| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Quinn said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.464 | | leniency | 0.929 | | rawRatio | 0.077 | | effectiveRatio | 0.071 | |
| 88.96% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1359 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 81.60% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1359 | | totalAiIsms | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "perfect" | | 2 | "etched" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "processed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 92 | | matches | | |
| 96.27% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 92 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 106 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 51 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1353 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 79.27% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 38 | | wordCount | 1131 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.41 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Quinn | 16 | | Underground | 1 | | Camden | 1 | | Tube | 1 | | Chambers | 10 | | Yorkshire | 1 | | Morris | 5 | | Thames | 1 | | Latin | 1 | | English | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Quinn" | | 1 | "Chambers" | | 2 | "Morris" |
| | places | | 0 | "Yorkshire" | | 1 | "Thames" | | 2 | "Latin" |
| | globalScore | 0.793 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 42.86% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like a compass, its brass casing g" | | 1 | "etchings that seemed to shift in the uncertain light" | | 2 | "looked like an eye bisected by a vertical" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1353 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "acknowledging that the" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 39 | | mean | 34.69 | | std | 21.13 | | cv | 0.609 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 62 | | 1 | 65 | | 2 | 64 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 57 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 36 | | 7 | 44 | | 8 | 49 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 28 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 62 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 56 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 46 | | 21 | 63 | | 22 | 43 | | 23 | 24 | | 24 | 53 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 43 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 55 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 21 | | 32 | 87 | | 33 | 28 | | 34 | 38 | | 35 | 50 | | 36 | 37 | | 37 | 46 | | 38 | 19 |
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| 90.01% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "been swept" | | 1 | "been trained" | | 2 | "been placed" | | 3 | "been trained" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 193 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 106 | | ratio | 0.066 | | matches | | 0 | "The stench hit Quinn before she even reached the platform—copper and rot mixing with the damp mineral smell of the Underground." | | 1 | "Eighteen years on the force had taught her to catalog details before emotion could cloud them—the way the air moved wrong down here, too still for a space this size; the smell underneath the blood, something acrid and chemical; the scuff marks on the platform edge that looked deliberate, patterned." | | 2 | "The platform around the victim had been swept clean—actually swept, she could see the marks in the dust." | | 3 | "Something caught her eye between the tracks—small objects arranged in a pattern." | | 4 | "Quinn's torch beam picked out details: small bones, maybe chicken; bundles of dried herbs tied with dark thread; glass vials filled with liquid that caught the light strangely." | | 5 | "This wasn't a murder—at least not like any murder she'd worked before." | | 6 | "The victim's clothes were clean, expensive—leather satchel beside her body, its contents spilled across the platform." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1142 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.03064798598949212 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00788091068301226 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 106 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 106 | | mean | 12.76 | | std | 8.08 | | cv | 0.633 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 41 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 50 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 28 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 73.58% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.4811320754716981 | | totalSentences | 106 | | uniqueOpeners | 51 | |
| 37.88% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "More symbols, these painted in" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "She ducked under the police" | | 1 | "she asked, moving closer but" | | 2 | "He was uncomfortable." | | 3 | "Her gaze tracked outward from" | | 4 | "She stood, walking the perimeter" | | 5 | "She moved to the edge" | | 6 | "She pulled out her phone," | | 7 | "she called to Chambers" | | 8 | "They'd found him two days" | | 9 | "He'd filled notebooks with sketches" | | 10 | "She'd thought he'd been cracking" | | 11 | "Her hand moved with military" | | 12 | "She followed him to the" | | 13 | "He directed his torch beam" | | 14 | "Her pulse kicked up a" | | 15 | "She'd seen this mark before," | | 16 | "She kept her voice level," | | 17 | "She photographed it without touching" | | 18 | "She glanced back at the" | | 19 | "she told Chambers" |
| | ratio | 0.239 | |
| 96.36% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 64 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "The stench hit Quinn before" | | 1 | "She ducked under the police" | | 2 | "DS Chambers waited halfway down" | | 3 | "Quinn descended the non-functioning escalator," | | 4 | "Chambers called up, his Yorkshire" | | 5 | "Quinn reached the platform and" | | 6 | "The body lay near the" | | 7 | "Arms crossed over the chest." | | 8 | "Legs straight, ankles together." | | 9 | "Someone had arranged her post-mortem-Quinn" | | 10 | "she asked, moving closer but" | | 11 | "Chambers shifted his weight, a" | | 12 | "He was uncomfortable." | | 13 | "Quinn crouched at the perimeter," | | 14 | "The positioning spoke of ritual," | | 15 | "This wasn't rage or opportunity." | | 16 | "This was deliberate." | | 17 | "Her gaze tracked outward from" | | 18 | "The platform around the victim" | | 19 | "A rough circle, maybe twelve" |
| | ratio | 0.727 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "Even from this distance, she" | | 1 | "Now someone else was dead," |
| | ratio | 0.023 | |
| 72.83% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Two uniformed officers stood near the far end, their faces carefully blank in the way that meant they'd seen something that troubled them." | | 1 | "Eighteen years on the force had taught her to catalog details before emotion could cloud them—the way the air moved wrong down here, too still for a space this …" | | 2 | "Quinn's torch beam picked out details: small bones, maybe chicken; bundles of dried herbs tied with dark thread; glass vials filled with liquid that caught the …" | | 3 | "One lay open near Quinn's feet, its pages covered in dense text and hand-drawn illustrations of symbols that matched the ones on the tunnel wall." | | 4 | "She glanced back at the body, at the red hair and freckled skin, at the round glasses that had been placed carefully beside the victim's left hand." |
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| 9.62% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Chambers called up, his Yorkshire accent flattening the vowels" | | 1 | "Chambers said, but his tone suggested he didn't believe it" | | 2 | "She kept, professional" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Chambers called up (call up)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.286 | | leniency | 0.571 | | rawRatio | 0.125 | | effectiveRatio | 0.071 | |