Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQR78X3PKW9K84C7K2Z8H7

Run Details

Duration:
49.9s
Cost:
$0.003791
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The door opened with a sigh that slid along the corridor and into the cramped glow of Eva’s flat. A breath of damp London air followed him in, carrying the faint rasp of traffic and the distant clang of a curry pot somewhere below. Rory stood a beat still, book in one hand, the other braced on the edge of the kitchen counter as if she could anchor the moment to a solid surface and not the mercurial pull of an old memory. Lucien Moreau stepped across the threshold as if the room had been waiting for him to arrive. He wasn’t loud about it, not in the way a storm was loud, but he filled the space with the sure quiet of someone who knew exactly where he stood in any given room. His cane leaned against the wall, ivory gleaming in the dull light, and his suit—charcoal, tailored to the last thread—folded around him with the precision of a well-kept secret. His hair, platinum and slicked back, caught the light and threw back the room’s dimness like a blade of moonlight. He wore two faces in one: the courteous fixer who could smooth over a dozen misfortunes with a single, practiced smile; and the observer who caught every tremor of a room’s energy, cataloging it as if the air itself might reveal a weakness to exploit or to protect. His eyes found hers—one amber, one black—an impossible twin light that felt at once calculating and almost intimate. Rory felt the room tilt toward him, as if gravity remembered what it liked about the past when it saw him again. He said nothing for a moment, letting the silence stretch between them until it hummed with something almost painful in its clarity. “Lucien,” she said finally, the word almost a breath. She did not offer a hand to shake or a smile to soften the line of her lips. Years of guarding herself against other people’s moods had sharpened her into a clean edge—an edge that could cut, or keep you safe, depending on how you approached. He inclined his head, a small ceremonial bow that fit him as neatly as the suit did. “Rory,” he answered in a voice that carried a trace of Marseille and a layer of something dark and amused. “Or should I say Laila, or Carter, or Malphora? It’s been a while since you requested a full catalog of my nicknames.” A flicker of something unreadable crossed her face at the mention of the nicknames—the familiarity she had shielded herself with cracked just enough to let a wound peek through. She set the book down with a soft thump that made the cat, Ptolemy, blink on the window sill and flick his tail with the patient disdain of someone who had observed many foolish humans in his long career. “Don’t do that,” she said, almost softly, as if she feared the correction would embarrass the old wound to reopen itself. “Don’t pretend we aren’t here because we are, and we have a reason to be here that isn’t about games or old pride.” Lucien stepped closer, his cane’s tip tapping a rhythm against the floor as he moved to the couch and settled with the ease of a man who knew that rooms, like people, could be sized and styled to accommodate his needs. He stretched out his legs, the tail of his coat brushing the edge of a pile of notebooks and parchment that lay like a low, enchanted city running along the room’s far wall. The flat, with its books and scrolls, had always felt like a shrine to the tiny, stubborn hours that kept the world from ending. Rory had learned to live inside that shrine and beyond its guardrails; she had learned to navigate its shadows, the way a lighthouse navigates a jagged coastline. “What do you want?” she asked, not unkindly, but with the practical bluntness of someone who had learned to live with danger’s constant whisper at the back of her neck. She took a step closer to him but did not cross the short distance that would give him a sense of sudden control over her personal space. His smile was barely a curve, a professional courtesy that didn’t quite reach his eyes. “You know as well as I do that the city listens when you speak in the language of necessity. I’m here because there’s a problem we both know cannot wait for two days while you decide which part of your life you want to pretend doesn’t exist.” His voice touched something in her—an old nerve, a moment of trust stretched too thin and then bravely re-tied with careful fingers. She shifted, not stepping back, but turning so that her body formed a shield between him and the room’s softer corners. The cat watched with the practiced indifference of a creature who had once had a far more dangerous life and preferred not to be bothered with the human squabbles of romance and ruin. “Don’t pretend you came here for my dry wit and keen interpretive skills,” she said, though the edge was softer than her words suggested. “If you came for something I can do, you’ll tell me quickly. I don’t have time for the red carpets you usually roll out.” “Always efficient,” he said, the corners of his mouth lifting again in that same careful, almost fond way. “Let me be blunt. A demon-hunting debt has aligned with something older, something more dangerous, something that is learning how to read your name written in the margins of London. I need your precision, Rory. And your past—whether you admit it or not—still carries weight in rooms you left behind.” He paused, letting the weight of his words land between them, the air thickening with a visible tension that hummed in the room’s quiet. Rory’s breath hitched at that word “debt.” It was a term that could mean life-or-death in a business where people counted their losses in years and the years were sometimes measured in breaths. The old scar on her left wrist—a crescent-shaped line from a childhood accident—itched as though summoned by the memory of a promise she’d broken and the fear she hadn’t confessed aloud. She rubbed the scar with a fingertip as if polishing away a smear of guilt that would not wash away with time. “Tell me you’re not asking me to wade back into the things you and your friends pretend you’ve left behind,” she said, the word “leave” stinging with old ache. “Tell me you’re not trying to rope me into something that requires me to be someone I promised not to become again.” Lucien watched her hands, watched the way she touched her skin as if to remind herself of what it felt like to be human and not just a vessel for other people’s schemes. The room’s light caught the edge of a coil of parchment, a velvet ribbon barely clinging to a stack of notes. The smell of old ink and curry clung to the air like a memory she hadn’t let herself perform in years. She had built her life around being practical and distant, and he had learned to respect the careful geometry of that life even when it burned with a longing he preferred not to name aloud. He leaned forward, elbows on his knees, eyes narrowing in that hybrid gaze of half-demon calculation and human vulnerability that always unsettled her in precisely the right way. “You think I came for a conversation. I came because you’re the kind of person who can read a room’s truth in the absence of obvious lies. If you tell me to go, I’ll go. If you tell me to stay, I’ll stay and we’ll pretend there isn’t a history between us that makes this risk feel both necessary and personal.” His words carried a soft insinuation she did not want to hear, but she heard it anyway—the way a storm can pass through a city and make every door tremble in its frame. The word “us” hung between them, heavy and almost ridiculous in its simplicity, as if a single syllable could fix the fractures they’d tended to neglect for years. Rory’s gaze flicked to the cat, whose amber eyes glowed like a quiet tribunal, deciding who would be allowed to claim this space of warmth and parchment and mutual danger. Ptolemy blinked, yawned, then rubbed his flank along Rory’s ankle as if to remind both of them of the ordinary kindness a creature could offer when the world’s ugliness pressed in too hard. “Fine,” she said at last, with a measured breath that did not betray how close she was to breaking. “Talk. If you’re here to recruit me for some intelligence sting or to peel back another layer of London’s supernatural underbelly, you’ll tell me what the game is, and you’ll tell me now. I’ve got a delivery to make in two hours and a life to live that doesn’t revolve around demon politics.” Lucien tilted his head, the blade of his cane catching the lamplight once, then resting back again. He spoke in a low, smooth tone, as if the words were a well-placed instrument in a score only a few people could hear. “The artifact known as the Slip is waking. It’s not a thing you find; it’s a map in motion, and it’s drawing the kind of attention that makes even the most disciplined hunter’s hands itch with the need to tighten their grip. There’s a debt tied to it—one I owe and one you have owed since the night you left Cardiff for London and never quite said goodbye to what you believed you could leave behind. You still carry that scar on your wrist. You still carry the memory of a decision you made not because you were weak but because you were trying to be strong for someone else.” The room seemed to shrink around her, the walls thinning to expose the raw nerve of what had always kept Rory from admitting her feelings for Lucien: a fear that loving him would destroy her more completely than any demon or debt could. She bent her head, the long fall of her straight black hair sliding over her shoulder like a dark river. The scar on her wrist throbbed faintly as if a heartbeat had chosen that moment to remember the old injury with a sting of rebellion. “Easing into this with a poetry slam about scars is not helping,” she said quietly, almost to herself. Then louder, with a faint lift of sarcasm that did not reach her eyes, she added, “If you’re asking me to help you steal back a rumor or chase down a demon, you’ve picked the person who spends her weekdays delivering dumplings and her nights trying not to dream about the same thing twice.” Lucien’s lips curled in something that was not exactly a smile, more like an invitation to trust him a little, perhaps even to trust herself again. “You and I once believed that some doors were meant to stay closed. That belief was convenient until the night the door you kept locked refused to stay shut.” He paused, looking past her to the cluttered shelves where dozens of scrolls and notebooks lay stacked, leaning on each other for support. “There are things in the Slip that won’t reveal themselves unless someone who knows how to read the margins—someone who knows where the margins exist in London’s breathing space—stands ready to translate them. I need you to be that person.” Her breath hitched again, the memory of those nights when the two of them had moved through London like a rumor, slipping through alleys and back rooms to pull truth from the places truth hated to stand. They had shared a language then, a slang of shared danger and the way their bodies had learned to align when the world tilted toward something unspoken. The past pressed near, a ghost that wanted to hold her close and whisper the kind of apology you could only offer with a touch, a kiss, a re-made promise. “Why me?” she whispered, not in accusation but in a tremulous question she refused to let become a confession she’d have to defend later. “Why not the sucker who can mind their own business and pretend not to care about souls, or debt, or the city’s rather charming habit of swallowing you whole when you start looking for a way out?” He did not smile at that. He studied her with that cool, unflinching gaze that had always made her feel as if he could see through her mask and into the part of her that hummed with a dangerous, bright thing she pretended not to own. “Because you know patterns,” he said softly. “Because you know how to read the margins of a situation and see what is left out of the headline. And because you did something for me once that I didn’t deserve—something that didn’t require forgiveness but earned a debt that’s time-bound and life-bound and demon-bound. You were the one who kept a line open when I thought I’d burned every bridge in this city.” Rory’s jaw clenched and then loosened, the tension smoothing into something she could hold without flinching. The room’s heavy air settled into a quiet, almost domestic moment—the kind that threaded through the years at the back of their throats whenever they forced themselves to pretend they didn’t still need what the other offered: a sense of being seen, finally, after years of pretending to be invincible. “What is the Slip telling you?” she asked, speech lower now, almost a warning to herself to stay certain, to stay distant if distance was the only way she’d survive this. Yet the question was less about information and more about the space she allowed herself to breathe when he was near. His eyes softened fractionally, and for a moment she recognized something vulnerable in them—the same vulnerability she kept buried under a map of lies about being fine, about not needing anyone’s help, about not wanting love to complicate a life that already felt full of enough trouble to last a dozen lifetimes. He looked away a moment, as if listening to a far-off sound, something that wasn’t here in the flat’s stillness but somewhere beyond the room’s wooden beams and the cat’s patient surveillance. “The Slip is not a thing you own,” he finally said, as if continuing a conversation they’d started long ago and left dangling at a crossroads just like this one. “It’s a corridor that appears when a truth refuses to stay silent. It’s a map that shifts whenever someone who wants to use it forgets the stakes—your safety, the city’s balance, the lives you’ve trained yourself to protect.” He fixed her with that suite of eyes again. “You have the knowledge to navigate it without getting swallowed. If you’re willing to walk through with me, you’ll do it with eyes open and hands steady, and you’ll do it because you choose to. Not because anyone forced your feet to move.” The words carved a path through the room’s fog, a thread she could grab and follow. She felt the old ache—the ache of standing on a threshold where every choice might break something irreparably, or perhaps, for the first time in a long while, fix something that had always been broken. There was a hum in the air, a resonance that belonged to the city’s pulse, to the magical undercurrents that he and she could both hear even when the world claimed it was nothing but storms and coffee cups and ordinary people’s lives. Her gaze fell to his cane, to the ivory handle that concealed a blade. It spoke of the man who walked between two kinds of danger in a city that measured danger in breaths and seconds, in a city that could swallow you whole if you forgot to keep your heart in your chest and your hands on the line between fear and will. It spoke of the careful control he had learned to exercise and the dangerous freedom he exercised when necessary. “Tell me the terms,” she said, letting the automatic edge slide back into place in her voice, the voice that could cut someone’s certainty away if given half a chance. “Tell me what you want and what you don’t want to happen because of this debt and this map and this Slip.” A trick of the lips granted him a smile at last, a realness that softened the lines of his face. “No more secrets,” he said simply. “No more games in the dark. We go in clean, Rory. We go in armed with what we know and the power of what we’ve learned about each other. If you’re in, you’ll say yes, and if you’re out, you’ll tell me now and I’ll leave your life with dignity and the knowledge that you did what you must to keep yourself safe. It’s your call.” She regarded him for long seconds, letting the tension drain from her shoulders, letting the old hurt settle under the skin like a bruise that would take time to fade but would not unjustly define her anymore. The memory of the last time they’d stood in the same room—the night time had melted into something else; the fear of what would happen if they came close again; the warmth of an unspoken admission they hadn’t dared to test—flashed through her. She would not pretend it did not matter. She would not pretend the present wasn’t built on the skeleton of all that had happened before. “Two conditions,” she said at last, counting them with her fingers as if to remind herself that even a decision could be made with a strange combination of stubbornness and hope. “First, you tell me exactly what you suspect about the Slip, and you tell me what you want me to do that will keep you and me and this city safe. No more acting on impulse; no more secret plans that pretend the truth can wait until tomorrow. Secondly, you don’t pretend this is about anything but necessity. If there’s anything you want beyond that—beyond my help—the door remains closed, and you walk out that way with your dignity intact and my trust intact by no more than a breath.” Lucien studied her, the ember in his amber eye glinting, the black eye steady as a night watchman’s lamp. He reached a hand toward her as if to bridge the space between them with a human gesture, then paused, the motion becoming a measure of restraint—an acknowledgment of the distance that still needed to be navigated between them. His fingers hovered near her forearm, and she felt a tremor travel the length of her, a spark she hadn’t allowed to flare in years. “Agreed,” he said softly, drawing back his hand. “No games. You have my word that I’ll lay out the stakes, and we’ll decide together whether this city should fear the night, or fear us for choosing to stand against it.” The air shifted at the word us, a tender, dangerous possibility that both terrified and thrilled Rory in equal measure. The room seemed to exhale with relief and risk, the kind of breath you take just before stepping into cold water. Ptolemy, wise and ancient as any king in a folktale, slid down from his window perch and trotted across the carpet with the slow, decisive grace of a creature who had observed more human schemes than most humans had. Rory’s gaze met his again, and in that quiet exchange of eyes there was something almost intimate offered—a shared decision to try, to risk, to admit what they still wanted even as they pretended not to know what that meant. Her breath found a softer rhythm; the scar on her wrist pulsed in slow, stubborn beat with the pulse of the room. “Then talk,” she said, finally, the word almost a concession and almost a dare. “Tell me what you saw that you couldn’t tell anyone else, and tell me why you think I’m the person who can read the margins.” He leaned back, forearms on his knees again, the ivory cane resting diagonally at his side like a sword sheathed and waiting. He spoke with the patient cadence of a man who knew the value of precise truth over quick truth, who knew that the right words—delivered in the right order—could reshape a room’s fate as surely as a blade could cut a tether. “The Slip woke not because the world demanded a hero, but because a memory refused to stay buried,” he said. “There’s a corridor where choices are kept, where every decision becomes a door that opens or closes a future you didn’t realize you could walk into. The map doesn’t lead to treasure, Rory. It leads to responsibility. And yes, it is personal for me, because you and I have a history of choosing responsibility over flight. The city will reward that choice, or strike us for our honesty. It’s that simple and that dangerous.” Rory let her own breath escape, slow and careful, the moment tightening around her like a thread about to snap or a kite suddenly pulled taut by a sudden wind. The room’s clutter—books, scrolls, a tangle of notes pinned at various angles—felt like a map of their old life, a maze through which they had once moved with a shared sense of purpose. If she stepped into the maze again, she knew what every turn could cost. She looked at him, really looked, the way a person who has learned to control every impulse might allow herself to be seen for a single heartbeat. The amber and black in his eyes softened, and for a moment she remembered the warmth that had traveled between them in the hidden hours of London’s night, when the city’s lights blurred into a memory that made sense of the danger they faced. “Then stay,” she said, mostly to the room and to herself, letting the words settle into the space between two old friends who could still become something more if they dared. “If we’re going to walk this corridor, we walk it together. But you’ll answer to me and you’ll follow my lead, and we’ll do it with our eyes open and our hands steady. And you’ll tell me what you’re not saying with your mouth, because I know you, Lucien. I know your tells, I know your pride, and I know when you’re about to lie to me with your mouth closed.” He met that with something like a soft, almost rueful nod. “I won’t lie,” he said simply, and in his voice there was that steady gravity that always said he would keep his word to the end, whether it soothed or shattered him. The moment’s tension shifted, a gentle thawing of old ice, and Rory felt the long-buried ache that had kept her from letting anyone in loosen just enough to breathe. The room’s air warmed by degrees, the scattered parchments catching a gleam from the lamp as if they themselves exhaled relief at the prospect of not having to witness the world alone. Ptolemy nosed closer to Rory’s shoe, tail giving a small, conspiratorial flick. The cat was always the truest judge of a room’s sincerity—the sort of creature who could tell you whether you were about to make a mistake or a choice that would save you. He mewed once, a sound almost like a distant bell, and rubbed his head against Rory’s ankle with the quiet assurance that yes, you can do hard things if you do them with someone who has seen you at your most ridiculous and still chose to stay. The rest of the flat settled into a careful, uneasy peace. The lamps gave a steady, honest glow, and the shelves’ shadows retreated into the corners where they could remind no one of the past they were about to re-enter. Rory moved to the table where several jars of spices sat beside a stack of mail and a notebook open to a page stained with ink. She tapped the page with a fingernail and then offered a small, almost shy, half-smile toward Lucien. “If you’re right,” she said, “if this Slip is a corridor, then we’ll map it with caution and care. And if I’m to be in this with you, you’ll let me be the line I am—the one who won’t pretend the city’s safety depends on anything except the truth and the willingness to act on it.” Lucien’s reply came in a measured breath, a promise wrapped in velvet and steel. “Then we begin now. We set boundaries, we lay plans, we read the margins, and we walk the corridor as companions who once believed in each other’s light and who still have a chance to trust that light again.” He rose, and the movement—so precise and unforced—made him seem taller, more present, as if his presence had somehow grown heavier with the confession that had just hovered in the air between them. He stepped closer without stepping too close, the distance shrinking to a hold that felt almost accidental rather than intentional. The scent of his aftershave—something green and sharp—mixed with the old, settled scent of parchment, making Rory inhale a truth she hadn’t allowed herself to name aloud in years. Then, abruptly, the cat sprang from the sill, and in the sudden, familiar chaos of a scurried leap and a soft thump of a paw against a table, Rory found herself laughing—soft and surprised, the sound breaking across the room like a small, bright coin tossed into a dark street for luck. Lucien watched, a quiet, honest smile crossing his face for a second before the old mask returned, the one that could still persuade and discipline and protect in the same breath. But for that breath, for that moment, there was something gentler between them—a shared breath that felt almost like an unspoken vow. The door’s heavy weight stood behind them, the night beyond it the same night London owned, but inside, something new and dangerous and beautiful began to settle: the possibility of choosing each other again, not out of loneliness or habit, but because their lives, against all odds, might be worth risking a true, honest alliance. The future lay in the margins of that room’s light, in the honest, unguarded look they gave each other, a promise to walk the corridor together—two wary travelers who had learned how to fight, but who were learning how to come home as well.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount14
adverbTags
0"she said finally, the word almost a breath [finally, almost]"
1"she said, almost softly, as if she feared the correction would embarrass the old wound to reopen itself [almost softly]"
2"he said, the corners of his mouth lifting again in that same careful, almost fond way [again almost]"
3"she said quietly, almost to herself [quietly, almost]"
4"Then louder, with a faint lift of sarcasm that did not reach her eyes, she added, [Then]"
5"he said softly [softly]"
6"he finally said, as if continuing a conversation they’d started long ago and left dangling at a crossroads just like this one [finally just]"
7"she said, letting the automatic edge slide back into place in her voice, the voice that could cut someone’s certainty away if given half a chance [back away]"
8"he said simply [simply]"
9"she said at last, counting them with her fingers as if to remind herself that even a decision could be made with a strange combination of stubbornness and hope [even]"
10"he said softly, drawing back his hand [softly, back]"
11"she said, finally, the word almost a concession and almost a dare [finally, almost almost]"
12"she said, mostly to the room and to herself, letting the words settle into the space between two old friends who could still become something more if they dared [mostly still more]"
13"he said simply, and in his voice there was that steady gravity that always said he would keep his word to the end, whether it soothed or shattered him [simply, that always]"
82.3009% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount4520
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
1
adverb"precisely"
count1
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count3
4
adverb"suddenly"
count1
5
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
1"precisely"
2"quickly"
3"softly"
4"suddenly"
5"really"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
53.5398% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount4520
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"throbbed"
count1
1
word"resonance"
count1
2
word"flicker"
count1
3
word"flicked"
count1
4
word"gleaming"
count1
5
word"glinting"
count1
6
word"velvet"
count2
7
word"calculating"
count1
8
word"unspoken"
count3
9
word"unreadable"
count1
10
word"unsettled"
count1
11
word"jaw clenched"
count1
12
word"weight"
count3
13
word"navigate"
count2
14
word"navigated"
count1
highlights
0"throbbed"
1"resonance"
2"flicker"
3"flicked"
4"gleaming"
5"glinting"
6"velvet"
7"calculating"
8"unspoken"
9"unreadable"
10"unsettled"
11"jaw clenched"
12"weight"
13"navigate"
14"navigated"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
1
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
1"the weight of his words"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences124
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences124
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"tended to"
1"seemed to"
2"began to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount11
totalSentences144
matches
0"do that,” she"
1"knew that rooms"
2"do that the"
3"carry that scar"
4"chosen that moment"
5"believed that some"
6"be that person"
7"out that way"
8"saw that you"
9"knew that the"
10"reward that choice"
53.9354% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean77.03
std26.1
cv0.339
sampleLengths
083
1148
262
355
459
568
644
7125
857
962
1076
1148
1292
1386
1451
15110
1689
1761
1863
1972
20151
2188
2272
23118
2494
2561
26118
2766
2852
2984
30120
3194
3283
3352
3492
35105
36121
3783
3840
3980
4062
4139
4264
4394
4477
4571
46102
4743
4861
4992
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences124
matches
0"being seen"
1"been broken"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs509
matches
0"were learning"
96.0930% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount3216
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount143
adverbRatio0.04446517412935323
lyAdverbCount33
lyAdverbRatio0.010261194029850746
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences144
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences144
mean31.03
std16.03
cv0.517
sampleLengths
019
125
239
317
434
529
620
748
818
922
1022
119
1218
1328
1417
1520
1622
1729
1839
1921
2023
2141
2233
2324
2427
2530
2627
2715
2847
2922
3021
3133
3224
3324
3418
3574
3633
3731
3822
3929
4022
4133
4221
4321
4435
4528
4661
4733
4828
4930
37.5000% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.2361111111111111
totalSentences144
uniqueOpeners34
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags23
fancyCount17
fancyTags
0"she said finally, the word almost a breath (say finally)"
1"he answered in a voice that carried a trace of Marseille and a layer of something dark and amused (answer carry amuse)"
2"she said, almost softly, as if she feared the correction would embarrass the old wound to reopen itself (say, fear embarrass reopen)"
3"she said, though the edge was softer than her words suggested (say, be suggest)"
4"she said, the word stinging with old ache (say, stinging)"
5"she said at last, with a measured breath that did not betray how close she was to breaking (say does not betray be break)"
6"she said quietly, almost to herself (say quietly)"
7"Then louder, with a faint lift of sarcasm that did not reach her eyes, she added, (does not reach add)"
8"whispered (whisper)"
9"he said softly (say softly)"
10"he finally said, as if continuing a conversation they’d started long ago and left dangling at a crossroads just like this one (finally say, continue start leave dangling just like)"
11"she said, letting the automatic edge slide back into place in her voice, the voice that could cut someone’s certainty away if given half a chance (say, let slide back place cut give)"
12"he said simply (say simply)"
13"she said at last, counting them with her fingers as if to remind herself that even a decision could be made with a strange combination of stubbornness and hope (say remind make)"
14"he said softly, drawing back his hand (say softly, draw back)"
15"she said, mostly to the room and to herself, letting the words settle into the space between two old friends who could still become something more if they dared (say, let settle still become dare)"
16"he said simply, and in his voice there was that steady gravity that always said he would keep his word to the end, whether it soothed or shattered him (say simply, be always say keep sooth shatter)"
77.8452%