Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQY182A119SC03BV1YF6MH

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Duration:
1m 44s
Cost:
$0.014293
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The first deadbolt slid back with a heavy metallic clunk, followed by the second, then the third. Rory paused with her hand on the chain, listening to the muffled sounds of Brick Lane bleeding through the wood. Traffic, rain, the distant shout of a drunk tourist. She undid the chain and pulled the door open. Lucien stood on the landing, water dripping from the brim of an umbrella he wasn't holding. He looked exactly as he had six months ago, when he'd walked out of her life without a backward glance. The charcoal suit was tailored to within an inch of its life, hugging shoulders that seemed too broad for the cramped hallway. His platinum hair was slicked back, gleaming under the flickering fluorescent light of the stairwell. But it was the eyes that hit her first. The amber one caught the light like polished honey; the black one swallowed it whole. You're blocking the heat, she said. Her voice sounded steadier than she felt. Lucien didn't move. He leaned on the ivory handle of his cane, the weight of him resting easily on the thin wood. Behind him, the smell of turmeric and cumin drifted up from the curry house below, mixing with the scent of wet wool and ozone that always seemed to cling to him. Aurora, he said. His voice was a low rumble, French accent softening the edges of her name. It's Rory. You know that. Do I? He stepped forward, forcing her to retreat or be brushed by the lapel of his coat. She stepped back. He crossed the threshold, bringing the chill of the London night into the warm clutter of Eva's flat. The space was barely large enough for one person, let alone two. Every surface was drowning in paper. Books lay spine-up on the floor, scrolls were pinned to the walls with knitting needles, and research notes formed a precarious archipelago across the dining table. Ptolemy, Eva's tabby cat, jumped down from the top of a bookshelf and wound himself around Lucien's polished shoes, purring like a diesel engine. Of course he likes you, Rory said, closing the door and engaging the first lock. Everyone does. Eventually. Lucien tapped the cane against the floorboards. The sound was sharp in the small room. He turned to face her, and the air between them tightened, drawn taut like a bowstring. You changed your hair. It's the same length it was in Marseille. Shorter. He tilted his head. It suits you. Less... hiding. Rory crossed her arms, feeling the familiar ridge of the crescent scar on her left wrist beneath her sleeve. She hadn't thought about Marseille in months. She hadn't thought about the way the sun hit the water there, or the way Lucien looked when he wasn't wearing a suit, or the way he'd lied to her face before vanishing into the supernatural underworld he called home. Why are you here, Lucien? I heard you were in trouble. You hear a lot of things. That's your job. And yet, I still came. He moved further into the room, navigating the obstacle course of Eva's research with an eerie grace. He stopped by the table, running a gloved finger over a stack of maps. You are staying with Eva. Temporarily. Because of him? Evan. The name tasted like bile. Rory walked past him to the small kitchenette, needing something to do with her hands. She put the kettle on. I don't need a fixer, Lucien. I need you to leave. You needed me in Avaros. You needed me when the shadows started moving on their own. He turned, leaning his hip against the table. The cane hung loose in his grip. You needed me when you decided running to London was better than facing what you are. I'm human, she snapped. The kettle began to whistle, a rising shriek that filled the silence. She slammed her hand down on the switch to kill it. I am perfectly, boringly human. Lucien pushed off the table. In two strides he was in front of her. He was taller than her by nearly a foot, looming without trying. He reached out, his hand hovering near her wrist. She flinched, but he didn't touch the scar. He just covered her hand with his. His skin was warm, hotter than it should be. You are many things, Rory. Boring is not one of them. She looked up into those mismatched eyes. The hurt was there, buried under layers of professionalism and that infuriating calm, but it was there. She remembered the last night they'd spoken. The rain had been harder then. He'd told her it was too dangerous to be near him. He'd told her he was doing it for her protection. She'd told him she wasn't a child to be managed. You left, she said quietly. You didn't explain. You just vanished. I removed the target from your back. By becoming the target yourself? Someone has to hold the line. His thumb brushed over her knuckles. The contact sent a jolt through her that had nothing to do with magic and everything to do with memory. She remembered the weight of his hand there, the way he used to trace the lines of her palm when they were sitting on balconies in the south of France, pretending the world wasn't full of monsters. I didn't ask you to protect me, Lucien. I know. He sighed, a rare crack in his composure. That is why I admire you. And why I fear for you. Ptolemy meowed, rubbing against Rory's leg, breaking the spell. She pulled her hand away, wrapping her fingers around the cold ceramic of a mug. She needed the barrier. She needed the heat. You can't just show up here, she said, pouring the water. The steam rose between them. Eva has three deadbolts for a reason. Eva is currently in Cardiff visiting her mother. I checked. He took the mug she offered, their fingers brushing again. He didn't let go immediately. I am not here to intrude, Rory. I am here because the things that hunted you in Marseille have found a trail. They know you are in London. Rory felt the blood drain from her face. She looked at the door, at the locks she had just engaged. They felt flimsy now. Paper thin. How long? she asked. As long as it takes. I have a safe house. No. She set her mug down on the counter with a clink. I'm not running again. I'm not leaving Eva's flat. Then I stay here. There's nowhere to sleep. I do not require much sleep. He took a sip of the tea, his eyes never leaving hers. And the sofa looks adequate. Rory looked at the sofa. It was buried under a pile of grimoires and a throw blanket. She looked back at Lucien. He looked exhausted, now that she was really looking. There were fine lines around his eyes that hadn't been there before. The suit was immaculate, but the man inside it was worn down. You look like hell, she said. A compliment, coming from you. Don't push it. She moved past him, heading for the pile of books on the sofa. She began to clear them, stacking them on the floor. Her heart was hammering against her ribs, a frantic rhythm she couldn't suppress. He was here. He was real. And the anger she'd nursed for six months was crumbling into something sharper, something more dangerous. Lucien watched her work. He didn't offer to help. He just stood there, a sentinel in charcoal and platinum, guarding the door she had locked against the world. Rory, he said. She stopped, holding a heavy tome against her chest. What? I did not leave because I wanted to. She knew that. She had known it in her gut even while her mind screamed that he was a coward. She set the book down on the stack. I know. Good. He set his cane against the wall and loosened his tie, just a fraction. Then we understand each other. Not everything, she said. No. He looked at her, and for a moment, the half-demon mask slipped. The amber eye softened. The black one seemed less like a void and more like a shadowed room. But we have time. Rory looked at the door, then back at him. The rain lashed against the windowpane, sealing them in. The smell of curry and old paper and him surrounded her. She picked up her mug and walked to the sofa, sitting down and patting the space beside her. Don't get comfortable, she said. Lucien picked up his cane and walked over. He sat down, leaving a precise foot of space between them. Ptolemy jumped up and settled in the gap, purring loudly. I would not dream of it, Lucien said. But he didn't move away. And when Rory leaned back, her shoulder brushed against his arm. He didn't pull back. They sat in the silence of the flat, listening to the city breathe outside, two people who had parted in the rain and found each other in the storm.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
93.46% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1528
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
64.01% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1528
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"gleaming"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"chill"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"navigating"
count1
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"looming"
count1
7
word"sentinel"
count1
8
word"comfortable"
count1
highlights
0"gleaming"
1"weight"
2"chill"
3"familiar"
4"navigating"
5"silence"
6"looming"
7"sentinel"
8"comfortable"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"sent a jolt through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences177
matches(empty)
62.15% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount6
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences177
filterMatches
0"know"
1"hear"
2"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences177
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1528
ratio0
matches(empty)
27.78% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions7
matches
0"Aurora, he said."
1"Of course he likes you, Rory said, closing the door and engaging the first lock."
2"You left, she said quietly."
3"You look like hell, she said."
4"Rory, he said."
5"Not everything, she said."
6"I would not dream of it, Lucien said."
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions62
wordCount1528
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.92
worstName"You"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Brick1
Lane1
French1
Rory13
London3
Eva7
Lucien13
Marseille3
Avaros1
France1
Cardiff1
You14
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
3"You"
4"Ptolemy"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"London"
3"Marseille"
4"Avaros"
5"France"
6"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences105
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1528
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences177
matches
0"screamed that he"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean26.34
std22.66
cv0.86
sampleLengths
055
197
213
353
417
55
639
768
818
935
108
1110
1266
135
146
159
1641
171
184
1936
2047
2132
2259
2311
2468
2511
267
275
2869
298
3022
3132
3223
3353
3426
354
3610
3721
384
394
4023
4155
426
435
4461
4528
463
4710
488
4930
95.35% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences177
matches
0"was tailored"
1"was slicked"
2"were pinned"
3"was buried"
4"was worn"
27.40% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount8
totalVerbs309
matches
0"wasn't holding"
1"was drowning"
2"wasn't wearing"
3"was doing"
4"were sitting"
5"was really looking"
6"was hammering"
7"was crumbling"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences177
ratio0.006
matches
0"The amber one caught the light like polished honey; the black one swallowed it whole."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1530
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount49
adverbRatio0.03202614379084967
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.00849673202614379
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences177
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences177
mean8.63
std6.55
cv0.759
sampleLengths
017
120
29
39
416
520
622
715
89
915
106
117
123
1319
1431
153
1614
172
183
192
2016
213
2218
2312
246
2526
2624
2715
282
291
307
318
3216
334
348
351
364
373
381
391
4019
417
4240
435
446
456
463
475
4817
4914
37.57% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats22
diversityRatio0.2655367231638418
totalSentences177
uniqueOpeners47
63.29% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences158
matches
0"Of course he likes you,"
1"Then I stay here."
2"Then we understand each other."
ratio0.019
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount92
totalSentences158
matches
0"She undid the chain and"
1"He looked exactly as he"
2"His platinum hair was slicked"
3"You're blocking the heat, she"
4"Her voice sounded steadier than"
5"He leaned on the ivory"
6"His voice was a low"
7"You know that."
8"He stepped forward, forcing her"
9"She stepped back."
10"He crossed the threshold, bringing"
11"He turned to face her,"
12"You changed your hair."
13"It's the same length it"
14"He tilted his head."
15"It suits you."
16"She hadn't thought about Marseille"
17"She hadn't thought about the"
18"I heard you were in"
19"You hear a lot of"
ratio0.582
29.62% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount136
totalSentences158
matches
0"The first deadbolt slid back"
1"Rory paused with her hand"
2"Traffic, rain, the distant shout"
3"She undid the chain and"
4"Lucien stood on the landing,"
5"He looked exactly as he"
6"The charcoal suit was tailored"
7"His platinum hair was slicked"
8"The amber one caught the"
9"You're blocking the heat, she"
10"Her voice sounded steadier than"
11"Lucien didn't move."
12"He leaned on the ivory"
13"Aurora, he said."
14"His voice was a low"
15"You know that."
16"He stepped forward, forcing her"
17"She stepped back."
18"He crossed the threshold, bringing"
19"The space was barely large"
ratio0.861
31.65% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences158
matches
0"Because of him?"
ratio0.006
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences58
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The charcoal suit was tailored to within an inch of its life, hugging shoulders that seemed too broad for the cramped hallway."
1"They sat in the silence of the flat, listening to the city breathe outside, two people who had parted in the rain and found each other in the storm."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
80.5199%