Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQVF53ZGRR65F1M1NVNWCP

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Duration:
37.3s
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$0.004355
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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The damp air of the abandoned Tube station clung to Detective Harlow Quinn's uniform as she descended the concrete steps. Her worn leather watch caught the dim glow of emergency lighting, casting brief reflections as she moved. The station had been closed for decades, its original purpose forgotten by most Londoners. But Quinn knew better. The Veil Market had operated here until last night, when whatever happened had forced its relocation. "Quinn," called Detective Miller, her colleague for the past six months, his flashlight beam cutting through the gloom. "Over here." Quinn approached, her bearing one of military precision despite the underground setting. At 5'9", she stood several inches taller than Miller, her sharp jaw tightening as she took in the scene. The victim lay sprawled in the center of what had been a bustling marketplace just hours ago. Male, mid-thirties, dressed in nondescript clothing that suggested he didn't want to be remembered. "What have we got?" Quinn asked, her voice steady as she pulled on gloves. "John Doe. No wallet, no phone. Looks like a robbery gone wrong. Multiple stab wounds to the abdomen. Found by maintenance workers doing a routine inspection this morning." Quinn knelt beside the body, her brown eyes scanning every detail. The blood patterns were wrong—too spread out, as if the victim had been moved after death. And there was something else, something that nagged at the back of her mind since she'd received the call. "Any witnesses?" Miller shook his head. "Nobody's talking. Place was empty when we arrived." "The Market operates on a full moon schedule," Quinn said, more to herself than to Miller. "They moved last night. This wasn't random timing." Miller sighed. "With all due respect, Quinn, not every case involves your supernatural conspiracy theory. Sometimes a murder is just a murder." Quinn's jaw tightened further. Three years since DS Morris had died under unexplained circumstances, and still most of her colleagues dismissed her concerns. But she knew what she'd seen that night, even if she couldn't explain it. "Help me roll him," she said, avoiding the argument for now. As they carefully turned the body, Quinn noticed something glinting in the victim's clenched fist. She worked the stiff fingers open to reveal a small brass compass, its face etched with protective sigils, the casing showing a distinct patina of verdigris. "What's that?" Miller asked. "Veil Compass," Quinn replied, her voice low. "Points toward supernatural rifts. Worth a fortune on the black market." "Or just an old compass," Miller countered. "Maybe he was a collector." Quinn didn't respond, her attention drawn to the surrounding area. The market had been hastily abandoned, but not in panic. Stalls had been systematically dismantled, valuable items removed. Except for one thing—a series of symbols painted on the wall in what looked suspiciously like blood. "Miller, get the forensics team to check these symbols," she said, pointing. "And tell them to test the blood against the victim's." "Quinn, those look like graffiti to me. Kids break in here all the time." "Kids don't paint protective warding symbols, Miller. And they certainly don't know how to arrange them in a binding pattern." Miller's radio crackled to life. He stepped away to answer, leaving Quinn alone with her thoughts. She approached the wall, examining the symbols more closely. They were old, pre-Christian, designed to contain something—or someone. Her eyes drifted back to the Veil Compass in the victim's hand. If he'd been carrying it, he might have been tracking something. Or someone. And if someone wanted it badly enough to kill for it, they might still be in the area. A sound from deeper in the tunnels made Quinn freeze. She drew her weapon, moving silently toward the darkness. Miller was still on his radio, oblivious. Quinn advanced, her training taking over despite the unusual circumstances. The air grew colder as she moved away from the crime scene. The emergency lighting didn't reach this far, leaving Quinn to rely on her flashlight. The beam caught movement—quick, furtive. Someone was definitely here. "Police!" she called out. "Show yourself." A figure emerged from the shadows, hands raised. Quinn's flashlight revealed a young woman with curly red hair and round glasses, a worn leather satchel slung over her shoulder. She looked terrified, her green eyes wide behind the lenses. "Don't shoot," she said, her voice trembling. "I didn't do anything." Quinn kept her weapon trained. "What are you doing here? This is a crime scene." "I—I got lost," the woman stammered, nervously tucking a strand of hair behind her left ear. "I was exploring the abandoned tunnels." "At three in the morning?" Quinn asked skeptically. The woman's freckled complexion paled. "I—I didn't realize it was that late. Time gets away from me when I'm researching." Miller's footsteps approached behind them. "Quinn? Who's this?" "Found our witness," Quinn replied without lowering her weapon. "Or maybe our suspect." "I'm not a suspect," the woman insisted. "My name is Eva Kowalski. I'm a research assistant at the British Museum." "Doing what, exactly?" Quinn pressed. Eva hesitated, her eyes darting between the two detectives. "I study historical sites. This station was scheduled for demolition next month. I wanted to document it before it's gone." Quinn noticed Eva's satchel was bulging with books. "Research assistant or occult researcher?" Eva's nervous habit returned—tucking her hair behind her left ear. "Both, actually. My master's is in Ancient History, but I specialize in pre-Christian religious practices." Miller lowered his notepad. "So you know about these symbols?" he asked, pointing to the warding marks on the wall. Eva's gaze followed his finger. "Those—those aren't graffiti. They're containment symbols. Norse, if I'm not mistaken. Designed to hold something of great power." Quinn finally lowered her weapon. "And what would someone be trying to contain, Ms. Kowalski?" Eva swallowed hard. "I don't know for certain, but based on the symbols and the timing—near the full moon—I'd guess they were trying to trap a Shade." Miller snorted. "A what?" "A Shade," Quinn repeated, her mind racing. "A being that exists between worlds. They can only cross over during certain lunar phases, and only in specific locations." "Like this one," Eva added quietly. Quinn turned back to the crime scene, the pieces beginning to fall into place. "The victim wasn't robbed. He was carrying the Veil Compass, probably tracking a supernatural rift. He found one, and someone tried to contain it. But something went wrong." "And the dead man?" Miller asked, skepticism still evident in his voice. "Probably the one who performed the ritual," Quinn said. "The containment failed, and the Shade got him. Or maybe someone else got him because they wanted the Compass for themselves." Eva shifted uncomfortably. "There's something else you should know. The Veil Market moves locations every full moon. Whoever did this knew exactly when to strike to maximize their chance of success." Quinn's eyes met Eva's. "And how would you know so much about the Veil Market, Ms. Kowalski?" Eva's nervous habit returned in full force. "I—it's part of my research. I study underground economies and their connections to ancient belief systems." "Right," Quinn said, not entirely convinced. "Miller, read Ms. Kowalski her rights and escort her out. I want to have a longer conversation with her at the station." As Miller led Eva away, Quinn returned her attention to the crime scene. The evidence still didn't add up completely, but she was closer to the truth. The victim hadn't been killed in a simple robbery. He'd died because of something he'd discovered—something involving supernatural forces that most people refused to believe existed. Quinn's fingers brushed against the worn leather watch on her left wrist, a habit she'd developed since Morris's death. She owed it to her partner to find out what had really happened here, regardless of how impossible it seemed. And if Eva Kowalski knew more than she was letting on, Quinn would get that information too. One way or another.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Worth a fortune on the black just an old he was a get the forensics team to check these tell them to test the blood against the victim'sthose look like graffiti to me. [just]"
1"I wanted to document it before it's assistant or occult actually. [actually]"
70.1046% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1338
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count1
2
adverb"nervously"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"completely"
2"nervously"
3"really"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
77.5785% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1338
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"glinting"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count1
2
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"glinting"
1"footsteps"
2"etched"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched fist"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences40
matches
0"looked terrified"
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences40
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"know"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences41
matches
0"seen that night, that?\" Miller"
1"get that information"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs55
mean24.09
std15.43
cv0.64
sampleLengths
071
120
262
314
428
546
62
712
824
922
1037
1111
1241
134
1418
1512
1645
1722
1814
1920
2034
2143
2236
2335
246
2539
2611
2715
2822
298
3020
318
3213
3320
345
3529
3613
3725
3820
3923
4015
4127
424
4327
446
4542
4612
4730
4831
4917
66.6667% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences40
matches
0"been closed"
1"been moved"
2"was scheduled"
3"been killed"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs226
matches
0"was bulging"
1"was carrying"
2"was letting"
98.5069% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount826
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.0387409200968523
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.021791767554479417
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences41
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences41
mean32.32
std41.51
cv1.285
sampleLengths
020
117
214
34
416
518
62
712
866
94
106
116
1264
1326
1419
15111
1693
1714
18227
1947
2014
2127
2226
238
2433
2541
263
275
2821
2945
3038
3111
329
3333
3422
358
3630
3713
3820
397
40125
97.5610% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.6585365853658537
totalSentences41
uniqueOpeners27
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"called Detective Miller, her colleague for the past six months, his flashlight beam cutting through the gloom (call cut)"
1"Worth a fortune on the black just an old he was a get the forensics team to check these tell them to test the blood against the victim'sthose look like graffiti to me. (worth be check test)"
2"I'm a research assistant at the British what, study historical sites. (be study)"
3"I wanted to document it before it's assistant or occult actually. (want document be)"
4"I study underground economies and their connections to ancient belief read Ms. (study read)"
82.9657%