Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQSTYPQ2QPBX7CCGZBJVEV

Run Details

Duration:
12.2s
Cost:
$0.000590
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The sudden rap on the door echoed through the cramped confines of Eva’s flat just as Rory was settling into her evening routine: a half-eaten bowl of noodles balancing precariously on her knee, her laptop humming softly on the cluttered table. She paused, eyebrows furrowing, as if the sound had shattered some fragile peace she hadn’t realized she was holding onto. The knock came again, louder this time, impatient, persistent. Rory’s heart skipped a beat, her fingers tightening briefly around the chopsticks. Curious—or perhaps cautious—she leaned forward, glancing at the door with a mixture of wariness and mild irritation. “Who the hell…?” She hesitated, then slowly got to her feet, slipping her phone into her pocket before padding across the uneven floorboards. The door, a battered wooden thing she’d never bothered to replace, loomed in front of her. She reached out, hand hovering over the lock—then paused, her mind kicking into gear. She hesitated, the memory of past betrayals flickering somewhere behind her eyes, but before she could second-guess herself, she unlocked the deadbolt. With a flick of her wrist, she swung the door open. There, standing in the narrow doorway, was Lucien.Moreau. The Frenchman's signature impeccability was in full display, a tailored charcoal suit fitting his lean frame perfectly, his slicked-back platinum blond hair catching the dull light from the hallway. His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—locked onto hers with that familiar blend of calm calculation and something far more complicated. In his gloved hand, he clutched the ivory-handled cane. For a moment, neither spoke. Rory’s breath hitched, her eyes narrowing just slightly before settling into a guarded expression. Her heart quickened, pounding somewhere behind her ribs, fighting the instinct to close the door again. Lucien tilted his head, a subtle smile creasing the corner of his mouth—a smile that never quite reached his eyes. “Rory,” he said softly, as if her name was both a greeting and a warning, “it’s been a while.” The air between them was thick with unspoken words, unresolved tension pulsing like quiet static. Rory’s fingers curled instinctively into fists, but she forced herself to stay still. She’d known—that voice, that calm, deliberate tone—meant he had a purpose, a reason for this surprise visit. Still, her mind raced with memories she’d long tried to suppress: the push and pull, the hurt beneath the surface, the confusing flicker of attraction she dared not indulge. “What do you want?” Her voice was steady, but the edge was unmistakable. She lifted her chin slightly, unsure whether she felt more like defending herself or just resisting the flood of old feelings. Lucien’s gaze lingered, then he took a slow step forward, the cane tapping softly against the threshold. “I need your help. Or perhaps,” he paused, a hint of a smirk tugging at his lips, “I need you to understand something.” Rory’s expression hardened. “Help? From you? After everything?” He tilted his head again, eyes flicking toward her scar—a small crescent-shaped mark on her left wrist that she’d never been able to fully conceal. He saw it, of course. Everyone did. Her past was a wound she’d learned to hide, but with Lucien, it was impossible to forget that he had seen her at her most vulnerable. “I wouldn’t be here if I didn’t believe it was necessary,” Lucien said softly. “Your skills are unmatched, Rory. And I am well aware of what this city hides beneath its surface. I need your insight. Your intelligence.” She hesitated, the warmth of her instinct to denounce him battling against the faint, lingering sense that perhaps he hadn’t come just to stir trouble or remind her of old wounds. Maybe he’d come because, despite everything, some part of her still remembered the man beneath the polished veneer—the part that had once, fleetingly, believed in something more. “I don’t have time,” she said finally, voice low, trying to keep her trembling emotions at bay. “Whatever’s brought you here, it’s too late for apologies, Lucien. Just go.” He chuckled softly, a strange, almost musical sound that resonated in the space between them. “So cold,” he said. “I thought you might be. But I remembered something you once said—about knowing when to walk away.” She didn’t step back, but her shoulders stiffened. “Maybe I did. Maybe I don’t anymore.” He studied her for a moment longer, then slowly, with an air of undeniable ease, he shifted, and with a graceful movement, pointed the cane at her. “There’s something you should see.” His tone held a quiet seriousness that cut through her defenses. “Something that changes everything.” Her pulse hammered louder, a tense mixture of suspicion and curiosity surging within her. She hesitated, then slowly reached out, her hand hovering above the doorframe as if testing whether she was willing to give him just a moment more. Beneath her steel exterior, her mind tangled with questions she couldn’t yet voice. The doorway seemed to shrink—or expand— depending on her choice. Her gaze flickered over Lucien’s face, noting the faint shadows dancing in the corners of his eyes, beneath that impeccably calm exterior. Reluctantly, she stepped aside. “Alright. Come in. But if you’re playing some game—” “I’d never,” Lucien replied smoothly, slipping into her flat with effortless grace, cane clicking softly against the floor. As he moved past her, she felt the faintest brush of his presence—an unspoken electric charge that never quite left them. Rory closed the door behind him a little more firmly than necessary, her shoulders trembling briefly before she steadied herself. She didn’t trust him, not entirely. But that wasn’t what mattered now. What mattered was the flicker of something she’d thought buried—an ember of awareness, of longing, ignited anew by his return. And somewhere deep inside, she wondered whether that flicker was enough to burn everything down or to finally, perhaps, set her free.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"She hesitated then [then]"
1"he said softly [softly]"
2"Lucien said softly [softly]"
3"she said finally [finally]"
4"Lucien replied smoothly [smoothly]"
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.625
effectiveRatio0.625
34.14% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount987
totalAiIsmAdverbs13
found
0
adverb"softly"
count6
1
adverb"slowly"
count3
2
adverb"perfectly"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count2
4
adverb"reluctantly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"slowly"
2"perfectly"
3"slightly"
4"reluctantly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount987
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"furrowing"
count1
2
word"shattered"
count1
3
word"skipped a beat"
count1
4
word"loomed"
count1
5
word"familiar"
count1
6
word"quickened"
count1
7
word"pounding"
count1
8
word"unspoken"
count2
9
word"tension"
count1
10
word"raced"
count1
11
word"flicker"
count3
12
word"warmth"
count1
13
word"resonated"
count1
14
word"pulse"
count1
15
word"flickered"
count1
16
word"dancing"
count1
17
word"effortless"
count1
18
word"electric"
count1
19
word"firmly"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"furrowing"
2"shattered"
3"skipped a beat"
4"loomed"
5"familiar"
6"quickened"
7"pounding"
8"unspoken"
9"tension"
10"raced"
11"flicker"
12"warmth"
13"resonated"
14"pulse"
15"flickered"
16"dancing"
17"effortless"
18"electric"
19"firmly"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences54
matches(empty)
89.95% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences54
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences61
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords973
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions15
wordCount847
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity0.83
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva1
Rory6
Frenchman1
Lucien7
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
2"Frenchman"
3"Lucien"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
96.81% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if testing whether she was willing to give him just a moment more"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount973
matches(empty)
57.38% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences61
matches
0"known—that voice"
1"forget that he"
73.01% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs24
mean40.54
std16.44
cv0.406
sampleLengths
061
138
239
347
466
535
639
774
834
940
108
1158
1238
1358
1429
1536
1615
1747
1853
1932
2013
2118
2253
2342
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
66.67% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs150
matches
0"was settling"
1"was holding"
2"was willing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences61
ratio0.164
matches
0"Curious—or perhaps cautious—she leaned forward, glancing at the door with a mixture of wariness and mild irritation."
1"She reached out, hand hovering over the lock—then paused, her mind kicking into gear."
2"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—locked onto hers with that familiar blend of calm calculation and something far more complicated."
3"Lucien tilted his head, a subtle smile creasing the corner of his mouth—a smile that never quite reached his eyes."
4"She’d known—that voice, that calm, deliberate tone—meant he had a purpose, a reason for this surprise visit."
5"He tilted his head again, eyes flicking toward her scar—a small crescent-shaped mark on her left wrist that she’d never been able to fully conceal."
6"Maybe he’d come because, despite everything, some part of her still remembered the man beneath the polished veneer—the part that had once, fleetingly, believed in something more."
7"The doorway seemed to shrink—or expand— depending on her choice."
8"As he moved past her, she felt the faintest brush of his presence—an unspoken electric charge that never quite left them."
9"What mattered was the flicker of something she’d thought buried—an ember of awareness, of longing, ignited anew by his return."
58.87% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount865
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped mark"
adverbCount62
adverbRatio0.07167630057803469
lyAdverbCount25
lyAdverbRatio0.028901734104046242
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences61
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences61
mean15.95
std8.08
cv0.507
sampleLengths
041
120
29
312
417
523
616
714
822
911
108
1129
1220
139
145
1514
1616
1720
1819
1915
2013
2117
2229
2313
2421
2517
2623
273
285
2925
305
312
3226
3314
3424
3531
3627
3717
3812
3915
404
4117
428
437
4427
4516
464
4714
4826
4913
75.96% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.47540983606557374
totalSentences61
uniqueOpeners29
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences52
matches
0"Maybe he’d come because, despite"
1"Reluctantly, she stepped aside."
ratio0.038
35.38% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences52
matches
0"She paused, eyebrows furrowing, as"
1"She hesitated, then slowly got"
2"She reached out, hand hovering"
3"She hesitated, the memory of"
4"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one"
5"Her heart quickened, pounding somewhere"
6"he said softly, as if"
7"She’d known—that voice, that calm,"
8"Her voice was steady, but"
9"She lifted her chin slightly,"
10"he paused, a hint of"
11"He tilted his head again,"
12"He saw it, of course."
13"Her past was a wound"
14"She hesitated, the warmth of"
15"she said finally, voice low,"
16"He chuckled softly, a strange,"
17"She didn’t step back, but"
18"He studied her for a"
19"His tone held a quiet"
ratio0.462
75.38% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount40
totalSentences52
matches
0"The sudden rap on the"
1"She paused, eyebrows furrowing, as"
2"The knock came again, louder"
3"Rory’s heart skipped a beat,"
4"She hesitated, then slowly got"
5"The door, a battered wooden"
6"She reached out, hand hovering"
7"She hesitated, the memory of"
8"There, standing in the narrow"
9"The Frenchman's signature impeccability was"
10"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one"
11"Rory’s breath hitched, her eyes"
12"Her heart quickened, pounding somewhere"
13"Lucien tilted his head, a"
14"he said softly, as if"
15"The air between them was"
16"Rory’s fingers curled instinctively into"
17"She’d known—that voice, that calm,"
18"Her voice was steady, but"
19"She lifted her chin slightly,"
ratio0.769
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences52
matches(empty)
ratio0
20.41% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The sudden rap on the door echoed through the cramped confines of Eva’s flat just as Rory was settling into her evening routine: a half-eaten bowl of noodles ba…"
1"She paused, eyebrows furrowing, as if the sound had shattered some fragile peace she hadn’t realized she was holding onto."
2"Rory’s breath hitched, her eyes narrowing just slightly before settling into a guarded expression."
3"Her heart quickened, pounding somewhere behind her ribs, fighting the instinct to close the door again."
4"Maybe he’d come because, despite everything, some part of her still remembered the man beneath the polished veneer—the part that had once, fleetingly, believed …"
5"She hesitated, then slowly reached out, her hand hovering above the doorframe as if testing whether she was willing to give him just a moment more."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"he said softly, as if her name was both a greeting and a warning,"
1"he paused, a hint of a smirk tugging at his lips,"
2"she said finally, voice low, trying to keep her trembling emotions at bay"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.313
leniency0.625
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
69.4652%