| 63.64% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 22 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he said again [again]" | | 1 | "they said softly [softly]" | | 2 | "they spoke again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 44 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.136 | | effectiveRatio | 0.136 | |
| 76.85% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1728 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "precisely" | | 3 | "quickly" | | 4 | "softly" | | 5 | "really" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 42.13% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1728 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "comforting" | | 3 | "cascading" | | 4 | "silk" | | 5 | "complex" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "rhythmic" | | 8 | "mechanical" | | 9 | "perfect" | | 10 | "flickered" | | 11 | "whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 113 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 113 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 133 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 45 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1708 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 21 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 36 | | wordCount | 1365 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 0.66 | | worstName | "Nyx" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Nyx" | | discoveredNames | | Nyx | 9 | | Waterloo | 1 | | Bridge | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Sunday | 1 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Renaissance | 1 | | Rory | 9 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Seer | 1 | | Isolde | 3 | | Northern | 1 | | Thock | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Seer" | | 3 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Waterloo" | | 1 | "Bridge" | | 2 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 16.67% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed more solid than she'd ever seen it, the edges of their silhouette sharper, their violet eyes burning brighter against the living shadow of their body" | | 1 | "seemed satisfied its rhythm settling into something almost smug" | | 2 | "seemed designed to make her forget all three" | | 3 | "emerald that seemed to drink the amber light and give back something richer" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 5 | | per1kWords | 2.927 | | wordCount | 1708 | | matches | | 0 | "Not purple, not red, not gold, but something" | | 1 | "not red, not gold, but something" | | 2 | "not gold, but something" | | 3 | "Not the distant revelry of the feast-market, but something closer" | | 4 | "not recognition, exactly, but a kind of grim understanding" |
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| 91.48% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | | 0 | "being that color" | | 1 | "doing that thing" | | 2 | "told that it" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 48 | | mean | 35.58 | | std | 32.06 | | cv | 0.901 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 76 | | 2 | 61 | | 3 | 77 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 59 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 103 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 75 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 83 | | 15 | 43 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 106 | | 18 | 63 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 34 | | 22 | 100 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 31 | | 26 | 68 | | 27 | 37 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 89 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 36 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 55 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 22 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 29 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 61 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 95 | | 43 | 21 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 30 | | 46 | 54 | | 47 | 13 |
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| 99.05% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "being made" | | 1 | "being told" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 221 | | matches | | 0 | "were doing" | | 1 | "was already cutting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 20 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 18 | | totalSentences | 133 | | ratio | 0.135 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory felt it first in her lungs—a warmth that tasted of honey and overripe fruit, sweet enough to make her teeth ache." | | 1 | "Not this—not a sky the color of late afternoon sun filtered through a jar of marmalade, not a breeze that carried the scent of roasting meat and cardamom and something darker underneath, something fermented and rich." | | 2 | "Their voice was what it always was—wind through a cracked window—but here it sounded thinner, stretched." | | 3 | "It had been doing that since they'd approached the rift point—gentle at first, then insistent, a drumbeat pulling her forward." | | 4 | "It rolled out beneath them like something from a fever dream painted by a Renaissance master who'd lost his mind—terraced vineyards cascading down hillsides of dark soil, the vines heavy with fruit in colors she had no names for." | | 5 | "No—not a city." | | 6 | "Figures moved between them—some humanoid, some decidedly not." | | 7 | "The fruit hanging in heavy clusters gave off a scent that hit her like a physical thing—sweet and complex, layered with notes she could almost taste on the air alone." | | 8 | "They were doing that thing they did—sliding between the shadows cast by the vine rows, their form flickering in and out of visibility like a skipped frame in a film reel." | | 9 | "The Heartstone pulsed, and she tried to match her breathing to its rhythm—in and out, steady, real." | | 10 | "She could see the fruit now—globes the size of grapefruits, their skins translucent, revealing the flesh inside in swirls of color like trapped sunlight." | | 11 | "Not the distant revelry of the feast-market, but something closer—rhythmic, deliberate." | | 12 | "Behind it stood a figure—human, or close enough." | | 13 | "\"Everyone in Dymas is looking for something. Usually it's the next meal.\" He set down his knife—a massive thing, well-used and lovingly maintained—and wiped his hands on his apron." | | 14 | "Something shifted in his expression—not recognition, exactly, but a kind of grim understanding." | | 15 | "\"—you're one of us.\"" | | 16 | "She looked at them—really looked, past the shadow and the violet eyes, to whatever remained underneath." | | 17 | "Ahead of them, through a break in the trees, she could see it—a fountain carved from black stone, water cascading in ribbons that caught the amber light and turned it to liquid gold." |
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| 99.77% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1217 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 49 | | adverbRatio | 0.04026294165981923 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009860312243221035 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 133 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 133 | | mean | 12.84 | | std | 9.68 | | cv | 0.754 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 36 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 32 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 39 | | 28 | 22 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 22 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 45 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 24 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 35 | | 46 | 23 | | 47 | 24 | | 48 | 19 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 65.16% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.43609022556390975 | | totalSentences | 133 | | uniqueOpeners | 58 | |
| 34.01% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she'd added, quieter:" |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 36.33% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 45 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "She turned to look." | | 1 | "she said, stupidly" | | 2 | "She'd expected Hel to be" | | 3 | "Their voice was what it" | | 4 | "They stood very still, and" | | 5 | "She was never wrong, exactly." | | 6 | "She just made you wish" | | 7 | "It had been doing that" | | 8 | "She wanted to rip it" | | 9 | "She let her hand drop" | | 10 | "They stood on a ridge" | | 11 | "It rolled out beneath them" | | 12 | "She could hear them from" | | 13 | "It was always cold in" | | 14 | "Her mouth watered." | | 15 | "Her stomach, empty since that" | | 16 | "They were doing that thing" | | 17 | "She gritted her teeth and" | | 18 | "It didn't leave." | | 19 | "They emerged from the vineyard" |
| | ratio | 0.459 | |
| 31.43% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 84 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "The air changed the moment" | | 1 | "Rory felt it first in" | | 2 | "The shimmer they'd passed through," | | 3 | "She turned to look." | | 4 | "Nothing but a wall of" | | 5 | "she said, stupidly" | | 6 | "She'd expected Hel to be" | | 7 | "Their voice was what it" | | 8 | "Rory glanced at them." | | 9 | "They stood very still, and" | | 10 | "Isolde had not been wrong." | | 11 | "She was never wrong, exactly." | | 12 | "She just made you wish" | | 13 | "Rory's hand went to the" | | 14 | "The Heartstone pulsed against her" | | 15 | "It had been doing that" | | 16 | "She wanted to rip it" | | 17 | "Nyx said, catching the movement" | | 18 | "She let her hand drop" | | 19 | "They stood on a ridge" |
| | ratio | 0.857 | |
| 51.02% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "Now it seemed satisfied, its" |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | technicalSentenceCount | 13 | | matches | | 0 | "Nothing but a wall of amber light, seamless and vast, stretching upward into a sky that had no business being that color." | | 1 | "Not this—not a sky the color of late afternoon sun filtered through a jar of marmalade, not a breeze that carried the scent of roasting meat and cardamom and so…" | | 2 | "They stood on a ridge overlooking a valley that shouldn't have been possible." | | 3 | "It rolled out beneath them like something from a fever dream painted by a Renaissance master who'd lost his mind—terraced vineyards cascading down hillsides of …" | | 4 | "Not purple, not red, not gold, but something that existed in the spaces between those colors, shifting when she tried to focus." | | 5 | "It was always cold in her hand, cold enough to ground her, to remind her that she was real and solid and mortal in a place that seemed designed to make her forg…" | | 6 | "Isolde had pressed it into her palm that morning in the Grove, her lavender eyes distant with something that might have been pity." | | 7 | "The fruit hanging in heavy clusters gave off a scent that hit her like a physical thing—sweet and complex, layered with notes she could almost taste on the air …" | | 8 | "They were doing that thing they did—sliding between the shadows cast by the vine rows, their form flickering in and out of visibility like a skipped frame in a …" | | 9 | "Here the trees were massive, their canopies spreading wide and dense, leaves in a deep emerald that seemed to drink the amber light and give back something rich…" | | 10 | "The skin was warm and it hummed, the faintest vibration, as though something inside it was alive." | | 11 | "His eyes were ordinary brown, tired, and very old in a face that looked no more than forty." | | 12 | "Ahead of them, through a break in the trees, she could see it—a fountain carved from black stone, water cascading in ribbons that caught the amber light and tur…" |
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| 56.82% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 22 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, stupidly" | | 1 | "she'd, quieter:" | | 2 | "He glanced up, finally" |
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| 36.36% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 14 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "the Seer had (have)" | | 2 | "she'd (would)" | | 3 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 4 | "they spoke again (speak)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 44 | | tagDensity | 0.318 | | leniency | 0.636 | | rawRatio | 0.357 | | effectiveRatio | 0.227 | |