Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQXHXTPM0H432ZJVHH4J4T

Run Details

Duration:
15.2s
Cost:
$0.006254
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The transition was not a door but a dissolution. One moment, the damp, familiar rot of Richmond Park’s autumn leaves filled Rory’s lungs; the next, the air turned cloyingly sweet, thick with the scent of overripe peaches and fermented honey. Aurora Carter stumbled, her boots finding purchase not on muddy English soil, but on grass so vibrantly green it looked painted. Beside her, Nyx didn’t stumble—they simply coalesced, their shifting, violet-eyed silhouette darkening against a sky the color of a bruised apricot. "This is not Richmond," Rory whispered. Her hand instinctively went to the silver chain at her throat. The Heartstone pendant, a thumb-sized crimson gem, didn't just pulse; it throbbed, a hot, rhythmic beat against her collarbone that signaled they were no longer anywhere near the mortal Veil. "Dymas," Nyx’s voice drifted over her shoulder, a dry rasp like wind through dead reeds. "Prince Belphegor’s larder. Be careful what you breathe, Aurora. The air here is enough to make a starving man forget his name." Rory straightened her jacket, feeling the weight of the Fae-forged blade tucked into her belt. The moonsilver hilt was a reassuring sliver of ice against her hip, a stark contrast to the oppressive warmth of the realm. "Isolde said the path would open at the standing stones, but she didn’t mention the sky would be orange." "The Seer tells you what you need to survive, not what satisfies your curiosity," Nyx replied, their form elongating as they drifted toward a nearby ridge. They moved forward, descending into a valley that defied every law of nature Rory had learned in Cardiff. To her left, groves of trees groaned under the weight of fruit the size of pumpkins, their skins iridescent and translucent, showing the swirling juices within. To her right, a vineyard stretched toward the horizon, the vines not made of wood, but of braided copper that hummed with a low, musical vibration. The ground was soft, almost spongy, and as Rory walked, she noticed the lack of sound. There were no birds, no insects—only the faint, rhythmic bubbling of a distant river. She looked down at her left wrist, tracing the small crescent-shaped scar there with her thumb, a nervous habit that usually grounded her. Today, it felt like a relic from a different life. "Look," she said, pointing toward the center of the valley. A Great Hall rose from the earth like a jagged tooth carved from white marble and gold leaf. It was surrounded by tiered gardens where the very steam rising from the soil seemed to take the shape of dancing figures. Even from this distance, Rory could hear the clatter of copper pans and the frantic rhythm of a kitchen in full swing. The scent intensified—roasted meats glazed in spices she couldn't name, sugar caramelizing on an open flame, and the sharp, metallic tang of wine so potent it made her head swim. "The culinary competitions," Rory muttered, remembering the fragments of lore Isolde had shared. "The soul-contracted chefs." "Souls who thought they were bargaining for talent," Nyx said, their violet eyes flickering. "Now they cook for eternity, trying to satisfy an appetite that has no bottom. Gluttony is not just about eating, Rory. It is about the hollow that cannot be filled." As they drew closer to the gardens, the flora became more aggressive. Flowers with petals like velvet tongues leaned toward them as they passed, their stamens dripping with a thick, golden nectar that hissed when it hit the ground. Rory hiked her bag higher on her shoulder, mindful of the way the Heartstone was now glowing a fierce, angry red. They reached a bridge spanning a river of dark, viscous liquid—not water, but a deep violet wine that moved with the consistency of oil. Rory paused at the crest of the bridge, staring down at her reflection. In the shimmering purple depths, her black hair looked like a shadow, and her blue eyes seemed unnaturally bright, as if the realm were trying to color her in its own gaudy palette. "I feel... heavy," she admitted, leaning against the cold stone railing. The heat was beginning to press in on her, a humid, sugar-laden weight that made her limbs feel sluggish. "Is it the atmosphere?" "It is the invitation," Nyx warned, their shadow-form flickering as if agitated by the light. "Every atom of this place is designed to make you want to stay. To sit. To taste. If you drop your guard, the realm will begin to digest you before you’ve even had a bite." Rory took a sharp breath, forcing the lethargy out of her lungs. She reached down and touched the pommel of the Fae blade. The biting cold of the moonsilver snapped her focus back into place. "Not today. We're here for the rift point, not the buffet." They moved off the bridge and into the outskirts of a grand orchard. Here, the trees were taller, their silver leaves tinkling like wind chimes. Beneath them, long tables were set with linens so white they hurt to look at. Silver platters held heaps of pomegranates that bled silver juice, and loaves of bread that seemed to breathe, their crusts rising and falling in a slow, hypnotic rhythm. A figure emerged from between the trees. It was tall, dressed in the stained whites of a chef, but its movements were jerky, like a marionette. When it turned, Rory saw that its eyes had been replaced by polished amethysts. It held a tray of small, crystalline pastries. "A taste for the travelers?" the figure asked. Its voice wasn't a voice at all, but the sound of silver spoons clinking together. "The Prince provides. The Prince delights." Rory stepped back, her hand flying to the dagger. "No, thank you. We’re just passing through." The creature tilted its head, the amethysts catching the amber light of the sky. "To pass through Dymas is to leave a part of oneself behind. Why not trade a memory for a morsel? A childhood summer for a tart of spun starlight?" "Move aside," Nyx hissed, their shadow billowing outward until they loomed over the creature, a towering silhouette of pure void. The temperature dropped instantly, the sugary heat of the orchard retreating before the Shade’s presence. The creature shivered, its tray rattling, and it melted back into the shadows of the silver-leaved trees without another clink. Rory let out a breath she hadn’t realized she was holding. "A memory? It wanted to buy a memory for a pastry?" "In Dymas, everything is currency if it can be consumed," Nyx said, reverting to their standard height. "The Prince finds mortal experiences... flavorful. We must hurry. The Heartstone is reacting to something ahead. The rift is near." They pushed deeper, past a fountain that sprayed liquid chocolate into the air in intricate, geometric patterns, toward a massive archway draped in vines of black ivy. The amber sky was darkening, the suns—there were three of them, Rory realized now—concurring toward the horizon. As they stepped through the arch, the wonder of the orchards vanished, replaced by a sight that made Rory’s blood run cold. They had reached the edge of a great pit. Below them lay a sprawling amphitheater where hundreds of beings sat at a circular table that seemed to have no end. And in the center of the pit, a shimmering, jagged tear hung in the air—a distortion that looked like broken glass stitched together with lightning. The Veil. It was frayed here, leaking the gray, muted energy of Earth into the vibrant, gluttonous rot of Dymas. "There," Rory whispered, her quick mind already calculating the distance. "The rift. If we can reach the anchor point before the banquet starts..." "Then we can close it," Nyx finished, their violet eyes fixed on the shimmering tear. "But look at the table, Rory." She followed their gaze. At the head of the circular table sat a figure of immense proportions, draped in silks the color of pomegranate seeds. He didn't move, but the very air around him seemed to warp with gravity. Rory gripped her Fae-forged blade, the cold metal a singular point of reality in a world built on excess. "Well," she said, her Cardiff pragmatism cutting through the dread. "I suppose it's a good thing I didn't eat lunch."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Rory whispered, her quick mind already calculating the distance [already]"
85.7143% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1400
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
7.1429% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1400
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"crystalline"
count1
1
word"throbbed"
count1
2
word"oppressive"
count1
3
word"loomed"
count1
4
word"velvet"
count1
5
word"marble"
count1
6
word"calculating"
count1
7
word"intricate"
count1
8
word"stark"
count1
9
word"weight"
count3
10
word"dancing"
count1
highlights
0"crystalline"
1"throbbed"
2"oppressive"
3"loomed"
4"velvet"
5"marble"
6"calculating"
7"intricate"
8"stark"
9"weight"
10"dancing"
66.6667% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
1"hung in the air"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences69
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences69
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"saw that its"
88.3237% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs33
mean41.94
std19.26
cv0.459
sampleLengths
040
142
247
337
456
526
670
763
810
992
1016
1144
1260
1370
1434
1550
1646
1768
1848
1929
2016
2143
2235
2320
2422
2537
2644
2777
2820
2923
3021
3139
3239
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences69
matches
0"was surrounded"
1"been replaced"
2"was frayed"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs181
matches
0"were trying"
1"was beginning"
2"was holding"
3"was darkening"
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1111
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.027002700270027002
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.0072007200720072
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences84
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences84
mean16.48
std7.51
cv0.456
sampleLengths
09
131
221
321
46
511
630
715
822
915
1022
1119
1226
1318
1426
1526
1616
1714
1823
1910
2010
2118
2222
2322
2430
2513
263
2714
2830
2912
3027
3121
3224
3313
3433
3511
3619
374
3815
3935
4012
4111
4212
4311
4413
4512
4615
4728
487
4919
78.5714% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.5
totalSentences84
uniqueOpeners42
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount13
fancyTags
0"Rory whispered (whisper)"
1"Nyx’s voice drifted over her shoulder, a dry rasp like wind through dead reeds (drift)"
2"Nyx replied, their form elongating as they drifted toward a nearby ridge (reply, elongate drift)"
3"she said, pointing toward the center of the valley (say, point)"
4"Rory muttered, remembering the fragments of lore Isolde had shared (mutter, remember share)"
5"Nyx said, their violet eyes flickering (say, flicker)"
6"she admitted, leaning against the cold stone railing (admit, rail)"
7"Nyx warned, their shadow-form flickering as if agitated by the light (warn, flicker agitate)"
8"Nyx hissed, their shadow billowing outward until they loomed over the creature, a towering silhouette of pure void (hiss, billow loom)"
9"Nyx said, reverting to their standard height (say, revert)"
10"Rory whispered, her quick mind already calculating the distance (whisper, already calculate)"
11"Nyx finished, their violet eyes fixed on the shimmering tear (finish, eyes fixed)"
12"she said, her Cardiff pragmatism cutting through the dread (say, cut)"
83.9070%