Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQV1H88SSF4YD8XE00459A

Run Details

Duration:
1m 32s
Cost:
$0.059810
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Aurora slid the last deadbolt aside and cracked the door the width of her palm. Lucien Moreau filled the gap like a shadow dressed in money. For a beat she thought her mind had simply reached for the worst possible face, the one it kept filed away for moments of weakness. Rain slicked his platinum hair darker at the roots, and droplets clung to the lapels of his charcoal suit as if the weather had tried to mark him and failed. His ivory-handled cane rested in one gloved hand, the other loose at his side. One eye caught the hallway light in a hard amber; the other drank it down, black and unreadable. “Aurora,” he said, as if he’d said her name yesterday instead of months ago. Her grip tightened on the door edge until the wood bit her fingertips. Behind her, Eva’s flat smelled of old paper and curry spice rising through the floorboards; the living room was a siege of books and scrolls, notes tacked and taped and stacked in precarious towers. Ptolemy the tabby sat on the radiator like a small judge, tail flicking once, unimpressed by the visitor. Aurora’s chest did that stupid thing it had always done around him—tighten first, then heat, then anger rushing in to cover it. “You’re at the wrong door,” she said. Her voice came out steady. She hated that she was proud of that. Lucien’s gaze dropped briefly, not to her mouth like it used to, but to her left wrist, where the crescent scar peeked from the cuff of her sleeve. A familiar, infuriating tenderness softened his face for half a second. Then it was gone. “No,” he said quietly. “I’m not.” Of course he’d found her. He always found what he wanted; it was his whole profession. Fixer. Broker. The Frenchman who knew everyone’s secrets and wore his own like a perfectly cut suit. Aurora kept the chain on and opened the door another inch, enough to let cold hallway air curl into the flat. “How did you get past the building’s front lock?” Lucien’s mouth tilted, humorless. “The same way you did. With hands.” “You don’t have a key.” “I wasn’t invited.” “That’s… the point.” His amber eye narrowed. “Rory.” The nickname hit like fingers on a bruise. No one else said it quite like him—half indulgence, half ownership. She hated that her stomach turned over. “You don’t get to use that,” she said. His gaze held hers, unblinking. “I’m not here to hurt you.” She barked a laugh that had no amusement in it. “You did a fine job of that without trying.” Silence stretched. In it, she heard the soft scratch of Ptolemy grooming his paw, the far-off slam of a downstairs door, the wet hiss of tires on Brick Lane. Lucien shifted his weight, cane tip making a gentle tap on the worn hallway tile. The sound threaded into her nerves. “May I come in?” “No.” “Then may I speak with you?” “We’re speaking now.” His nostrils flared once, like he’d swallowed something bitter. “On complicated terms.” “You mean on the terms you left me with,” she said. He blinked, and for a flash she saw it—the man under the polish, the one who’d once sat on her windowsill smoking and telling her the city’s supernatural veins ran beneath the Tube lines like blood under skin. The one who’d smiled like she was a problem worth solving, not a person worth loving. Or maybe those had always been the same thing to him. A sound came from inside the flat: the soft, telling click of a book being knocked from a stack. Ptolemy jumped down, padded over, and pressed his head against Aurora’s calf as if to remind her she had gravity, she had a body, she had a life that existed outside this doorway. Lucien’s black eye flicked past her into the cluttered room. “Eva isn’t home.” It wasn’t a question. Aurora’s spine stiffened. “No.” His gaze returned to her face. “So it’s only you and the cat.” “And three deadbolts,” she said. “Which I’ll be sliding back if you don’t leave.” A smile ghosted over his mouth, brief and sharp. “Still practical. Still threatening.” “Still alive,” she shot back. “Despite your best efforts.” He absorbed that without flinching, but something tightened in his jaw. “Open the door, Aurora.” Her breath caught. Not because of his tone—she’d heard him command rooms full of dangerous people with less. Because there was an edge under it now, not dominance. Urgency. “No.” Lucien leaned closer, and the hallway light caught the planes of his face: the clean line of cheekbone, the pale scar near his ear she’d once traced with her thumb when she’d thought he was sleeping. Rainwater slid from his hair to his collar. “Someone followed me,” he said. Aurora went still. “Who?” His amber eye met hers. “Not human.” Her mind ran through Eva’s notes scattered across the coffee table—sigils, names, half-translated Latin. The supernatural world loved to leak into the human one, especially in East London. And Lucien moved through it like it owed him rent. “You brought that here?” she hissed. “I didn’t choose here,” he said, and there was heat now, the first crack in his impeccable calm. “I chose you.” A stupid, treacherous part of her wanted to believe the sentence meant what it sounded like. Another part remembered how he’d left—one message that read I’m sorry, and then nothing. Weeks of silence that had scraped her raw. He’d vanished like he’d never existed, as if whatever they’d been was a whim he’d outgrown. Aurora tightened the chain and stared him down. “You don’t get to choose me now. You forfeited that when you disappeared.” “I disappeared so you wouldn’t be collateral,” he said. She flinched before she could stop herself, anger spiking to hide the hurt. “Collateral. Right. That’s what I was. A risk to manage.” His eyes sharpened, and for a moment the black one seemed deeper than pigment, like a door cracked open onto something that didn’t belong in this hallway. “No.” The denial came out rough. Ptolemy made a small, questioning chirp and sat, tail wrapped neatly around his paws, watching Lucien as if cataloging him. Aurora swallowed. The chain felt suddenly flimsy. She pictured something in the stairwell behind him, listening, waiting for the door to open wider. “How do I know you’re not lying?” she said. Lucien’s gaze dropped to her hand on the door edge. “Because you’re still alive,” he said softly. “Because you’re standing in front of me instead of slamming the door and letting whatever is behind me take its time.” Her throat tightened. He knew her. He knew that she would never—could never—walk away from someone in danger, even someone who’d hurt her. It was the most infuriating kind of intimacy. Aurora listened. Past Lucien’s shoulder, the stairwell was dim and smelled of damp plaster. Somewhere below, a faint metallic scrape sounded, like something dragging along a banister too lightly to be a human hand. Her pulse jumped. Lucien heard it too. His grip on the cane shifted, knuckles whitening under the glove. The polite mask slid just enough for her to glimpse the predator underneath, coiled and controlled. “Rory,” he murmured, and this time the nickname didn’t feel like ownership. It felt like a plea. She hated herself for hesitating. Then she hated herself more for not hesitating longer. Aurora unhooked the chain and yanked the door open. Lucien slipped inside with a smoothness that suggested he’d practiced entering places he shouldn’t be. The air changed with him, a subtle pressure like the room had acknowledged a new kind of creature. He turned sideways automatically, bringing the cane in after him, and Aurora slammed the door shut, throwing the deadbolts back in place with sharp, decisive clicks. One. Two. Three. She leaned her forehead briefly against the wood, gathering herself, then turned. Lucien stood in the cramped entryway, rainwater darkening the shoulder of his suit. He looked out of place among Eva’s chaos, like a blade laid across a scholar’s desk. His gaze took in the warding symbols Eva had chalked faintly along the skirting board, the strings of garlic that Eva insisted were “traditional,” the open notebook on the floor with frantic handwriting. “You’ve been working,” he said. “Eva’s been working,” Aurora corrected. “I’m just here to make sure she eats something that isn’t instant noodles.” “And yet you opened the door,” he said, and something flickered in his eyes—gratitude, maybe, or the dangerous sort of hope that made people foolish. Aurora crossed her arms, forcing distance into her posture even in a room that didn’t have much of it. “Don’t read into it.” Lucien’s mouth quirked. “I wouldn’t dare.” Ptolemy approached Lucien with feline arrogance, sniffed his trouser leg, then, inexplicably, rubbed against it. The betrayal stung. Lucien looked down, surprised, then crouched with an elegance that didn’t belong in a cluttered flat. He held out two fingers. Ptolemy headbutted them. “You smell like rain and trouble,” Aurora said. Lucien glanced up at her from his crouch. “And you smell like ink,” he said. “And exhaustion.” She hated how intimate that was, how true. She’d been sleeping on Eva’s sofa for three nights because the research had turned ugly and Eva had started double-checking locks twice, then three times. Aurora had stayed because she’d promised, because she knew what it was to feel hunted. Lucien rose. He was close enough now that she could see the fine line of water at his hairline, the faint shadow of stubble he never seemed to have in daylight. She remembered the last time he’d been this close: a doorway too, his hand braced above her head, his mouth almost on hers, whispering, Don’t trust anyone who offers you kindness for free. She’d trusted him anyway. “What is it?” she asked, forcing her voice to stay cool. “Why are you really here?” Lucien’s gaze moved over her face like he was relearning it—bright blue eyes that saw too much, the straight black hair tucked behind one ear, the set of her jaw that meant she was holding herself together by sheer will. His expression softened, then hardened again as if softness was a liability. “I need somewhere to lie low,” he said. “For an hour. Maybe two. And I need you to listen without throwing something at my head.” “I make no promises,” Aurora said. A brief, genuine smile crossed his face, quick as sunlight between clouds. It hit her low in the chest. She’d missed that smile more than she’d admitted to anyone, including herself. Then his eyes sobered. “There’s a name on Eva’s notes,” he said, nodding toward the living room. “Avaros.” Aurora’s stomach dropped. His demon father’s realm. The word that had always been a wall between them, even when their bodies had found ways around it. Eva had never said it out loud in front of Aurora, but she’d written it. She’d circled it twice. Aurora’s mouth went dry. “How do you know what’s on her notes?” Lucien didn’t look away. “Because I’ve been watching,” he admitted. “Not you. Her research. It’s dangerous.” “And you didn’t think to mention that before now?” Her voice sharpened. “Before she started drawing circles and translating things she shouldn’t?” “I tried,” he said, and something in his tone made her pause. “I sent messages through people you trust.” Aurora’s brows drew together. “No one—” Then she remembered. Little comments from Yu-Fei about “a well-dressed man” asking if Aurora was safe. Silas mentioning someone had paid off a tab anonymously “for the girl upstairs,” even though Aurora didn’t live upstairs from Silas anymore, not this week. Hints she’d dismissed as coincidence because the alternative would have been… this. “You’ve been near,” she said, the accusation turning into something softer against her will. “All this time.” Lucien’s jaw flexed. “Near enough to intervene if necessary. Far enough that you could pretend you were free of me.” Aurora stared at him, anger and relief tangling until she couldn’t tell which one she wanted to act on. “You don’t get to decide what I pretend,” she said, but her voice wavered on the last word. Lucien stepped closer. The air between them tightened, charged. His scent—clean soap under rain and something darker she couldn’t name—flooded her memory. She forced herself not to lean in. “I didn’t come for forgiveness,” he said. “I came because there is something in London that wants me, and it will happily take Eva—or you—in my place if I make it easy.” Aurora’s heart hammered. “What is it?” Lucien’s black eye seemed to catch on the chalked wards along the floor, as if assessing whether they’d hold. “A collector,” he said. “One that doesn’t bargain. It counts debts in blood.” Aurora’s fingers curled against her arms, nails biting through fabric. “And you owe it.” Lucien met her gaze. “My father did,” he said. “And I inherited the interest.” The confession sat heavy in the room. Ptolemy flicked his tail once and retreated to the sofa, as if he’d decided the human drama was above his pay grade. Aurora forced air into her lungs. She could throw Lucien out. She could tell him to take his debts and his beautiful lies elsewhere. She could protect Eva by making sure Lucien wasn’t anywhere near this flat when the thing hunting him came calling. But she looked at him—at the water on his shoulders, the tension in his posture, the way he kept himself rigid as if he expected a blow—and she remembered the night she’d told him about Evan, about Cardiff, about the way a person could make you feel like your own skin wasn’t yours. Lucien had listened without interruption, then had said, very softly, No one owns you. He’d meant it. She’d believed him. “Show me,” Aurora said, though she wasn’t entirely sure what she meant. Lucien’s brows lifted. “Show you what?” “The truth,” she said, and her voice steadied as she leaned into the only thing that had ever reliably saved her: clarity. “Whatever you didn’t tell me when you left. Whatever you think you’re protecting me from. I’m done with half-answers.” Lucien stared at her for a long moment. In that stare was everything they’d never said—the nights that had blurred into mornings, the laughter she’d tried not to like, the way he’d touched her as if he was memorizing her for exile. The hurt he’d left like a locked door she’d kept rattling even after she’d sworn she was done. When he spoke, his voice was low. “If I tell you,” he said, “you’ll hate me.” Aurora’s throat tightened. “Try me.” Lucien’s hand rose, slow, as if asking permission. He didn’t touch her. He hovered his fingers near her left wrist, near the scar, near the pulse that jumped under her skin. “You already do,” he said, softly. Aurora’s breath caught. His fingers finally made contact—barely, a brush of glove against skin—so light it was almost nothing. The contact burned anyway, because it was him, because it was familiar, because it was proof he was real and here and not a memory she could control. “I don’t know what I feel,” she admitted, hating the honesty even as it freed something in her chest. “I just know it’s… still there.” Lucien’s amber eye softened. “Yes,” he said, like that was the one fact he’d never doubted. Outside the door, in the hallway, something scraped again—closer this time. Deliberate. Patient. Lucien’s hand dropped from her wrist. The moment snapped, but the warmth lingered on her skin like a mark. “We don’t have long,” he said. Aurora swallowed hard, staring at the door, then back at him. “Then start talking,” she said. “And this time—don’t disappear on me.” Lucien’s gaze held hers, fierce and intent. “I can’t promise you that,” he said. “But I can promise you this: if it reaches for you, it goes through me first.” Aurora’s heart lurched at the simple, brutal sincerity of it. “Lucien,” she whispered, the name tasting like a warning and a want. He stepped closer, so close she could feel the heat he’d brought in from the wet night. His voice dropped. “Rory,” he said again, and this time it sounded like an apology he’d been carrying in his mouth for months. The scrape outside became a soft tap—tap—tap against the wood, as if someone with endless patience had begun to count their deadbolts.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
40.3101% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags43
adverbTagCount12
adverbTags
0"he said, as if he’d said her name yesterday instead of months ago [instead]"
1"he said quietly [quietly]"
2"he said softly [softly]"
3"he murmured, and this time the nickname didn’t feel like ownership [like]"
4"His gaze took in the warding symbols Eva had chalked faintly along the skirting board, the strings of garlic that Eva insisted were the open notebook on the floor with frantic handwriting. [faintly]"
5"he said, and something flickered in his eyes—gratitude, maybe, or the dangerous sort of hope that made people foolish [maybe, sort of]"
6"Silas mentioning someone had paid off a tab anonymously even though Aurora didn’t live upstairs from Silas anymore, not this week. [anonymously anymore]"
7"Aurora said, though she wasn’t entirely sure what she meant [entirely]"
8"she said, and her voice steadied as she leaned into the only thing that had ever reliably saved her: clarity [only ever reliably]"
9"he said, softly [softly]"
10"he said, like that was the one fact he’d never doubted [like]"
11"he said again, and this time it sounded like an apology he’d been carrying in his mouth for months [again]"
67.6608% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount2783
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"happily"
count1
1
adverb"lightly"
count1
2
adverb"perfectly"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count3
4
adverb"suddenly"
count1
5
adverb"really"
count1
6
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"happily"
1"lightly"
2"perfectly"
3"softly"
4"suddenly"
5"really"
6"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
74.8473% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount2783
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"lurched"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"flicked"
count2
3
word"wavered"
count1
4
word"unreadable"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"lurched"
1"flickered"
2"flicked"
3"wavered"
4"unreadable"
5"weight"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences213
matches
0"was proud"
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences213
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount6
totalSentences267
matches
0"hated that she"
1"hated that her"
2"use that,” she"
3"brought that here"
4"message that read"
5"knew that she"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs126
mean21.85
std17.25
cv0.789
sampleLengths
015
111
287
314
465
522
620
743
86
933
1030
1111
125
133
143
155
1626
178
1811
1919
2029
2125
221
236
243
2512
2611
2765
2852
2913
304
314
3213
3314
3413
359
3615
3729
381
3944
405
414
427
4338
446
4521
4654
4721
489
4923
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences213
matches
0"was gone"
1"being knocked"
2"been was"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs443
matches
0"was sleeping"
1"was relearning was holding"
2"was memorizing"
98.9615% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount2258
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount93
adverbRatio0.04118689105403012
lyAdverbCount22
lyAdverbRatio0.00974313551815766
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences267
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences267
mean10.31
std8.35
cv0.81
sampleLengths
015
111
225
330
414
518
614
713
834
918
1022
117
125
138
1428
1511
164
174
182
195
2011
211
221
2315
2421
259
264
277
285
293
303
314
321
338
3411
357
368
375
386
3910
409
412
4227
4315
446
454
461
476
483
499
45.1311% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.27340823970037453
totalSentences267
uniqueOpeners73
47.0930% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags43
fancyCount22
fancyTags
0"he said, as if he’d said her name yesterday instead of months ago (say, say)"
1"he said quietly (say quietly)"
2"she shot back (shoot back)"
3"hissed (hiss)"
4"he said, and there was heat now, the first crack in his impeccable calm (say, be)"
5"he said softly (say softly)"
6"he murmured, and this time the nickname didn’t feel like ownership (murmur, time does not feel like)"
7"His gaze took in the warding symbols Eva had chalked faintly along the skirting board, the strings of garlic that Eva insisted were the open notebook on the floor with frantic handwriting. (take chalk faintly insist be)"
8"Aurora corrected (correct)"
9"he said, and something flickered in his eyes—gratitude, maybe, or the dangerous sort of hope that made people foolish (say, flicker make)"
10"he said, nodding toward the living room (say, nod)"
11"he admitted (admit)"
12"he said, and something in his tone made her pause (say, make)"
13"Silas mentioning someone had paid off a tab anonymously even though Aurora didn’t live upstairs from Silas anymore, not this week. (mention pay off does do not)"
14"she said, the accusation turning into something softer against her will (say, turn will)"
15"she said, but her voice wavered on the last word (say, waver)"
16"Aurora said, though she wasn’t entirely sure what she meant (say, does not entirely sure mean)"
17"she said, and her voice steadied as she leaned into the only thing that had ever reliably saved her: clarity (say, steady lean ever reliably save)"
18"she admitted, hating the honesty even as it freed something in her chest (admit, hate free)"
19"he said, like that was the one fact he’d never doubted (say, be does not never doubt)"
86.7061%