Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQTYTQQB94R1ASC2P7JN5F

Run Details

Duration:
16.7s
Cost:
$0.018584
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The wan, yellow tube platform lights flickered unevenly over broken tiles and forgotten signage. Detective Harlow Quinn ducked beneath a cobwebbed sign that read “Camden Town – Northbound,” now half-submerged in shadow and dripping water. Her footsteps echoed along the abandoned platform, and something metallic twisted beneath her boot—a bottle cap, flattened and rusted, nothing more sinister than the world above would expect. But the air down here felt staler than mere neglect and cold in a way that clung to her wrists and the back of her neck. Beyond the discarded wrappers and graffiti, a pair of uniforms stood by the mouth of a service tunnel, shifting their weight from foot to foot. A third silhouette waited just beyond the wan light: DS Patel, notebook in hand, brows ruched, the edge of his mouth unsettled. “Detective Quinn,” Patel called, his tone both greeting and warning. “You got here quick.” “I was told it couldn't wait.” Quinn's movements were measured, spare—military precision in every stride, each gesture pared down to intent. She stopped an arm’s length from Patel and scanned the platform. It was empty except for the officers, the sullen shape of a forensics tent, and a figure slumped beside a row of cracked tiles. Blood arced in a spatterspray from the wall behind the body, stippling soot and something crusted and yellow. The forensics tech, bent over the corpse, looked up. “We’ve just started, ma’am,” she murmured. Quinn’s gaze sharpened. The victim—a man, early thirties, dressed expensively but not recently—was splayed on his stomach, coat askew, one arm twisted underneath his body. His face was slack in the false peace of the freshly dead. Patel cleared his throat. “ID in the wallet matches one Sebastian Kore. Banker. No outstanding warrants. According to Transport Authority, there’s been no official train through this service line in over a decade.” His voice lowered. “So, what the bloody hell was he doing down here?” Quinn’s boots scraped as she knelt. Out of habit, she checked her battered watch—nine minutes past nine—and then snapped on a glove. “That’s what we’re going to find out,” she said. The man’s left wrist bore a pattern of faint bruises, round and parallel, inconsistent with the violence that had painted the tiles: not defensive wounds, perhaps restraint. Quinn leaned in, examining calluses at the knuckles, neatly manicured nails, a thin dusting of white powder at the edge of the nostrils. Not coke—luminous, faintly iridescent, clinging to skin. She scraped a sample into a bag, scribbled a note, and glanced up. Patel crouched beside her. “I’m taking this for a hasty robbery gone bad,” he said, as if reciting for the tape. “Some junkie, maybe two, saw a mark with a fancy watch and wallet, dragged him down here for privacy, got more violent than planned.” Quinn shook her head. “Doesn’t fit. Bruises like these—restraint, not a scuffle. Blood pattern’s wrong, too. See how it’s higher up the wall?” She traced the arc with her gaze. “He was standing—or kneeling—against it.” Patel hesitated. “Execution?” “Maybe, but look at his shoes.” She gestured. Expensive Italian leather, soles blistered with some sticky residue, as if he’d walked through oil and dust. “There’s a track leading from the tunnel—that service corridor.” She pointed. “He isn’t the first down here tonight.” Patel straightened up, shoulders squaring as if to armor himself against her insistence. “Security caught nothing; these tunnels are sealed at the street.” Quinn inhaled. Something rancid and metallic threaded the air beneath the sickly light. She pivoted her focus, studying the wall above the blood. Amid the graffiti and paint-rubbed adverts, a sigil had been etched, half hidden behind a torn map of the Underground. Recent—lines still faintly raw, chalky-white. Shapes she’d seen once before, years ago, in the folder DS Morris had thrust at her just weeks before he’d vanished. She ran a gloved finger above it, feeling the bone-deep chill. “See this?” Quinn said harshly, drawing Patel’s attention. “Get a close-up. I want analysis before the uniforms start cleaning.” He shrugged, “Just looks like the usual occult shite. Kids with too much time.” The forensics tech, overhearing, cleared her throat. “There’s more. In the tunnel.” Quinn’s pulse kicked up. She rose, waving Patel after her, and ducked through the archway past the crime scene tape. The service tunnel felt colder still, as if the dark pressed against her skin. A set of shallow footprints marked the dust—one set, then two, intersecting. She crouched again, running a hand along the wall. Further along, tucked behind a jumble of abandoned signal boxes, the forensics tech knelt over a small scattering of objects: a polished brass compass, caked with verdigris and etched in runes that did not belong to any mundane mapmaker; a bone token carved into the shape of a crow’s foot; and a wallet, half-open. Quinn snatched the compass, feeling its unnatural weight, its face prickling beneath the glove. The needle spun, pausing not at north but at nothing visible, then jittering, as if it hungered for something just out of reach. Patel peered at it over her shoulder. “That thing yours?” “It isn’t police issue.” Quinn’s mouth compressed to a line. Protective sigils circled the compass face, most in languages she barely recognized—old faiths, older fears. “Log them,” she barked to the CSU. She lingered over the bone token, then slipped it into an evidence bag. Patel watched her, skeptical. “What are you thinking, Harlow?” He knew better than to call her ma’am when she moved like this, on a trail only she seemed to see. She squinted into the tunnel’s gloom. “He comes down here with these.” She ticked off the facts. “Not alone—two sets of prints. They meet, not struggle. Someone pins him, binds his wrists, pushes him to the wall, draws that sign. Something's exchanged—see the residue on his fingers? Like he grabbed at something chalky, crushed it.” Patel shook his head, exasperated. “That’s not much. And how does it end in a skull fracture?” Quinn pointed to the edge of the bloodstain again. “Look here. No cast-off, no hesitation marks, just the high velocity spatter. One clean blow from behind, delivered with precision.” She stood, trying to feel the rhythm of the space. “Execution, yes, but ritual. Not random. The killer left those for a reason.” She nodded at the compass and token. Patel frowned, scanning the walls. “So you think this is… what, some cult nonsense?” “Not nonsense. I’ve seen one of these,” Quinn said, holding up the compass, “in a folder—the Lambert case. Supernatural black market.” She faced him, her brown eyes dark and unyielding. “The Veil Market. Moves location every lunar cycle—every full moon.” She tilted the compass, watching the needle jerk anew. “This would point to its entrance tonight—if we knew how to read it.” For a moment, Patel’s skepticism faltered, hesitance beneath his bluster. “You’re saying a banker came down here to buy… what? A spell? Drugs? Bought the wrong thing and his dealer got creative?” Quinn weighed the compass in her palm, feeling the cold weight of the case closing in. “Or he was followed. Or he owed more than money.” Her eyes flicked back to the wall sigil—the half-familiar threat, the echo of something Morris had told her, voice frantic, hands trembling for the first time in sixteen years. Patel’s phone vibrated; he checked it, grimaced. “Press is circling upstairs. Uniforms say a girl—redhead, glasses, loitering at the mouth—was asking for a ‘bone token.’ Sounds mad to me.” “Don’t let her leave,” Quinn said instantly. “Anyone asking about a bone token tonight is no civilian.” Patel nodded once, then jogged toward the spiral stairs. The tunnel grew quieter in his absence. Quinn moved back through the scene, her thoughts working methodically: Bruises, not wild violence but controlled. Tokens left behind, but the killer took the time to conceal the entrance. Not robbery, never random blow. Words chimed in her mind, things Morris once said—about “places that hide themselves,” about compasses that point not north but to elsewhere, if you know what to feed them. She brushed the runes on the compass with her thumb. Protective sigils. Not for the possessor’s safety, maybe—no, protection from detection. For those that walk between. The luminous powder pooled on the corpse’s skin refracted the light, shifting color faintly, wrong for any street drug she knew. Like shimmerdust, the file had said—Collectors’ slang for something harvested from beyond. She forced herself to breathe and ran through the scene again. Banker down here, with a token and a compass, the right items to enter a place that shouldn’t exist. Killed before he could reach it, or because he’d reached too far. Above, a faint shout—Patel’s voice, rough and urgent. Quinn pocketed the compass, covered the sigil with evidence tape, and rose, resolve chiseling her face to stone. The scene was all wrong, and she’d be damned if she let another case slip into the dark, unanswered. She straightened, military precision in every bone, and strode toward the echo of voices, the trainless dark pressing in behind her like a second skin.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
72.7273% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Quinn said instantly [instantly]"
1"Words chimed in her mind, things Morris once said—about about compasses that point not north but to elsewhere, if you know what to feed them. [once elsewhere]"
100.0000% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1551
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
80.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Patel"
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
3.2882% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1551
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"luminous"
count2
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"flicked"
count1
3
word"sinister"
count1
4
word"unsettled"
count1
5
word"weight"
count3
6
word"footsteps"
count1
7
word"echo"
count2
8
word"echoed"
count1
9
word"etched"
count2
highlights
0"luminous"
1"flickered"
2"flicked"
3"sinister"
4"unsettled"
5"weight"
6"footsteps"
7"echo"
8"echoed"
9"etched"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences92
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences92
filterMatches
0"know"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences109
matches
0"draws that sign"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean39.95
std22.28
cv0.558
sampleLengths
089
147
214
374
415
537
646
788
813
945
1035
113
1243
1323
1469
1530
1614
1712
1855
1954
2037
2110
2232
2343
2455
2517
2659
2714
2862
2932
3055
3129
3217
3379
3459
3542
3645
3725
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences92
matches
0"was splayed"
1"been etched"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs195
matches(empty)
94.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1131
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"metallic twisted beneath her"
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.03183023872679045
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.013262599469496022
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences109
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences109
mean13.93
std9.1
cv0.653
sampleLengths
014
121
228
326
425
522
610
74
821
911
1024
1118
129
136
143
1522
1612
174
1832
1910
206
2116
229
2327
2423
257
2613
274
2817
2924
304
3126
325
332
341
358
3617
3711
387
3913
4010
412
4211
4310
4420
455
4621
4711
488
4911
77.9817% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.46788990825688076
totalSentences109
uniqueOpeners51
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount9
fancyTags
0"Detective Harlow Quinn ducked beneath a cobwebbed sign that read now half-submerged in shadow and dripping water. (duck cobweb read submerge drip)"
1"Patel called, his tone both greeting and warning (call, warn)"
2"she murmured (murmur)"
3"he said, as if reciting for the tape (say, recite)"
4"He shrugged, (shrug)"
5"she barked to the CSU (bark)"
6"Quinn said, holding up the compass, She faced him, her brown eyes dark and unyielding (say, holding up face unyield)"
7"Quinn said instantly (say instantly)"
8"Words chimed in her mind, things Morris once said—about about compasses that point not north but to elsewhere, if you know what to feed them. (chime once say—do point not know feed)"
83.9998%