Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQTBTCPX34AKCB9V7AE9CR

Run Details

Duration:
41.8s
Cost:
$0.038654
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air in the abandoned Aldwych station tasted of rust and wet ghosts. It clung to the back of Detective Harlow Quinn’s throat, a familiar flavor of London’s forgotten corners, but laced with something else tonight. Something sharp and alien, like ozone and dried herbs. She ducked under the police tape, her boots crunching on a thin carpet of grit and fallen plaster. The temporary floodlights cast long, dancing shadows that made the old travel posters on the tiled walls look like screaming faces. Detective Constable Edwards met her at the bottom of the emergency stairs, his own face pale and slick in the harsh light. He was young, barely five years in, and still carried the earnest, slightly overwhelmed look of a man who believed procedure was a shield against the dark. “Ma’am,” he said, nodding. “Thanks for coming. The SOCOs are just finishing up.” Quinn’s gaze swept the platform. It was a mess, but a structured one. Flimsy-looking stalls made from scavenged wood and tarps stood in a rough line along the far wall, now little more than splintered wreckage. Whatever had happened here had been fast and violent. “Talk to me, Edwards.” “Victim’s a John Doe. No phone, no wallet. Found by a pair of urban explorers a few hours ago. Single wound to the chest. Looks like some kind of specialized shiv. Forensics are bagging it now, but it’s… odd.” Quinn walked toward the body, her movements precise, economical. Military precision, her first training officer had called it. It had stuck. The victim lay on his back near the edge of the tracks, arms flung wide. The medical examiner was murmuring to a forensics tech beside the shrouded form. Quinn nodded to him, and he pulled back the sheet. The man was maybe forty, dressed in a well-tailored but strangely old-fashioned tweed jacket. But it was the wound that held her attention. Edwards was right. It was odd. A perfect, circular puncture, no wider than her thumb. The edges weren’t torn or ragged. They were cauterized, blackened in a neat ring, as if the weapon had been white-hot. No blood to speak of. “A specialized shiv?” Quinn murmured, crouching beside the body. The smell of scorched fabric and cooked meat was faint but unmistakable. “Heated to what, a thousand degrees?” “Gangs are getting creative, ma’am,” Edwards offered from behind her. “We had that case in Hackney last year, the blades dipped in acid.” Quinn didn’t reply. Her eyes roamed the scene. This wasn’t a gang killing. The stalls weren’t for selling knock-off trainers or counterfeit pills. On one overturned table, a scattering of dark, crystalline powder glittered like crushed obsidian. Beside it lay a bundle of what looked like desiccated newts tied with silver wire. Another stall had remnants of smashed glass vials, releasing a cloying, floral scent that warred with the station’s damp decay. This was something else. A marketplace, yes, but not one she’d ever encountered in eighteen years on the force. She checked her watch, the worn leather strap a familiar comfort against her wrist. 02:14. Her gut tightened with a familiar cold dread, a phantom echo of another strange scene, another unexplained death. Three years ago. The night she’d lost Morris. “Anything else?” she asked, her voice flat. “Just this.” Edwards pointed with his pen toward a small object lying a few feet from the victim’s outstretched hand. “Probably junk, but it was near the body.” Quinn moved closer. It was a brass compass, small enough to fit in her palm. A patina of verdigris coated its casing, but the glass was clear. She nudged it gently with a gloved finger. The face wasn't marked with the usual cardinal directions. Instead, it was etched with a spiral of delicate, interlocking sigils she didn’t recognize. The needle, a sliver of dark, polished metal, wasn’t pointing north. It quivered, aimed directly at a dark, gaping service tunnel further down the tracks. “Steampunk nonsense,” Edwards said. “There’s a whole subculture. Probably sold it right here.” Maybe. But the way the needle trembled, alive with some unseen purpose, resonated with the wrongness of the place. She stood, making a mental note to have it bagged separately. “Witnesses?” “The two kids who found him. They’re upstairs. Scared out of their minds. And…” He hesitated. “There’s one other. A young woman. We found her down the far end of the platform, hiding behind a maintenance locker.” Quinn’s gaze sharpened. “Hiding.” “Claims she was here doing research. For the British Museum, she says. Ancient marketplaces or some such.” “Bring her to me.” While Edwards went to fetch her, Quinn completed her circuit of the scene. Nothing made sense in the neat, orderly way a crime scene was supposed to. There was no sign of a struggle around the body. The stalls were smashed, but their contents weren’t stolen, just destroyed. It felt less like a robbery and more like a tantrum. A very specific, very violent one. Edwards returned with the woman. She was small, engulfed in a thick coat, with a riot of curly red hair escaping her knitted hat. Round glasses perched on a freckled nose. She clutched the strap of a worn leather satchel to her chest like a shield. She looked like a lost university student, not a hardened criminal. “This is Eva Kowalski,” Edwards said. Quinn fixed the woman with a hard stare. “Detective Inspector Quinn. You’re a research assistant at the British Museum?” The woman, Eva, nodded. Her green eyes were wide, but there was a sharp intelligence in them that belied her frightened posture. “That’s right. I specialize in the history of unsanctioned commerce. This station has been rumored to host… pop-up markets… for decades. I was documenting the space.” Her alibi was smooth. Too smooth. “Did you a see a pop-up market here tonight, Ms. Kowalski?” Eva tucked a stray red curl behind her left ear. A nervous tic. “No. I mean, it looks like there might have been one. But when I got here, it was… like this. Empty. Quiet.” “You came alone? To a derelict tube station in the middle of the night?” Quinn let the question hang in the cold air. “My research is important. And I take precautions.” Her hand tightened on her satchel. Quinn’s gaze dropped to the bag. It was stuffed, bulging with the rectangular shapes of books. “What did you see?” “Nothing. I heard a noise, a crash. I got scared, and I hid. Then your officers arrived.” She tucked the same strand of hair behind her ear again. A tell. A definite tell. Quinn stepped closer, lowering her voice. “You and I both know that’s not the whole truth. A man is dead. He was killed with a weapon that burns through flesh. The market stalls weren’t selling DVDs, they were selling… curiosities. And you just happened to be here, researching.” Eva’s freckled complexion paled. She swallowed hard, her throat working. “I don’t know anything about a dead man.” Quinn held her gaze for a long moment, letting the silence stretch. This girl knew. She was terrified, but she knew. It was there, behind the glasses and the academic cover story. Quinn had seen that look before. It was the look of someone who had peered into the same shadows that had swallowed her partner. She turned away from Eva, her mind racing. The wound. The strange goods. The compass with its sigils and its errant needle. The needle. It was still pointing. Not at the tunnel, she now realized. It was pointing *through* the tunnel. It was pointing at Eva Kowalski. Quinn walked back to where the small brass object lay. “Bag this for analysis,” she said to the nearest forensics officer, but as he bent down, she added, “On second thought, I’ll take it myself. Special handling.” Before he could object, she slipped a small evidence bag from her pocket, used her gloved fingers to pick up the compass, and sealed it. The moment it was in her hand, she felt a faint, almost imperceptible vibration through the plastic, a low hum of energy that made the hairs on her arm stand up. She slid it into her coat pocket. It was a flagrant breach of protocol, but protocol hadn’t helped her with Morris. Protocol was for a world that made sense. She turned back to Eva, who watched her with a new kind of fear in her eyes. The fear of being understood. “We’ll need a formal statement, Ms. Kowalski,” Quinn said, her voice quiet but carrying the weight of an iron girder. “Down at the station. We’ll talk all about your research. About unsanctioned commerce. About everything you didn’t see tonight.” Edwards looked at her, confused by the shift in tone, by the pocketing of evidence. He saw a drug den, a weird weapon, a scared witness. Quinn saw the edges of something else. A world hidden in the cracks of her own, operating by rules she was only just beginning to grasp. And this red-haired, freckled academic, clutching her bag of books, was standing right on the border.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
73.8220% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1528
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"gently"
1"slightly"
2"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.6440% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1528
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"crystalline"
count1
1
word"resonated"
count1
2
word"trembled"
count1
3
word"quivered"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"dancing"
count1
6
word"echo"
count1
7
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"crystalline"
1"resonated"
2"trembled"
3"quivered"
4"weight"
5"dancing"
6"echo"
7"etched"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences117
matches
0"was terrified"
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences117
filterMatches
0"look"
1"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences136
matches
0"had that case"
1"seen that look"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean38.97
std26.54
cv0.681
sampleLengths
084
149
213
349
439
559
664
727
823
991
1041
117
1228
1383
1413
1531
1637
174
1817
194
2065
2157
226
2319
2454
2511
2635
2723
2814
2920
3033
3148
3218
3356
3447
35122
3622
3739
3868
99.1453% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences117
matches
0"were cauterized"
1"was etched"
2"was supposed"
3"were smashed"
4"was stuffed"
5"was terrified"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs193
matches
0"was murmuring"
1"wasn’t pointing"
2"was pointing"
3"was pointing"
4"was standing"
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1159
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.030198446937014668
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.008628127696289905
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences136
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences136
mean11.18
std8.22
cv0.735
sampleLengths
013
123
29
318
421
522
627
74
89
95
108
1123
129
134
1439
159
169
173
1815
1913
2010
2114
229
233
243
259
266
2715
285
299
3012
316
3210
3313
343
355
365
3710
3814
3915
4020
414
4215
4314
441
4518
463
475
487
4920
62.7160% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.4074074074074074
totalSentences135
uniqueOpeners55
18.7500% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"he said, nodding (say, nod)"
1"murmured (murmur)"
2"Edwards offered from behind her (offer)"
3"she said to the nearest forensics officer, but as he bent down, she added, Before he could object, she slipped a small evidence bag from her pocket, used her gloved fingers to pick up the compass, and sealed it (say bend down, add, object, slip use pick up seal)"
4"Quinn said, her voice quiet but carrying the weight of an iron girder (say, carry)"
88.3575%