Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQZ7Z4T08ZZRBYDD6MDNWH

Run Details

Duration:
1m 17s
Cost:
$0.009099
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the pavement of Soho, turning the streetlights into smeared streaks of gold and gray on the asphalt. Harlow Quinn ignored the water pooling in the collar of her coat, her focus narrowed to a single point fifty yards ahead. The target—a lanky man in a hoodie that had seen better decades—slipped around the corner of Brewer Street, his movements unnervingly fluid. Quinn matched his pace, her boots striking the wet ground with military precision. At forty-one, she knew the limits of her body better than she knew the streets of this city, but tonight, adrenaline was a cheap and potent fuel. Her lungs burned with the cold, damp air, but the fire in her gut burned hotter. This was the third runner this week, and all roads led back to the Raven’s Nest. She skidded around the corner, the leather strap of her worn watch catching on her sleeve. The green neon sign of the bar buzzed overhead, casting a sickly pallor over the alleyway. The door to the Nest hung open, swinging on creaking hinges, the silence from within contrasting sharply with the storm outside. She didn't slow down to check the bar; her target hadn't stopped there. He was moving deeper, toward the old network of service tunnels that snaked beneath London. "Police! Stop!" she barked, the command tearing from her throat. The runner didn't even glance back. He vaulted a stack of crates that blocked a service entrance and vanished into the maw of a narrow stairwell. Quinn followed, her hand hovering near the holster at her hip but not drawing. Not yet. The air changed as she descended. The smell of exhaust and damp concrete was gradually replaced by something older—earth, rust, and a faint, metallic tang that reminded her of a butcher’s shop. The sounds of the city faded to a dull roar, then to a dripping, echoing silence. She found herself in an abandoned Tube station. The tiles on the walls were cracked, shedding layers of grime, and the tracks were rusted rails disappearing into absolute darkness. This place wasn't on any modern map. It was a scar on the city's underbelly. Ahead, the runner paused. He wasn't running anymore. He was standing before a heavy iron gate that shouldn't have been there, blocking the tunnel mouth. Quinn slowed, transitioning from a sprint to a predatory stalk. She kept her breathing controlled, scanning the shadows for an ambush. The runner reached into his pocket. Quinn tensed, expecting a weapon. Instead, he pulled out a small, pale object—something carved from bone. He held it up to a recess in the gate's stone post. A low rumble vibrated through the soles of Quinn’s boots, and the iron gate groaned open, revealing a swirl of violet light and the hum of a crowd. The Veil Market. Quinn had heard whispers—nonsense muttered in interrogation rooms by junkies and the desperate—about a market for the things that went bump in the night. She’d dismissed it as superstition, the stress of the job manifesting as fairy tales. But the light ahead was real. The gate was real. The runner stepped through the threshold. The gate began to swing shut. "Hey!" Quinn shouted, breaking into a sprint again. She threw her arm out, catching the heavy iron just before it latched. The metal was freezing cold, biting into her palm. She shoved it open, forcing her body through the gap and into the tunnel beyond. She stumbled into chaos. The station opened up into a cavernous space, an impossible expansion of the underground. Stalls carved from rock and scrap metal lined the walls, glowing with enchanted lanterns. The air here was thick with incense and the scent of roasted meat that smelled entirely unlike pork or beef. Creatures that looked human but moved wrong—too fluid, too stiff—browsed wares that floated in mid-air. Bottles of screaming smoke, daggers made of black glass, jars containing eyes that blinked in unison. Quinn’s heart hammered against her ribs like a trapped bird. This wasn't just a black market; it was a violation of natural law. Her grip tightened on her service weapon. She was a detective of the Metropolitan Police, with eighteen years of service and a commendation file thicker than her thigh. She dealt with rapists, murderers, and dealers. She did not deal with magic. But she had lost Morris to shadows she couldn't explain. Three years ago, her partner had been erased from a locked room, leaving behind only scorch marks and Quinn’s nightmares. If answers were here, she wasn't leaving without them. The runner was weaving through the crowd, ducking under a hanging tapestry of living moss. Quinn pushed forward, shouldering past a tall figure wrapped in bandages. "Move!" The figure turned, revealing a face that was a smooth, featureless oval. Quinn recoiled, her instinct screaming to pull the trigger, but she shoved the panic down. Focus. The target. She burst through the moss tapestry into a narrower alcove, away from the main thoroughfare. The runner was cornered, his back to a dead end of slick stone. He turned to face her, breathing hard, a smirk playing on his lips. "You're a long way from home, copper," he said. His voice sounded like gravel grinding together. "Hands where I can see them," Quinn ordered, leveling her weapon. "You're under arrest for suspicion of murder, conspiracy, and about a dozen other things I'll figure out when I get you upstairs." The runner laughed, a dry, rasping sound. He glanced at the iron gate behind her, then back to her eyes. "Upstairs? There is no upstairs for you now. You walked through the door. That means you're merchandise. Or meat. Depends on who catches you." "I said hands in the air!" He lunged—not at her, but to the side. His hand scrambled for a loose brick in the wall. Quinn fired. The gunshot was deafening in the enclosed space, a flash of muzzle illuminating the dust. The bullet sparked against the stone, inches from his head. Before she could adjust her aim, a figure stepped out from the shadows between them. It wasn't one of the monsters. It was a man, olive-skinned and stocky, wearing a canvas jacket stained with mysterious fluids. He looked tired, the kind of exhaustion that went bone-deep. He didn't look at the runner; he looked straight at Quinn, warm brown eyes widening in surprise. "Stop shooting," the man said, his voice calm but commanding. He had a Spanish accent, soft but firm. "You'll bring the Enforcers down on us." "Step aside, civilian," Quinn barked, keeping her eyes on the runner. "This is Police business." "The Metropolitan Police have no jurisdiction here, Detective," the man said. He raised his hands slowly, showing he was unarmed. As he moved his sleeve, Quinn caught the glint of a silver chain—St. Christopher—and the jagged edge of a scar running along his left forearm. A knife wound. The runner hesitated, looking at the newcomer with recognition. "Herrera. Get out of the way. I'm just passing through." "Tomás, was it?" Quinn said, not lowering the gun. "I'm taking him in. You're interfering with an investigation." Tomás Herrera sighed, rubbing a hand over his short, curly dark hair. He looked at the runner with disdain. "He's not worth the bullet, Detective. And you can't take him back the way you came. Not without a token." "I have a badge." Tomás met her gaze, and for the first time, she saw a deep, welling pity there. It was the same look people gave her at Morris's funeral. "Your badge is just metal down here. It doesn't mean anything to the things that watch the gates." "I don't answer to things," Quinn said, her jawline set sharp, her finger tightening on the trigger. "I answer to the law." "Then you're going to die down here," Tomás said softly. He took a step closer to the runner, not to attack, but to block his path to the tunnel's hidden exit. "You shouldn't have followed him. The Veil eats people like you." The runner saw his chance. He lunged at Tomás, a jagged knife appearing in his hand as if by magic. "Move!" Quinn screamed. Tomás was fast, surprisingly so for a man in a bar. He twisted, the knife slashing through the air, missing his throat but grazing his shoulder. He grabbed the runner's wrist—his scarred forearm straining with the effort—and twisted. The bone snapped with a sickening crack. The runner howled, dropping the knife. Quinn was on them in a second. She kicked the knife away and slammed the runner against the wall, cuffing him roughly. She kept the gun pressed to his temple, her chest heaving. She looked up at Tomás, who was clutching his bleeding shoulder, his face pale but composed. "Thanks," she said, the word grudging. Tomás shook his head, wincing as he touched the wound. "I didn't do it for you. I did it because he's a low-level pusher selling bad alchemy. It hurts my business." He looked at the cuffs, then at Quinn. "Can you walk him out?" "He's going to the station." "You don't understand," Tomás said, stepping closer, lowering his voice. "The way you came in—the gate—it only opens for the living with a token, or the dead without one. You have neither now. You walked through on the wake of his token. The gate is sealed to you." Quinn stared at him. The rain, the chase, the impossibility of the glowing mushrooms overhead—it all pressed in on her. She looked at the runner, who was laughing softly, his face pressed against the cold stone. "Told you," the runner wheezed. "Told you, copper. You're meat." Quinn looked back at Tomás. The medic, or whatever he was, watched her with those tired, warm eyes. He reached into his jacket pocket and pulled out a small pouch. "I can get you out," Tomás said quietly. "But not to your police station. And not with him. He stays here for the Judges. You... you come with me if you want to see the sky again." Quinn looked at the runner, then at the exit tunnel leading to the iron gate. She could try to force her way out. She could shoot the lock, kick down the door. But Tomás’s warning hung in the air, heavy as the lead in her gut. She had walked into a fairy tale with a gun and a badge, and she was dangerously close to becoming a cautionary legend. She looked at Tomás Herrera, the man with the Saint Christopher medallion and the knife scar, the man who moved through this nightmare like he owned it. "Where are we going?" she asked. "The Raven's Nest," Tomás replied. "It's neutral ground. And we need to stitch that shoulder." He gestured vaguely toward her. "And maybe figure out how to keep you from evaporating." Quinn holstered her weapon. She uncuffed the runner and shoved him toward Tomás. "Take him," she said, her voice iron-hard. "If he runs, I'll hunt you both down. But I'm not leaving until I know what this place is." Tomás grabbed the runner by the collar, his grip surprisingly strong. "Careful, Detective. You ask too many questions here, and the market starts asking for payment." "I'm good for it," Quinn said, falling into step beside them as the market swirled around them, the shadows lengthening as the moon above—if there was a moon—began its watch.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
77.7778% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Tomás said softly [softly]"
1"Tomás said quietly [quietly]"
2"Quinn said, falling into step beside them as the market swirled around them, the shadows lengthening as the moon above—if there was a moon—began its watch [around]"
79.3175% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1934
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count2
highlights
0"sharply"
1"slowly"
2"softly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
79.3175% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1934
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"tapestry"
count2
1
word"glint"
count1
2
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"tapestry"
1"glint"
2"echoing"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences139
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences139
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"try to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences160
matches
0"stitch that shoulder"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs60
mean31.83
std20.19
cv0.634
sampleLengths
063
172
281
310
442
548
644
746
862
93
1048
1112
1245
134
1479
1564
1639
1715
1812
1930
2041
2116
2233
2344
246
2545
2615
276
2842
2925
3015
3148
3219
3318
3439
354
3645
3722
3842
3920
403
4151
4233
4316
446
4544
465
4748
4836
4910
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences139
matches
0"were cracked, were rusted"
1"been erased"
2"was cornered"
3"was, watched"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount7
totalVerbs269
matches
0"wasn't running"
1"was standing"
2"wasn't leaving"
3"was weaving"
4"was deafening"
5"was clutching"
6"was laughing"
94.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1564
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"short, curly dark hair."
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.023657289002557546
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.010869565217391304
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences160
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences160
mean11.94
std6.6
cv0.553
sampleLengths
019
122
222
313
427
516
616
716
816
921
1013
1115
1210
136
1420
1514
162
176
1826
1916
208
2121
227
238
244
254
2617
2710
2811
296
305
3111
3212
3328
343
3524
3614
376
384
396
406
418
4213
439
4415
454
4614
4714
4820
4915
36.8750% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats21
diversityRatio0.28125
totalSentences160
uniqueOpeners45
22.2222% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags18
fancyCount11
fancyTags
0"shouted (shout)"
1"Quinn ordered, leveling her weapon (order, level)"
2"Quinn barked, keeping her eyes on the runner (bark, keep)"
3"Quinn said, her jawline set sharp, her finger tightening on the trigger (say, tighten)"
4"Tomás said softly (say softly)"
5"screamed (scream)"
6"she said, the word grudging (say, grudge)"
7"Tomás said, stepping closer, lowering his voice (say, step)"
8"the runner wheezed (wheeze)"
9"Tomás said quietly (say quietly)"
10"Quinn said, falling into step beside them as the market swirled around them, the shadows lengthening as the moon above—if there was a moon—began its watch (say, fall step swirl around lengthen be begin)"
87.6182%