| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 38 | | tagDensity | 0.447 | | leniency | 0.895 | | rawRatio | 0.059 | | effectiveRatio | 0.053 | |
| 92.54% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1340 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 62.69% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1340 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "oppressive" | | 1 | "comfortable" | | 2 | "tension" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "glinting" | | 5 | "crystalline" | | 6 | "traced" | | 7 | "standard" | | 8 | "synthetic" | | 9 | "etched" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 87 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 60.76% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 87 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 107 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 43 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1332 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.54% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 30 | | wordCount | 978 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.33 | | worstName | "Thorne" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Thorne" | | discoveredNames | | Tube | 1 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 8 | | Crime | 1 | | Scene | 1 | | Seven | 2 | | Thorne | 13 | | Through | 1 | | Victorian | 1 | | Swallowed | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Crime" | | 3 | "Thorne" | | 4 | "Victorian" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.835 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 41.30% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 69 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like he hadn't slept in days—proba" | | 1 | "not quite looking at him" | | 2 | "darkness that seemed to resist the light" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.751 | | wordCount | 1332 | | matches | | 0 | "not north but inward, toward the heart of the impossible space" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 42 | | mean | 31.71 | | std | 21.04 | | cv | 0.663 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 47 | | 1 | 4 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 34 | | 5 | 64 | | 6 | 60 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 27 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 39 | | 11 | 49 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 28 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 27 | | 17 | 46 | | 18 | 41 | | 19 | 65 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 49 | | 22 | 46 | | 23 | 45 | | 24 | 45 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 50 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 49 | | 29 | 28 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 57 | | 33 | 66 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 66 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 21 | | 39 | 70 | | 40 | 37 | | 41 | 13 |
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| 97.20% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "been closed" | | 1 | "been disturbed" |
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| 53.48% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 182 | | matches | | 0 | "was trying" | | 1 | "was already moving" | | 2 | "was warning" | | 3 | "was hammering" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 107 | | ratio | 0.075 | | matches | | 0 | "He looked like he hadn't slept in days—probably because he hadn't." | | 1 | "His clothes were ordinary—dark jacket, jeans, trainers unmarked by the filth that covered every surface down here." | | 2 | "The smell should have been oppressive—mold, standing water, rat droppings, the particular staleness of air trapped underground for decades." | | 3 | "Even the gentle ones usually carried some final tension in their features—the body's last protest against the inevitable." | | 4 | "No third rail—this line had been older, one of the first, decommissioned before electrification reached every tunnel." | | 5 | "The maintenance crew had used bolt cutters on a different entrance entirely—another service access two hundred meters down the line, in an active station." | | 6 | "It was fresh—the oxidation hadn't settled, hadn't been disturbed by time or touch." | | 7 | "The beam fell on something half-buried in debris—a small brass compass, its casing etched with markings that hurt to look at directly, verdigris blooming across its surface like disease." |
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| 98.76% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 990 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 41 | | adverbRatio | 0.04141414141414142 | | lyAdverbCount | 16 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01616161616161616 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 107 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 107 | | mean | 12.45 | | std | 8.06 | | cv | 0.648 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 29 | | 2 | 1 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 29 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 27 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 24 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 69.78% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.45794392523364486 | | totalSentences | 107 | | uniqueOpeners | 49 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, the air tasted faintly" | | 1 | "Even the gentle ones usually" | | 2 | "Then she turned back to" | | 3 | "Somewhere in the tunnels, faint" |
| | ratio | 0.051 | |
| 98.48% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "He looked like he hadn't" | | 1 | "She moved past him, her" | | 2 | "He could have been waiting" | | 3 | "His clothes were ordinary—dark jacket," | | 4 | "She crouched beside him, noting" | | 5 | "she asked, though she already" | | 6 | "His eyes were closed, lips" | | 7 | "She'd seen enough corpses to" | | 8 | "She turned her head slightly," | | 9 | "She made the word flat," | | 10 | "She was forty-one and some" | | 11 | "She moved to the platform" | | 12 | "She crouched again, angling her" | | 13 | "It was fresh—the oxidation hadn't" | | 14 | "She pulled an evidence bag" | | 15 | "It wound around a corner," | | 16 | "She was conscious of Thorne" | | 17 | "It was larger, much larger," | | 18 | "Her hand went to her" | | 19 | "He'd walked into that room" |
| | ratio | 0.304 | |
| 54.94% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 64 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "The emergency lights bathed the" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn ducked beneath" | | 2 | "He looked like he hadn't" | | 3 | "Neither had she." | | 4 | "She moved past him, her" | | 5 | "Thorne gestured toward the platform" | | 6 | "Quinn approached the body." | | 7 | "The man sat slumped against" | | 8 | "He could have been waiting" | | 9 | "His clothes were ordinary—dark jacket," | | 10 | "That was wrong already." | | 11 | "She crouched beside him, noting" | | 12 | "The station had been closed" | | 13 | "The smell should have been" | | 14 | "Something that prickled at the" | | 15 | "she asked, though she already" | | 16 | "Thorne had moved to stand" | | 17 | "Thorne's voice carried an edge" | | 18 | "Quinn leaned closer to the" | | 19 | "The man's face was peaceful," |
| | ratio | 0.81 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 74.83% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "It wound around a corner, deeper into the station, past collapsed ceiling panels and pools of stagnant water that reflected the red emergency lights." | | 1 | "The door swung inward on soundless hinges, and Quinn's torch beam cut through darkness that seemed to resist the light." | | 2 | "It was larger, much larger, and the air that flowed out was cold and smelled of something she couldn't name but recognized somewhere deeper than memory." | | 3 | "The beam fell on something half-buried in debris—a small brass compass, its casing etched with markings that hurt to look at directly, verdigris blooming across…" |
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| 95.59% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "DCI Thorne stood, his face grim in the emergency lighting" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 38 | | tagDensity | 0.105 | | leniency | 0.211 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.053 | |