| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.483 | | leniency | 0.966 | | rawRatio | 0.071 | | effectiveRatio | 0.069 | |
| 93.64% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1573 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 36.43% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1573 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "rhythmic" | | 6 | "chaotic" | | 7 | "navigate" | | 8 | "sentinels" | | 9 | "shimmered" | | 10 | "silk" | | 11 | "echo" | | 12 | "could feel" | | 13 | "unreadable" | | 14 | "fractured" | | 15 | "sense of" | | 16 | "stark" | | 17 | "flicker" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "a jolt of unease" | | 1 | "s in surprise" |
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| 47.62% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 75 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 95.79% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 90 | | gibberishSentences | 1 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 1 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 44 | | ratio | 0.011 | | matches | | 0 | "\"I'm not serving anyone,\" Rory said, her voice steadying, the cool-headed strategist reasserting control over the恐惧." |
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| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1570 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 61 | | wordCount | 1165 | | uniqueNames | 16 | | maxNameDensity | 1.63 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 2 | | Aurora | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Nyx | 5 | | Shade | 3 | | Rory | 19 | | British | 1 | | December | 1 | | Isolde | 11 | | Seer | 5 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Fae | 4 | | Dymas | 3 | | Grove | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Evan" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Shade" | | 4 | "Rory" | | 5 | "Isolde" | | 6 | "Seer" | | 7 | "Heartstone" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "British" | | 4 | "Fae" | | 5 | "Dymas" | | 6 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 0.685 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed perpetual within the clearing" | | 1 | "looked like a sheet of black glass" | | 2 | "seemed woven from spider silk and starlight, shifting colors with every slight turn of her body" | | 3 | "amethyst that seemed to look straight through Rory's skin and muscle, right into the frantic machinery of her soul" |
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| 72.61% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.274 | | wordCount | 1570 | | matches | | 0 | "not the muddy, trodden earth of the public park but a carpet of moss so vibrant it seemed to generate its own li" | | 1 | "neither anchor nor" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 69.56% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 28 | | mean | 56.07 | | std | 22.06 | | cv | 0.393 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 106 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 79 | | 3 | 77 | | 4 | 81 | | 5 | 35 | | 6 | 47 | | 7 | 58 | | 8 | 69 | | 9 | 90 | | 10 | 46 | | 11 | 48 | | 12 | 69 | | 13 | 50 | | 14 | 83 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 46 | | 17 | 58 | | 18 | 72 | | 19 | 48 | | 20 | 72 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 62 | | 23 | 59 | | 24 | 40 | | 25 | 39 | | 26 | 36 | | 27 | 52 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 189 | | matches | | 0 | "was ticking" | | 1 | "were towering" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 90 | | ratio | 0.056 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers bloomed in chaotic bursts of color—violets, crimsons, and golds that had no business existing in a British December." | | 1 | "The trees here were not merely oaks; they were towering sentinels with bark that shimmered like polished silver." | | 2 | "\"The Veil breathes, child. It expands and contracts like a lung. To say it weakens is to say the tide recedes. It is not a flaw; it is a rhythm. But you... you feel the pull of the deep water, do you not?\"" | | 3 | "The pearlescent light overhead fractured, turning a sickly shade of amber for a split second—the color of the sky in Dymas—before snapping back to silver." | | 4 | "For the first time, the Seer left a mark on the earth; a single silver leaf drifted from her hair and landed on the moss, rotting instantly into dust." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1173 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "slender, leaf-shaped thing," |
| | adverbCount | 38 | | adverbRatio | 0.03239556692242114 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011935208866155157 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 90 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 90 | | mean | 17.44 | | std | 9.35 | | cv | 0.536 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 30 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 31 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 26 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 29 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 27 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 26 | | 27 | 27 | | 28 | 24 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 25 | | 34 | 26 | | 35 | 24 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 23 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 20 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 30 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 25 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 25 |
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| 65.56% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.43333333333333335 | | totalSentences | 90 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, her fingers brushed the" | | 1 | "Then the cold of the" | | 2 | "Then she looked down at" |
| | ratio | 0.042 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 16 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "It smelled of crushed petals" | | 1 | "She paused just beyond the" | | 2 | "Their violet eyes glowed faintly" | | 3 | "It was a slender, leaf-shaped" | | 4 | "They moved deeper into the" | | 5 | "She tapped the glass face," | | 6 | "She forced herself to breathe," | | 7 | "Their branches wove together overhead" | | 8 | "Her silver hair cascaded down" | | 9 | "She wore robes that seemed" | | 10 | "Her voice was melodic, layered" | | 11 | "She noticed with a jolt" | | 12 | "It grew hot, almost burning," | | 13 | "She reached out a long," | | 14 | "She saw flashes of sprawling" | | 15 | "She looked at her companions:" |
| | ratio | 0.225 | |
| 65.63% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 56 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "The air inside the grove" | | 1 | "It smelled of crushed petals" | | 2 | "She paused just beyond the" | | 3 | "The memory of his shouting" | | 4 | "Rory murmured, though her voice" | | 5 | "The Shade did not walk" | | 6 | "Their violet eyes glowed faintly" | | 7 | "Nyx whispered, their voice sounding" | | 8 | "Rory tightened her grip on" | | 9 | "The moonsilver felt unnaturally frigid" | | 10 | "It was a slender, leaf-shaped" | | 11 | "They moved deeper into the" | | 12 | "The ground beneath their boots" | | 13 | "Wildflowers bloomed in chaotic bursts" | | 14 | "Some of the blooms turned" | | 15 | "Rory said, stopping to check" | | 16 | "The second hand was ticking" | | 17 | "She tapped the glass face," | | 18 | "Nyx corrected, their form flickering" | | 19 | "Rory flinched at the use" |
| | ratio | 0.789 | |
| 70.42% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "Even through the layers of" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | technicalSentenceCount | 13 | | matches | | 0 | "Outside the ring of ancient oaks, the London winter bit with a damp, grey chill that settled into the bones, but here, the atmosphere hummed with a heavy, cloyi…" | | 1 | "Their violet eyes glowed faintly in the dim light, cutting through the twilight that seemed perpetual within the clearing." | | 2 | "It was a slender, leaf-shaped thing, beautiful and deadly, and it pulsed with a faint, rhythmic luminescence that matched the erratic beating of her own heart." | | 3 | "Some of the blooms turned their heads as Rory passed, tracking her movement with a slow, vegetal intelligence that made the hair on her arms stand up." | | 4 | "She forced herself to breathe, to engage the logical part of her brain that had helped her navigate law exams and abusive relationships alike." | | 5 | "The trees here were not merely oaks; they were towering sentinels with bark that shimmered like polished silver." | | 6 | "Her silver hair cascaded down to her waist, catching the ambient light and turning it into a halo." | | 7 | "She wore robes that seemed woven from spider silk and starlight, shifting colors with every slight turn of her body." | | 8 | "There was no pupil, no iris, just a swirling depth of amethyst that seemed to look straight through Rory's skin and muscle, right into the frantic machinery of …" | | 9 | "Even through the layers of fabric, Rory could feel it pulsing, a warm, rhythmic thrum that contradicted the cold bite of the Fae blade at her hip." | | 10 | "The warmth spread through her veins, a sudden, overwhelming sense of hunger that had nothing to do with food." | | 11 | "She saw flashes of sprawling vineyards under an amber sun, of grand feasts where the guests wore masks of bone, of a prince who slept while the world burned." | | 12 | "Then she looked down at her own hands, one marked by a childhood accident, the other gripping a weapon from a court that viewed humans as playthings." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory murmured, though her voice sounded thin against the stillness" | | 1 | "Nyx whispered, their voice sounding like dry leaves skittering over stone" | | 2 | "Rory said, stopping to check her watch" | | 3 | "Isolde recited, her expression unreadable" | | 4 | "Isolde said softly, her riddles falling away to reveal a stark warning" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 12 | | fancyCount | 7 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Nyx corrected (correct)" | | 3 | "Rory admitted (admit)" | | 4 | "the Shade whispered (whisper)" | | 5 | "Rory gasped (gasp)" | | 6 | "Isolde whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.414 | | leniency | 0.828 | | rawRatio | 0.583 | | effectiveRatio | 0.483 | |