Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQXAJCHC3MAYY2NX59GXFX

Run Details

Duration:
1m 8s
Cost:
$0.048231
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
By the time Rory wrestles the third deadbolt free, whoever’s on the other side is pounding like the building’s on fire. She yanks the door open with a sharp, “All right, keep your—” The rest dies in her throat. Lucien Moreau fills the doorway like he owns it. Of course he does. Even half-drenched from the Brick Lane drizzle, he looks like he stepped out of a glossy magazine—charcoal suit clinging sharper than razor blades, platinum hair slicked back and beaded with rain, ivory-handled cane resting easy in his gloved hand. He’s the picture of control, as always. Except for the eyes. One amber, one black, both fixed on her like he’s been starving. “Aurora,” he says, low and smooth, with that liquid French undertone that once turned her brain into porridge at the worst possible times. “Bonsoir.” She stands there, fingers still curled around the door, hand braced white-knuckled on the top lock. Her heart stutters once, then slams into a sprint that feels almost insulting. She’d worked hard to Pavlov that reaction out of herself. “Lucien.” Her voice comes out cool, even, the way she trained it. “Bloody hell.” He lifts a brow. “I am many things, chérie, but I assure you hell has much worse taste in suits.” “You turned up at Eva’s place,” she snaps. “Unannounced. At nine-thirty at night. What did you expect me to say?” His mouth curves, half-smile, half-apology. She hates that she can tell the difference. “I had hoped,” he says, “for ‘come in, you are letting out all the heat.’ But I have learned to live with disappointment.” Behind Rory, a soft thump sounds as Ptolemy lands off the sofa and pads toward the hallway to investigate. The air from the curry house below seeps up around them—cumin, frying onions, cardamom—mixing with wet pavement and Lucien’s expensive cologne. The old stairwell light flickers behind him, throwing his narrow face into brief shadow. Rory’s brain finally kicks into gear. “What are you doing here,” she says, not a question so much as a demand. His eyes flick past her shoulder, taking in the cluttered chaos of Eva’s books and scrolls spilling off every surface. “You are alone?” “Answer the question, Lucien.” That gets her a flash of something across his face—annoyance, faint, smoothed away almost at once. He wraps his knuckles lightly against the doorframe, an old habit of his when he’s calculating. “I need to speak with you,” he says. “Privately.” Rory snorts. “Pass.” She goes to shut the door. His hand shoots out, palm flat against the wood, cane angled harmlessly away. He doesn’t shove, doesn’t even really resist. Just touches the door, the smallest pressure keeping it from closing. “Rory.” He doesn’t use her given name often. Doesn’t let it soften like that on his tongue. “If this were…social, I would have sent a bottle. Or three.” “Your last bottle came with a pack of hungry vampires,” she says. “Forgive me if I don’t leap at the chance for a sequel.” Ptolemy winds around her ankles, tails flicking, then leans forward to sniff at Lucien’s shoe. Rory watches, waiting for the cat to hiss, puff up, do something sensible. Instead, Ptolemy purrs. Loudly. “Traitor,” Rory mutters at the cat. Lucien makes a quiet, pleased sound and crooks two fingers. Ptolemy, the fickle little beast, abandons Rory entirely to rub shamelessly against Lucien’s trouser leg. He looks back up at her. His eyes do that dissecting thing, stripping her down to pieces. Her hair scraped into a low knot; her faded university hoodie stained with takeaway sauce; bare legs because she hadn’t bothered with joggers while sorting Eva’s notes. She feels suddenly, viscerally underdressed. His gaze snags on her left wrist, where the sleeve has ridden up and the crescent scar shows pale against her skin. For the barest moment, something like concern passes over his features. “It is not safe to discuss in the hallway,” he says softly. “And I would be…very inconvenient…to kill out here. Neighbours, witnesses, all that.” “Kill you?” She exhales, derisive. “Don’t tempt me.” “Chérie.” His mouth tilts, rueful this time. “You are the one person I am quite certain does not want me dead.” “And you’re the one person I’m quite certain enjoys being wrong.” They hang there, balanced on the edge of the open door. Rain patters on the stairwell window. Somewhere below, a kitchen exhaust fan rattles to life. Her hand has not moved from the lock. His hasn’t moved from the door. He breaks the stalemate. “In Marseille, we at least invite our enemies inside before we argue,” he says. “London is so…drafty.” Against her better judgment, her lips twitch. Stupid. Stupid that he can still do that, scrape a laugh out of her even when she wants to slam the door in his face. “Five minutes,” she says, more to herself than to him. “You get five.” “I will take four,” he says at once. “So you do not feel I have cheated you.” She steps back. It’s a small movement, but it’s admission and allowance and surrender all at once. He glides past her, careful not to brush against her, which annoys her more than if he’d done it deliberately. The flat is cramped enough that his presence rearranges the air. He belongs in cavernous bars and hidden back rooms, smoke and shadows and the soft hiss of money changing hands. Here, with mismatched IKEA furniture and stacks of photocopied grimoires, he looks like he’s been photoshopped into the wrong image. Ptolemy, traitorous fluffball, hops onto the coffee table and sits like a sphinx in front of him. Lucien closes the door with an audible click. For a heartbeat, Rory is acutely aware of the three deadbolts, of him between her and the hall, of the strange little bubble of privacy their past selves would have killed for and their present selves absolutely do not need. “Shoes,” she says abruptly. “Off. Eva will murder me if you track whatever demonic slime you’ve been walking through onto her rug.” “I have never once walked through demonic slime.” He toes off polished shoes anyway, lining them neatly by the door. “It plays hell with the leather.” He sets his cane beside them and straightens, shoulders rolling under perfectly tailored fabric. Without the cane in his hand he looks younger, somehow. Less like the half-demon information broker everyone in the underworld knows, more like the man who once sat on a rooftop beside her at three in the morning and confessed, almost shyly, that he had never seen snow until he was twelve. She pushes the memory away, hard. “Talk,” she says. “You’ve already used one of your minutes.” He looks around until he finds a bare corner of sofa not colonised by books. He doesn’t sit, though. He turns back to her, leaning lightly against the armrest, wrists resting easy on the rolled fabric. Casual. Non-threatening. Calculated, obviously. “Your upstairs neighbour,” he begins. She cuts him off. “If you dragged yourself all the way to Brick Lane to gossip about Mrs. Patel’s late-night telly habits—” “Aurora.” Sharper, now. “Listen to me.” Something in his tone makes the hair lift on the back of her neck. She crosses her arms but doesn’t interrupt again. He watches her for a second. Then: “You remember the sorcerer who claimed to be Eva’s friend. The one who came to the bar in Shoreditch. Alistair Finch.” Of course she remembers. Tall, smug, smelling like old libraries and cigarettes. The one she’d nearly punched before Lucien, suavely, had inserted himself into the conversation and eased him away with a few murmured threats and a smile that promised ruin. “Vaguely,” she says. “Why?” “He vanished,” Lucien says. “Three weeks ago.” “People in your world vanish all the time.” “Yes. But not with this set of…circumstances.” His dark eye glints. “He was last seen leaving this building. After visiting Eva.” The room seems to shrink. Rory hears the words, feels them slot into place with a dull, unpleasant click. “Eva’s in Prague,” she says automatically. “Conference. She left two days ago.” “And before that?” “She was here. Working.” Rory swallows. “She would have told me if—” “Would she?” he asks, too gently. Anger sparks, hot and reliable. “Do not,” Rory says, “start suggesting Eva’s tangled up in whatever you’re sniffing around.” “Everyone is tangled up in something, chérie,” he says. “You know that better than most. I am not accusing her. I am telling you someone with…unpleasant intentions has taken an interest in her work. And where she lives.” “Why come to me?” Rory demands. “You have an army of shifty associates. Go bother them.” “I did.” He spreads his hands. “They gave me half-truths and rumours. I need someone who can walk in this world as easily as she trips over mine. Who has Eva’s trust, and a spine made of something suspiciously similar to steel.” Heat pricks the back of her throat. She wishes it were purely from annoyance. “You could have called,” she says. “Would you have answered?” She hates that the answer is no. Hates that he knows it. She looks down at her bare feet on Eva’s threadbare rug. “Maybe,” she lies. He doesn’t bother pretending to believe her. “In any case,” he says, “I prefer to see you when you tell me to go to hell.” “Consider it said,” she mutters. “Repeatedly.” His mouth softens. Not quite a smile. Not quite not. “Rory.” He steps away from the sofa, one pace closer. Not invading, just…reducing the distance. “There is more. I would not be here if there were not.” “Because a missing sorcerer doesn’t warrant a personal visit?” “Because you asked me,” he says quietly, “not to come back. The night at Silas’ bar.” His gaze doesn’t move from her face. “You were…very specific.” She remembers. Too much whiskey, too much adrenaline, too many bodies on the floor and one nearly being hers. His face close to hers in the alley, saying I had to choose, ma belle, you know what I am, and her saying, very clearly, If you walk away now, don’t come back. He’d walked. Because of course he had. It was his specialty. “I didn’t think you listened to me,” she says, because anything else feels too raw. “I listen to you,” he says. “That has always been the problem.” Silence stretches. Ptolemy decides this is boring and hops off the table to go investigate the kitchen. Rory drags a hand through her hair, fingers catching on a knot. “So what, Luc? You’re breaking our little arrangement because Eva’s potentially in danger?” “Yes.” No hesitation. “And because you are sitting in her flat with the door three deadbolts away from whatever might be watching it.” He moves another step closer. Close enough now that she can see the faint, nearly invisible line of a scar along his jaw she’s never noticed before. Close enough to feel the faint warmth coming off him, despite the rain-damp suit. “Let me help,” he says. “Help,” she repeats. “Like you ‘helped’ at the warehouse? When you sold me to Rafiq for a bag of silver and a pretty promise?” His throat works. “I got you out.” “After,” she snaps. “After I’d already—” Her voice cracks. Damn it. “You don’t get credit for pulling the knife out when you’re the one who stuck it in.” His heterochromatic gaze doesn’t flinch. “You asked me, that night, whether I would always choose my own survival over yours,” he says. “You remember what I answered?” “Yes,” she says, grinding the word out. “You said, ‘Don’t ask questions you don’t want honest answers to.’” “And you were right to be furious.” He draws a breath, slow. “I have been…reconsidering that answer.” A bitter laugh bursts out of her. “Fantastic. Have an epiphany on your own time.” “I am,” he says. Then, more carefully: “Rory. I know what I am. Half of me was made in a realm whose currency is betrayal. I will never be clean enough for you. But when it comes to Eva—and to you—I am trying to choose differently.” Something in her chest twists, then twists again, as if trying to wring itself dry. He takes that last step. Now he is right in front of her, a breath away. He moves slowly, telegraphing every shift, as if she’s a frightened animal he doesn’t want to spook. “May I?” he asks. She doesn’t know what he means until his hand lifts, hovering. Not touching. Waiting. She can say no. It’s easy. One syllable. She’s said worse to him. She doesn’t. “That’s your second minute gone,” she says instead. Her voice is huskier than she’d like. His mouth curves, quick and startled, like she’s caught him off-guard. Then his fingers brush her wrist. It’s barely a touch. Just the pads of his fingers resting over the small crescent of scar tissue. Warm. Gentle. No pressure. Her pulse lurches under his skin. She hates that he has to feel that. Hates that he knows what it means. “We did not part well,” he says, so quietly she almost has to read the words off his lips. “But I have not been…indifferent. To the absence.” The flat, suddenly, feels too small. The books, the curry smell, the rumble of traffic outside—all of it fades to a low, unimportant hum. There is only his hand on her wrist and her stupid heart thundering at the betrayal. “You don’t get to miss me,” she says. “You made your choice.” His thumb moves, the tiniest stroke along the edge of the scar. “I am trying,” he repeats, “to make another one.” She laughs, helpless and sharp. “Now? When there’s a missing sorcerer and a big bad threat and you need something from me? Convenient.” He winces, fractionally. It’s satisfying in a petty way, but not nearly enough. “Yes,” he says simply. “Convenient. And also true.” Ptolemy chooses that moment to reappear, meowing imperiously at Rory’s feet. The spell—if that’s what it is—fractures. She pulls her hand back like his touch burns. “Four minutes,” she says. “Time’s up.” “I lied,” he says. “I will steal another.” “How shocking.” He smiles again, but there’s a crack in it now. Something unpolished shining through. “I will go,” he says. “I have…people to question. Places to look. But I need to know that you will not open this door to anyone else tonight.” Rory folds her arms again, shielding the wrist he touched. “Paranoid, much?” “I am an information broker, ma belle. Paranoia pays the bills.” He sobers. “Promise me.” She should tell him to piss off. Should tell him she doesn’t make promises to men who sell her out. Instead, she thinks of Eva’s careful instructions scribbled on the fridge, of the way Eva had hugged her at the station and said, “Watch the flat, yeah? It feels better knowing you’re here.” She thinks of Alistair Finch’s smirk and disappearing act. “Fine,” she says. “I won’t open the door to anyone unless they’re carrying pizza. And even then, I’ll be suspicious.” His shoulders loosen, just a touch. “Good.” He steps back, out of her space, and the air feels thinner where he was. He collects his cane, slides into his shoes with easy practiced balance. At the door, he pauses, hand on the knob. “If I discover something…unpleasant,” he says without looking back, “I will come here. Regardless of past ultimatums.” “Can’t wait,” she says. He glances over his shoulder. The hallway light spills across half his face, leaving the demon-black eye in shadow, the amber one catching gold. “Lock your deadbolts, Aurora,” he says. “I would hate to arrive too late again.” Again. The word lands like a stone in her gut. He opens the door. The sounds of the building rush in—the drip of rain, distant television, a door closing somewhere below. He steps out, then turns back once more. “And, Rory?” His voice is softer now, intimate in a way it has no right to be. “Try not to hate me too completely until then. It makes the…trying harder.” Before she can muster a reply that isn’t dangerously close to the truth, he’s gone, moving down the stairs with that smooth, unhurried gait that makes him seem like he has all the time in the world. She stares at the open doorway for a long beat. Then she shuts it. One lock. Two. Three. Her hand lingers on the last deadbolt. Ptolemy weaves around her ankles, purring obliviously. She scoops him up, burying her face in his fur, inhaling the warm, dusty smell. “I don’t hate him,” she tells the cat, because it’s easier than admitting it to herself. “I just really, really want to.” Ptolemy purrs louder, utterly unconcerned. Rory carries him back to the sofa, steps over Eva’s scattered notes, and sits. The curve of Lucien’s fingers around her wrist ghosts through her skin, impossible to shake. Outside, Brick Lane hums and hisses and steams in the rain. Inside, in a cramped flat above a curry house, Aurora Carter stares at the locked door and wonders which will come first—the danger he promised, or the next time she’s fool enough to let him in.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
46.6667% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags50
adverbTagCount13
adverbTags
0"he says, low and smooth, with that liquid French undertone that once turned her brain into porridge at the worst possible times [once]"
1"she says, not a question so much as a demand [so]"
2"he says softly [softly]"
3"she says, more to herself than to him [more]"
4"he says at once [once]"
5"she says abruptly [abruptly]"
6"she says automatically [automatically]"
7"he says quietly, His gaze doesn’t move from her face [quietly]"
8"she says, because anything else feels too raw [too]"
9"she says instead [instead]"
10"he says, so quietly she almost has to read the words off his lips [quietly almost]"
11"he says simply [simply]"
12"Instead, she thinks of Eva’s careful instructions scribbled on the fridge, of the way Eva had hugged her at the station and said, She thinks of Alistair Finch’s smirk and disappearing act. [Instead,]"
34.4602% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount2899
totalAiIsmAdverbs19
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count1
2
adverb"deliberately"
count1
3
adverb"gently"
count1
4
adverb"lightly"
count2
5
adverb"perfectly"
count1
6
adverb"shyly"
count1
7
adverb"slowly"
count1
8
adverb"softly"
count1
9
adverb"suddenly"
count2
10
adverb"utterly"
count1
11
adverb"really"
count3
12
adverb"very"
count3
highlights
0"carefully"
1"completely"
2"deliberately"
3"gently"
4"lightly"
5"perfectly"
6"shyly"
7"slowly"
8"softly"
9"suddenly"
10"utterly"
11"really"
12"very"
80.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Patel"
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
93.1011% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount2899
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"calculated"
count1
1
word"calculating"
count1
highlights
0"calculated"
1"calculating"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences233
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences233
filterMatches
0"know"
hedgeMatches
0"seems to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount6
totalSentences295
matches
0"hates that she"
1"hates that the"
2"been…reconsidering that answer"
3"hates that he"
4"chooses that moment"
5"know that you"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs143
mean20.1
std13.25
cv0.659
sampleLengths
021
112
26
352
411
512
624
739
814
920
1020
1113
1223
1354
146
1515
1623
174
1832
199
203
2137
2228
2324
2428
254
266
2725
2849
2933
3024
318
3221
3311
3440
354
3617
3732
3813
3917
4037
4151
4217
4348
4422
4526
4666
476
4810
4940
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences233
matches
0"been photoshopped"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs355
matches(empty)
74.8353% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1993
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount135
adverbRatio0.0677370797792273
lyAdverbCount42
lyAdverbRatio0.021073758153537382
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences295
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences295
mean9.75
std7.85
cv0.805
sampleLengths
021
112
26
39
44
539
67
74
812
923
101
1116
1213
1310
1412
152
164
1716
188
1912
205
218
2223
2319
2421
2514
266
2715
2820
293
304
3116
3216
338
341
352
361
376
3813
397
4011
418
429
4311
4412
4512
4615
4713
483
491
59.4350% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.39322033898305087
totalSentences295
uniqueOpeners116
65.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags50
fancyCount22
fancyTags
0"She yanks the door open with a sharp, (yank open)"
1"he says, low and smooth, with that liquid French undertone that once turned her brain into porridge at the worst possible times (say, smooth, once turn)"
2"she snaps (snap)"
3"Rory mutters at the cat (rory mutter at the cat)"
4"he says softly (say softly)"
5"she says abruptly (say abruptly)"
6"he begins (begin)"
7"she says automatically (say automatically)"
8"demands (demand)"
9"she lies (lie)"
10"she mutters (mutter)"
11"he says quietly, His gaze doesn’t move from her face (say quietly, does not move)"
12"she repeats (repeat)"
13"she snaps (snap)"
14"she says, grinding the word out (say, grind)"
15"she says instead (say instead)"
16"he says, so quietly she almost has to read the words off his lips (say, almost to read)"
17"he repeats (repeat)"
18"he says simply (say simply)"
19"Instead, she thinks of Eva’s careful instructions scribbled on the fridge, of the way Eva had hugged her at the station and said, She thinks of Alistair Finch’s smirk and disappearing act. (think scribble hug say, think disappear)"
85.4999%