Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQX3Y096E8RHF9JTGSC6V5

Run Details

Duration:
12.4s
Cost:
$0.001023
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The wind that carried them into the Grove was the first thing Rory noticed. It wasn't the biting chill of London in deepest winter, nor the damp, earthy smell of Richmond Park. This wind was floral and sweet, thick with the scent of a thousand blossoms that shouldn't exist in this season. It wrapped around her, a silken embrace that soothed the jagged edges of her fear. Beside her, Nyx moved with a liquid grace, their shadowy form seeming to ripple in the soft light filtering through the impossibly vibrant leaves overhead. They stood at the threshold of a clearing, where the familiar sprawl of trees gave way to an unnatural, pristine wildness. Ancient oaks, impossibly gnarled and thick, formed a rough circle, their rough bark etched with symbols that seemed to writhe just at the edge of vision. These were the standing stones Isolde had spoken of, marking the boundary. Beyond them, the world bloomed. Wildflowers carpeted the ground, a riot of color that defied any natural palette. Blues deeper than any earthly sapphire and reds more vibrant than spilled wine grew in profusion. Ferns unfurled fronds the size of a man's arm, their edges tipped with dew that glittered like tiny diamonds. The air itself hummed with a low, resonant energy, like a plucked harp string that vibrated deep in Rory's bones. "It's… unreal," Rory breathed, her voice barely a whisper. The air here was lighter, easier to draw into her lungs. The throbbing in her left wrist, where the crescent scar lay hidden beneath her glove, had softened to a faint thrum. Nyx let out a sound like rustling leaves. "The Veil thins here. Or perhaps," they mused, their violet eyes glowing faintly, "it is merely a place where the other side bleeds through." Their attention was drawn to a patch of iridescence shimmering near the base of one of the oaks. It pulsed, a captured rainbow, before dissolving into the air. "Interesting. The boundary is not as solid as some might believe." Isolde glided ahead, leaving no impression on the mossy ground. Her silver hair cascaded down her back, catching the light and seeming to glow from within. She moved with an unhurried grace that spoke of lifetimes spent traversing such places. "The Grove remembers," she murmured, not looking back. "It remembers the stars born and the ages passed. Tread lightly, and listen." They followed her deeper into the clearing. The light shifted. It wasn't the dappled sunlight of an ordinary park; it was a diffused, golden illumination that seemed to emanate from the very air. It cast no sharp shadows, softening every edge, making the world feel both dreamlike and intensely real. Rory reached out, her gloved fingers brushing against the velvety petal of a flower the color of twilight. It felt impossibly soft, like spun moonlight, and a faint warmth spread through her fingertip. A shiver traced its way up her spine, not of fear, but of pure, unadulterated wonder. She thought of the grey London sky, the ceaseless rain, the drab concrete jungle. This place was its antithesis. "Do you feel that?" Nyx asked, their voice a low murmur that barely disturbed the air. "The resonance. It’s… old. And aware." Rory nodded, trying to articulate the sensation. It was like standing in the presence of something vast and ancient, a silent observer. "It feels like… like the whole place is breathing." Isolde paused beside a small stream that meandered through the clearing. The water was crystal clear, flowing over stones that gleamed like polished jewels. Instead of pebbles, there were smooth, egg-shaped crystals in shades of emerald, amethyst, and topaz. The water chimed as it flowed, a delicate, musical sound that wove itself into the hum of the Grove. "The waters of memory," Isolde said, her gaze fixed on the stream. "Drink, if you wish to remember what you have forgotten. Or to forget what you wish to remember." Rory hesitated. The offer was tempting, a siren call to relinquish the burdens she carried. But the pragmatist in her, the one who had clung to reason in the face of the impossible, held back. "What kind of memories?" she asked, her voice tight. Isolde’s pale lavender eyes met hers, serene and unreadable. "All kinds. The ones you cherish, the ones you bury, the ones that are not your own." She dipped a finger into the water, and a ripple of pure light spread outward. "The past is never truly gone. It merely sleeps." Nyx knelt by the stream, not to drink, but to examine a cluster of luminous fungi growing on the bank. They glowed with an inner light, pulsing in time with the Grove's subtle hum. "Fae-touched flora," Nyx commented, their form momentarily shifting to reveal a more ethereal, tentacle-like appendage testing the air near the fungi. "This ecosystem is unlike anything I've encountered in the shadowed places. Remarkable resilience." As they ventured further, the clearing seemed to deepen, the trees growing taller, the air thicker with the scent of unseen blossoms. Rory’s hand instinctively went to the pendant beneath her shirt. The Heartstone pulsed faintly against her skin, a familiar warmth that anchored her in this bewildering place. It had led her here, she knew, though she still had no idea who her benefactor was. They reached the center of the Grove. Here, the light was even softer, a pearlescent glow that bathed everything in an otherworldly luminescence. In the center stood a single, majestic tree, far older and larger than any they had seen. Its bark was smooth and silver, and its leaves shimmered with an ethereal green. From its branches hung fruits that glowed with their own internal light, like fallen stars. "The Heart Tree," Isolde whispered, her voice filled with a reverence Rory had never heard from her before. "The nexus. Where the threads of many realms are woven." Rory stared, mesmerized. The tree radiated an palpable aura of peace, a sharp contrast to the chaotic energy of Hel she had only glimpsed. She saw, or rather *felt*, streams of light flowing from the tree, weaving through the air like invisible rivers. Some pulsed with the deep crimson of the Heartstone, others with the pale lavender of Isolde’s eyes, still more with the shifting violet of Nyx. "It is a conduit," Nyx translated, their form coalescing into a more solid, stoic shape. "Between worlds. Ley lines, perhaps, but far more… vibrant." A sudden unease rippled through Rory. The sheer beauty and power of the place were overwhelming, but beneath the wonder lay a prickle of danger. This wasn't just a pretty garden; it was a place of immense power, a crossroads where the boundaries between worlds were thin. And thin boundaries could be breached. "Isolde," Rory began, her voice low, "you brought us here for a reason. What is it you need us to see?" The Half-Fae seer turned, her gaze sweeping over the magnificent tree. "The Veil," she stated, her voice resonating with an ancient knowledge. "It weakens. Even here, where magic flows freely, the strain is felt. The imbalance grows." Rory's grip tightened on the Fae-Forged Blade at her hip. The moonsilver felt impossibly cold against her skin, a constant reminder of the world she had stepped into. "Weakens? How?" "The rituals of the mortal world grow more desperate. The hunger for power, the forgotten bargain, the whispers from beyond… they tear at the fabric," Isolde explained, her words like polished stones. "The seals weaken. The incursions become more frequent." Rory thought of the shard of Hel she carried in her pocket, the constant thrum of the Heartstone. She thought of the shadowy whispers that sometimes snaked into her dreams, the unsettling feeling of being watched. "Rift points?" she guessed, remembering the brief explanation she’d received from a rather surly Warden weeks ago. "Indeed," Isolde confirmed. "And the Wardens, bless their tireless vigilance, cannot mend what is actively being ripped asunder. They can only patch the holes. Eventually, the dam will break." She gestured towards the Heart Tree. "This nexus… it is a place of balance. But balance requires not just vigilance, but intervention. The threads must be reinforced. The tendrils of darkness must be repelled." The air grew heavy. The sweet scent of the flowers seemed cloying, the soft light suddenly oppressive. Rory looked at Nyx, their shadowy form mirroring her own apprehension. They were being drawn into something far larger than they had anticipated, a cosmic struggle unfolding at the thin places of reality. "And you believe we can help?" Rory asked, the question hanging in the luminous air. Isolde’s lips curved into a faint, almost imperceptible smile. "You carry echoes of both worlds, child. One forged in the fires of desperation, the other touched by the liminal spaces. And you, creature of shadow," she turned to Nyx, "you understand the nature of liminality better than most. The strength of this Grove is not merely in its beauty, but in its raw, untamed magic. And that magic… it can be guided." Rory felt the familiar stir of her quick mind, the instinct to analyze, to find a solution. But here, in the heart of the Fae Grove, logic seemed a fragile thing. This was a place of myth and magic, and the solutions, she sensed, would be as extraordinary as the world around her. A world where flowers bloomed in impossible colors, where time itself seemed to bend, and where she, Aurora Carter, delivery driver and reluctant demigoddess, was being asked to fight for the very integrity of reality. The weight of it settled upon her, heavy and yet, strangely, exhilarating. They had come seeking answers, and it seemed the Grove had offered them a battlefield.
created_at"2026-02-17T02:47:20.85992+00:00" 2/17/2026, 2:47:20 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
50.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"Rory breathed, her voice barely a whisper [barely]"
1"they mused, their violet eyes glowing faintly, Their attention was drawn to a patch of iridescence shimmering near the base of one of the oaks [faintly]"
2"Nyx commented, their form momentarily shifting to reveal a more ethereal, tentacle-like appendage testing the air near the fungi [momentarily more]"
3"Nyx translated, their form coalescing into a more solid, stoic shape [more]"
63.0996% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1626
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"intensely"
count1
1
adverb"lightly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"truly"
count1
4
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"intensely"
1"lightly"
2"suddenly"
3"truly"
4"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
1.5990% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1626
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"palpable"
count1
1
word"ethereal"
count2
2
word"luminous"
count2
3
word"resonance"
count1
4
word"shimmered"
count1
5
word"glided"
count1
6
word"oppressive"
count1
7
word"otherworldly"
count1
8
word"pristine"
count1
9
word"unreadable"
count1
10
word"apprehension"
count1
11
word"weight"
count1
12
word"echoes"
count1
13
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"palpable"
1"ethereal"
2"luminous"
3"resonance"
4"shimmered"
5"glided"
6"oppressive"
7"otherworldly"
8"pristine"
9"unreadable"
10"apprehension"
11"weight"
12"echoes"
13"etched"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences92
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences92
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences105
matches
0"feel that?\" Nyx"
76.3959% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean52.32
std21.84
cv0.417
sampleLengths
092
164
268
341
471
561
650
768
822
931
1058
1130
1244
1350
1468
1566
1669
1728
1868
1924
2053
2121
2237
2330
2440
2553
2663
2750
2815
2972
30115
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences92
matches
0"was drawn"
1"being drawn"
2"being asked"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs206
matches
0"was tempting"
1"were overwhelming"
88.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1277
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"clear, flowing over stones"
1"smooth, egg-shaped crystals"
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.028191072826938137
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.01331245105716523
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean15.45
std8.55
cv0.553
sampleLengths
014
118
220
315
425
521
626
712
85
913
1016
1119
1220
139
1411
1521
168
1742
1810
1911
2010
2116
2214
238
2413
257
263
2723
2817
2918
3015
3116
3214
335
3416
356
367
3715
389
3911
4013
4115
4219
4312
4418
452
4613
4720
489
499
51.1111% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3523809523809524
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners37
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount13
fancyTags
0"Rory breathed, her voice barely a whisper (breathe)"
1"they mused, their violet eyes glowing faintly, Their attention was drawn to a patch of iridescence shimmering near the base of one of the oaks (muse, glow faintly, draw shimmer)"
2"she murmured, not looking back (murmur, does not look back)"
3"Isolde said, her gaze fixed on the stream (say, fix)"
4"Nyx commented, their form momentarily shifting to reveal a more ethereal, tentacle-like appendage testing the air near the fungi (comment, momentarily shift reveal test)"
5"Isolde whispered, her voice filled with a reverence Rory had never heard from her before (whisper, fill does not never hear from)"
6"Nyx translated, their form coalescing into a more solid, stoic shape (translate, coalesce)"
7"Rory began, her voice low (begin)"
8"she stated, her voice resonating with an ancient knowledge (state, resonate)"
9"Isolde explained, her words like polished stones (explain, like)"
10"guessed (guess)"
11"Isolde confirmed (confirm)"
12"she turned to Nyx (turn)"
78.2474%