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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQXNQAN91K4FHDGHCKWQ72
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Model:
Z.AI GLM 4.7
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Mystery: examining a crime scene
Duration:
1m 42s
Cost:
$0.009195
Provider:
Inceptron
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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The air down here tasted of wet iron and something older, something like ozone burnt into stone. Harlow Quinn checked her
watch
, the worn leather strap catching on the cuff of her trench coat. 03:14. The notification had come in forty minutes ago—unidentified disturbance, Sector 4, the abandoned extension of the Northern Line. Most of the Met called it the "Ghost Tunnel," a half-finished stop beneath Camden that had
been bricked
up in the twenties. But tonight, the heavy steel door at the top of the service stairs stood open, the lock sheared clean through. Quinn descended, her boots clicking with military precision against the concrete. The flashlight from her constable up ahead bobbed erratically, cutting through the gloom. She hated scenes like this. Underground scenes always smelled the same—decay and stagnant water—but this one had a metallic tang that set her teeth on edge. "Ma'am, it's just through here," Constable Reed called out, his voice
echoing
slightly
. He sounded young, terrified. "It’s... I’ve never seen anything like it, ma'am." "Keep the beam steady, Reed," Quinn said, her voice low and
calibrated
. She didn't need panic; she needed geometry. They stepped onto the platform. It wasn't the abandoned ruin she expected. The graffiti
was gone
, scraped away or perhaps absorbed, revealing clean, dark brick. Where there should have been trash and rats, there were stalls—makeshift tables constructed of driftwood and bone, draped in
velvet
that
shimmered
even in the harsh LED light. It was a market. Or what was left of one. "Stay on the gravel," Quinn commanded, scanning the perimeter. In the center of the platform, illuminated by a trio of portable work lights, lay the body. A woman
was crouching
beside it, contrasting
sharply
with the police blues milling around the perimeter. She wore a oversized knit cardigan and had a mess of curly red hair that obscured her face. She
was muttering
to herself, ticking things off on her fingers. "That's the consultant, ma'am," Reed said, hovering near the edge of the light. "Ms. Kowalski. From the British Museum. She arrived with the first responding unit, apparently she has clearance for these... anomalies." Quinn approached the body, keeping her breathing even. The victim was male, heavy-set, dressed in a leather apron that was stained dark with fluids. His eyes were open, staring at the ceiling, the pupils blown wide to the edges of the irises. "Don't touch the table," the redhead said without looking up. She had a distinct, crisp accent, Oxford-educated. She tucked a lock of hair behind her left ear, a nervous, repetitive tic. "I'm Detective Quinn," Harlow said, flashing her badge reflexively though the woman hadn't asked. "And you are currently interfering with a crime scene." "I'm preserving the integrity of the anomaly," Eva Kowalski corrected, finally standing up. She adjusted her round glasses, her green eyes flicking over Quinn with a mixture of pity and impatience. She clutched a worn leather satchel tight against her hip. "If your techs start dusting for prints on the altar, they’re going to dissolve the residual aetheric signature." "Altar?" Quinn looked at the makeshift table. "It looks like a butcher block to me, Ms. Kowalski." "Because that is what he was," Eva said, gesturing to the dead man. "A butcher. A crafter. Look at his hands." Quinn crouched down, ignoring the protest in her bad knee. She gloved up and leaned in. The man’s hands were rough, calloused, stained with ink and silver dust. There was a tool resting near his open palm—a small, heavy hammer. "Cause of death looks like exsanguination," Reed offered from the sidelines, eager to please. "But there’s no wound on the body. The blood is... pooled around him, but his skin is intact." Quinn frowned. He leaned over the victim. The chest was still, the skin pale. The pool of liquid beneath the table was viscous, too dark to be arterial spray. It looked like oil, or perhaps ink. She dipped a finger into the liquid. It was warm. "No defensive wounds," Quinn noted aloud. "No signs of struggle. The table is clear." "He was taken by the Trade," Eva said
softly
. She opened her satchel and pulled out a thick, leather-bound book, flipping through pages filled with hand-drawn diagrams. "This is the Veil Market, Detective. It moves every full moon. Someone broke the rules. Someone bought something they couldn't pay for." "It's a murder, Kowalski," Quinn said, standing up. "Murders happen in Camden every day. Drug deals, gang violence, turf wars. This isn't magic; it's chemistry." She pointed to the dark liquid. "That's probably a cocktail of neurotoxins and anticoagulants. Stop reading the tea leaves and look at the evidence." "The evidence isn't on the body," Eva countered, her voice rising an octave. She tucked her hair behind her ear again, faster this time. "It's in the absence." "The absence?" "The theft," Eva said. She pointed a trembling finger at the empty space at the head of the table. "Look at the dust. Look at the sigils
etched
into the wood. The center of the array is empty. Something was taken." Quinn looked where the researcher
was pointing
. The wood surface
was scarred
, gouged with
intricate
, circular patterns that defied simple tool work. In the exact center, the dust
was disturbed
in a perfect circle. Something heavy had sat there. Something valuable. "A robbery gone wrong," Quinn said, her mind racing to fit the pieces into the logic she knew. "He resisted. They dosed him. They took the goods." "If it was a robbery, where is the mess?" Eva challenged. "Where are the footprints in the blood? There is only one set of footprints leaving this stall, Detective. Yours. And mine. The perpetrator didn't walk away." Quinn paused. She looked down at the floor. The victim
was sprawled
awkwardly, half-on, half-off the platform edge. But the dust around the stall was
pristine
. Aside from the settling grit of the last century, there were no scuffs. No fleeing
footsteps
. It was impossible. Unless they flew. Or unless they were never there. Quinn moved around the table, her eyes narrowing. She scanned the brick walls, the shadows pooling in the archways. Her eyes snagged on a small object near the victim’s left elbow, half-hidden beneath a fold of the
velvet
cloth. She reached out and lifted it with a pair of tweezers. It was a compass. Small, brass, heavy for its size. The casing had a patina of verdigris, suggesting great age, but the glass face was
pristine
. Etched into the brass rim were tiny, protective sigils—interlocking triangles and geometric spirals. "Put that down!" Eva hissed, stepping back. "That is a Veil Compass. It’s a
resonance
anchor. If you activate it—" "I'm not activating anything," Quinn said. She held it up to the light. "I'm observing." Inside the glass, the needle was trembling. It
wasn't pointing
North. It
wasn't pointing
to the exit. It
was spinning
violently, whirling like a drill bit trying to bore through the glass. "The needle is magnetized," Quinn said, though the words tasted like ash. "It must be interference from the power lines above." "It's not the power lines," Eva said, her voice barely a whisper. "It’s pointing to the breach. The door is still open." Quinn looked at the compass again. The needle stopped spinning abruptly, snapping to point directly at the dead man’s chest. Then,
slowly
, it
began to
rise. The needle lifted off the face of the compass, straining against the glass, pointing not at a direction on a map, but *up*. Towards the ceiling. Towards the empty air three feet above the corpse. Quinn felt a cold prickle at the base of her neck, the same sensation she’d had three years ago in the warehouse with Morris. The
feeling that the
world had slid sideways, just an inch, and nothing lined up anymore. She looked at the body again. The lack of wounds. The lack of footprints. The terrified expression on a man who hadn't had time to raise his hammer. If the needle
was pointing
at a rift—a tear in the space above the table—and the blood had
been drained
... "Reed," Quinn said, her voice tight. "Get the UV light. Scan the air directly above the victim." "Ma'am?" Reed blinked, confused. "The air?" "Do it." Reed fumbled with his kit, pulling out the handheld ultraviolet lamp. He clicked it on and aimed the beam at the empty space above the butcher block. The purple beam cut through the gloom. And there, floating in the stillness of the tunnel, a faint, misty silhouette illuminated. It wasn't a ghost. It was a spray pattern. A fan of microscopic droplets suspended in mid-air, defying gravity, painting a violent arc in the void. It was a shadow of blood that had no business being there. "It didn't run off," Quinn whispered, the logic finally clicking into place, horrific and undeniable. "It didn't walk away. It opened up right on top of him." Eva nodded, her face pale. "The Market demands balance, Detective. He tried to craft a bridge he couldn't control. The compass tried to warn him." Quinn lowered the tweezers, the Veil Compass ticking
softly
in her hand. She looked at the shadows stretching away from the light, the empty stalls of the Veil Market
watch
ing them in silence. This wasn't a gang hit. This was a boundary violation. And for the first time since Morris died, she
was looking
at the mechanism of the impossible,
cataloged
and cold in her palm. "Bag the compass," Quinn ordered, her voice hardening, sliding back into the armor of her rank. "And get Kowalski a transport back to the Museum. She's now a material witness." She looked down at the suspended blood in the UV light, then at the compass in her hand. The needle was still pointing up, straining toward the dark. Quinn checked her
watch
again. 03:22. Time to get to work.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
17.3913%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
23
adverbTagCount
8
adverbTags
0
"Constable Reed called out, his voice echoing slightly [slightly]"
1
"Harlow said, flashing her badge reflexively though the woman hadn't asked [reflexively]"
2
"Eva Kowalski corrected, finally standing up [finally]"
3
"Eva said softly [softly]"
4
"Quinn said, though the words tasted like ash [like]"
5
"Eva said, her voice barely a whisper [barely]"
6
"Quinn whispered, the logic finally clicking into place, horrific and undeniable [finally]"
7
"Quinn ordered, her voice hardening, sliding back into the armor of her rank [back]"
70.0957%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1672
totalAiIsmAdverbs
5
found
0
adverb
"sharply"
count
1
1
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
2
adverb
"slowly"
count
1
3
adverb
"softly"
count
2
highlights
0
"sharply"
1
"slightly"
2
"slowly"
3
"softly"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
22.2488%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1672
totalAiIsms
13
found
0
word
"resonance"
count
1
1
word
"shimmered"
count
1
2
word
"velvet"
count
2
3
word
"pristine"
count
2
4
word
"calibrated"
count
1
5
word
"cataloged"
count
1
6
word
"intricate"
count
1
7
word
"footsteps"
count
1
8
word
"echoing"
count
1
9
word
"etched"
count
2
highlights
0
"resonance"
1
"shimmered"
2
"velvet"
3
"pristine"
4
"calibrated"
5
"cataloged"
6
"intricate"
7
"footsteps"
8
"echoing"
9
"etched"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
128
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
2
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
128
filterMatches
0
"watch"
hedgeMatches
0
"began to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
153
matches
0
"feeling that the"
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
57
mean
29.04
std
17.6
cv
0.606
sampleLengths
0
95
1
50
2
25
3
19
4
53
5
10
6
9
7
17
8
45
9
33
10
42
11
31
12
23
13
59
14
17
15
21
16
40
17
32
18
46
19
14
20
49
21
49
22
28
23
2
24
41
25
41
26
27
27
37
28
42
29
6
30
6
31
39
32
11
33
4
34
35
35
20
36
15
37
32
38
21
39
22
40
20
41
41
42
40
43
28
44
20
45
17
46
6
47
2
48
27
49
47
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
6
totalSentences
128
matches
0
"been bricked"
1
"was gone"
2
"was scarred"
3
"was disturbed"
4
"was sprawled"
5
"been drained"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
8
totalVerbs
224
matches
0
"was crouching"
1
"was muttering"
2
"was pointing"
3
"wasn't pointing"
4
"wasn't pointing"
5
"was spinning"
6
"was pointing"
7
"was looking"
88.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1252
adjectiveStacks
2
stackExamples
0
"revealing clean, dark brick."
1
"thick, leather-bound book,"
adverbCount
40
adverbRatio
0.03194888178913738
lyAdverbCount
15
lyAdverbRatio
0.011980830670926517
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
153
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
153
mean
10.82
std
6.04
cv
0.558
sampleLengths
0
17
1
17
2
1
3
18
4
22
5
20
6
11
7
13
8
5
9
21
10
13
11
4
12
8
13
12
14
7
15
5
16
7
17
13
18
28
19
4
20
6
21
9
22
17
23
16
24
18
25
11
26
13
27
20
28
8
29
16
30
18
31
10
32
7
33
14
34
14
35
9
36
13
37
18
38
10
39
18
40
7
41
10
42
13
43
8
44
10
45
6
46
12
47
12
48
14
49
18
41.0596%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
18
diversityRatio
0.31788079470198677
totalSentences
151
uniqueOpeners
48
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
23
fancyCount
19
fancyTags
0
"Most of the Met called it the a half-finished stop beneath Camden that had been bricked up in the twenties. (call brick up)"
1
"Constable Reed called out, his voice echoing slightly (call out, echo slightly)"
2
"Quinn said, her voice low and calibrated (say, calibrate)"
3
"Quinn commanded, scanning the perimeter (command, scan)"
4
"Reed said, hovering near the edge of the light (say, hover)"
5
"the redhead said without looking up (say up)"
6
"Harlow said, flashing her badge reflexively though the woman hadn't asked (say, flash does not ask)"
7
"Eva Kowalski corrected, finally standing up (correct, finally stand up)"
8
"Eva said, gesturing to the dead man (say, gesture)"
9
"Reed offered from the sidelines, eager to please (offer)"
10
"Quinn noted aloud (note)"
11
"Eva said softly (say softly)"
12
"Quinn said, standing up (say, stand up)"
13
"Eva countered, her voice rising an octave (counter, rise)"
14
"Quinn said, her mind racing to fit the pieces into the logic she knew (say, race fit know)"
15
"hissed (hiss)"
16
"Quinn said, though the words tasted like ash (say, taste like)"
17
"Quinn whispered, the logic finally clicking into place, horrific and undeniable (whisper, finally click place)"
18
"Quinn ordered, her voice hardening, sliding back into the armor of her rank (order, harden, slide back)"
78.7527%