Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQT022WWW0VCF4QKXKVTRK

Run Details

Duration:
36.6s
Cost:
$0.037481
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air hit her first. Warm, thick, and syrupy, it coated her tongue with the taste of honey and roasted spices. It was nothing like the damp chill of the London alley they’d just left. Rory’s hand flew instinctively to her throat, her fingers finding the small, thumbnail-sized gem of the Heartstone Pendant. It was still pulsing with a steady, deep warmth against her skin, a lingering echo of the portal they had just stepped through. The gem’s inner glow was a faint crimson star against the oppressive amber light that bathed this new, impossible world. She took a breath, the rich air filling her lungs, and looked up. There was no sun, no moon, no clouds. The sky was a seamless canopy of warm amber, a colossal vaulted ceiling that stretched to an unseen horizon. Beneath it, the landscape rolled away in gentle hills of impossible fecundity. Grapevines heavy with clusters of dark, plum-sized fruit twisted around gleaming trellises. Orchards of trees with silver bark bore crystalline fruit that refracted the amber light into a thousand tiny rainbows. The colours were too vibrant, the scents too intoxicating. It was beautiful in the way a fever dream was beautiful—dazzling and deeply wrong. “Where the cup is never empty,” Isolde murmured, her voice a soft melody beside Rory. The Half-Fae seer stood on the rich, dark soil, her silver hair a stark cascade against the golden world. As always, she left no impression where she stood, no footprint to mark her passage. Her pale lavender eyes surveyed the scene with an unreadable, ancient calm. “And the belly is never full,” a second voice added, a dry rustle like dead leaves skittering across pavement. Rory turned. Nyx stood a few feet away, a humanoid silhouette of living shadow, their form wavering and indistinct in the pervasive amber glow. The light seemed to pull at the edges of them, making them look thin and stretched, a tear in this tapestry of indulgence. Their own eyes were twin violet embers burning in the shifting darkness of their face. Rory’s fingers tightened on the hilt of the Fae-forged blade at her belt. The moonsilver was shockingly, blessedly cold against the humid warmth of the air. It was a solid, real thing in this place of overwhelming sensation. “Dymas,” she said, the name tasting strange on her lips. It was a statement, not a question. The pendant’s insistent warmth against her collarbone was confirmation enough. This was Hel. Or a corner of it, at least. They started walking, moving down a gentle slope toward a path paved with smooth, river-worn stones of rose quartz. The grass on either side of the path was a shade of green so deep it was almost black, and it was dotted with wildflowers that bloomed in hues Rory had never seen before. They chimed with a faint, metallic sound when a breeze, smelling of baked bread and caramelised sugar, drifted through them. Every sense was under assault. The distant sound of a stringed instrument played a tune that was complex and lovely, yet held a discordant, frantic undercurrent. The air was a cacophony of smells— roasting meat, fermenting fruit, something floral and cloying, and beneath it all, a faint, coppery tang that pricked at the back of her throat. It was the scent of a kitchen working on a scale she couldn't comprehend. “The bounty is a gift,” Isolde said, her steps silent on the quartz path. “And every gift has its price.” Rory glanced at her, frowning. “What kind of price?” Isolde simply smiled, a small, sad curve of her lips that answered nothing and implied everything. Fae compulsions. She couldn’t lie, but asking for a straight answer was a fool’s errand. Nyx drifted alongside them, their form coalescing into something more solid as they moved into the shadow of a sprawling fig tree. “Observe,” they whispered, their violet gaze fixed on something ahead. Rory followed their line of sight. Tending one of the vineyards was a man. He moved with a practiced, efficient grace, pruning leaves from the thick vines. He was dressed in simple, homespun clothes, and from a distance, he looked normal. But as they drew closer, Rory saw the details that were off. His eyes were a flat, milky grey, and his hands, though deft, trembled with a constant, minute tremor. He didn't look up as they passed. He didn't seem to notice them at all, his focus utterly consumed by his task. He hummed the same frantic, melodic tune they heard on the wind, a mindless, looping refrain. Further on, they saw others. A woman with hollow cheeks meticulously arranging the crystal fruit in a wicker basket. An old man Polishing the silver bark of a tree until it shone like a mirror. They all had the same vacant look, the same obsessive dedication to their work. Contracted souls. Master chefs, gardeners, artisans, trapped in a gilded cage of endless servitude. They rounded a bend in the path and the source of the smells and sounds became terrifyingly clear. Spread out before them in a wide valley was a city—or not a city, but a single, sprawling complex of open-air kitchens, banquet halls, and feasting pavilions. Gilded spires and domes rose into the amber sky, and pennants of silk in jewel tones snapped in the warm breeze. Thousands of people milled about. Some, like the workers in the fields, were shuffling through their duties with vacant expressions. But others… others were feasting. They sat at long tables laden with mountains of food. Golden-brown roasted birds bigger than swans, platters of glistening, jewel-toned fruits, rivers of dark wine flowing from ornate fountains. The revellers ate with a desperate, frantic energy, stuffing food into their mouths, their faces slick with grease and juice. But there was no joy in their feasting. There was no laughter, no conversation. Only the rhythmic sound of chewing, of silver on porcelain, of wine being gulped from golden goblets. Their eyes were wide and hungry, endlessly hungry. They ate as if they were starving, even as their bellies strained against their fine clothes. A man near the edge of a pavilion suddenly groaned, clutching his stomach, his face pale with sweat. But even as he grimaced in pain, his other hand reached out, trembling, for another slice of meat pie. He couldn't stop. “Gluttony,” Rory breathed, the single word a shard of ice in her chest. It wasn’t just about excess. It was a curse. A hunger that could never be sated. “They feast to forget they are the feast,” Nyx whispered again, and this time Rory understood. Their souls, their essences, were being consumed by this place, by the endless, grinding desire it manufactured. The sheer scale of it was dizzying. Rory felt a wave of nausea, the rich smells in the air suddenly turning rancid in her nostrils. Her hand rested on the Fae blade, its familiar cold a stark contrast to the cloying warmth of Dymas. Her gaze swept over the feasting masses, the enslaved workers, the opulent, sickening architecture. They had come here for a reason, but right now, all she felt was the overwhelming urge to turn and flee, to find the tear in the Veil that had brought them here and claw her way back to the cold, honest damp of a London autumn. Isolde touched her arm. The Half-Fae’s touch was light as a moth’s wing, yet it steadied her. “The heart of the hunger lies deeper,” Isolde said, her lavender eyes fixed on the largest dome in the centre of the complex, a structure of gleaming gold that seemed to pulse with the amber light. “Where the first plate was served, and the final bill comes due.” Rory nodded, swallowing hard. Deeper. They had to go deeper. She looked from Isolde's ethereal, determined face to Nyx’s shifting, shadowy form. An oracle who spoke in riddles and a shadow that spoke in chilling truths. And her. A delivery girl from Cardiff, standing at the gates of culinary Hell. She drew a steadying breath, the air thick with the promise of endless a la carte damnation. Her fingers brushed the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist, a familiar, grounding gesture. Then she took the first step forward, down into the valley of the damned.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
50.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"a second voice added, a dry rustle like dead leaves skittering across pavement [like]"
1"Nyx whispered again, and this time Rory understood [again]"
78.5714% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1400
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count2
1
adverb"utterly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"utterly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1400
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"ethereal"
count1
1
word"crystalline"
count1
2
word"cacophony"
count1
3
word"tapestry"
count1
4
word"glistening"
count1
5
word"gleaming"
count2
6
word"wavering"
count1
7
word"trembled"
count1
8
word"oppressive"
count1
9
word"porcelain"
count1
10
word"silk"
count1
11
word"unreadable"
count1
12
word"stark"
count2
13
word"echo"
count1
highlights
0"ethereal"
1"crystalline"
2"cacophony"
3"tapestry"
4"glistening"
5"gleaming"
6"wavering"
7"trembled"
8"oppressive"
9"porcelain"
10"silk"
11"unreadable"
12"stark"
13"echo"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"wave of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"a wave of nausea"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences102
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences102
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"seem to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
99.8017% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs22
mean63.09
std31.5
cv0.499
sampleLengths
096
1106
261
319
462
575
673
771
820
99
1031
1132
12109
1363
1491
15104
1640
1729
1833
19105
2065
2194
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences102
matches
0"was dotted"
1"was dressed"
2"being gulped"
3"being consumed"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs190
matches
0"were shuffling"
1"were feasting"
2"were starving"
82.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1343
adjectiveStacks3
stackExamples
0"small, thumbnail-sized gem"
1"smooth, river-worn stones"
2"same frantic, melodic tune"
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.02680565897244974
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.00967982129560685
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean13.22
std7.64
cv0.578
sampleLengths
05
116
214
318
423
520
613
78
819
912
1012
1119
129
1314
1415
1519
1615
1712
1819
192
2022
2123
2215
2313
2413
2512
2610
277
2810
293
307
3119
3234
3320
345
3521
3631
3714
3814
396
405
414
4216
432
4413
4522
4610
476
488
4913
61.5873% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.4095238095238095
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners43
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"Isolde murmured, her voice a soft melody beside Rory (murmur, voice)"
1"a second voice added, a dry rustle like dead leaves skittering across pavement (add, skitter)"
2"they whispered, their violet gaze fixed on something ahead (whisper, fix)"
3"Rory breathed, the single word a shard of ice in her chest (breathe)"
4"Nyx whispered again, and this time Rory understood (whisper again, understand)"
5"Isolde said, her lavender eyes fixed on the largest dome in the centre of the complex, a structure of gleaming gold that seemed to pulse with the amber light (say, eyes fixed seem)"
80.7036%