| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.625 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 67.66% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1237 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "lightly" | | 1 | "completely" | | 2 | "carefully" | | 3 | "perfectly" | | 4 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 55.54% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1237 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sentinels" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "flickered" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "profound" | | 5 | "aftermath" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "depths" | | 8 | "warmth" | | 9 | "pulse" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 81.63% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 70 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "appeared to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "seemed to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1226 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 78.50% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 54 | | wordCount | 1049 | | uniqueNames | 18 | | maxNameDensity | 1.43 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | London | 2 | | Nyx | 8 | | Shade | 2 | | Rory | 15 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | November | 1 | | Speaking | 1 | | Isolde | 5 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Grove | 5 | | Hel | 1 | | Fae-touched | 1 | | Veil | 2 | | Fae | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Shade" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Pendant" | | 4 | "Speaking" | | 5 | "Isolde" | | 6 | "Grove" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "November" | | 4 | "Hel" | | 5 | "Fae-touched" | | 6 | "Fae" |
| | globalScore | 0.785 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like an intrusion here" | | 1 | "quite define—too golden for morning, too silver for afternoon, shifting between the two with each step" | | 2 | "sounded like prophecy or warning or both" | | 3 | "cottage that seemed to have grown rather than been built" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.816 | | wordCount | 1226 | | matches | | 0 | "Not hidden by trees or fog, but simply absent, as if they'd never existed" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 76.80% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 28 | | mean | 43.79 | | std | 18.34 | | cv | 0.419 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 39 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 48 | | 3 | 28 | | 4 | 56 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 72 | | 7 | 33 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 71 | | 10 | 36 | | 11 | 37 | | 12 | 64 | | 13 | 65 | | 14 | 62 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 73 | | 17 | 51 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 56 | | 20 | 58 | | 21 | 28 | | 22 | 49 | | 23 | 56 | | 24 | 54 | | 25 | 44 | | 26 | 42 | | 27 | 17 |
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| 90.23% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "were gone" | | 1 | "been built" | | 2 | "were woven" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 175 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 76 | | ratio | 0.105 | | matches | | 0 | "Beyond the threshold, wildflowers bloomed in impossible profusion—lupines and foxgloves, primroses and columbines, flowers that had no business growing together, let alone in November." | | 1 | "The ambient noise of London—that constant urban hum she'd stopped consciously hearing years ago—simply ceased." | | 2 | "Behind her, Nyx left no trace at all—the flowers sprang back up as if untouched, though the Shade's boots should have left clear impressions in the soft earth." | | 3 | "The light filtering through the canopy held a quality she couldn't quite define—too golden for morning, too silver for afternoon, shifting between the two with each step." | | 4 | "At first she felt nothing unusual—then it hit her." | | 5 | "The birches gave way to older trees—oaks with trunks wider than Rory could wrap her arms around, their bark scored with symbols that hurt to look at directly." | | 6 | "She'd eaten before coming here—Nyx had insisted on that, warned her never to enter the Grove hungry—but her mouth watered anyway." | | 7 | "A place where information—and things—could flow between worlds that should never touch." |
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| 81.06% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1064 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "quick over smooth stones," | | 1 | "watchful, pressing against her" |
| | adverbCount | 51 | | adverbRatio | 0.047932330827067667 | | lyAdverbCount | 19 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.017857142857142856 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 76 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 76 | | mean | 16.13 | | std | 8.56 | | cv | 0.531 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 26 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 28 | | 10 | 24 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 27 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 28 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 31 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 27 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 22 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 36 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 30 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 25 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 18 |
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| 52.63% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.39473684210526316 | | totalSentences | 76 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "Simply aware, the way a" | | 1 | "Somewhere ahead, she could smell" | | 2 | "Then she stepped forward, over" |
| | ratio | 0.046 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 13 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "She studied the stones." | | 1 | "They formed a rough circle," | | 2 | "She drew a sharp breath," | | 3 | "They looked down at their" | | 4 | "She glanced back and immediately" | | 5 | "She resisted the urge to" | | 6 | "she said, surprised by the" | | 7 | "They pressed on, and the" | | 8 | "She'd eaten before coming here—Nyx" | | 9 | "Its walls were woven from" | | 10 | "She smiled, and it was" | | 11 | "Her voice held layers like" | | 12 | "She thought of the rift" |
| | ratio | 0.2 | |
| 67.69% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 51 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "The oak standing stones appeared" | | 1 | "Rory stopped so abruptly that" | | 2 | "The Shade's voice carried the" | | 3 | "Rory touched the Heartstone Pendant" | | 4 | "The crimson gem had been" | | 5 | "Nyx's violet eyes flickered" | | 6 | "She studied the stones." | | 7 | "They formed a rough circle," | | 8 | "Rory stepped forward" | | 9 | "The moment she crossed between" | | 10 | "The ambient noise of London—that" | | 11 | "She drew a sharp breath," | | 12 | "Nyx flowed through the boundary" | | 13 | "They looked down at their" | | 14 | "Rory observed, though her voice" | | 15 | "The path ahead was barely" | | 16 | "Wildflowers grew in such density" | | 17 | "She glanced back and immediately" | | 18 | "The standing stones were gone." | | 19 | "Nyx's whisper-voice held an edge" |
| | ratio | 0.785 | |
| 76.92% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 29.22% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The oak standing stones appeared without warning, gray sentinels materializing from the London fog as if they'd been hiding just behind a curtain." | | 1 | "Beyond the threshold, wildflowers bloomed in impossible profusion—lupines and foxgloves, primroses and columbines, flowers that had no business growing together…" | | 2 | "The path ahead was barely visible, more suggestion than trail, winding between silver birches whose bark gleamed as if lit from within." | | 3 | "Behind her, Nyx left no trace at all—the flowers sprang back up as if untouched, though the Shade's boots should have left clear impressions in the soft earth." | | 4 | "The water ran clear and quick over smooth stones, each one perfectly round and sitting in arrangements that looked deliberate but random, like words in a langua…" | | 5 | "Mushrooms grew in fairy rings at their bases, purple and luminescent, releasing spores that drifted upward like inverted rain." | | 6 | "She smiled, and it was both welcoming and unsettling, the expression of something that wore a human face but had forgotten some crucial detail of how humans act…" |
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| 75.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory observed, though her voice came out quieter than intended" |
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| 25.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory observed (observe)" | | 1 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.188 | | leniency | 0.375 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.25 | |