Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQVCKXZSRP69V4DFV0DJD6

Run Details

Duration:
1m 2s
Cost:
$0.007207
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The morning mist clung to the trees of Richmond Park as Aurora Carter followed the silver-haired woman between ancient oaks. Rory clutched the Heartstone pendant beneath her jacket, its familiar warmth a strange comfort as she ventured deeper into the wilds of the park with Isolde and Nyx. The Shade moved silently beside her, their form shifting between solid and shadow with each step, while Isolde walked ahead, her silver hair catching stray beams of sunlight. "We're almost there," Isolde said, her voice carrying a musical quality that seemed out of place in the ordinary woods. "The boundary draws near." Rory had never been this far into Richmond Park before. Most Londoners stuck to the main paths, but Isolde had led them off-trail nearly an hour ago, into areas where human feet rarely trod. The air grew stiller the farther they walked, and Rory noticed the city sounds had faded away, replaced by an unnatural silence. Then she saw them. Seven massive oak standing stones, each taller than a person, arranged in a rough circle. They were covered in moss and ancient carvings that seemed to shimmer when viewed from the corner of her eye. "The markers," Nyx whispered, their voice like wind through leaves. "The Veil is thin here." Isolde stopped before the stones, turning to face them. "Beyond lies what you seek. But know this—time flows differently in my home. What seems hours may be minutes, or what seems minutes may be days. The Grove has its own rhythm." Rory swallowed, her hand tightening around the pendant. It had grown warmer as they approached the stones, just as Isolde had predicted it would near places where the Veil was thin. "Ready?" Isolde asked, her pale lavender eyes searching Rory's face. Rory nodded, trying to project the cool-headedness she was known for, despite the flutter of nerves in her stomach. "Let's do this." Isolde stepped between two of the standing stones, and as she did, the air seemed to ripple. For a moment, Rory saw double—Isolde both as she was and as something more, something ethereal and glowing. Then the moment passed, and Isolde was gone, having stepped through the invisible barrier. Nyx turned to Rory, their faintly glowing violet eyes meeting hers. "After you." Rory took a deep breath and followed Isolde, passing between the ancient oaks. The sensation was like walking through a curtain of warm water—pressure against her skin, a brief moment of disorientation, and then she stepped through into another world entirely. The first thing she noticed was the light. It was golden and soft, as if perpetually late afternoon, though Rory knew it was barely midday back in London. The air smelled different too—sweet with the scent of flowers and something else, something ancient and wild. She stood in a circular clearing, perhaps fifty meters across. Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible colors—blues so deep they seemed almost purple, reds that glowed from within, whites that shimmered like mother-of-pearl. In the center of the clearing stood a magnificent tree, its silver bark gleaming, its branches heavy with blossoms that released glowing pollen into the air. "Welcome to the Grove," Isolde said, gesturing around them. "My home between worlds." Rory turned in a slow circle, taking it all in. The standing stones they had passed through were visible behind them, but on this side, they were covered in intricate carvings that seemed to move when she stared too long. Beyond the stones, the forest looked different—taller, more ancient, with trees that seemed to reach impossible heights. "How is this possible?" Rory asked, her voice hushed with wonder. "The Grove exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae Realm," Isolde explained. "A sanctuary for those like me who can no longer fully belong to either world." Nyx materialized beside them, their shadow form seeming darker against the vibrant colors of the Grove. "The Veil is strong here, yet thin. A paradox only the Fae could create." Rory noticed then that Isolde left no footprints in the soft grass and flowers, despite the fact that Nyx and Rory did. It was a small detail, but unsettling in its way—a reminder that Isolde was not entirely human, not entirely of Rory's world. "Come," Isolde said, beckoning them toward the central tree. "There is something you must see." As they walked across the clearing, Rory noticed the temperature dropping. The Fae-forged blade that Isolde had given her hung in a sheath beneath her jacket, and she could feel its coldness through the fabric—a steady, unnatural chill against her skin. insects buzzed around the flowers, but their hum was different from earthly insects—more musical, almost like tiny bells. The air itself seemed to vibrate with a low thrumming that Rory felt in her bones rather than heard with her ears. When they reached the central tree, Isolde stopped and pointed upward. "Look." High in the branches of the tree, nestled among the glowing blossoms, was what appeared to be a bird's nest—but it was woven from threads of silver and gold, and within it lay three eggs, each about the size of Rory's fist, shimmering with iridescent colors. "What are they?" Rory whispered. "Phoenix eggs," Isolde said. "Rare beyond measure. They only nest in places where the Veil is thin enough for fire magic to seep through from other realms." As if sensing their attention, one of the eggs pulsed with a warm orange light. Rory felt the Heartstone pendant respond, growing hot against her skin. "The pendant knows," Nyx observed, their shadow form stretching slightly toward the tree. "It recognizes a kindred magic." Rory looked down at the pendant, which was now visible outside her jacket, glowing with a soft crimson light that matched the deep red of the phoenix eggs. "What does that mean?" "It means the one who gave you the pendant knew you would come here," Isolde said, her voice tinged with something that might have been admiration. "The Heartstone is forged in Dymas, realm of Gluttony, but it resonates with fire magic. A rare combination." Rory thought of the unknown benefactor who had left the pendant on her doorstep three months ago, wrapped in plain brown paper with no note. She had worn it ever since, drawn to its warmth and comfort, never understanding its significance. A sudden chill swept through the clearing, despite the perpetual golden light. The flowers seemed to droop, and the musical humming of the insects faltered. "Something's wrong," Nyx said, their form becoming more substantial, more opaque. "The Veil is weakening." Isolde's eyes widened. "No. Not now. Not here." Rory felt it too—a strange pulling sensation, as if the air itself was being sucked in a particular direction. She looked toward the edge of the clearing and saw it: a distortion in the air, like heat haze off asphalt, but in the wrong colors—purples and blacks that seemed to swallow light. "A rift," Nyx whispered. "Forming rapidly." Isolde grabbed Rory's arm. "You must close it. Now." "How?" Rory asked, panic rising in her chest. "I don't know how to close a rift between worlds!" "The pendant and the blade," Isolde said urgently. "Use them together. The Heartstone can seal small tears in the Veil, but only when combined with Fae magic." Rory drew the Fae-forged blade from its sheath. The moonsilver metal glowed faintly in the strange light of the Grove, always cold to the touch. The Heartstone pendant was hot now, almost burning against her skin. "Go!" Isolde urged, pushing her toward the distortion. "Before it widens!" Rory ran, Nyx a shadow at her side. As she approached the distortion, she could feel it—a wrongness in the air, a sense of something pressing through from the other side. The air smelled of sulfur and something metallic, like blood. When she was within arm's reach of the distortion, the pendant grew almost painfully hot, and the blade in her hand began to vibrate, humming with a low, musical note. "What do I do?" Rory called out, her voice strained. "Touch the blade to the distortion," Nyx instructed, their voice strained. "Hold the pendant against the hilt. Focus your will—imagine the rift closing, like a door swinging shut." Rory took a deep breath, steadying herself. Cool-headed, intelligent, quick thinking—that's what Eva always said about her. Now was the time to prove it. She stepped forward and pressed the tip of the Fae-forged blade into the distortion. The metal seemed to sink into the air as if into water. At the same time, she pressed the Heartstone pendant against the hilt of the blade. The effect was immediate. A shockwave of energy shot out from the point of contact, knocking Rory backward. She would have fallen if Nyx hadn't caught her, their shadow form solidifying just enough to support her. Before them, the distortion shimmered and pulsed, colors swirling violently. For a moment, Rory thought it would tear wider, but then slowly, incrementally, it began to shrink. As it did, the air in the clearing seemed to right itself—the flowers lifted their heads, the insects resumed their musical humming, the unnatural chill receded. When the rift had closed completely, Rory sagged with relief. The pendant was still warm but no longer painfully hot, and the blade in her hand had stopped vibrating. "You did it," Nyx said, their voice filled with something that might have been wonder. Isolde approached them, her expression unreadable. "That was no ordinary rift," she said, her voice serious. "That was a tear between Earth and Hel." Rory's eyes widened. "Hell? As in—" "As in the realm of demons, yes," Isolde finished. "And someone, or something, was trying to open a doorway." Rory looked down at the Heartstone pendant, now glowing softly in her palm. "But why? And who gave this to me?" Isolde reached out and gently closed Rory's hand around the pendant. "Those are questions we must find answers to," she said. "But now is not the time. The Veil has been disturbed. Others will have felt what happened here. We must prepare." As if in response to her words, the golden light of the Grove began to dim, as if twilight was approaching despite the fact that no time should have passed. Rory looked around at the ancient clearing, at the impossible flowers and the phoenix nest high in the silver tree. She had come seeking answers, but instead had found only more questions. And yet, as she stood there with the Heartstone pendant warm in her hand and the Fae-forged blade cold at her side, she felt a sense of purpose settling over her—a sense that her life as a part-time delivery person was well and truly over, and something far more dangerous and wonderful was just beginning.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
72.7273% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"Isolde said, gesturing around them [around]"
1"Nyx observed, their shadow form stretching slightly toward the tree [slightly]"
2"Nyx said, their form becoming more substantial, more opaque [more more]"
3"Isolde said urgently [urgently]"
67.0872% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1823
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
4
adverb"softly"
count1
5
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
1"gently"
2"slightly"
3"slowly"
4"softly"
5"truly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
56.1163% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1823
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"ethereal"
count1
1
word"sanctuary"
count1
2
word"tinged"
count1
3
word"shimmered"
count2
4
word"gleaming"
count1
5
word"unreadable"
count1
6
word"intricate"
count1
highlights
0"ethereal"
1"sanctuary"
2"tinged"
3"shimmered"
4"gleaming"
5"unreadable"
6"intricate"
66.6667% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences99
matches(empty)
95.0812% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount13
narrationSentences99
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"appeared to"
2"began to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences126
matches(empty)
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs59
mean30.42
std17.33
cv0.57
sampleLengths
076
124
256
339
415
541
631
710
822
949
1013
1141
1245
1359
1413
1557
1611
1729
1830
1944
2015
2141
2240
2312
2446
255
2627
2726
2818
2932
3044
3141
3225
3315
348
3552
366
379
3818
3927
4036
4111
4241
4330
4410
4528
4624
4741
4836
4953
92.9293% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences99
matches
0"were covered"
1"was known"
2"was gone"
3"were covered"
4"was woven"
5"being sucked"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs238
matches
0"was approaching"
92.8626% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1477
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"growing hot against her"
adverbCount61
adverbRatio0.04129993229519296
lyAdverbCount23
lyAdverbRatio0.015572105619498984
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences126
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences126
mean14.25
std9.01
cv0.632
sampleLengths
020
128
228
320
44
510
624
722
84
915
1020
1110
125
139
1432
158
1623
1710
1819
193
2017
2118
2214
2311
242
2513
2628
278
2820
2917
3010
3123
3226
339
344
3510
3630
3717
3811
3914
4015
4116
4214
4322
4422
459
466
4711
4830
4918
62.9630% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3968253968253968
totalSentences126
uniqueOpeners50
4.5455% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags22
fancyCount15
fancyTags
0"Isolde said, her voice carrying a musical quality that seemed out of place in the ordinary woods (say, carry seem)"
1"Nyx whispered, their voice like wind through leaves (whisper)"
2"Isolde said, gesturing around them (say, gesture around)"
3"Isolde explained (explain)"
4"Isolde said, beckoning them toward the central tree (say, beckon)"
5"whispered (whisper)"
6"Nyx observed, their shadow form stretching slightly toward the tree (observe)"
7"Isolde said, her voice tinged with something that might have been admiration (say, tinged be)"
8"Nyx said, their form becoming more substantial, more opaque (say, become more)"
9"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
10"Isolde said urgently (say urgently)"
11"urged (urge)"
12"Nyx instructed, their voice strained (instruct, strain)"
13"Nyx said, their voice filled with something that might have been wonder (say, fill be)"
14"Isolde finished (finish)"
82.9988%