| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 21 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Eva said quietly [quietly]" | | 1 | "Quinn said slowly [slowly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 44 | | tagDensity | 0.477 | | leniency | 0.955 | | rawRatio | 0.095 | | effectiveRatio | 0.091 | |
| 92.88% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2106 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 71.51% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2106 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "electric" | | 1 | "velvet" | | 2 | "etched" | | 3 | "trembled" | | 4 | "gloom" | | 5 | "perfect" | | 6 | "familiar" | | 7 | "footsteps" | | 8 | "pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 118 | | matches | | |
| 58.11% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 118 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "appeared to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "seemed to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 141 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 74 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 2082 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 21 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 61.18% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 67 | | wordCount | 1520 | | uniqueNames | 21 | | maxNameDensity | 1.78 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Quinn | 27 | | Hackney | 2 | | Camden | 1 | | High | 1 | | Street | 1 | | Eva | 11 | | Kowalski | 4 | | Tube | 1 | | Stalls | 1 | | Clean | 1 | | Arabic | 1 | | Hebrew | 1 | | London | 2 | | Underground | 1 | | Southwark | 2 | | Morris | 2 | | Veil | 3 | | Compass | 2 | | Shade-crafted | 1 | | Harlow | 1 | | Market | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Quinn" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Kowalski" | | 3 | "Tube" | | 4 | "Stalls" | | 5 | "Morris" | | 6 | "Compass" | | 7 | "Harlow" |
| | places | | 0 | "Hackney" | | 1 | "Camden" | | 2 | "High" | | 3 | "Street" | | 4 | "Clean" | | 5 | "London" | | 6 | "Southwark" | | 7 | "Veil" |
| | globalScore | 0.612 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 84 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a dead man's tooth against Qu" | | 1 | "looked like she might faint" | | 2 | "looked like they'd been knocked together" | | 3 | "behind except, apparently, any identification" | | 4 | "quite settled on a final expression" | | 5 | "as if listening" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 2082 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 141 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 49 | | mean | 42.49 | | std | 33.88 | | cv | 0.797 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 60 | | 1 | 37 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 123 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 100 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 111 | | 8 | 56 | | 9 | 87 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 61 | | 13 | 74 | | 14 | 93 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 44 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 94 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 26 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 98 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 112 | | 27 | 66 | | 28 | 41 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 67 | | 31 | 25 | | 32 | 62 | | 33 | 32 | | 34 | 21 | | 35 | 70 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 23 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 75 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 23 | | 42 | 29 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 63 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 55 | | 48 | 25 |
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| 84.45% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | 0 | "been knocked" | | 1 | "been abandoned" | | 2 | "was covered" | | 3 | "were arranged" | | 4 | "been assembled" | | 5 | "was tiled" | | 6 | "was terrified" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 251 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 16 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 14 | | totalSentences | 141 | | ratio | 0.099 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd pulled it off a suspect two weeks back—a tweaker in Hackney who swore he'd found it in a skip—and had kept it in her coat pocket since, turning it over during long stakeouts the way some people worried rosary beads." | | 1 | "Stalls lined both sides of the platform—wooden trestle tables, glass-fronted cabinets, a few that looked like they'd been knocked together from salvaged coffin wood." | | 2 | "A rack of what appeared to be animal pelts—though the shapes were wrong, the fur too iridescent—hung undisturbed on a brass rail." | | 3 | "No rings, no watch, no labels in the coat—she checked." | | 4 | "His face was intact, but it wouldn't help; it had the slack, generalized quality of someone who hadn't quite settled on a final expression." | | 5 | "The table's surface was covered in a dark cloth embroidered with symbols Quinn couldn't place—not Arabic, not Hebrew, not any of the scripts she'd learned to recognize in eighteen years working London's more culturally diverse crime scenes." | | 6 | "\"I mean it, Quinn. That's a Veil Compass. Shade-crafted. It points toward the nearest supernatural rift.\" Eva's green eyes were wide behind her lenses, and for a moment Quinn saw something there that went beyond academic excitement—something closer to fear." | | 7 | "You had to see the shape of the absence first—the thing that was missing." | | 8 | "The platform was tiled in the old London Underground style—cream and dark green, chipped and filthy with a century of disuse." | | 9 | "Not just clean—polished." | | 10 | "She tucked a curl behind her left ear again and looked at the stalls surrounding them—the neat rows of jars, the careful arrangements, the evidence of a market that functioned with the quiet efficiency of a well-run operation." | | 11 | "Quinn felt the familiar cold tightening at the base of her skull—the feeling she got when a case began to cohere." | | 12 | "And the vendors—all of them—gone." | | 13 | "There were marks on it she hadn't noticed before—fine scratches, almost imperceptible, forming shapes that looked uncomfortably similar to the sigils on the Veil Compass." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 642 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 23 | | adverbRatio | 0.03582554517133956 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01557632398753894 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 141 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 141 | | mean | 14.77 | | std | 12.53 | | cv | 0.849 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 41 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 37 | | 4 | 24 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 41 | | 7 | 24 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 24 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 23 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 48 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 25 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 37 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 40 | | 45 | 21 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 22 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 49.17% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 19 | | diversityRatio | 0.375886524822695 | | totalSentences | 141 | | uniqueOpeners | 53 | |
| 30.86% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | | 0 | "Even the knocked-together coffin-wood stalls" |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 75.56% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 39 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd pulled it off a" | | 1 | "She hadn't expected it to" | | 2 | "They'd left everything behind except," | | 3 | "She crouched, knees popping, and" | | 4 | "His face was intact, but" | | 5 | "His eyes were open." | | 6 | "They were entirely black, both" | | 7 | "She'd tucked it behind her" | | 8 | "She stopped herself, pushing her" | | 9 | "She pointed the beam toward" | | 10 | "Its casing was rough with" | | 11 | "She gestured at the body" | | 12 | "She planted her feet shoulder-width" | | 13 | "You had to see the" | | 14 | "She turned slowly, her worn" | | 15 | "They'd been down here forty" | | 16 | "She'd come back to it." | | 17 | "She returned to the dead" | | 18 | "It rolled inward, toward the" | | 19 | "She saw the pen rolling" |
| | ratio | 0.361 | |
| 43.33% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 90 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | | 0 | "The bone token felt like" | | 1 | "She'd pulled it off a" | | 2 | "She hadn't expected it to" | | 3 | "Quinn said, though the only" | | 4 | "The abandoned station was larger" | | 5 | "Quinn had studied enough disused" | | 6 | "Stalls lined both sides of" | | 7 | "Jars of unidentifiable liquids still" | | 8 | "A rack of what appeared" | | 9 | "The vendors had fled, but" | | 10 | "They'd left everything behind except," | | 11 | "She crouched, knees popping, and" | | 12 | "The victim was male, late" | | 13 | "Someone had taken a blade" | | 14 | "His face was intact, but" | | 15 | "His eyes were open." | | 16 | "They were entirely black, both" | | 17 | "Quinn said, more to herself" | | 18 | "Eva's voice came from three" | | 19 | "The younger woman had her" |
| | ratio | 0.833 | |
| 46.30% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | | 0 | "Whoever he was, he hadn't" |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 2.55% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd pulled it off a suspect two weeks back—a tweaker in Hackney who swore he'd found it in a skip—and had kept it in her coat pocket since, turning it over du…" | | 1 | "But here she was, thirty feet below Camden High Street, standing on a platform that hadn't seen a scheduled train since 1924, looking at a dead body sprawled ac…" | | 2 | "The victim was male, late thirties, wearing a charcoal overcoat that had cost more than Quinn's monthly rent." | | 3 | "His face was intact, but it wouldn't help; it had the slack, generalized quality of someone who hadn't quite settled on a final expression." | | 4 | "She tucked a curl behind her left ear again and looked at the stalls surrounding them—the neat rows of jars, the careful arrangements, the evidence of a market …" | | 5 | "She'd been turning it over without realizing, the nervous fidget of a detective who hadn't slept properly in three years." | | 6 | "There were marks on it she hadn't noticed before—fine scratches, almost imperceptible, forming shapes that looked uncomfortably similar to the sigils on the Vei…" | | 7 | "She looked at the dead man's black eyes, at the needle of the compass trembling in its brass case, at the clean circle of tiles on the floor of a station that h…" | | 8 | "Everything was steady except the compass in the evidence bag, its needle still turning, still pointing at the dead man who might not be entirely dead." | | 9 | "She turned and walked deeper into the Veil Market, her torch cutting a path through the dark, and after a moment she heard Eva Kowalski's footsteps hurrying to …" | | 10 | "The bone token pulsed once in Quinn's pocket, warm against her thigh, and the darkness ahead of them seemed to lean closer, as if listening." |
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| 77.38% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 21 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn had, and this space exceeded them by a factor of three at least, the vaulted ceiling receding into a darkness that the emergency services' halogen lamps couldn't fully penetrate" | | 1 | "Quinn said, more to herself than to Kowalski" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 44 | | tagDensity | 0.227 | | leniency | 0.455 | | rawRatio | 0.1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.045 | |