Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQZAVTQZ0X8C7C8MKQ1XS9

Run Details

Duration:
42.1s
Cost:
$0.010076
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The door opened onto Lucien Moreau like a question with no punctuation. He filled the frame: charcoal suit cut to frame him like a second skin, hair slicked back until it looked as if it belonged to someone who catalogued every hair before it could stray, an ivory-handled cane hooked casually under one wrist. One eye was amber and warm; the other so dark it swallowed the lightbulb over the hallway lamp. He smiled, and the smile had the economy of a man used to saving words. For a second Aurora simply stood there, the apartment blurred at the edges—piles of books slanting like leaning towers, scrolls tied with fraying ribbon, a scattering of research notes that made the flat smell faintly of dust and lemon oil—and felt the old, precise click of her chest rearrange itself into something that might have been excitement and might have been alarm. Her hand was still on the third deadbolt; the metal was cool under her palm, as if it had been anticipating the weight of her fingers. “Aurora.” He did not use Rory. He used her full name, and it slid over her like a hand she remembered as both a caress and a clamp. It stripped down a layer of the cautious control she kept for strangers. “Lucien,” she said. The voice that came back to her sounded steadier than she felt. She let the deadbolt slide. Three locks meant time; time meant an opportunity to decide. She brought the door fully open and stepped aside, the motion automatic, practiced. She had not expected him to knock. She had not expected him to appear at Eva’s place, especially not on a rainy Tuesday three days before she was supposed to deliver for the Golden Empress. Ptolemy trotted out from under a stack of runes and bumped his head against Lucien’s shin, tail high, the tabby’s confidence in domestic territories unnerving for a man who dealt in secrets. The cat’s purr was a small, undemanding machine. Lucien crouched without effort, the black sleeve sliding to reveal a wristbone that was all tension beneath fabric. He let the animal sniff his hand and closed his fingers around the cat’s scruff like a man who had learned how to take what he wanted without noise. Aurora watched him watch Ptolemy. Up close, he looked younger than she’d expected in one of those unsettling ways men did when you’d imagined years of a life and found there were none. The heterochromia caught the light; the amber eye folded sunlight into a private harbor, the black made a bruise of shadow. “You had a visitor,” he said lightly. No guilt in the tone, but there was a thread of apology braided through the way he let the words land. “You’re literally a visitor,” she shot back before she could tame it. She had windows for walls in her memory: corners where he’d once stood and left without closing the door. “You broke the locks last time, too.” “That was before Eva installed the third one.” He pushed himself up and straightened, the cane catching the light with a whisper of bone. “I brought a key. I assume you’ll let me in.” She swallowed. If she refused, what then? Would he melt away, the way he had once? Would he raise his shoulders and leave like a man who had never meant anything to anyone? The thought had hollowed her nights back then and still tasted like rust. She stepped back. “Come in.” The flat was small enough that the sour smell of last night’s curry still threaded through the paper and notes. Ptolemy arched and leapt to the arm of Eva’s battered couch as if it had been his throne a moment before. Lucien stopped by the window and removed his coat in a single smooth motion, letting the charcoal fall off his shoulders like a dark promise. The ivory of his cane’s handle glinted; the ivory looked too clean for someone who trafficked in the underworld. “You’re supposed to be working,” he said, and there was a softness there that made Aurora’s teeth ache. “Or sleeping. Not hiding under someone else’s books.” “Not hiding,” she replied. “Visiting.” The word didn’t stick. It fell thin between them, because every visit since she’d come to London had been made the color of consequence by his absences. Lucien’s mouth tightened. He had always been good at holding back the things that would make you rush for the door. “I didn’t come to-whatever this is-of-state.” He cleared his throat. His accent folded at the edges of the vowels, Marseille shaping him back into someone who made foreign sounds comforting. “I came because I need a place to think. Eva’s flat is defensible. Your den of scrolls is also ideal because you’re very stubborn and have that ridiculous stubbornness that will make you help, whether you want to or not.” Aurora let out a laugh that might have been a cough. “So specific.” It sounded like a dare. He stepped closer then, crossing the room as if it were his map and not hers. He moved through the stacks with practiced avoidance, not knocking over a single paper. Up close, he smelled like bergamot and cold iron, and the scent did something to the part of her that catalogued danger with fascination. Her pulse ghosted at the base of her throat. His gaze slid to her left wrist and hesitated on the half-moon scar she kept hidden beneath a careful sleeve. The crescent had been a child’s map of pain and repair; it had kept bad men away once, in a different life. “You never told me why you stayed,” Lucien said quietly, and his voice arrived as if it had been waiting in the space between two pages. She decided not to offer him the simple litany she’d practiced alone: how she’d wanted justice but feared headlines, how Pre-Law had felt like a noose, how Evan had ripped the trust right out of her chest. Instead she watched him, cataloguing the new things: the faint callus on his thumb, the way his left eye tightened when he lied. “Why should I tell you now?” “Because I haven’t been good at telling you anything,” he answered. It was blunt, not a defense. “I left because I needed to disappear, Rory. I wasn’t—” he paused, swallowing, “—I wasn’t safe. I could have tried to tell you. I didn’t.” The admission landed with a dirty little thud in the floorboards beneath Aurora. He’d said the words he’d never said before: I wasn’t safe. The justification was a soft, dangerous thing that opened room for pity and rage in equal measure. She felt both as if they were tidal and old, a coastline she’d been walking for years. “You could have asked,” she said. “I would have gone with you.” The heat in the apartment tilted toward them. Lucien’s hand curled around the back of a chair. He looked suddenly very human, as if the charcoal had been a costume and he’d just lost the last button. “You would’ve been in more danger,” he said. His voice dropped to a register that hummed against her skin. “I couldn’t—” “You couldn’t trust me,” she finished. The accusation was clean, practiced. She had learned the syntax of hurt. “You couldn’t trust me when I asked you the one time, and so you left.” He let out a single, small noise that could have been a laugh or a concession. “It was never that simple.” Silence knit them together for a moment. Rain slid down the window in a thin, patient measure; the city beyond hummed. In the dim light, Lucien’s features seemed softer, as if the edges were dangerous only because she’d given them permission to be. “You used to touch my hand when you thought I wasn’t looking,” Aurora said impulsively, because memory is a poor breaker of silence. The observation felt like the right thing to say; it was small and therefore true. He looked as if someone had given him a compass. “I remember everything,” he said, almost tender. He brushed the side of his hand against the scar on her wrist with a feather-light motion that set a line of heat up her arm. The contact was so slight that for a moment Aurora thought she’d imagined it. Ptolemy looked up, indifferent, and resumed his vigilance. “You disappeared,” she said, and the words were a list of places: midnight train stations, addresses with no letters, voicemail boxes that gave nothing back. She had learned to live with the empty spaces. “I know.” He stepped back only a little. “And I know I made it worse. I’m not asking for absolution. I’m asking for something less theatrical. I need help.” The admission was not a plea for love. It was a request for partnership, which had always felt like a more dangerous thing. She had been the kind of woman taught to count doors and deadbolts and to imagine the worst. Trust was a currency she spent sparingly. “Why Eva’s flat?” she asked. “Why come here at all?” His amber eye flicked to the door. “Because Eva has three deadbolts. Because you keep your notes in a predictable mess, which means I know where to look, and because there are people watching me who won’t find the flat unless they already know the map. And because I prefer to be near you.” The last phrase should have been a betrayal. Instead, it sounded like an apology folded into a confession. She felt her own heart betray her, flickering like a throatlamp. “Prefer to be near me?” she repeated. The words were both accusation and tentative hope. Lucien’s gaze softened in a way that nearly undid her. “I prefer it because I believed, once, that there was more between us than an arrangement of convenience and danger. I still—” He stopped, the admission too raw to finish. She thought of the nights he’d stayed until dawn, whispering plans both ridiculous and brilliant. She thought of the way he’d used French phrases as a shield and honey, saying Je t’aime like a spell he never fully cast. She thought of the way he had left, like a thief in fog, and the long winter that followed. “You can stay,” she heard herself say, because her voice liked courage and because a rational portion of her brain catalogued every outcome and concluded that keeping him near would limit the damage he could do. It was a pragmatic choice wrapped in an impulse that had nothing to do with safety. Relief softened his face, and it was a small thing to witness: the way his shoulders unknotted, the faint admission in the set of his mouth. He moved to the couch and sat, cane settling against his leg. Up close, she could see the line between his brows as if it had been drawn there by thought and weather. He looked tired in the way men who never let themselves sleep do—sleep that did not touch certain problems. “You look like you haven’t slept,” Aurora said despite herself. “Neither do you,” he replied. “Your eyes are too blue for someone who should be exhausted.” She felt seen in a way that made her uneasy, the kind of seeing that remembered things she had hoped time would soften. They talked then in the crooked language of two people trying to find the floor between them: small pieces at first—Eva’s new deadbolt, Ptolemy’s preference for sunbeams, a newspaper clipping of a case she had once considered taking to court. Lucien asked about her delivery shifts with an attention that made ordinary details into confessions. She told him about a recipe Yu-Fei had tried teaching her, and he laughed with a sound that could have been a forgotten summer. When the conversation brushed against the night he had left, they skirted like gloved hands over glass. Accusations hovered, dangerous and bright, and both of them left them unsaid. They were people who had learned the habit of bigger silences. At some point the apartment contracted. Rain drummed harder. The small room cracked open with the knowledge that this was temporary—Lucien’s need, her grudging accommodation. When he stood to go, he took up his cane, the ivory handle cool between his fingers, and for one suspended second he looked almost fragile, as if the whole of him could be folded away like the map of some foreign city. “Stay,” he said then, and the tone shifted. It wasn’t an order. It was a request threaded through his teeth. She surprised herself by saying yes before she’d decided whether she meant it. Saying it was a petty rebellion against the long-ago leaving, a test she might fail. She wrapped her arms around herself, feeling the old scar like a compass. Lucien’s smile this time was small and private. He bent his head and pressed the side of it into a bare patch of shoulder where the sleeve of her sweater had ridden up. It was an intimate motion without intimacy; it could have been an apology or a promise. Ptolemy leapt to the windowsill as if warding the world away. “I’ll make coffee,” she said because domestic rites anchor the unstable. She set her jaw and moved toward the tiny kitchen, the gesture ordinary and therefore tolerable. As she measured grounds and warmed water, she felt his eyes on her like weather. When she turned, he was a little closer than he had been before, as if the space between them had contracted and held. The cane tapped softly against the floor, a metronome that timed breathing and the tiny, reckless hope of something not yet named. For a moment, with the kettle hissing and the rain like a private percussion, Aurora imagined a future with fewer disappearances. It was a small, dangerous image, like a candle struck in a storm. The door was still only latched by three deadbolts; it was, for now, secure. Lucien stood on the other side of that small security, and somewhere in the architecture of their shared past, a crack might yet be mended. She handed him the mug. Their fingers touched, brief and full of old languages. He held it like a relic and smiled in the way of a man who knew too much to trust simple things but wanted them anyway. The contact was a single small bridge spanning a year of absences. “Thank you,” he said. It had no claws in it. It carried no bargains. She listened for the thrum of something like forgiveness, or at least the start of one. Outside, Brick Lane carried on: lights, curry steam, a world that had not paused for them. Inside Eva’s flat, among the books and scrolls and the tabby who claimed sovereignty, two people who had parted on complicated terms were, for the first time in a long while, sitting at the same table. They had not spoken the hardest things. They had not yet closed the open spaces between them. But the door was open, and they were both on the same side of it.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
53.9683% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"he said lightly [lightly]"
1"Lucien said quietly, and his voice arrived as if it had been waiting in the space between two pages [quietly]"
2"Aurora said impulsively, because memory is a poor breaker of silence [impulsively]"
3"he said, almost tender [almost]"
4"he said then, and the tone shifted [then]"
80.3768% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount2548
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"lightly"
1"softly"
2"suddenly"
3"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
92.1507% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount2548
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"flicked"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"flicked"
1"weight"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences154
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences154
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences169
matches(empty)
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean46.94
std26.34
cv0.561
sampleLengths
087
188
21
340
478
587
654
728
838
934
1051
1185
1226
1332
1491
1518
16105
1726
1866
1942
2058
2112
2237
2321
2433
2521
2643
2738
2865
2934
3029
3148
3210
3354
3418
3526
3640
3758
3852
3978
4010
4116
42102
4340
4468
4520
4641
4760
4827
4960
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences154
matches
0"was supposed"
1"been made"
2"been drawn"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs413
matches(empty)
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount2208
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount68
adverbRatio0.030797101449275364
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.007246376811594203
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences169
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences169
mean15
std9.77
cv0.651
sampleLengths
012
142
218
315
462
526
61
75
822
913
103
1112
125
1310
1413
157
1628
1732
188
1918
2029
215
2228
2321
247
2521
2612
2719
287
2924
3010
312
325
339
3417
3513
363
372
3820
3921
4025
4119
4218
438
444
455
4623
473
4818
4910
43.4911% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.28402366863905326
totalSentences169
uniqueOpeners48
44.0476% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags21
fancyCount11
fancyTags
0"he said lightly (say lightly)"
1"she shot back before she could tame it (shoot back could)"
2"he said, and there was a softness there that made Aurora’s teeth ache (say, be make ache)"
3"Lucien said quietly, and his voice arrived as if it had been waiting in the space between two pages (say quietly, arrive wait)"
4"he paused, swallowing (pause, swallow)"
5"she finished (finish)"
6"Aurora said impulsively, because memory is a poor breaker of silence (say impulsively, be)"
7"she said, and the words were a list of places: midnight train stations, addresses with no letters, voicemail boxes that gave nothing back (say, be box give)"
8"she heard herself say, because her voice liked courage and because a rational portion of her brain catalogued every outcome and concluded that keeping him near would limit the damage he could do (heard herself say, like catalogue conclude limit do)"
9"he said then, and the tone shifted (say shift)"
10"she said because domestic rites anchor the unstable (say anchor)"
89.0609%