Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQQ68H3ZMR7J53RQX8ZNTW

Run Details

Duration:
41.2s
Cost:
$0.005932
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air inside the grove did not smell like Richmond Park. Outside the ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary, the London winter bit with a damp, grey chill, carrying the scent of wet pavement and exhaust. Here, the air was thick and sweet, heavy with the perfume of blooming jasmine and something sharper, like ozone before a storm. Aurora Carter paused just past the threshold, her breath catching in her throat. She adjusted the strap of her delivery bag, though she hadn't brought any food this time, and looked down at her boots. The mud from the park path had vanished, replaced by a carpet of moss so vibrant it seemed to hum with its own internal light. "Stay close," she murmured, her voice sounding strangely muted, as if the atmosphere itself absorbed sound. "Isolde said time moves funny here. An hour could be a minute, or a week." Behind her, Nyx shifted. The Shade did not walk so much as flow, a towering silhouette of living shadow that stretched and contracted with every step. At six feet two inches in this solid form, they loomed over the wildflowers that bloomed in impossible clusters around them—bluebells intertwined with crimson orchids that should not exist in the same season, let alone the same hemisphere. Nyx's faintly glowing violet eyes scanned the tree line, their form rippling like smoke caught in a draft. "The Veil is thin here," Nyx whispered, their voice sounding like dry leaves skittering across stone. "Thinner than I have felt in centuries. The spaces between realms bleed together." Aurora touched the deep crimson gemstone at her throat. The Heartstone pendant, usually cool against her skin, pulsed with a faint, rhythmic warmth. It was a subtle thrum, like a second heartbeat syncing with her own. She knew what it meant; the artifact reacted to proximity with Hel portals, yet here, in a pocket of the Fae realm, it sang with a different frequency. It made the small crescent scar on her left wrist itch, a phantom ache from a childhood fall that suddenly felt significant. "It's beautiful," Aurora admitted, stepping further into the clearing. "But it feels... watchful." They moved deeper. The trees here were not merely oak or beech; they were ancient sentinels with bark that shimmered with veins of silver, their leaves changing color as the wind brushed them, shifting from emerald to gold to a deep, bruised purple. There was no sun, yet the grove was bathed in a soft, pearlescent luminescence that seemed to emanate from the ground itself. Shadows didn't fall correctly here; they pooled in corners that shouldn't exist and stretched toward sources of light that weren't there. Nyx drifted ahead, their form dissolving partially into the darkness beneath a fern before re-coalescing. "Do you hear that?" Aurora stopped. At first, she heard nothing but the rustle of leaves. Then, beneath it, a low humming, a harmonic resonance that vibrated in her teeth. It wasn't a sound made by an instrument or an animal; it was the sound of the place itself, the magic of the location singing to its own rules. "We're being tested," Nyx said, their violet gaze fixed on a cluster of standing stones ahead. These were smaller than the boundary markers, arranged in a perfect circle around a pool of water so still it looked like a mirror of polished obsidian. "The Fae do not welcome intruders lightly. Even exiles like Isolde leave wards." Aurora reached for the hilt of the blade at her hip. Isolde had given it to her only days ago, a slender, leaf-shaped dagger forged of moonsilver. Even through the leather of her glove, the weapon felt ice-cold, a stark contrast to the warming pendant. As her fingers closed around the hilt, the blade flared with a faint, milky luminescence, casting long, sharp shadows against the vibrant flora. "I'm not here to fight," Aurora said, though her grip tightened. "I'm here to ask questions." "Questions are dangerous currency in the Fae Courts," Nyx replied, drifting closer to the pool. "And answers are often traps." They approached the obsidian pool. Aurora expected to see their reflections, but the surface remained dark, impenetrable. As she leaned closer, the water rippled without a breeze. Images began to form beneath the surface—not her own face, but flashes of memory. She saw the warm amber sky of Dymas, the realm of Gluttony, with its sprawling vineyards and grand feasts. She saw Prince Belphegor laughing over a table laden with exotic fruits that rotted the moment they were picked. Then the image shifted to a dark alley in London, to Evan's angry face, to the fear that had driven her from Cardiff to this chaotic life above Silas' bar. "Don't look too long," Nyx warned, their voice urgent. "It shows you what you fear losing, or what you desire most. Both are poisons here." Aurora forced herself to step back, breaking the connection. The images vanished, leaving only the black water. Her heart hammered against her ribs. The compulsion of the Fae was legendary; Isolde could not lie, but she could mislead, twisting truth until it broke the mind. Being in her domain meant walking a razor's edge. Suddenly, the wildflowers around them bowed flat, though no wind blew. The humming intensified, rising to a whine that made Aurora's eyes water. From the tree line, a figure emerged. Isolde Varga stepped into the clearing as if she had always been there. Her silver hair reached her waist, flowing like liquid moonlight, and her pale lavender eyes held the depth of three hundred years. She wore simple robes that seemed woven from spider silk and starlight. As she walked across the moss, Aurora noticed with a jolt of unease that Isolde left no footprints. The grass sprang back instantly behind her heels, erasing any trace of her passage. "You bring shadows and stone into my garden," Isolde said. Her voice was melodic, layered with an echo that suggested she was speaking from multiple distances at once. "And you carry a blade that sings of winter." "We didn't mean to intrude," Aurora said, keeping her hand near the Fae-forged blade but not drawing it. "The standing stones... they just opened for us." "The stones open for those the Veil deems necessary," Isolde corrected, tilting her head. Her gaze landed on the Heartstone pendant pulsing at Aurora's throat. "That gem burns with the fire of Hel. Why does a child of Cardiff carry the heart of a gluttonous prince?" "It was a gift," Aurora said carefully. "From someone who knew I'd need it." "Gifts from Hell are never free," Isolde said, moving closer. She stopped inches from Aurora, close enough that Rory could smell the scent of rain and old parchment on her. "The Veil weakens as the solstice approaches. The barriers between your world, my exile, and the pits of Hel grow thin. Things slip through. Things that should remain bound." Nyx stepped forward, their shadowy form expanding slightly, a protective instinct. "We seek knowledge, Seer. The rifts are growing. We need to know how to seal them before the Wardens lose control." Isolde turned her lavender eyes to the Shade. "You, who were once Aldric the Sorcerer, trapped between the ticks of the clock. You know better than most that some doors, once opened, cannot be shut. They can only be guarded." She reached out a hand, her fingers long and pale, and hovered them over the moonsilver dagger at Aurora's hip. The cold radiating from the weapon seemed to intensify, frosting the air between them. "This blade can cut a ward. It can slice the throat of a demon. But it cannot cut fate." Aurora felt a chill that had nothing to do with the blade. "So what do we do? If the Veil is failing..." "You stand in the eye of the storm," Isolde said, her expression unreadable. "You, the delivery girl who runs between worlds. You, the shadow that remembers being human. And you, the stone that beats with a demon's rhythm." She turned and began to walk toward the center of the stone circle, her silver hair trailing behind her like a banner. "The grove shows you wonders to distract you from the danger, but the danger is real. The winter solstice is not merely a date on your calendar. It is a unlocking." Isolde stopped by the obsidian pool and looked back at them. For a moment, the ethereal mask slipped, and Aurora saw the exhaustion in the Seer's ancient eyes. "Follow me. If you wish to survive what comes, you must learn to see not just what is, but what is coming. The flowers bloom year-round here, but even they know when to wither." Aurora exchanged a glance with Nyx. The Shade's violet eyes glowed brighter in the dim light, a silent acknowledgment of the risk. She took a deep breath of the sweet, heavy air, feeling the warmth of the Heartstone against her chest and the cold comfort of the blade at her side. The wonder of the alien landscape was still there, the impossible colors and the singing trees, but now it was overlaid with a sharp, primal unease. This wasn't just a hidden garden; it was a fortress, and they had just walked through the gates. "Lead the way," Aurora said, stepping over a patch of glowing mushrooms that chimed like tiny bells under her boots. As they followed Isolde deeper into the grove, the light began to shift, the pearlescent glow dimming into a twilight purple. The shadows lengthened, stretching toward them with grasping fingers, and Aurora realized with a start that in this place, the shadows had weight. Nyx moved effortlessly among them, at home in the darkness, but Aurora kept her hand tight on the hilt of the dagger, ready to cut through whatever the Fae realm decided to show them next. The world around them was alive, watching, waiting, and the silence between the trees felt less like peace and more like a held breath.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
38.0952% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"she murmured, her voice sounding strangely muted, as if the atmosphere itself absorbed sound [strangely]"
1"Aurora admitted, stepping further into the clearing [further]"
2"Aurora said carefully [carefully]"
3"Aurora said, stepping over a patch of glowing mushrooms that chimed like tiny bells under her boots [like]"
70.3088% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1684
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"lightly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count2
highlights
0"carefully"
1"lightly"
2"slightly"
3"suddenly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
40.6176% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1684
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"ethereal"
count1
1
word"sentinels"
count1
2
word"resonance"
count1
3
word"shimmered"
count1
4
word"loomed"
count1
5
word"silk"
count1
6
word"unreadable"
count1
7
word"stark"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"echo"
count1
highlights
0"ethereal"
1"sentinels"
2"resonance"
3"shimmered"
4"loomed"
5"silk"
6"unreadable"
7"stark"
8"weight"
9"echo"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences83
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences83
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean52.44
std30.71
cv0.586
sampleLengths
0120
131
282
329
486
513
686
719
855
956
1068
1116
1220
13109
1425
1554
1630
1779
1837
1926
2046
2114
2259
2332
2440
2553
2622
2791
2862
2995
3020
31103
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences83
matches
0"was bathed"
1"was overlaid"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs206
matches
0"was speaking"
94.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1290
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"slender, leaf-shaped dagger"
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.027131782945736434
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.010852713178294573
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences102
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences102
mean16.45
std8.65
cv0.526
sampleLengths
011
127
222
313
422
525
616
715
84
922
1038
1118
1216
1313
149
1514
1613
1728
1822
199
204
213
2240
2322
2421
2515
264
272
2810
2914
3029
3116
3227
3313
3411
3516
3618
3723
3811
395
4015
415
425
4312
4410
4514
4619
4719
4830
499
58.8235% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.38235294117647056
totalSentences102
uniqueOpeners39
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount12
fancyTags
0"she murmured, her voice sounding strangely muted, as if the atmosphere itself absorbed sound (murmur, strangely muted, absorb)"
1"Nyx whispered, their voice sounding like dry leaves skittering across stone (whisper, sound like skitter)"
2"Aurora admitted, stepping further into the clearing (admit, step further)"
3"Nyx said, their violet gaze fixed on a cluster of standing stones ahead (say, fix stand)"
4"Aurora said, though her grip tightened (say, tighten)"
5"Nyx replied, drifting closer to the pool (reply, drift)"
6"Nyx warned, their voice urgent (warn)"
7"Aurora said, keeping her hand near the Fae-forged blade but not drawing it (say, keep does not draw)"
8"Isolde corrected, tilting her head (correct, tilt)"
9"Aurora said carefully (say carefully)"
10"Isolde said, moving closer (say, move)"
11"Aurora said, stepping over a patch of glowing mushrooms that chimed like tiny bells under her boots (say, step glow chime like)"
82.4615%