| 73.02% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 19 | | adverbTagCount | 4 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said carefully [carefully]" | | 1 | "Lucien said quietly [quietly]" | | 2 | "she said finally [finally]" | | 3 | "She turned back [back]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 63 | | tagDensity | 0.302 | | leniency | 0.603 | | rawRatio | 0.211 | | effectiveRatio | 0.127 | |
| 89.56% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1916 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "carefully" | | 2 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 63.47% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1916 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "absolutely" | | 3 | "affection" | | 4 | "implication" | | 5 | "traced" | | 6 | "familiar" | | 7 | "treacherous" | | 8 | "warmth" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "hung in the air" | | 1 | "sent a jolt through" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 111 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 78.51% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 111 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "tried to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 155 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 48 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1889 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 21 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 34 | | wordCount | 1448 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.62 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Eva | 2 | | French | 1 | | Moreau | 3 | | Brick | 2 | | Lane | 2 | | Good | 1 | | Ptolemy | 6 | | Lucien | 9 | | Rory | 5 | | Tomorrow | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Ptolemy" | | 3 | "Lucien" | | 4 | "Rory" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 83.33% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as though discussing the weather" | | 1 | "quite hide" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.529 | | wordCount | 1889 | | matches | | 0 | "not touching, but near enough" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 155 | | matches | | 0 | "knew that voice" | | 1 | "forget that voice" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 74 | | mean | 25.53 | | std | 22.29 | | cv | 0.873 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 67 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 52 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 36 | | 6 | 87 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 32 | | 11 | 33 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 35 | | 14 | 32 | | 15 | 30 | | 16 | 61 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 38 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 76 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 33 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 29 | | 32 | 52 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 49 | | 38 | 39 | | 39 | 28 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 63 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 59 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 52 |
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| 95.78% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "was concerned" | | 1 | "being unfolded" | | 2 | "were made" |
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| 95.01% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 254 | | matches | | 0 | "was trying" | | 1 | "were closing" | | 2 | "was buying" | | 3 | "was doing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 24 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 21 | | totalSentences | 155 | | ratio | 0.135 | | matches | | 0 | "No one else knew this address—no one who mattered, anyway." | | 1 | "Her hand found the first deadbolt, then the second, then the third—a habit born of paranoia that had kept her alive more than once." | | 2 | "The voice—cultured, slightly rough at the edges, carrying that unmistakable French inflection—sent a jolt through her chest that she absolutely refused to acknowledge." | | 3 | "\"Rory.\" Her name in his mouth sounded different than it did from anyone else—softer at the edges, like something precious he was trying not to damage." | | 4 | "The cat had always liked Lucien—had practically abandoned her the first time he'd visited, winding between his legs like they were old friends." | | 5 | "He stepped inside, his gaze sweeping the cramped space with professional assessment—the towers of books and scrolls, the papers pinned to every available surface, the single window overlooking the street." | | 6 | "She'd felt it too—the way the flat had seemed to shrink in the weeks after he'd left, as though the walls were closing in on the space he'd once occupied." | | 7 | "Rory reached for the bottle of cheap scotch she kept in the back of the cabinet behind a stack of old takeout menus—a hiding spot born of the same paranoia that had produced the deadbolts." | | 8 | "The silence stretched between them, filled with the sounds of Brick Lane at night—distant traffic, the wail of a siren somewhere in the city, the hum of the curry house's old ventilation system." | | 9 | "The audacity of it—the sheer, unmitigated gall—should have shocked her." | | 10 | "She'd known what she was to him—what she'd always been." | | 11 | "\"I left to protect you.\" The words cracked out of him, sharp and sudden, and something shifted in his face—the careful composure fracturing for just a moment before he pulled it back together." | | 12 | "\"No.\" He met her gaze straight on, and she saw the thing she'd spent six months trying to unsee—the weight of everything he hadn't said, sitting there in the space between his carefully chosen words." | | 13 | "She turned away, busying herself with nothing—straightening a stack of papers that didn't need straightening, checking a window that was already locked." | | 14 | "It was part of what had drawn them together in the first place—that ability to look at each other and see something familiar." | | 15 | "When she turned, Lucien was closer than she'd expected—not touching, but near enough that she could smell the sandalwood and smoke that clung to his clothes, near enough that she could see the faint lines of exhaustion around his eyes that his immaculate presentation couldn't quite hide." | | 16 | "Her body remembered things her mind had tried to forget—the way his hands had felt on her skin, the way his voice had sounded in the dark, the way he'd said her name like a prayer and a curse in the same breath." | | 17 | "A spark jumped between them—static from the dry winter air, nothing more—and she turned away before he could see whatever her face was doing." | | 18 | "On the other side, she heard him moving around—the soft thud of his cane against the wall, the creak of the pull-out couch, the rustle of sheets being unfolded." | | 19 | "She stayed against the door for a long time, listening to the sounds of him in her space again—wrong and right in equal measure, like a joint set poorly that had never quite healed." | | 20 | "Tonight, she let herself feel it—all of it." |
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| 97.06% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1476 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 64 | | adverbRatio | 0.04336043360433604 | | lyAdverbCount | 16 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01084010840108401 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 155 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 155 | | mean | 12.19 | | std | 10.17 | | cv | 0.835 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 24 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 30 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 32 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 26 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 23 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 30 | | 42 | 31 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 30 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 51.61% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.34838709677419355 | | totalSentences | 155 | | uniqueOpeners | 54 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 32.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 47 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "She crossed the small space" | | 1 | "Her hand found the first" | | 2 | "She knew that voice." | | 3 | "She'd spent six months trying" | | 4 | "He looked immaculate despite the" | | 5 | "His tailored charcoal suit absorbed" | | 6 | "Her name in his mouth" | | 7 | "She couldn't help it." | | 8 | "His jaw tightened" | | 9 | "he added, and that single" | | 10 | "She closed the door, slipped" | | 11 | "She'd made plenty of those" | | 12 | "He stepped inside, his gaze" | | 13 | "he said, straightening" | | 14 | "She'd felt it too—the way" | | 15 | "She moved to the kitchenette," | | 16 | "She poured two fingers into" | | 17 | "He picked up the mug" | | 18 | "She watched his throat work" | | 19 | "She looked away." |
| | ratio | 0.47 | |
| 15.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 89 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "The knock came at half" | | 1 | "Rory stiffened in her chair," | | 2 | "Ptolemy lifted his head from" | | 3 | "The curry house below had" | | 4 | "She crossed the small space" | | 5 | "Her hand found the first" | | 6 | "The chain she left in" | | 7 | "The voice—cultured, slightly rough at" | | 8 | "She knew that voice." | | 9 | "She'd spent six months trying" | | 10 | "Lucien Moreau stood in the" | | 11 | "He looked immaculate despite the" | | 12 | "His tailored charcoal suit absorbed" | | 13 | "The words came out harder" | | 14 | "Her name in his mouth" | | 15 | "She couldn't help it." | | 16 | "The sound scraped out of" | | 17 | "His jaw tightened" | | 18 | "Ptolemy padded over and butted" | | 19 | "The cat had always liked" |
| | ratio | 0.89 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 74.18% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "He stepped inside, his gaze sweeping the cramped space with professional assessment—the towers of books and scrolls, the papers pinned to every available surfac…" | | 1 | "Ptolemy immediately twined around his legs, and Rory watched the man who'd broken something in her chest six months ago crouch down to scratch behind the cat's …" | | 2 | "Rory reached for the bottle of cheap scotch she kept in the back of the cabinet behind a stack of old takeout menus—a hiding spot born of the same paranoia that…" | | 3 | "She turned away, busying herself with nothing—straightening a stack of papers that didn't need straightening, checking a window that was already locked." | | 4 | "She crossed to her bedroom and closed the door behind her, leaning against it as though it could hold back everything she'd spent six months trying to bury." |
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| 98.68% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 19 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "He said, as though discussing the weather" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he added (add)" | | 1 | "she repeated (repeat)" | | 2 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 63 | | tagDensity | 0.143 | | leniency | 0.286 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.095 | |