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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQYGR7BYX7V7FXCVKA3RMM
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Model:
Z.AI GLM 5
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
2m 18s
Cost:
$0.009543
Provider:
Together
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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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The knock came at half past eleven, three sharp raps against weathered wood that cut through the silence of the flat like a blade. Rory stiffened in her chair, the worn paperback she'd been reading slipping from her fingers. Ptolemy lifted his head from where he'd been sleeping on the cluttered desk, his tabby ears swiveling toward the door. The curry house below had closed an hour ago, and Eva wasn't due back from her shift at the hospital until morning. No one else knew this address—no one who mattered, anyway. Three more knocks. Harder this time. Impatient. She crossed the small space on silent feet, the floorboards protesting beneath her
weight
. Her hand found the first deadbolt, then the second, then the third—a habit born of paranoia that had kept her alive more than once. The chain she left in place as she pulled the door open a crack. "Merde. You've added another one." The voice—cultured,
slightly
rough at the edges, carrying that unmistakable French inflection—
sent a jolt through
her chest that she absolutely refused to acknowledge. She
knew that voice
. She'd spent six months trying to
forget that voice
. Lucien Moreau stood in the narrow hallway, his platinum hair slicked back from his face, one amber eye and one black eye fixed on the gap between door and frame. He looked immaculate despite the hour, as though he'd simply stepped out of a boardroom rather than materialized on a Brick Lane doorstep at midnight. His tailored charcoal suit absorbed what little light the hallway's single bulb offered, and his ivory-handled cane hung from his wrist on a leather loop, its concealed blade mercifully hidden for once. "What the hell are you doing here?" The words came out harder than she'd intended. Good. Hard was safe. Hard kept the other things at bay. "May I come in?" "No." "Rory." Her name in his mouth sounded different than it did from anyone else—softer at the edges, like something precious he
was trying
not to damage. "Someone is trying to kill me." She laughed. She couldn't help it. The sound scraped out of her throat, brittle and sharp. "And you thought you'd bring that to my doorstep? You told me you handled your own problems." "I did. I do." His jaw tightened. "This is different." Ptolemy padded over and butted his head against her ankle, purring. The cat had always liked Lucien—had practically abandoned her the first time he'd visited, winding between his legs like they were old friends. Traitor. "Please," he added, and that single word carried more
weight
than it had any right to. Lucien Moreau didn't say please. Lucien Moreau dictated terms and watched people scramble to meet them. She closed the door, slipped the chain free, and pulled it open wide enough for him to enter. A mistake, probably. She'd made plenty of those where he
was concerned
. He stepped inside, his gaze sweeping the cramped space with professional assessment—the towers of books and scrolls, the papers pinned to every available surface, the single window overlooking the street. Ptolemy immediately twined around his legs, and Rory watched the man who'd broken something in her chest six months ago crouch down to scratch behind the cat's ears with genuine affection. "You've redecorated," he said, straightening. "I haven't. It's exactly the same." "Then perhaps it only
feel
s smaller." The implication
hung in the air
between them. She'd felt it too—the way the flat had
seemed to
shrink in the weeks after he'd left, as though the walls
were closing
in on the space he'd once occupied. She moved to the kitchenette, putting distance between them. "Tea?" "Whiskey, if Eva has any." "She doesn't." Eva's only vices were research and the occasional overpriced latte. Rory reached for the bottle of cheap scotch she kept in the back of the cabinet behind a stack of old takeout menus—a hiding spot born of the same paranoia that had produced the deadbolts. She poured two fingers into a chipped mug and set it on the counter. "You're not getting a glass. You'll have to drink it like a civilized human being." A ghost of a smile crossed his face. "I don't believe that's possible with this brand." "Then don't drink it." He picked up the mug anyway, his fingers wrapping around the ceramic. She watched his throat work as he swallowed, watched the way his heterochromatic eyes half-closed at the burn. She looked away. "Someone is trying to kill you," she repeated, folding her arms across her chest. "Who?" "A faction I thought I'd handled years ago. They've resurfaced." "Handled how?" "Does it matter?" "It matters if they're going to show up at my door next." She leaned against the counter, the edge biting into her lower back. "What did you do, Lucien?" The silence stretched between them, filled with the sounds of Brick Lane at night—distant traffic, the wail of a siren somewhere in the city, the hum of the curry house's old ventilation system. His thumb traced the rim of the mug, a gesture she recognized. He
was buying
time, choosing his words. "I acquired something they believe belongs to them." "Acquired." She let the word sit there, heavy with implication. "Stole, you mean." "Retrieved. It was taken from my family decades ago. I simply... relocated it." "And now they want it back." "Now they want my head on a pike as an example to anyone else who crosses them." He said it without inflection, as though discussing the weather. "I've handled the immediate threat, but they'll send others. I need somewhere to stay until I can arrange transport out of London." Rory stared at him. The audacity of it—the sheer, unmitigated gall—should have shocked her. It didn't. This was Lucien, after all. The man who'd walked into her life like he belonged there and walked out like he'd never been. "You have resources," she said
carefully
. "Safe houses. Contacts. People who owe you favors in every corner of this city. And you're asking to stay here? With me?" His jaw worked. "Yes." "Why?" "Because they won't look for me here." The answer should have stung. It didn't. She'd known what she was to him—what she'd always been. A useful convenience. A place to land. Someone who asked the right questions and didn't flinch at the answers. She'd known it even as she'd let herself fall anyway, let herself believe that maybe, just maybe, the things she'd seen in his eyes meant something more. "You left," she said. The words emerged quieter than she'd intended, stripped of their protective sharpness. Lucien set the mug on the counter between them. "I had no choice." "There's always a choice. You just didn't want to make it with me." "I left to protect you." The words cracked out of him, sharp and sudden, and something shifted in his face—the careful composure fracturing for just a moment before he pulled it back together. "The factions, the power struggles—I didn't want you caught in the crossfire. You were already running from one monster. I refused to hand you to another." "That wasn't your decision to make." "No." He met her gaze straight on, and she saw the thing she'd spent six months trying to unsee—the
weight
of everything he hadn't said, sitting there in the space between his
carefully
chosen words. "It wasn't. But I made it anyway, and I've had to live with it every day since." Rory's throat tightened. She turned away, busying herself with nothing—straightening a stack of papers that didn't need straightening, checking a window that was already locked. Ptolemy hopped onto the counter and
began to
investigate the abandoned mug of scotch, and she scooped him up without thinking, cradling him against her chest like armor. "Three deadbolts," Lucien said quietly. "You've been taking precautions." "I've always taken precautions." "You've added another. Since I left." She didn't answer. Didn't need to. He'd always been able to read her, to see the things she
tried to
hide. It was part of what had drawn them together in the first place—that ability to look at each other and see something familiar. Something broken in corresponding places. "The couch pulls out," she said finally. "Eva has sheets in the closet. And if you're staying, there are rules." "Name them." "No one else knows you're here. Not your contacts, not your associates, not anyone. You leave the flat only when absolutely necessary, and you tell me before you go." She turned back to face him. "And if this gets dangerous—if you bring trouble to this doorstep—you tell me immediately. No more protective silences. No more deciding what I need to know." Something shifted in his expression, and he inclined his head. A gesture of respect, maybe. Or surrender. "Agreed." She moved toward the hallway closet, still carrying Ptolemy, and pulled out a set of mismatched sheets. When she turned, Lucien was closer than she'd expected—not touching, but near enough that she could smell the sandalwood and smoke that clung to his clothes, near enough that she could see the faint lines of exhaustion around his eyes that his immaculate presentation couldn't quite hide. He reached out,
slowly
, giving her every chance to pull away. His fingers brushed a strand of hair from her shoulder, the touch feather-light. "I missed you, Rory. That isn't why I came, but it's true all the same." She stood frozen, the sheets pressed against her chest, the cat warm and solid between them. Her body remembered things her mind had
tried to
forget—the way his hands had felt on her skin, the way his voice had sounded in the dark, the way he'd said her name like a prayer and a curse in the same breath. "That's not fair," she whispered. "No." His hand fell back to his side. "It isn't." She thrust the sheets at him, and he took them, their fingers brushing in the exchange. A spark jumped between them—static from the dry winter air, nothing more—and she turned away before he could see whatever her face
was doing
. "Bathroom's at the end of the hall. Don't wake the neighbors." "Rory—" "Goodnight, Lucien." She crossed to her bedroom and closed the door behind her, leaning against it as though it could hold back everything she'd spent six months trying to bury. On the other side, she heard him moving around—the soft thud of his cane against the wall, the creak of the pull-out couch, the rustle of sheets
being unfolded
. Ptolemy squirmed in her arms, and she let him go. He darted back out into the main room, and she heard Lucien's low murmur as the cat presumably settled himself on the man's chest, exactly where he'd always preferred to sleep. She stayed against the door for a long time, listening to the sounds of him in her space again—wrong and right in equal measure, like a joint set poorly that had never quite healed. Tomorrow, she'd figure out what to do with him. Tomorrow, she'd rebuild the walls he'd just walked through like they
were made
of paper. Tonight, she let herself
feel
it—all of it. The anger. The hurt. The treacherous warmth that had sparked back to life the moment she'd opened the door. Tomorrow, she'd be sensible. Tonight, she just let herself miss him.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
0.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
9
adverbTagCount
4
adverbTags
0
"he added, and that single word carried more weight than it had any right to [more right]"
1
"she said carefully [carefully]"
2
"Lucien said quietly [quietly]"
3
"she said finally [finally]"
79.1667%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1920
totalAiIsmAdverbs
4
found
0
adverb
"carefully"
count
2
1
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
2
adverb
"slowly"
count
1
highlights
0
"carefully"
1
"slightly"
2
"slowly"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
84.3750%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1920
totalAiIsms
3
found
0
word
"weight"
count
3
highlights
0
"weight"
66.6667%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
2
maxInWindow
2
found
0
label
"hung in the air"
count
1
1
label
"sent a shiver through"
count
1
highlights
0
"hung in the air"
1
"sent a jolt through"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
111
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
4
narrationSentences
111
filterMatches
0
"feel"
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
1
"began to"
2
"tried to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
2
totalSentences
155
matches
0
"knew that voice"
1
"forget that voice"
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
74
mean
25.53
std
22.29
cv
0.873
sampleLengths
0
24
1
67
2
7
3
52
4
5
5
36
6
87
7
26
8
4
9
1
10
32
11
33
12
10
13
35
14
32
15
30
16
61
17
5
18
6
19
6
20
38
21
10
22
5
23
76
24
16
25
4
26
33
27
15
28
10
29
2
30
3
31
29
32
52
33
8
34
13
35
13
36
6
37
49
38
39
39
28
40
4
41
1
42
7
43
63
44
16
45
13
46
13
47
59
48
6
49
52
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
3
totalSentences
111
matches
0
"was concerned"
1
"being unfolded"
2
"were made"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
4
totalVerbs
254
matches
0
"was trying"
1
"were closing"
2
"was buying"
3
"was doing"
97.0596%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1476
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
64
adverbRatio
0.04336043360433604
lyAdverbCount
16
lyAdverbRatio
0.01084010840108401
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
155
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
155
mean
12.19
std
10.17
cv
0.835
sampleLengths
0
24
1
15
2
20
3
22
4
10
5
3
6
3
7
1
8
14
9
24
10
14
11
5
12
23
13
4
14
9
15
30
16
25
17
32
18
15
19
1
20
3
21
7
22
4
23
1
24
26
25
6
26
2
27
4
28
10
29
17
30
7
31
3
32
11
33
23
34
1
35
16
36
5
37
11
38
18
39
3
40
9
41
30
42
31
43
5
44
6
45
6
46
8
47
30
48
9
49
1
51.6129%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
10
diversityRatio
0.34838709677419355
totalSentences
155
uniqueOpeners
54
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
9
fancyCount
7
fancyTags
0
"he added, and that single word carried more weight than it had any right to (add, more weight have)"
1
"he said, straightening (say, straighten)"
2
"she repeated, folding her arms across her chest (repeat, fold)"
3
"she said carefully (say carefully)"
4
"Lucien said quietly (say quietly)"
5
"she said finally (say finally)"
6
"she whispered (whisper)"
81.1106%