Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQW20XXV5FYD5HBK0AA2QP

Run Details

Duration:
18.2s
Cost:
$0.006708
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clicked into place, a heavy metallic thud that usually signaled the end of the day’s anxieties. Rory leaned her forehead against the cool wood of the door, breathing in the thick, spicy scent of turmeric and cumin wafting up from the curry house below. Living on Brick Lane meant never being truly free of the smell of dinner, but it was a small price to pay for the relative safety of Eva’s cramped sanctuary. She tucked a stray strand of straight black hair behind her ear and felt the familiar, jagged ridge of the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. It was a nervous habit, a tactile grounding mechanism that reminded her she had survived worse than a long shift delivering takeaway. Ptolemy, the tabby cat who reigned over the stacks of occult scrolls and dusty law journals, wound himself around her ankles with a demanding trill. "I'm coming, I'm coming," Rory muttered, reaching for the bag of kibble on the overcrowded kitchen counter. Then came the knock. It wasn't the frantic pounding of a debt collector or the rhythmic rap of the delivery drivers she worked with. It was three deliberate, echoing strikes, delivered with the rhythmic precision of a metronome. Rory froze. She hadn't expected Eva back for hours, and no one else should have known she was staying here. She gripped the handle of a heavy cast-iron skillet—the only weapon within reach—and squinted through the peephole. The fish-eye lens distorted the figure in the hallway, but it couldn't hide the shock of slicked-back platinum blond hair or the sharp, architectural line of a charcoal-gray shoulder. Her heart did a slow, painful roll in her chest. "I can hear you breathing, Aurora," a smooth, melodic voice drifted through the wood. The accent was a velvet blend of Marseille grit and high-society London. "And I know the cat wants his dinner. Do be a darling and open up before the neighbors assume I'm here to collect a soul." Rory’s hands shook as she worked the locks in reverse order. One. Two. Three. She swung the door open, the skillet still held at her side like a makeshift shield. Lucien Moreau stood in the narrow, dim hallway, looking as though he had just stepped out of a private club in Mayfair rather than a drafty tenement in East London. His ivory-handled cane rested between his polished shoes, and his heterochromatic eyes—one flickering amber like trapped sunlight, the other a void of pure black—swept over her with agonizing slowness. "You look well," Lucien said. The lie was graceful. Rory knew she looked exhausted, her Golden Empress uniform shirt wrinkled and her eyes shadowed with the kind of fatigue that sleep couldn't fix. "A bit more 'working class hero' than I remember, but the fire is still there." "What are you doing here, Lucien?" Rory’s voice was steady, a testament to the years she’d spent perfecting a poker face under her father’s legalistic scrutiny. "And how did you find this place? This was supposed to be a blind spot." "There are no blind spots for someone with my lineage, chérie. Only temporary shadows." He stepped forward, not waiting for an invitation. Rory found herself retreating, the sheer presence of him filling the small flat, making the piles of books and scrolls seem even more suffocating. He closed the door behind him and leaned his cane against a stack of research notes on the Ottoman Empire. "You left without saying goodbye," he said, the lightness of his tone sharpening into something more dangerous. "A very human trait. Cowardly, yet understandable." "I didn't leave you. I left the world you represent," Rory snapped, finally setting the skillet down on the dining table, which was currently buried under Eva’s latest translation project. "I was done being a pawn in whatever game the Avaros embassy was playing. I wanted a life where the most dangerous thing I encountered was a disgruntled customer who didn't get enough prawn crackers." Lucien moved across the room with a predator’s grace, his gaze never leaving hers. He stopped just inches away, close enough for her to smell his scent—expensive tobacco, cold rain, and something metallic that always reminded her of his demon silver. "And yet, here you are," Lucien whispered, reaching out a gloved hand as if to touch her face before thinking better of it. He dropped his hand, his black eye seeming to drink in the light of the flickering overhead bulb. "Living above a bar, working for a noodle shop, hiding in the clutter of a hedge-witch’s library. Is this the freedom you craved, Aurora? Or is it just a different kind of cage?" "It’s my cage," she countered, her chin lifting. "I chose the bars myself." "You chose to run from the one person who saw you for what you actually are," he said. The air between them grew heavy, charged with the static of things left unsaid during that final, screaming match in his study six months ago. "You think Evan was the monster? He was a worm. A small, cruel man. But you... you are a storm, and you’re terrified of the clouds." Rory’s breath hitched. She hated how easily he could dismantle her defenses. He was an information broker; he knew exactly where the structural weaknesses were in any soul. "Why are you here, Luc? If you wanted to berate me, you could have sent a courier." Lucien’s expression shifted. The smirk vanished, replaced by a grim set of his mouth that made his elegant features look carved from stone. "The shadows are moving, Rory. Your departure created a vacuum. People are asking questions about the girl who walked out of a half-demon’s life with a head full of his secrets. My father’s kin from Avaros... they aren't as patient as I am." "I don't care about the underworld politics anymore," she lied, her pulse drumming against her collarbone. "You will care when they come for you," he said, stepping into her personal space, forcing her to look up at him. "I spent three months diverting them. I spent another two wiping your digital trail. But your friend Eva... she’s loud. Her research draws eyes. This flat is a beacon, and you are sitting in the center of the light." Rory felt a cold chill that had nothing to do with the drafty windows. "You came here to warn me?" "I came here to take you," Lucien corrected. "To a safe house. Somewhere they can't smell the Cardiff law student beneath the London grime." "I'm not going anywhere with you." She turned away, but he caught her wrist—the left one. His fingers were surprisingly warm, circling the crescent scar with a tenderness that hurt worse than a blow. Rory froze, her skin prickling where he touched her. The history between them wasn't just blood and secrets; it was the way he had looked at her when he thought she wasn't watching, the way he’d taught her to defend herself, and the one night they had almost crossed a line that neither could uncross. "Rory," he said, his voice dropping to a low, rough vibration. The French lilt was more pronounced now, a sign of his own agitation. "Look at me." She turned, her blue eyes clashing with his mismatched ones. The anger was there, but beneath it was the raw, bleeding ache of a woman who had tried to forget the only person who had ever truly known her. "I didn't just come because of the danger," Lucien admitted, his thumb tracing the curve of the scar. "I came because the silence in my house was becoming deafening. I thought I could go back to the way things were—the deals, the whispers, the cold efficiency. But everything is grey without your temper to color it." Rory felt her resolve crumbling like old parchment. "You're infuriating. You're arrogant, you're a criminal, and you're barely human." "I never claimed to be a saint, chérie," he murmured, leaning in until his forehead rested against hers. "But I am yours, if you'll have me. Even if it’s only to yell at me in this Merlin’s garage of an apartment." Ptolemy let out a loud, impatient meow, breaking the tension. Rory let out a shaky laugh that sounded more like a sob. She didn't pull her wrist away. Instead, she leaned into him, the scent of him finally registering as 'home' in a way the curry house never could. "If I go with you," she whispered into the lapel of his suit, "I'm bringing the cat." Lucien pulled back just enough to look at the tabby, who was currently sniffing the bottom of his ivory cane with suspicion. A small, genuine smile touched the half-demon's lips—a rare sight that felt like a gift. "Fine," Lucien said, his black and amber eyes locking onto hers with a fierce, protective intensity. "But he stays off the silk sheets. I have some standards left to uphold." Rory reached up, her hand tangling in his platinum hair, pulling him down the final inch. "We'll see about that, Moreau. We'll see." When their lips finally met, it wasn't a tentative reunion. It was a collision of everything they’d tried to bury—the hurt, the fear, and the undeniable, supernatural gravity that kept pulling them back into each other's orbit. Outside, Brick Lane hummed with the indifferent noise of the city, but inside the cramped flat, the air burned with the heat of a bridge being mended, one fragile timber at a time.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
91.6667% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"he said, the lightness of his tone sharpening into something more dangerous [more]"
1"Rory snapped, finally setting the skillet down on the dining table, which was currently buried under Eva’s latest translation project [finally currently]"
81.3665% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1610
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"truly"
count2
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"truly"
1"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
62.7329% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1610
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"testament"
count1
1
word"beacon"
count1
2
word"sanctuary"
count1
3
word"velvet"
count1
4
word"silk"
count1
5
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"testament"
1"beacon"
2"sanctuary"
3"velvet"
4"silk"
5"echoing"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences72
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences72
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean43
std24.69
cv0.574
sampleLengths
0125
125
217
34
454
546
610
751
830
959
1048
1141
1266
1324
1465
1541
1674
1713
1869
1945
2066
2116
2261
2320
2424
2589
2627
2739
2856
2919
3041
3149
3217
3337
3430
3523
3670
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences72
matches
0"being mended"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs179
matches
0"was staying"
1"wasn't watching"
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1102
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.03357531760435572
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.011796733212341199
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences91
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences91
mean17.48
std9.79
cv0.56
sampleLengths
019
128
230
326
422
525
617
74
820
914
102
1118
1217
1329
1410
1514
1612
1725
1811
191
201
211
2216
2330
2429
255
264
2724
2815
2926
3015
3122
3224
3320
3417
357
3630
3735
3814
3927
4023
4118
4233
438
445
4518
4625
4726
483
499
49.4505% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.32967032967032966
totalSentences91
uniqueOpeners30
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount14
fancyTags
0"Rory muttered, reaching for the bag of kibble on the overcrowded kitchen counter (mutter, reach)"
1"a smooth, melodic voice drifted through the wood (drift)"
2"he said, the lightness of his tone sharpening into something more dangerous (say, sharpen)"
3"Rory snapped, finally setting the skillet down on the dining table, which was currently buried under Eva’s latest translation project (snap, finally set currently bury)"
4"Lucien whispered, reaching out a gloved hand as if to touch her face before thinking better of it (whisper, reach out glove touch think)"
5"she countered, her chin lifting (counter)"
6"she lied, her pulse drumming against her collarbone (lie, drum)"
7"he said, stepping into her personal space, forcing her to look up at him (say, step force look up)"
8"Lucien corrected (correct)"
9"he said, his voice dropping to a low, rough vibration (say, drop)"
10"Lucien admitted, his thumb tracing the curve of the scar (admit, trace)"
11"he murmured, leaning in until his forehead rested against hers (murmur, lean in rest)"
12"she whispered into the lapel of his suit (whisper)"
13"Lucien said, his black and amber eyes locking onto hers with a fierce, protective intensity (say, eyes locking)"
87.3657%