| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.483 | | leniency | 0.966 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 92.81% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1391 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 24.51% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1391 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "throbbed" | | 3 | "rhythmic" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "stark" | | 6 | "oppressive" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "tracing" | | 9 | "marble" | | 10 | "dancing" | | 11 | "velvet" | | 12 | "depths" | | 13 | "crystalline" | | 14 | "loomed" | | 15 | "standard" | | 16 | "intricate" | | 17 | "calculating" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "let out a breath" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "let out a breath" | | 1 | "hung in the air" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 39.34% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 69 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 84 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1384 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 72.45% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 46 | | wordCount | 1096 | | uniqueNames | 17 | | maxNameDensity | 1.55 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 17 | | Carter | 1 | | English | 1 | | Nyx | 8 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Veil | 2 | | Fae-forged | 2 | | Cardiff | 2 | | Great | 1 | | Hall | 1 | | Isolde | 1 | | Fae | 3 | | Shade | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Dymas | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Shade" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.724 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a relic from a different life" | | 1 | "seemed unnaturally bright as if the realm were trying to color her in its own gaudy palette" | | 2 | "looked like a shadow, and her blue eyes s" | | 3 | "bread that seemed to breathe, their crusts rising and falling in a slow, hypnotic rhythm" | | 4 | "table that seemed to have no end" | | 5 | "looked like broken glass stitched togethe" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 2.89 | | wordCount | 1384 | | matches | | 0 | "not a door but a dissolution" | | 1 | "not on muddy English soil, but on grass so vibrantly green it looked painted" | | 2 | "not made of wood, but of braided copper" | | 3 | "not water, but a deep violet wine" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | |
| 88.32% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 41.94 | | std | 19.26 | | cv | 0.459 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 40 | | 1 | 42 | | 2 | 47 | | 3 | 37 | | 4 | 56 | | 5 | 26 | | 6 | 70 | | 7 | 63 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 92 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 44 | | 12 | 60 | | 13 | 70 | | 14 | 34 | | 15 | 50 | | 16 | 46 | | 17 | 68 | | 18 | 48 | | 19 | 29 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 43 | | 22 | 35 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 37 | | 26 | 44 | | 27 | 77 | | 28 | 20 | | 29 | 23 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 39 | | 32 | 39 |
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| 90.01% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "was surrounded" | | 1 | "been replaced" | | 2 | "was frayed" |
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| 52.67% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 181 | | matches | | 0 | "were trying" | | 1 | "was beginning" | | 2 | "was holding" | | 3 | "was darkening" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 84 | | ratio | 0.095 | | matches | | 0 | "One moment, the damp, familiar rot of Richmond Park’s autumn leaves filled Rory’s lungs; the next, the air turned cloyingly sweet, thick with the scent of overripe peaches and fermented honey." | | 1 | "Beside her, Nyx didn’t stumble—they simply coalesced, their shifting, violet-eyed silhouette darkening against a sky the color of a bruised apricot." | | 2 | "The Heartstone pendant, a thumb-sized crimson gem, didn't just pulse; it throbbed, a hot, rhythmic beat against her collarbone that signaled they were no longer anywhere near the mortal Veil." | | 3 | "There were no birds, no insects—only the faint, rhythmic bubbling of a distant river." | | 4 | "The scent intensified—roasted meats glazed in spices she couldn't name, sugar caramelizing on an open flame, and the sharp, metallic tang of wine so potent it made her head swim." | | 5 | "They reached a bridge spanning a river of dark, viscous liquid—not water, but a deep violet wine that moved with the consistency of oil." | | 6 | "The amber sky was darkening, the suns—there were three of them, Rory realized now—concurring toward the horizon." | | 7 | "And in the center of the pit, a shimmering, jagged tear hung in the air—a distortion that looked like broken glass stitched together with lightning." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1111 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 30 | | adverbRatio | 0.027002700270027002 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0072007200720072 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 84 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 84 | | mean | 16.48 | | std | 7.51 | | cv | 0.456 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 31 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 30 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 26 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 26 | | 15 | 26 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 30 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 30 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 27 | | 31 | 21 | | 32 | 24 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 33 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 35 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 28 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 19 |
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| 78.57% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.5 | | totalSentences | 84 | | uniqueOpeners | 42 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "Her hand instinctively went to" | | 1 | "They moved forward, descending into" | | 2 | "She looked down at her" | | 3 | "she said, pointing toward the" | | 4 | "It was surrounded by tiered" | | 5 | "They reached a bridge spanning" | | 6 | "she admitted, leaning against the" | | 7 | "She reached down and touched" | | 8 | "They moved off the bridge" | | 9 | "It was tall, dressed in" | | 10 | "It held a tray of" | | 11 | "Its voice wasn't a voice" | | 12 | "They pushed deeper, past a" | | 13 | "They had reached the edge" | | 14 | "It was frayed here, leaking" | | 15 | "She followed their gaze." | | 16 | "He didn't move, but the" | | 17 | "she said, her Cardiff pragmatism" |
| | ratio | 0.269 | |
| 79.40% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 51 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "The transition was not a" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter stumbled, her boots" | | 2 | "Her hand instinctively went to" | | 3 | "The Heartstone pendant, a thumb-sized" | | 4 | "Nyx’s voice drifted over her" | | 5 | "Rory straightened her jacket, feeling" | | 6 | "The moonsilver hilt was a" | | 7 | "Nyx replied, their form elongating" | | 8 | "They moved forward, descending into" | | 9 | "The ground was soft, almost" | | 10 | "She looked down at her" | | 11 | "she said, pointing toward the" | | 12 | "A Great Hall rose from" | | 13 | "It was surrounded by tiered" | | 14 | "The scent intensified—roasted meats glazed" | | 15 | "Rory muttered, remembering the fragments" | | 16 | "Nyx said, their violet eyes" | | 17 | "Flowers with petals like velvet" | | 18 | "Rory hiked her bag higher" | | 19 | "They reached a bridge spanning" |
| | ratio | 0.761 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "To her left, groves of" | | 1 | "To her right, a vineyard" | | 2 | "Even from this distance, Rory" |
| | ratio | 0.045 | |
| 8.93% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone pendant, a thumb-sized crimson gem, didn't just pulse; it throbbed, a hot, rhythmic beat against her collarbone that signaled they were no longer…" | | 1 | "To her right, a vineyard stretched toward the horizon, the vines not made of wood, but of braided copper that hummed with a low, musical vibration." | | 2 | "They reached a bridge spanning a river of dark, viscous liquid—not water, but a deep violet wine that moved with the consistency of oil." | | 3 | "In the shimmering purple depths, her black hair looked like a shadow, and her blue eyes seemed unnaturally bright, as if the realm were trying to color her in i…" | | 4 | "The heat was beginning to press in on her, a humid, sugar-laden weight that made her limbs feel sluggish." | | 5 | "Silver platters held heaps of pomegranates that bled silver juice, and loaves of bread that seemed to breathe, their crusts rising and falling in a slow, hypnot…" | | 6 | "They pushed deeper, past a fountain that sprayed liquid chocolate into the air in intricate, geometric patterns, toward a massive archway draped in vines of bla…" | | 7 | "Below them lay a sprawling amphitheater where hundreds of beings sat at a circular table that seemed to have no end." | | 8 | "And in the center of the pit, a shimmering, jagged tear hung in the air—a distortion that looked like broken glass stitched together with lightning." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx replied, their form elongating as they drifted toward a nearby ridge" | | 1 | "Nyx said, their violet eyes flickering" | | 2 | "Nyx warned, their shadow-form flickering as if agitated by the light" | | 3 | "Rory whispered, her quick mind already calculating the distance" | | 4 | "Nyx finished, their violet eyes fixed on the shimmering tear" | | 5 | "she said, her Cardiff pragmatism cutting through the dread" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 12 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" | | 2 | "she admitted (admit)" | | 3 | "Nyx warned (warn)" | | 4 | "Nyx hissed (hiss)" | | 5 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.414 | | leniency | 0.828 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.414 | |