Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQWKVD1ZATD86DRHZSKHNH

Run Details

Duration:
1m 10s
Cost:
$0.007505
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air in Richmond Park tasted of damp earth and approaching rain, but the heavy scent stopped abruptly at the tree line. Rory paused, her boots sinking slightly into the loam, and checked her surroundings. To anyone else, this was just a dense cluster of ancient oaks bordering the deer park. To her, the air shimmered with a faint, pearlescent distortion, like heat rising off asphalt on a blistering day, though the temperature was steadily dropping. She touched the Heartstone Pendant at her throat. The deep crimson gem was warm against her skin, pulsing with a rhythmic, faint beat that quickened as she stepped closer to the boundary. "It is thinner here," Isolde said. The Half-Fae stood a few paces ahead, her silver hair unbound and cascading down her back like a spilled river of mercury. She didn't look back; she rarely did. "The Veil wears thin in places where the old things remember." Nyx materialized from the shadow of a gnarled birch, their tall, ink-dark form condensing into a solid shape. Their violet eyes burned with a dim luminescence as they studied the distortion. "It tastes like ozone and old iron," the Shade whispered, their voice sounding like wind through dead leaves. "Are you certain this is wise, Aurora?" Rory tucked a stray lock of black hair behind her ear, her fingers brushing the small crescent scar on her wrist. A reflex. "We need answers, Nyx. And Isolde owes me a favor." With a deep breath, Rory stepped through the shimmer. The sensation was not unlike walking underwater—the pressure pushed against her eardrums, and the sounds of the London traffic, the distant birds, the wind in the trees, were all instantly cut off, replaced by a profound, vibrating silence. Then, the pressure broke, and her lungs filled with air that was impossibly sweet, heavy with the scent of blooming jasmine and night rain. Rory opened her eyes. She had expected a forest. She found a dream. The Grove was a bowl of impossible light. There was no sun visible through the canopy, yet the space was bathed in a twilight glow that seemed to emanate from the very air itself. The trees here were not merely oaks; they were towering giants with bark like polished obsidian, leaves of silver and gold that rustled without a breeze. Wildflowers carpeted the ground in a riot of color—iridescent blues, fiery oranges, and purples so deep they looked like bruises—and none of them should have been blooming in late autumn. She looked down at her feet. She had left deep boot prints in the mud of the park, but here, the moss sprang back instantly, erasing her passage. Ahead of her, Isolde walked, and the grass did not bend beneath her feet. The Seer left no trace, as if she were a ghost haunting her own home. "Keep your wits about you," Nyx murmured, materializing beside her. The Shade looked unsettled. Their form rippled at the edges, struggling to hold solidity in a place that existed between realms. "The geometry here... it is wrong. The angles are too sharp." Rory moved forward, her hand drifting to the hilt of the Fae-Forged Blade at her belt. Isolde had given it to her, a moonsilver dagger that was always cold to the touch. Here, in the Grove, the metal hummed against her palm, vibrating with a low energy that made her fingers ache. They walked deeper into the clearing. The silence was not empty; it was expectant. Rory felt eyes on her—hundreds of them—but when she turned her head, she saw only the shifting leaves of the silver-barked trees. "Time flows differently here," Isolde said, stopping near a pool of water that reflected a sky full of stars Rory knew weren't visible over London. She turned, her pale lavender eyes locking onto Rory’s. "An hour here may be a minute there. Or a year. It depends on the mood of the wind." Rory narrowed her eyes. "Can we control it?" Isolde smiled, a cryptic expression that didn't reach her eyes. "Can one control the tide? We merely learn to swim." Rory knelt by the edge of the pool. The water was clearer than glass, yet she couldn't see the bottom. The Heartstone Pendant grew hotter against her chest, a warning beacon. She looked at her reflection. The face staring back was hers—sharp, intelligent, cool—but the eyes in the reflection were glowing violet, like Nyx’s. She blinked, and the image vanished, replaced by her own bright blue stare. "Do not look too long," Nyx warned, their voice tighter than before. "Water holds memory. It will try to keep you." Rory stood up abruptly, shaking off the strange pull of the water. She needed to stay grounded. She was a delivery girl from Cardiff, not some storybook princess. She focused on the details: the texture of the moss, the weight of the dagger, the smell of ozone. "The pendant," Rory said, pulling the chain from under her jacket. The crimson stone was glowing visibly now, casting small, bloody shadows on her collarbone. "It’s reacting to something." "It reacts to the rift," Isolde said softly. She gestured to the far end of the Grove, where the trees parted to reveal a formation of standing stones. They were immense, rough-hewn monoliths covered in spiraling runes that carved themselves into the air, glowing faintly. "We are close to the tear. The place where the Veil was stitched with thread too thin." They approached the stones. As they drew nearer, the air grew heavy, thick with static that made the hair on Rory’s arms stand up. The flora here changed; the wildflowers gave way to strange, twisting vines that moved slowly, undulating like worms. Nyx moved ahead, their body stretching into a long, predatory shadow that slid over the ground. They stopped before the largest stone. "There is a resonance," Nyx said, the sound echoing strangely. "Something sits on the other side. Listening." Rory drew the Fae blade. The metal lit the gloom with a pale, silvery light, cutting through the oppressive atmosphere. She stepped up beside the Shade. The stone before them was vibrating. If she pressed her hand to it, she could feel the heartbeat of another realm. Hel, maybe. Or something worse. "Is this a safe path?" Rory asked Isolde. Isolde drifted closer, her feet hovering inches above the moving vines. "Safe is a word for children, Aurora Carter. There is only the path, and what waits upon it. The Blade will cut the wards, but only your will will keep you whole." Rory gripped the hilt tighter, the cold metal seeping into her bones. She looked at the Heartstone, then at the impossible, alien beauty of the Grove—the silver leaves, the starlit pool, the timeless sky. It was wondrous, terrifyingly so, a place of exquisite danger. "I didn't come for safe," Rory said, her voice steady. She stepped toward the shimmering gap between the stones, the pulse of the pendant matching the thrum of the earth beneath her feet. "I came for answers." Nyx solidified beside her, a towering pillar of shadow against the light. "Then we step into the mouth of the wolf," they whispered. "And see if it bites," Rory finished. Together, they moved toward the tear in the world, leaving the sanctuary of the Grove behind for the unknown dark that waited beyond.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
77.7778% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Isolde said softly [softly]"
1"Nyx said, the sound echoing strangely [strangely]"
67.7939% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1242
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
2"softly"
3"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
19.4847% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1242
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"beacon"
count1
1
word"sanctuary"
count1
2
word"resonance"
count1
3
word"shimmered"
count1
4
word"cascading"
count1
5
word"oppressive"
count1
6
word"unsettled"
count1
7
word"profound"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"beacon"
1"sanctuary"
2"resonance"
3"shimmered"
4"cascading"
5"oppressive"
6"unsettled"
7"profound"
8"weight"
9"echoing"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences81
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences81
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean38.41
std21.28
cv0.554
sampleLengths
076
132
246
356
433
59
662
74
89
990
1057
1142
1252
1336
1453
158
1620
1767
1821
1947
2029
2162
2242
2339
2452
258
2643
2744
2837
2923
307
3123
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences81
matches
0"was bathed"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs171
matches
0"were towering"
1"were glowing"
2"was glowing"
3"was vibrating"
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1037
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.027965284474445518
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.015429122468659595
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences94
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences94
mean13.07
std7.44
cv0.569
sampleLengths
022
113
216
325
48
524
66
722
87
911
1018
1113
1218
137
1421
152
1610
179
1838
1924
204
215
224
238
2426
2526
2630
276
2822
2914
3015
3110
324
3317
3411
3516
3616
3720
386
398
4022
4125
429
4319
444
454
4610
4710
488
4912
51.7730% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3617021276595745
totalSentences94
uniqueOpeners34
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount9
fancyTags
0"the Shade whispered, their voice sounding like wind through dead leaves (whisper, sound like)"
1"Nyx murmured, materializing beside her (murmur, materialize)"
2"Isolde said, stopping near a pool of water that reflected a sky full of stars Rory knew weren't visible over London (say, stop reflect know do be not)"
3"Nyx warned, their voice tighter than before (warn)"
4"Rory said, pulling the chain from under her jacket (say, pull)"
5"Isolde said softly (say softly)"
6"Nyx said, the sound echoing strangely (say, echo strangely)"
7"they whispered (whisper)"
8"Rory finished (finish)"
83.3429%