| 88.89% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 18 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Nyx said quietly [quietly]" | | 1 | "Isolde said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 36 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.111 | |
| 78.02% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1365 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "truly" | | 1 | "sharply" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "quickly" | | 4 | "utterly" | | 5 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 78.02% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1365 | | totalAiIsms | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "crystalline" | | 1 | "flickered" | | 2 | "perfect" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "fractured" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 81 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 72.31% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 81 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 99 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 46 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1354 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 19 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 45.31% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 58 | | wordCount | 1003 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 2.09 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | London | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Nyx | 12 | | Shade | 1 | | Isolde | 11 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Aurora | 21 | | English | 1 | | Fae-forged | 2 | | Seer | 2 | | Earth | 1 | | Gluttony | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Hel | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Shade" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Half-Fae" | | 4 | "Aurora" | | 5 | "Seer" | | 6 | "Earth" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "English" | | 4 | "Fae-forged" |
| | globalScore | 0.453 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 22.88% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "smelled like rain and green things and som" | | 1 | "quite look like Earth's sun" | | 2 | "as though awakening" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1354 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 37 | | mean | 36.59 | | std | 20.77 | | cv | 0.567 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 85 | | 2 | 46 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 47 | | 5 | 33 | | 6 | 70 | | 7 | 30 | | 8 | 43 | | 9 | 42 | | 10 | 43 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 26 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 42 | | 15 | 60 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 38 | | 18 | 57 | | 19 | 34 | | 20 | 59 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 43 | | 23 | 47 | | 24 | 60 | | 25 | 84 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 36 | | 28 | 47 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 41 | | 31 | 49 | | 32 | 32 | | 33 | 29 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 26 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | |
| 85.71% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 175 | | matches | | 0 | "was learning" | | 1 | "was like trying" | | 2 | "was beginning" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 99 | | ratio | 0.101 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora felt it first—a subtle pressure change, like ascending in an airplane, except there'd been no climb." | | 1 | "The Shade preferred incorporeal form, but Isolde had insisted they become solid for this—trust was best demonstrated in flesh, even if that flesh was living shadow." | | 2 | "The clearing was perhaps two acres, ringed entirely by wildflowers in impossible bloom—lavender, moonflowers, and roses of a silver-white that Aurora had never seen in any garden center." | | 3 | "That was Isolde's way of speaking—fragments of knowledge offered like riddles, truths nested inside truths." | | 4 | "They raised one hand, and Aurora could see it trembling slightly—whether from emotion or from the strain of maintaining solid form, she couldn't tell." | | 5 | "The stones weren't natural formations—they were worked, carved with symbols that predated any alphabet she recognized." | | 6 | "She pulled out her phone—its screen flickered and died within two steps of the stones—and instead began sketching the symbols on the small notebook she always carried." | | 7 | "She was beginning to understand that Nyx's serenity wasn't acceptance—it was survival." | | 8 | "She knelt at its edge and saw her own face reflected back at her—but for just a moment, she also saw something else." | | 9 | "For a moment, Aurora saw it—the shape of what they must have been before the summoning." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1022 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 40 | | adverbRatio | 0.03913894324853229 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012720156555772993 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 99 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 99 | | mean | 13.68 | | std | 8.5 | | cv | 0.621 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 36 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 26 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 28 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 22 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 19 | | 31 | 24 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 21 | | 40 | 21 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 18 |
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| 49.83% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.35353535353535354 | | totalSentences | 99 | | uniqueOpeners | 35 | |
| 46.95% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the image shifted, fractured," |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "She stopped, her eyes adjusting." | | 1 | "Her silver hair caught the" | | 2 | "They looked down at their" | | 3 | "It smelled like rain and" | | 4 | "She settled onto one of" | | 5 | "They raised one hand, and" | | 6 | "She gestured, and Aurora followed," | | 7 | "She touched one of the" | | 8 | "She pulled out her phone—its" | | 9 | "Her hand moved quickly, capturing" | | 10 | "Their shadowed form seemed to" | | 11 | "They turned to face Aurora," | | 12 | "She was beginning to understand" | | 13 | "They emerged into a section" | | 14 | "She knelt at its edge" | | 15 | "She jerked back, gasping." | | 16 | "Her voice was gentle now," |
| | ratio | 0.239 | |
| 30.42% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 61 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "The air shifted the moment" | | 1 | "Aurora felt it first—a subtle" | | 2 | "The London haze that had" | | 3 | "The sky above was clearer" | | 4 | "She stopped, her eyes adjusting." | | 5 | "The Shade preferred incorporeal form," | | 6 | "Isolde said, already three steps" | | 7 | "The Half-Fae moved without walking," | | 8 | "Her silver hair caught the" | | 9 | "Nyx said, their voice like" | | 10 | "They looked down at their" | | 11 | "The grove opened before them" | | 12 | "The clearing was perhaps two" | | 13 | "The ground beneath their feet" | | 14 | "It smelled like rain and" | | 15 | "Aurora moved deeper, drawn toward" | | 16 | "She settled onto one of" | | 17 | "That was Isolde's way of" | | 18 | "Aurora was learning to parse" | | 19 | "Nyx had stopped at the" |
| | ratio | 0.859 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 66.87% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "One step beyond the ancient oak standing stones that ringed the grove, and the world breathed differently." | | 1 | "The sky above was clearer than she'd ever seen it, a crystalline blue unmarred by cloud or smog, and the light fell at an angle that didn't match the sun's actu…" | | 2 | "The Half-Fae moved without walking, as though she was less moving through space and more manifesting in new locations." | | 3 | "A glimpse of another sky, amber-colored and vast, with a sun that didn't quite look like Earth's sun." | | 4 | "Where the Heartstone pendant in Aurora's pocket came from, given to her by some unknown benefactor who seemed to know an awful lot about her future." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 18 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 38.89% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 16 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Aurora whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Isolde corrected (correct)" | | 2 | "Aurora breathed (breathe)" | | 3 | "Nyx observed (observe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 36 | | tagDensity | 0.444 | | leniency | 0.889 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.222 | |