
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
67.6585%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1546
totalAiIsmAdverbs
5
found
0
adverb
"perfectly"
count
1
1
adverb
"quickly"
count
2
2
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
3
adverb
"suddenly"
count
1
highlights
0
"perfectly"
1
"quickly"
2
"slightly"
3
"suddenly"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
67.6585%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1546
totalAiIsms
5
found
0
word
"flicker"
count
1
1
word
"fractured"
count
1
2
word
"footsteps"
count
2
3
word
"echoed"
count
1
highlights
0
"flicker"
1
"fractured"
2
"footsteps"
3
"echoed"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
93
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
3
hedgeCount
2
narrationSentences
93
filterMatches
0
"watch"
1
"think"
hedgeMatches
0
"happened to"
1
"try to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
2
totalSentences
94
matches
0
"down that line"
1
"learned that the"
70.5353%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
27
mean
56.67
std
22.49
cv
0.397
sampleLengths
0
84
1
79
2
76
3
36
4
52
5
57
6
19
7
77
8
65
9
72
10
6
11
49
12
74
13
41
14
58
15
83
16
83
17
70
18
81
19
70
20
54
21
48
22
53
23
54
24
7
25
62
26
20
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
4
totalSentences
93
matches
0
"been closed"
1
"been covered"
2
"been transformed"
3
"been filed"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
11
totalVerbs
260
matches
0
"was holding"
1
"was carrying"
2
"wasn't running"
3
"was walking"
4
"was working"
5
"was trying"
6
"was standing"
7
"were crawling"
8
"was seeing"
9
"was reaching"
10
"was starting"
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1516
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
45
adverbRatio
0.029683377308707123
lyAdverbCount
13
lyAdverbRatio
0.008575197889182058
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
94
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
94
mean
16.28
std
8.92
cv
0.548
sampleLengths
0
18
1
26
2
40
3
4
4
14
5
2
6
22
7
15
8
22
9
33
10
25
11
3
12
15
13
16
14
13
15
7
16
19
17
3
18
3
19
8
20
19
21
7
22
6
23
15
24
12
25
17
26
19
27
16
28
11
29
18
30
32
31
16
32
31
33
18
34
12
35
28
36
1
37
10
38
21
39
6
40
12
41
12
42
13
43
1
44
1
45
10
46
25
47
31
48
18
49
19
43.6170%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
9
diversityRatio
0.3191489361702128
totalSentences
94
uniqueOpeners
30
100.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
0
fancyCount
0
fancyTags
(empty)
91.1453%