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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQYGM1J134QYGP8VA540X5
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Model:
Z.AI GLM 4.6
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Mystery: examining a crime scene
Duration:
1m 16s
Cost:
$0.006070
Provider:
DeepInfra
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The air in the abandoned Tube station bit with the cold of the earth and the sharp, metallic tang of ozone. Detective Harlow Quinn descended the tiled steps, her
footsteps
echoing
in a space that should have
been filled
with the roar of passing trains but was instead steeped in a heavy, unnatural silence. Up top, Camden was alive with its usual chaotic
symphony
of music and traffic, but down here, a different world pressed in. Flickering gaslight in ornate, wrought-iron sconces cast long,
dancing
shadows across stalls draped in
velvet
and chain, displaying things that had no place in a rational, orderly universe. Quinn’s gaze, sharp and
methodical
, swept the scene. She noted the worn leather
watch
on her left wrist, its hands ticking past 2 a.m. Time was a luxury she didn’t have. At the center of the platform, a small area had
been cordoned
off with police tape, a jarring splash of modern bureaucracy against the ancient, arcane backdrop. A young uniformed officer, face pale and sweat-beaded, stood guard. He nodded stiffly as she approached. “Detective Quinn.” “What have we got, Davies?” “Male victim, John Doe at the moment. No ID. Found him an hour ago when the market… uh, opened for business.” “The Veil Market,” Quinn corrected, her voice flat. She’d read the briefings, the half-mad field reports from officers who’d stumbled upon this place before. She’d never believed them. Not until three years ago, when DS Morris had simply… vanished. Now, she believed everything. “Yeah. The Veil Market,” Davies repeated, swallowing hard. “No witnesses. No one saw or heard a thing. It’s like he just… dropped.” Quinn ducked under the tape. The body
was laid
out on the grimy tiles, a man in his late fifties, expensively dressed but disheveled. His eyes were open, staring at the arched brick ceiling with an expression of
profound
surprise. There were no marks on him. No blood, no wounds, no signs of a struggle. His expensive wool coat
was unbuttoned
, his pockets turned out by the first responders, but otherwise, he looked like he’d lain down for a nap and forgotten to wake up. “Kowalski,” Quinn said, not looking up from the body. A figure shuffled forward from the edge of the light, clutching a worn leather satchel to her chest. Eva Kowalski. Curly red hair framed a face dominated by round glasses and a constellation of freckles. She kept
nervously
tucking a stray strand behind her left ear. Quinn had requested her from the British Museum’s restricted archives, a reluctant consultant on a case that
was bleeding
outside the lines of reality. “Detective,” Eva said, her voice a little breathless. “It’s… just as I feared.” Quinn straightened up, her sharp jaw a tight line. “Spare me the fortune-telling, Kowalski. Just the facts.” “I’m trying,” Eva insisted, pushing her glasses up her nose. “The facts are… strange. There’s no residual energy from a conventional weapon. No chemical traces. The ambient thaumaturgical fields are disturbed, but not in a way that suggests a violent discharge. It’s more like a… a vacuum. Something was pulled out of him, not ripped.” Quinn grunted, unimpressed. She’d heard talk of ‘thaumaturgical fields’ before. It was academic jargon for ‘we can’t explain it.’ She knelt, her movements precise, economical. She catalogued the victim’s polished leather shoes, the slight scuff on the toe of the left one, the way his hands lay
loosely
at his sides, palms up. No defensive wounds. No
clenched fists
. He hadn’t fought. He hadn’t even braced himself. “A mugging gone wrong?” Quinn offered, the standard, boring explanation she
was supposed
to be looking for. “I don’t think so,” Eva said, her gaze drifting to the stalls around them. “Look at his pockets. They were turned out, yes, but there’s nothing of value missing. His wallet is still here, full of cash. His
watch
is still on his wrist. A thief wouldn’t leave those.” Quinn’s eyes
flicked
to the victim’s wrist. A heavy gold
watch
,
gleaming
even in the dim light. Eva was right. It didn’t fit. She ran her gaze over the scene again, looking for the one thing that didn’t belong. The one thing everyone else had missed. Her eyes, accustomed to parsing the chaos of London’s streets for the tell-tale sign of a concealed weapon or a nervous lie, caught it. A
glint
of brass, half-hidden beneath the victim’s outstr
etched
fingers. She nudged the hand aside with a gloved finger. It was a compass. Small, brass, with a faint greenish patina of verdigris blooming in the crevices. The face
was etched
with
intricate
sigils that swam before her eyes, refusing to resolve into any known alphabet. It was cold to the touch, heavier than it looked. “What’s this?” Quinn held it up. Eva leaned in, her scholarly curiosity momentarily overriding her nervousness. “A Veil Compass. They’re rare. Crafted by a Shade artisan, supposedly. They don’t point north.” “Then what do they point to?” Quinn asked, her voice low. “The nearest supernatural rift. Portal. Weak spot between worlds. They’re a tool for navigators, for people who travel the… in-between places.” Eva tucked her hair again, a quick, anxious gesture. “It must have been his. Maybe he was a traveler.” “Maybe,” Quinn said, but she wasn’t convinced. She turned the compass over in her palm. The glass face
was smudged
, but she could see the needle inside. It
wasn’t pointing
north. It
wasn’t pointing
east, west, or south. It
was quivering
, vibrating with a faint, almost imperceptible hum. And it
was pointing
directly at the victim’s chest. Quinn’s breath caught in her throat. Three years ago, DS Morris had been standing right next to her. One moment, he was there, complaining about the rain. The next, he
was gone
. No explosion, no gunshot, no sound at all. Just a sudden, impossible absence. An official report had cited a ‘gas main explosion,’ a fabrication so thin it was insulting. She knew the truth, or a version of it. She knew something had taken him. She looked from the compass to the dead man’s surprised face. The lack of struggle. The missing valuables. The turned-out pockets, a staged piece of theatre to mislead the mundane police. This wasn’t a robbery. This wasn’t a random act of violence. This was an extraction. “He wasn’t a traveler,” Quinn said, her voice hard as steel. She stood up, closing her gloved hand around the compass. The sigils
seemed to
press into her palm. “He was a destination.” Eva blinked. “I… I don’t understand.” “This thing,” Quinn held up the compass, “wasn’t his. It was the weapon. The killer used it to find him. To lock on. And whatever they did to him, it left him like this. Empty.” She looked at Davies, who
was watching
them with wide, frightened eyes. “Get a forensic team down here. I don’t care what protocols are. I want every speck of dust on this platform bagged and tagged. And get me a list of every known owner of one of these,” she shook the compass, “in the last fifty years.” She started walking away, back towards the stairs and the world she understood. The world of evidence and procedure and good old-fashioned human malice. But as she climbed, the cold brass of the Veil Compass seared through her glove, and she knew she
was leaving
that world behind for good. The killer wasn’t just a person. They were a traveler. And they had a map.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
72.7273%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
11
adverbTagCount
2
adverbTags
0
"Davies repeated, swallowing hard [hard]"
1
"Eva said, her voice a little breathless [little]"
84.0637%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1255
totalAiIsmAdverbs
2
found
0
adverb
"loosely"
count
1
1
adverb
"nervously"
count
1
highlights
0
"loosely"
1
"nervously"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
4.3825%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1255
totalAiIsms
12
found
0
word
"symphony"
count
1
1
word
"flicked"
count
1
2
word
"gleaming"
count
1
3
word
"glint"
count
1
4
word
"velvet"
count
1
5
word
"methodical"
count
1
6
word
"intricate"
count
1
7
word
"profound"
count
1
8
word
"dancing"
count
1
9
word
"footsteps"
count
1
10
word
"echoing"
count
1
11
word
"etched"
count
1
highlights
0
"symphony"
1
"flicked"
2
"gleaming"
3
"glint"
4
"velvet"
5
"methodical"
6
"intricate"
7
"profound"
8
"dancing"
9
"footsteps"
10
"echoing"
11
"etched"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"clenched jaw/fists"
count
1
highlights
0
"clenched fists"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
94
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
94
filterMatches
0
"watch"
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
106
matches
0
"leaving that world"
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
29
mean
42.97
std
28.52
cv
0.664
sampleLengths
0
104
1
58
2
18
3
5
4
21
5
43
6
22
7
85
8
9
9
70
10
13
11
17
12
55
13
67
14
17
15
49
16
80
17
55
18
6
19
25
20
11
21
40
22
57
23
76
24
46
25
33
26
6
27
93
28
65
76.5957%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
8
totalSentences
94
matches
0
"been filled"
1
"been cordoned"
2
"was laid"
3
"was unbuttoned"
4
"was supposed"
5
"was etched"
6
"was smudged"
7
"was gone"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
7
totalVerbs
161
matches
0
"was bleeding"
1
"wasn’t pointing"
2
"wasn’t pointing"
3
"was quivering"
4
"was pointing"
5
"was watching"
6
"was leaving"
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
960
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
24
adverbRatio
0.025
lyAdverbCount
10
lyAdverbRatio
0.010416666666666666
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
106
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
106
mean
11.75
std
9.44
cv
0.803
sampleLengths
0
21
1
33
2
22
3
28
4
8
5
16
6
7
7
27
8
10
9
6
10
2
11
5
12
21
13
8
14
16
15
4
16
10
17
1
18
4
19
8
20
14
21
5
22
19
23
16
24
6
25
9
26
30
27
9
28
18
29
2
30
15
31
11
32
24
33
8
34
5
35
9
36
8
37
10
38
45
39
3
40
7
41
15
42
28
43
3
44
3
45
3
46
5
47
17
48
14
49
35
50.9434%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
11
diversityRatio
0.36792452830188677
totalSentences
106
uniqueOpeners
39
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
11
fancyCount
9
fancyTags
0
"Quinn corrected, her voice flat (correct)"
1
"Davies repeated, swallowing hard (repeat, swallow hard)"
2
"Quinn said, not looking up from the body (say, does not look up)"
3
"Eva said, her voice a little breathless (say, voice)"
4
"Eva insisted, pushing her glasses up her nose (insist, push)"
5
"Eva said, her gaze drifting to the stalls around them (say, drift)"
6
"Quinn said, but she wasn’t convinced (say, does not convince)"
7
"Quinn held up the compass, She looked at Davies, who was watching them with wide, frightened eyes (hold up look watch frighten)"
8
"she shook the compass (shake)"
81.6890%