Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
78
glossingSentenceCount
7
matches
0
"felt like it was being pulled from the"
1
"not quite touching"
2
"sigh that seemed to drain the last of his composure, he leaned his cane against the wall and ran a hand through his perfectly styled hair, dislodging a few strands so they fell across his forehead"
"There was a new tension in the set of his jaw, a faint shadow of exhaustion beneath his mismatched eyes—one the colour of warm amber, the other a fathomless, starless black."
1
"She could smell him—the faint, expensive scent of bergamot and leather, and something else, something deeper and wilder that was uniquely him, a scent that had once been her greatest comfort and was now her sharpest memory."
2
"A flicker of something—hurt?"
3
"amusement?—crossed his face, gone as quickly as it appeared."
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
55
technicalSentenceCount
10
matches
0
"Ptolemy, her tabby cat, who had been dozing on a pile of ancient tomes, lifted his head, his ears swiveling toward the sound, a low growl rumbling in his chest."
1
"She could smell him—the faint, expensive scent of bergamot and leather, and something else, something deeper and wilder that was uniquely him, a scent that had …"
2
"His gaze swept over the flat, taking in the chaotic mountains of books, the precarious stacks of scrolls, the faint scent of old paper and curry that clung to t…"
3
"It landed on the hissing cat, who arched his back and bared his teeth."
4
"The easy charm vanished, replaced by a grim reality that made him look older, wearier."
5
"Then, with a sigh that seemed to drain the last of his composure, he leaned his cane against the wall and ran a hand through his perfectly styled hair, dislodgi…"
6
"The memory of his hands on her skin, his voice in her ear, the way he looked at her as if she were the answer to a question he hadn’t known he was asking."
7
"He didn’t touch her, but he raised his hands, cupping them around her face as if holding something infinitely precious."
8
"It was a collision, a desperate, hungry meeting of mouths that spoke of a year’s worth of loneliness and longing."
9
"It was a kiss of apology and acceptance, of anger and forgiveness, a promise that everything that had been broken could, perhaps, be mended."