Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQS3G970W3T412YENXP7ZY

Run Details

Duration:
2m 6s
Cost:
$0.005573
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air in the abandoned Tube station was thick with the smell of damp limestone, ozone, and something cloyingly sweet, like rotting fruit. Detective Harlow Quinn descended the concrete steps, her boots echoing in the cavernous space. Above, the familiar red circle of the London Underground logo was peeling, faded by decades of neglect. This wasn't a place for commuters anymore. This was the Veil Market. Flickering lights, no more than captured fireflies in glass jars, illuminated a chaotic bazaar set up between the rusting tracks. Stalls of mismatched wood and scrap metal displayed glowing fungi, chattering skulls, and bottles of swirling liquid that promised forgotten memories. It was a madhouse, and Quinn moved through it with the military precision that had been carved into her over two decades of service. Her destination was a stall near the far end of the platform, cordoned off by a shimmering, translucent ribbon of light that hummed with a low energy. A uniformed officer stood guard, looking profoundly uncomfortable. Quinn ignored him. Her focus was on the woman already inside the cordon, kneeling beside the wreckage of a small, overturned table. Eva Kowalski. Quinn recognized her from the file. Curly red hair, round glasses perched on a freckled nose, a worn leather satchel that looked like it contained half the Bodleian Library. The occult researcher. Of course, she’d be here. This was her world. “Kowalski,” Quinn said, her voice flat. Eva flinched, pushing a stray lock of hair behind her ear in a nervous gesture Quinn had already noted in the profile. “Detective Quinn. Thank you for coming.” She gestured to the scene. “It’s just as I reported. Silas is gone.” Quinn’s eyes swept the stall. It was a mess. Shattered glass crunched under her soles. A collection of silver rings was scattered across the grimy tiles like discarded coins. In the center of the devastation, a single item lay conspicuously untouched: a small brass compass, its casing green with a patina of verdigris. The face was etched with intricate sigils Quinn didn’t recognize. She knelt, her worn leather watch scraping against her wrist as she reached out but didn't touch it. “Silas Vane,” Quinn stated, more for her own benefit than Eva’s. “The stallholder. Presumed missing.” “Yes. Vanished. Wiped clean,” Eva said, her voice a hushed, reverent whisper. “There’s no residual energy, no trace of a banishing spell. It’s… empty.” “Empty,” Quinn repeated, tasting the word. She saw a crime scene. Eva saw a magical vacuum. “What’s your theory, Kowalski?” Eva stood, brushing dust from her trousers. “It had to be a Shade. One of the Deep Folk. They’re drawn to objects of power. Maybe Silas cheated one in a deal. The stall is wrecked, but look—the Compass is still here. A Shade wouldn't care for it; they’d want the soul, the essence. They would have taken him and left the trinkets.” Quinn grunted, a noncommittal sound. She rose to her feet, her gaze methodically cataloging every detail. The overturned table. The shattered glass. The scattered rings. She walked a slow perimeter around the stall, her eyes fixed on the ground. The floor of the station was layered with grime, but here, the dust had been disturbed. She saw scuff marks, smears, the chaotic aftermath of a struggle. Eva saw magic. Quinn saw a fight. “His soul was taken,” Eva insisted, following her with anxious eyes. “That’s the only explanation. No one just disappears from the Market. The protections are too strong. You can’t just walk out.” “Someone did,” Quinn said softly. She stopped, pointing a gloved finger at a dark streak near the edge of the cordon. “What’s that?” Eva peered at it. “I don’t know. Scorch mark? Maybe from an elemental blast?” Quinn knelt again, closer this time. She pulled a small evidence pouch from her coat pocket and tweezed a tiny, frayed fiber from the streak. It was dark green, coarse, and smelled faintly of nylon. “It’s not scorch,” she said, holding it up. “It’s synthetic rope. Frayed. From a struggle.” Eva frowned, pushing her glasses up her nose. “Rope? What would… that doesn’t make any sense. Who would bring rope here?” “Someone who isn’t a Shade,” Quinn countered, her voice sharp. She stood and walked back to the center of the stall, her eyes now fixed on the Compass. “You said a Shade wouldn’t care for this. That they’d take the soul and leave the trinkets.” “Yes, that’s right. It’s a Veil Compass. It points to rifts. Valuable, but not to them.” “Then why is the stall a wreck?” Quinn asked, gesturing at the chaos. “If this was a clean, magical extraction, why knock everything over? Why the struggle?” She looked at Eva, her brown eyes hard and unyielding. “A thief. A human thief. They wanted the Compass.” “But the protections…” Eva began, but her voice faltered. “Can be bypassed,” Quinn finished. “Or broken. Our perp came prepared. They knew what they wanted, and they knew Silas Vane was the weak link. They probably used the rope to restrain him, to drag him away. He struggled, knocked over the table. The thief got what they came for and then realized the protections on the exit would tag them. So they left the Compass behind. Too hot to handle with the Market’s security alerted.” It was a narrative. A human, messy, greedy narrative. It fit the evidence. The scuff marks. The frayed rope. The overturned table. Eva looked from the frayed fiber in Quinn’s glove to the scattered silver rings, her expression one of dawning horror. The magical explanation was so much cleaner, so much more fantastical. The idea of a simple, brutal mugging in this place of wonder was somehow more terrifying. “But… where would they have taken him?” Eva whispered. Quinn’s gaze drifted towards the dark mouth of the service tunnel at the end of the platform. A place the Market’s pretty lights didn’t reach. “Somewhere they could question him. Find out how to disable the protections on the Compass for good.” She looked back at the small brass object, sitting innocently in the wreckage. The needle wasn’t pointing north. It was spinning, slowly, erratically, as if searching for something that wasn’t there. She had solved the immediate puzzle. This wasn’t a supernatural event. It was a crime. A human crime, in an inhuman place. And that meant the rules she understood still applied. motive, means, opportunity. But as she looked at the spinning needle of the Veil Compass, a cold dread settled in her gut. A human was brave enough, or stupid enough, to commit violence here. To steal from the Veil Market. What else were they capable of? And what, she wondered, had they really taken from Silas Vane?
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Quinn said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.517
leniency1
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.067
86.67% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1125
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"slowly"
2"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
51.11% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1125
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"echoing"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"chaotic"
count2
3
word"shattered"
count2
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"intricate"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"aftermath"
count1
8
word"synthetic"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"familiar"
2"chaotic"
3"shattered"
4"etched"
5"intricate"
6"whisper"
7"aftermath"
8"synthetic"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences85
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences85
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences99
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen71
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1124
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
30.65% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions50
wordCount796
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity2.39
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Harlow1
Quinn19
London1
Underground1
Veil3
Market3
Kowalski1
Bodleian1
Library1
Eva14
Compass2
Silas1
Vane1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Market"
3"Kowalski"
4"Eva"
5"Silas"
6"Vane"
places
0"London"
1"Veil"
2"Bodleian"
3"Library"
globalScore0.307
windowScore0.333
50.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like it contained half the Bodleia"
1"as if searching for something that wasn’t there"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1124
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs28
mean40.14
std23.59
cv0.588
sampleLengths
066
165
257
343
46
541
681
715
824
920
1062
1173
1232
1323
1414
1550
1621
1745
1816
1946
209
2176
2222
2347
249
2573
2671
2717
92.88% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences85
matches
0"been carved"
1"was etched"
2"was layered"
3"been disturbed"
58.16% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs141
matches
0"was peeling"
1"wasn’t pointing"
2"was spinning"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences99
ratio0.01
matches
0"“It had to be a Shade. One of the Deep Folk. They’re drawn to objects of power. Maybe Silas cheated one in a deal. The stall is wrecked, but look—the Compass is still here. A Shade wouldn't care for it; they’d want the soul, the essence. They would have taken him and left the trinkets.”"
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount796
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.0364321608040201
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.013819095477386936
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences99
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences99
mean11.35
std10.01
cv0.882
sampleLengths
023
114
217
37
45
520
621
724
827
98
103
1119
122
136
1423
153
165
174
186
1922
2011
218
225
234
246
2514
2624
2710
2818
2911
304
3112
3212
336
345
355
364
377
3855
395
4011
413
423
433
4414
4516
4611
473
484
4911
54.21% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.37373737373737376
totalSentences99
uniqueOpeners37
40.65% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences82
matches
0"Of course, she’d be here."
ratio0.012
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences82
matches
0"It was a madhouse, and"
1"Her destination was a stall"
2"Her focus was on the"
3"She gestured to the scene"
4"It was a mess."
5"She knelt, her worn leather"
6"She saw a crime scene."
7"She rose to her feet,"
8"She walked a slow perimeter"
9"She saw scuff marks, smears,"
10"She stopped, pointing a gloved"
11"She pulled a small evidence"
12"It was dark green, coarse,"
13"she said, holding it up"
14"She stood and walked back"
15"She looked at Eva, her"
16"It was a narrative."
17"It fit the evidence."
18"She looked back at the"
19"It was spinning, slowly, erratically,"
ratio0.268
27.07% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences82
matches
0"The air in the abandoned"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn descended the"
2"This wasn't a place for"
3"This was the Veil Market."
4"Stalls of mismatched wood and"
5"It was a madhouse, and"
6"Her destination was a stall"
7"A uniformed officer stood guard,"
8"Quinn ignored him."
9"Her focus was on the"
10"Quinn recognized her from the"
11"The occult researcher."
12"This was her world."
13"Quinn said, her voice flat"
14"Eva flinched, pushing a stray"
15"She gestured to the scene"
16"Quinn’s eyes swept the stall."
17"It was a mess."
18"A collection of silver rings"
19"The face was etched with"
ratio0.866
60.98% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences82
matches
0"To steal from the Veil"
ratio0.012
47.62% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Stalls of mismatched wood and scrap metal displayed glowing fungi, chattering skulls, and bottles of swirling liquid that promised forgotten memories."
1"Her destination was a stall near the far end of the platform, cordoned off by a shimmering, translucent ribbon of light that hummed with a low energy."
2"Curly red hair, round glasses perched on a freckled nose, a worn leather satchel that looked like it contained half the Bodleian Library."
3"It was spinning, slowly, erratically, as if searching for something that wasn’t there."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Quinn said, her voice flat"
1"Eva said, her voice a hushed, reverent whisper"
2"Quinn countered, her voice sharp"
3"Eva began, but her voice faltered"
12.07% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Quinn stated (state)"
1"Quinn repeated (repeat)"
2"Eva insisted (insist)"
3"Eva whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.31
leniency0.621
rawRatio0.444
effectiveRatio0.276
77.0687%