| 66.67% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.133 | |
| 96.51% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1432 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 23.18% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1432 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "flicker" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "fractured" | | 5 | "glint" | | 6 | "echo" | | 7 | "footsteps" | | 8 | "flickered" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "pulsed" | | 11 | "vibrated" | | 12 | "tension" | | 13 | "blown wide" | | 14 | "pounding" | | 15 | "glinting" | | 16 | "resolve" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "weight of words/silence" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 104 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 104 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 114 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 47 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1409 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 61 | | wordCount | 1318 | | uniqueNames | 21 | | maxNameDensity | 1.44 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Detective | 2 | | Harlow | 2 | | Quinn | 19 | | Berwick | 1 | | Street | 1 | | Soho | 1 | | Maglite | 1 | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 2 | | Herrera | 1 | | Spanish | 1 | | London | 2 | | Tomás | 13 | | Morris | 5 | | English | 1 | | Tube | 3 | | Veil | 1 | | Market | 1 | | Saint | 1 | | Christopher | 1 | | Don | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Raven" | | 3 | "Nest" | | 4 | "Herrera" | | 5 | "Tomás" | | 6 | "Morris" | | 7 | "Tube" | | 8 | "Market" | | 9 | "Saint" | | 10 | "Christopher" |
| | places | | 0 | "Berwick" | | 1 | "Street" | | 2 | "Soho" | | 3 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.779 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 85 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1409 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 39 | | mean | 36.13 | | std | 24.46 | | cv | 0.677 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 78 | | 1 | 92 | | 2 | 88 | | 3 | 58 | | 4 | 59 | | 5 | 67 | | 6 | 67 | | 7 | 39 | | 8 | 69 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 50 | | 11 | 47 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 63 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 56 | | 18 | 27 | | 19 | 33 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 52 | | 24 | 45 | | 25 | 35 | | 26 | 38 | | 27 | 40 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 38 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 46 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 229 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 24 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 20 | | totalSentences | 114 | | ratio | 0.175 | | matches | | 0 | "Ahead, a blur darted through puddles—her suspect, jacket flaring with every step, looked back just once before cutting right down an alley stinking of fryer oil and wet bins." | | 1 | "The familiar haunt—a bar with a dozen faces and one secret—filled her periphery with temptation." | | 2 | "At least, that’s who she believed he was—ex-paramedic, Spanish accent soft around the edges even after years in London, now dangerous in ways no badge could protect against." | | 3 | "Stories drifted: whispered medical miracles; wounds bound up in alleyways and not a stitch to show for it." | | 4 | "The air here tasted old—like iron and mildew and secrets." | | 5 | "But she remembered Morris—his heavy hands, the last message he left her, the cold look in his eyes that last morning before he vanished into smoke and police tape." | | 6 | "She moved in silence, recalling the drill—heel, toe, weight low, keep the torch off until you need it." | | 7 | "At the landing, she caught a shadow—a movement in her peripheral vision, then a muffled curse in accented English." | | 8 | "The corridor pulsed with an undercurrent—like footsteps stomping above but inverted, as if the city’s heart beat somewhere far beneath her feet." | | 9 | "Candlelight splashed along trestle tables, illuminating wares spread in reckless invitation—old books bound in skin, jars fizzing with trapped glimmers, knives that bristled with runes and blackmarket greed." | | 10 | "She’d heard legends—a market that slithered through London’s marrow, never settling, always one step ahead of the law." | | 11 | "When Morris disappeared, whispers circled back here—an underground bazaar that traded in secrets and curses alike." | | 12 | "A stallkeeper—a woman with knives for cheekbones and bracelets made from bitten silver—fixed Quinn with a knowing stare." | | 13 | "He slipped something—white bone, carved faint with glyphs—across another table." | | 14 | "The boy jerked his head to the right—a maintenance shaft half hidden behind a stack of broken heaters." | | 15 | "Quinn caught pieces of the exchange—“Don’t want trouble,” and, “This’ll cover it.” Goods passed between hands: a vial, glinting green, and a slip of paper wax-sealed." | | 16 | "She could still turn back—issue a pursuit call, wait for backup, pretend ignorance." | | 17 | "They passed faded murals—foxes and moons, winged eyes—and came to a crawlspace where candles guttered on cracked saucers." | | 18 | "She showed her palms—a gesture meant to disarm, or at least buy her a heartbeat." | | 19 | "And as the market’s shadows contorted and the walls pulsed with a hundred illicit trades, Detective Harlow Quinn understood she had crossed a threshold she could never uncross—and that, somewhere in the stink and strangeness, she’d either find her answers or join Morris in the dark." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1169 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "vast, shadow-filled hall." |
| | adverbCount | 33 | | adverbRatio | 0.028229255774165955 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0051325919589392645 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 114 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 114 | | mean | 12.36 | | std | 8.91 | | cv | 0.721 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 29 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 42 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 28 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 29 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 22 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 22 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 33 | | 41 | 28 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 19 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 59.06% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.38596491228070173 | | totalSentences | 114 | | uniqueOpeners | 44 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "At least, that’s who she" | | 1 | "Sometimes you stepped over the" | | 2 | "Sometimes you owed it to" | | 3 | "Instead, she forced her breath" |
| | ratio | 0.041 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 29 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "Her trousers clung to her" | | 1 | "She forced her breath into" | | 2 | "It wasn’t the bar’s warmth" | | 3 | "It was the trail her" | | 4 | "She’d scented the rot beneath" | | 5 | "It juddered open, and Tomás" | | 6 | "She listened, counting the echo" | | 7 | "She moved in silence, recalling" | | 8 | "She fingered the worn leather" | | 9 | "She pressed forward, chasing the" | | 10 | "She’d heard legends—a market that" | | 11 | "She reached for her badge" | | 12 | "She glimpsed the jagged scar" | | 13 | "He slipped something—white bone, carved" | | 14 | "She could try to slip" | | 15 | "She brushed past the edge" | | 16 | "She held his gaze." | | 17 | "They emerged behind the veil" | | 18 | "She could still turn back—issue" | | 19 | "She didn’t even know what" |
| | ratio | 0.296 | |
| 56.94% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 79 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "Rain slid off Detective Harlow" | | 1 | "Her trousers clung to her" | | 2 | "Quinn didn’t pause." | | 3 | "She forced her breath into" | | 4 | "The familiar haunt—a bar with" | | 5 | "It wasn’t the bar’s warmth" | | 6 | "It was the trail her" | | 7 | "Stories drifted: whispered medical miracles;" | | 8 | "She’d scented the rot beneath" | | 9 | "The alley ended at a" | | 10 | "It juddered open, and Tomás" | | 11 | "Quinn moved, keeping low, sliding" | | 12 | "She listened, counting the echo" | | 13 | "The air here tasted old—like" | | 14 | "Quinn slipped inside, closing the" | | 15 | "She moved in silence, recalling" | | 16 | "She fingered the worn leather" | | 17 | "The air grew colder the" | | 18 | "The tunnel widened into a" | | 19 | "Posters from another era, frayed" |
| | ratio | 0.806 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "Now she just needed proof." | | 1 | "If she went in, she’d" |
| | ratio | 0.02 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The corridor pulsed with an undercurrent—like footsteps stomping above but inverted, as if the city’s heart beat somewhere far beneath her feet." | | 1 | "Candlelight splashed along trestle tables, illuminating wares spread in reckless invitation—old books bound in skin, jars fizzing with trapped glimmers, knives …" | | 2 | "Quinn squared her shoulders, the sharp-jawed stubbornness that got her medals and enemies alike firing behind her eyes." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 16.67% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she drawled (drawl)" | | 1 | "Quinn pressed (press)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0.4 | | effectiveRatio | 0.267 | |