| 82.35% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 17 | | tagDensity | 0.294 | | leniency | 0.588 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.118 | |
| 79.84% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 992 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sharply" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "carefully" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 14.31% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 992 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "maw" | | 1 | "jaw clenched" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "etched" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "flicked" | | 6 | "furrowed" | | 7 | "scanning" | | 8 | "shimmered" | | 9 | "unwavering" | | 10 | "warmth" | | 11 | "fleeting" | | 12 | "whisper" | | 13 | "depths" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "jaw/fists clenched" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "jaw clenched" | | 1 | "hung in the air" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 53 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 61.99% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 53 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 985 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 18 | | wordCount | 764 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 0.79 | | worstName | "Harlow" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Harlow" | | discoveredNames | | Harlow | 6 | | Quinn | 2 | | Ford | 1 | | Detective | 2 | | Mark | 1 | | Sullivan | 6 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Detective" | | 3 | "Mark" | | 4 | "Sullivan" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like an abandoned tube station, it" | | 1 | "quite know what they were looking at" | | 2 | "looked like chalk, or maybe ash" | | 3 | "as if veiling the truth beneath its heavy curtain" |
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| 98.48% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.015 | | wordCount | 985 | | matches | | 0 | "not just at the symbols or the scene, but at what’s beyond" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 26 | | mean | 37.88 | | std | 21.36 | | cv | 0.564 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 85 | | 1 | 65 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 74 | | 6 | 39 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 30 | | 9 | 71 | | 10 | 54 | | 11 | 25 | | 12 | 31 | | 13 | 25 | | 14 | 47 | | 15 | 62 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 42 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 32 | | 22 | 60 | | 23 | 34 | | 24 | 42 | | 25 | 46 |
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| 85.40% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | | 0 | "been established" | | 1 | "been etched" | | 2 | "been carved" |
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| 55.07% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 138 | | matches | | 0 | "were looking" | | 1 | "were watching" | | 2 | "was only beginning" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 65 | | ratio | 0.077 | | matches | | 0 | "The scent of damp concrete and something sharper—perhaps old blood or something else—hung in the air." | | 1 | "A makeshift altar lay in the center—a toppled crate covered in black cloth, candles scattered across the floor, some still smoldering." | | 2 | "Her eyes caught faint, almost obscured symbols scratched into the concrete—too faint to make out clearly." | | 3 | "Her eyes flicked to the needle—pointing, unwavering, toward the darkness beyond the tunnel, as if pulled by an unseen force." | | 4 | "But Harlow Quinn knew better: beneath the surface of something so simple as a crime scene, something dark and ancient slumbered—and she’d find it, tonight or in the depths to come." |
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| 94.14% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 771 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 36 | | adverbRatio | 0.04669260700389105 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01297016861219196 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 65 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 65 | | mean | 15.15 | | std | 8.92 | | cv | 0.588 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 35 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 26 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 26 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 27 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 23 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 28 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 22 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 26 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 24 | | 45 | 20 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 73.85% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.46153846153846156 | | totalSentences | 65 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 64.10% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, her eyes landed on" |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 27.69% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted her worn leather" | | 1 | "She turned sharply, her brown" | | 2 | "She crouched slightly, inspecting the" | | 3 | "They didn’t match anything she’d" | | 4 | "She glanced at Sullivan." | | 5 | "He shook his head." | | 6 | "Her sharp eyes caught the" | | 7 | "She reached out, kneeling carefully," | | 8 | "She could smell the metallic" | | 9 | "She looked up at the" | | 10 | "she asked Sullivan, standing again" | | 11 | "He hesitated, nervous." | | 12 | "Her brow furrowed." | | 13 | "She moved, slow and deliberate," | | 14 | "Her eyes caught faint, almost" | | 15 | "She pulled out her phone," | | 16 | "She knelt again, brushing rain" | | 17 | "Her eyes flicked to the" | | 18 | "She frowned, eyes narrowing." | | 19 | "She pocketed the compass, feeling" |
| | ratio | 0.481 | |
| 56.15% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 42 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain was relentless, hammering" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn parked her" | | 2 | "A security barrier, flimsy but" | | 3 | "The scent of damp concrete" | | 4 | "Harlow stepped out into the" | | 5 | "She adjusted her worn leather" | | 6 | "She turned sharply, her brown" | | 7 | "Sullivan said, voice low, with" | | 8 | "Harlow’s gaze swept the scene" | | 9 | "A makeshift altar lay in" | | 10 | "She crouched slightly, inspecting the" | | 11 | "They didn’t match anything she’d" | | 12 | "A pulse that made her" | | 13 | "She glanced at Sullivan." | | 14 | "He shook his head." | | 15 | "Harlow’s gaze flicked over the" | | 16 | "Her sharp eyes caught the" | | 17 | "There, beneath the edge of" | | 18 | "She reached out, kneeling carefully," | | 19 | "The mark was too precise," |
| | ratio | 0.808 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 34.63% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 33 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain was relentless, hammering down in stiff sheets that blurred the city’s flickering neon and dim streetlamps into smeared streaks." | | 1 | "She reached out, kneeling carefully, her gloves brushing cold stone." | | 2 | "The casing was tarnished, patina of verdigris creeping across its surface, the face etched with tiny protective sigils that shimmered faintly in the candlelight…" | | 3 | "Her eyes flicked to the needle—pointing, unwavering, toward the darkness beyond the tunnel, as if pulled by an unseen force." | | 4 | "Then, her eyes landed on a detail Sullivan hadn’t noticed: a faint smear of ash trailing toward one side of the tunnel, as if someone had moved through, hurried…" |
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| 25.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Sullivan said, voice low, with that familiar tone of nervous excitement" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 17 | | tagDensity | 0.176 | | leniency | 0.353 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |