| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 31 | | tagDensity | 0.548 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 86.98% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1536 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "perfectly" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 38.15% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1536 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "rhythmic" | | 2 | "reminder" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "echo" | | 5 | "resonated" | | 6 | "tracing" | | 7 | "flickered" | | 8 | "stomach" | | 9 | "warmth" | | 10 | "grave" | | 11 | "raced" | | 12 | "whisper" | | 13 | "normalcy" | | 14 | "tapestry" | | 15 | "weight" | | 16 | "flicker" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 3.48% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 82 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "began to" | | 1 | "seemed to" | | 2 | "seem to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 96 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 63 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1524 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 60.63% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 62 | | wordCount | 1119 | | uniqueNames | 19 | | maxNameDensity | 1.79 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | London | 2 | | Heathrow | 1 | | Shade | 3 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Pendant | 1 | | Nyx | 8 | | Isolde | 9 | | Varga | 1 | | Aurora | 20 | | Cardiff | 2 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Seer | 2 | | Veil | 2 | | Dymas | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Shade" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Varga" | | 5 | "Aurora" | | 6 | "Seer" | | 7 | "Dymas" | | 8 | "Grove" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Cardiff" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 0.606 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 2.94% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "smoke that seemed to drink the light" | | 1 | "felt like a tiny, coal-fired heart beat" | | 2 | "looked like hammered bronze" | | 3 | "felt like a beautiful cage" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.656 | | wordCount | 1524 | | matches | | 0 | "not into a pocket or a bag, but directly into the shimmering distortion of the Veil itself" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | |
| 83.20% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 34 | | mean | 44.82 | | std | 19.78 | | cv | 0.441 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 74 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 45 | | 3 | 78 | | 4 | 49 | | 5 | 73 | | 6 | 71 | | 7 | 33 | | 8 | 44 | | 9 | 85 | | 10 | 38 | | 11 | 44 | | 12 | 34 | | 13 | 45 | | 14 | 36 | | 15 | 44 | | 16 | 69 | | 17 | 31 | | 18 | 58 | | 19 | 80 | | 20 | 25 | | 21 | 40 | | 22 | 42 | | 23 | 24 | | 24 | 57 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 30 | | 27 | 43 | | 28 | 45 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 62 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 38 | | 33 | 32 |
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| 96.71% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "was swallowed" | | 1 | "was elongated" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 187 | | matches | | 0 | "were beginning" | | 1 | "was tearing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 96 | | ratio | 0.115 | | matches | | 0 | "The air inside the grove didn’t just smell of damp earth and crushed mint; it tasted of centuries." | | 1 | "The roar of London’s peripheral traffic—the distant hum of the A3 and the overhead drone of planes descending toward Heathrow—ceased instantly." | | 2 | "The sound was swallowed by the oversized wildflowers that carpeted the clearing—blossoms the size of dinner plates in shades of iridescent violet and bruised gold, their petals shimmering with a dew that didn't look like water." | | 3 | "Trees with weeping willow branches didn't hang limp; they reached upward, their leaves translucent and veined with pulsing lines of soft light." | | 4 | "Aurora reached out to touch a trunk, but stopped when she felt the vibration humming through the air—a low-frequency thrum that resonated in her teeth." | | 5 | "It wasn't a forest; it was a giant, breathing machine made of wood and magic." | | 6 | "Isolde’s pale lavender eyes settled on Aurora, and for a moment, the young woman felt as though her entire life—from the rainy streets of Cardiff to the grease-stained kitchens of the Golden Empress—was being read like a pamphlet." | | 7 | "She reached into the air—not into a pocket or a bag, but directly into the shimmering distortion of the Veil itself." | | 8 | "The wind picked up, carrying the scent of exotic spices and rotting fruit—the cloying, heavy atmosphere of Dymas bleeding through a nearby tear." | | 9 | "The wonder of the clearing—the singing water, the bronze trees—suddenly felt like a beautiful cage." | | 10 | "Aurora grabbed Nyx’s incorporeal arm—the sensation like sticking her hand into a freezer—and ran toward the shimmering boundary." |
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| 76.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1142 | | adjectiveStacks | 4 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "jagged, moss-slicked oak" | | 1 | "small, crescent-shaped scar" | | 2 | "tiny, coal-fired heart" | | 3 | "slender, leaf-shaped dagger." |
| | adverbCount | 43 | | adverbRatio | 0.03765323992994746 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01138353765323993 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 96 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 96 | | mean | 15.88 | | std | 8.7 | | cv | 0.548 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 36 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 26 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 26 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 26 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 38 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 37 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 43.75% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.2916666666666667 | | totalSentences | 96 | | uniqueOpeners | 28 | |
| 85.47% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "Only three minutes had passed." | | 1 | "Somewhere out there, the Veil" |
| | ratio | 0.026 | |
| 91.79% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "She checked her watch." | | 1 | "It was a nervous habit," | | 2 | "It felt like a tiny," | | 3 | "Her voice didn't echo." | | 4 | "It looked like liquid mercury." | | 5 | "They drifted toward a path" | | 6 | "It wasn't a forest; it" | | 7 | "They crossed a stream where" | | 8 | "She stood perfectly still, her" | | 9 | "She wore a gown of" | | 10 | "She left no footprints, no" | | 11 | "Her voice had the chime" | | 12 | "She didn't smile, but her" | | 13 | "It was merely distant, fixed" | | 14 | "She stepped forward, the Heartstone" | | 15 | "She reached into the air—not" | | 16 | "Her hand seemed to vanish" | | 17 | "She gasped, nearly dropping the" | | 18 | "Her barrister father would have" | | 19 | "It was elongated, jagged, and" |
| | ratio | 0.321 | |
| 24.10% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 68 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "The air inside the grove" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter stepped through the" | | 2 | "The roar of London’s peripheral" | | 3 | "She checked her watch." | | 4 | "The second hand twitched, then" | | 5 | "The Shade didn’t walk so" | | 6 | "Aurora gripped the strap of" | | 7 | "It was a nervous habit," | | 8 | "It felt like a tiny," | | 9 | "Aurora called out" | | 10 | "Her voice didn't echo." | | 11 | "The sound was swallowed by" | | 12 | "It looked like liquid mercury." | | 13 | "Nyx replied, their voice a" | | 14 | "The Shade’s violet eyes glowed" | | 15 | "They drifted toward a path" | | 16 | "Trees with weeping willow branches" | | 17 | "Aurora reached out to touch" | | 18 | "It wasn't a forest; it" | | 19 | "Aurora remarked, her keen eyes" |
| | ratio | 0.872 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 40.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The Shade didn’t walk so much as bleed across the terrain, a humanoid silhouette of ink-black smoke that seemed to drink the light." | | 1 | "The sound was swallowed by the oversized wildflowers that carpeted the clearing—blossoms the size of dinner plates in shades of iridescent violet and bruised go…" | | 2 | "They drifted toward a path that hadn't been there a moment ago, a ribbon of silver sand winding between trees whose bark looked like hammered bronze." | | 3 | "Aurora reached out to touch a trunk, but stopped when she felt the vibration humming through the air—a low-frequency thrum that resonated in her teeth." | | 4 | "She stood perfectly still, her waist-length hair catching a light that didn't seem to come from the amber sky above." | | 5 | "Isolde’s pale lavender eyes settled on Aurora, and for a moment, the young woman felt as though her entire life—from the rainy streets of Cardiff to the grease-…" | | 6 | "The metal was moonsilver, a substance that didn't reflect light so much as it glowed with a cold, internal luminescence." |
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| 36.76% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx replied, their voice a rasp of wind through dry leaves" | | 1 | "Isolde warned, her voice dropping to a conspiratorial whisper" | | 2 | "Aurora asked, her Cardiff accent sharpening with a sudden, pragmatic edge" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 15 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Aurora pressed (press)" | | 2 | "the Seer murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "Isolde warned (warn)" | | 4 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 31 | | tagDensity | 0.484 | | leniency | 0.968 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.323 | |